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Posted: 14 years ago
gud update n a nice storyline..plzz..do pm me..!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
i couldn't reply back. ur Inbox is full.

anyway... are you sure. i love to... but why you r not doing it???
and aww season 2 of dark lover... hmm.... i will defo think about it
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Recap-Veeeerrrrjiiiiiiiii.

Noooooooooo......maan sat bolt upright panting heavily,sweating profusely as he woke up of the nightmare.


Chapter-13 Love and addiction.

''Maan'' she said slowly as her husband's sudden and abrupt scream waked her up from her sleep.

Strange but true whenever maan was upset or restless,geet was the one to know it first as she would feel the same.

Call it telepathy or anything but her definition for this feelings would always be the one she always knew-her undying,unconditional love for this one man who is her first and last love.

She slowly opened her eyes to see a panting,sweating maan sitting bolt upright.

* * * * * * * * * * * *

Vasundhara closed shut the door behind her and sat on the bed,sobbing.

She knew this was coming......she knew a man can hide everything but not the blood which stains his hands.

She tried her best to stop this marriage from taking place but it did and she could do nothing other than praying to God for geet.

Have it been someone else or should she say a smart,cunning woman,she would have been least bothered-but geet was diffrent.

She was innocent,a lively and fun-loving girl who deserved someone better,way better than a certain maan singh khurana.

She has never felt anything like this for anyone not even her own kids......but strangely she always felt a protectiveness for this child-woman,yes thats what she have termed her after she met her.

No wonder any man can fall for a girl like her.

She has always hated maan and this marriage made her hate him even more.

And now her hatred have only multiplied after geet's sudden departure.She knew her very well and the missing of her clothes,passport only confirmed her fears.

And on top of that she didn't tell anyone that she is pregnant.....she didn't need any more proof of what might have probably happened.

She cried her heart out in the closed room praying to God for geet's safety.

* * * * * * * * * * * *

Maan pounced on geet,kissing her madly all over her face and neck,tears of pain and horror flowing from his eyes.

''Maan'' she again called out trying to make sense of this sudden change of behaviour.

''Please'' he pleaded and continued to kiss her wildly now undressing her.

For that moment geet forgot everything-whatever she saw,whatever she said her temporary hatred or hurt.......everything and she wrapped her arms around him and gave in.

* * * * * * * * * * * *

Even though it was not the first time she is seeing her husband going wild on her,in fact she was used to his rough and aggressive ways of love-making every day,every night........but tonight it was different.

It was not his aggression,it was his pain,insecurity,his fears which he was letting out on her.

Maan tore off her kurti and continued whilst biting her,sucking her exposed skin everywhere possible whereas geet responded to him in equal fervor.

She have longed for him the same way he have longed for her.....no matter what,the biggest truth was that she loved him,she loved him more than her life.

Geet couldn't help but respond to him-no wonder maan was equal to opium and she was the helpless addict.

She felt him moving into her harder and harder with each thrust,as if trying to soothe his pain like that.

He continued thrusting himself into her until geet's eyes shot open,realization struck her as she felt weight on her abdomen.

''Maan'' her voice came out in a whisper as she immediately placed a hand on her stomach.

Her hand acted as a barrier between them.Maan looked at her hand and then at her questioningly and saw geet's tear-filled eyes.

''Geet'' he questioned her.

''Please maan'' her voice cracked.

''Did i hurt you'' he asked concerned placing his hand on her cheek.He was now feeling ashamed of himself.

''No maan'' geet replied rather quickly not letting her man regret his actions,she pulled his head back to her and kissed him or rather answering his question with that kiss.

Precap-''So you have find her.....at least you could have informed us''

''It was just yesterday that i found her''

''By the way is she fine?''

Love shreya

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Edited by shelly_08 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me first..!!
gud update...👍🏼
Edited by Rohini20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 13
nice part................
add me to ur pm list................
have sent the buddy invite................
cont soon..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it hope geet tells maan soon that she is pregnant
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the part, want to see maan knowing about geet's pregnancy.plssssssssssssssssssssss continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
after such along time small update..😭

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

after such along time small update..😭

tx


Sorry 4 keepin u guyz waitin.......actually i was more occupied into DRS as i want 2 finish it off as soon as possible as its a short story and i'm also planning 2 start a new story after that as well.

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