MG FF Innocence...LOST note@145 n Link to thread 2

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shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

My collection of ff's/ss's

When a man gains something he lost long ago at the cost of a relation based on half the truth and the other half looses it in the same relationship...for one the relationship becomes a baggage and the love becomes poison while for the other his quest to keep the relation going becomes the ony goal of his life while his love becomes an obsession...

INDEX

Chapter-1 The first time

Chapter-2 Running scared

Chapter-3 Ek hasina thi

Chapter-4 And then I knew

Chapter-5 And then I knew (part 2)

Chapter-6 The hidden face

Chapter-7 The hidden face (part 2)

Chapter-8 Miles to go promises to keep

Chapter-9 The hidden desire

Chapter-10 Show me heaven

Chapter-11 Torn in between

Chapter-12 Guilt

Chapter-13 Love and addiction

Chapter-14 Unspoken truths

Chapter-15 Trapped

Chapter-16 The way I loved you

Chapter-17 Distractions

Chapter-18 Sweet little gestures

Chapter-19 Truth be told or...heard

Chapter-20 True Lies

Chapter-21 Back to Hoshiarpur

Chapter-22 Some revelations

Chapter-23 Lethal liaisons

Chapter-24 Back in your arms

Chapter-25 The inescapable

Chapter-26 Betrayed

Chapter-27 Innocence...lost

Chapter-28 A promise

Link to thread 2

Edited by shelly_08 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey guyz ye mera maneet ff hai ap sab read kar lijiye acha lage to thek hai comments dijiye ga warna only like kijiye ga ok here is link

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shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Let me tell u guyz this is my 1st attempt of an ff.....and my story is inspired 4m a lot of things,scenes,films and characters.my special thnx 2 kemaya & yeti whose attempt at exploring the grey shades of love have deeply inspired me....thats y i'm attempting my take on that territory...hope u like it

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shelly_08
INNOCENCE.....LOST

When a man gains something he lost long ago at the cost of a relation based on half the truth and the other half looses it in the same relationship.....for one the relationship becomes a baggage and the love becomes poison while for the other his quest to keep the relation going becomes the ony goal of his life while his love becomes an obsession......

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz tell me guyz should i continue or not? coz i need ur support and lovely shovely comments 2 continue.

amazing title

lot of possibilities

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Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

amazing title

lot of possibilities

add me ........... but i hope geet nd maan will stay togther........

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shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

ok guyz here is the story hope u like it.....

chapter 1-The first time

She walked down the wet streets of London,occasionally kicking the empty beer can which came out of nowhere.She wanted to cry,she wanted to scream but then she has now become a dead girl walking.She was hating the more-than-light drizzle which was only giving her painful memories of HIM.She thought to herself ''wow he can still affect me like this'' whereas she has actually decided that now she wont let anyone affect her,but then this is life where nothing happens according to your thinking.

PAST

It was raining cats and dogs in Mumbai...''typical Mumbaiyya weather''...geet thought but she dosen't care,she loves the rain but was still she was sheltering herself under that big black umbrella.

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Maan was getting irritated,1st the tyre puncture on top of that this rain...urrgghhh....the poor driver knew very well how he hated rain,but anyway all these years of job at the Khurana's had only teached him that this maan singh khurana dude was a different specie altogether....BANG....he hit the car door showing his frustration while the driver was trying to change the tyre....that's when someone poked him on his shoulder ''excuse me'' and he no more felt the rain.

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Geet saw him from far off and seeing him banging his car door she thought that he may need this umbrella more than me so she marched up to him who was facing his back.Typical geet instead of asking him directly poked his shoulder and placed the umbrella on top of him shielding him of the rain.And thats when he saw her facing his back to the street light falling on her face.

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He saw her,and did'nt hear a single word coming from her mouth not because of the sound of rain but because of the trance she put him into.He was mesmerized by her,her innocent face,her hazel eyes,full lips.....he just stared while she kept blabbering and then she went but not before handing over her umbrella to the driver who thought this girl must be mad whereas he was still under a spell-her spell as he watched her retreating form getting drenched in the rain while she is enjoying the feel of water on her face.

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She saw him but his features were not prominent in her eyes as the light was behind him.She said in her usual manner ''hey dude u can take this umbrella as i don't need it and i can see someone is not that happy with the rain drops''....no reply,she swayed her fingers in front of him...''hey i'm just helping u no other intention''.The driver was scared hell,some random girl is talking to him like this calling him dude,god please help this poor soul.Thats when she got fed up with his prevailing silence and handed over the umbrella to the driver and went on the streets singing ''u can stay under my umbrella ela ela ae ae ae'' laughing to herself leaving behind a dazed maan.

PRESENT

A tear drop escaped her eyes remembering the night and probably cursing the day she met him.it was still drizzling thats when she got up from the bench she was sitting just then she felt two hands cover her waist.....a touch she knew very well....and then he whispered in her ear ''missing me sweetheart''? She froze eventually and then he spun her around to face her....''maan'' was all she managed to say before fainting in his arms.

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Precap-'' I dont give the deceiver's a second chance''

love shreya

plzzzzzzzzzz comment guyz and do press the like button if u like it.

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shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

ok guyz sorry for the short update.will b a long one from next one promise.and yes i will create my pm list.plz tell me if u want to b pm'ed