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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#151

hiiiiii

awesome update

loved it

loved maaneet

loved da scene with vicky and dev

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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manisha shibloll

@doosheeka

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#152

please update soon................cant wait for me.....................you leave us tempting for more and more and more....................take pity on us and update as soon as you can...................

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

It's so nice to c that u updated. It was all worth the wait. Luvd their immotions . U potrayed them very well. But sumhow my heart is sinking. I don't want maan to have an evil relation with geet. I don't want him to be her heavy baggage that she can't carry or throw but to be her strength. .... Can I request u sumthng.... If this ff is supposed to have sum deep twisted sad parts , can u plz fix everything by the end. I don't like sad endings. Plzzzzzz don't forget that . Thanx for a sweet update and pm.

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funnymonkey

@funnymonkey

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Plz add me to ur pm list
Great fan fic

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

of course i wont give it a sad ending............remember one thing LOVE- obsessive or unconditional, form the crux of the story.....their love is way too intense in this ff and the fact that i've mentioned in the opening post is also something that will take as well........if you read the character sketch i've given u'll understand whats the reason behind maan and geet's behavior.

Geet on one hand is a silly yet innocent girl who falls in love with a man she knows nothing about.......her love is different from that of maan......she loves him unconditionally whereas maan's love is an obsession (as u hv seen) she never thought of knowing him more than is required and she was so blindfolded in his love that she was shocked beyond words by that incident.......

Maan on the other hand was a hard-core professional as well as a very egoistic man.......geet's entry in his life did change him but then some things never change........you'll get to know what i mean but i hope i' clear to u all 😊

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: shelly_08
of course i wont give it a sad ending............remember one thing LOVE- obsessive or unconditional, form the crux of the story.....their love is way too intense in this ff and the fact that i've mentioned in the opening post is also something that will take as well........if you read the character sketch i've given u'll understand whats the reason behind maan and geet's behavior.

Geet on one hand is a silly yet innocent girl who falls in love with a man she knows nothing about.......her love is different from that of maan......she loves him unconditionally whereas maan's love is an obsession (as u hv seen) she never thought of knowing him more than is required and she was so blindfolded in his love that she was shocked beyond words by that incident.......

Maan on the other hand was a hard-core professional as well as a very egoistic man.......geet's entry in his life did change him but then some things never change........you'll get to know what i mean but i hope i' clear to u all 😊

luv u'r explanation that really doesn't explain much😆 🤣

no no no i don't mean that u'r explanation isn't good enough..i'm just getting a kick out of it coz u'r explanations r confirming my scared heart & u were cool enough not to give away the story.😎

i understand what u r trying to say..more like geet's innocence will change dramatically after falling for the guy not from her league(in all sense)

initial chapters had sumthing like where maan asked her"missed me" and i don't think he was saying it all in a lovy dovy feeling. .........no matter what ..i believe and have seen ppl change for luv. so hopefully they'll meet eachother on the equinox, halfway through 😍

have u written more ffs? u'r stuff's really incredible👍🏼

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

gr8 part
Yayy finally Dey r 1
But Maan was wrong in jus forcing her
Thx 4 the PM
Cont soon Xx...

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr
gr8 part
Yayy finally Dey r 1
But Maan was wrong in jus forcing her
Thx 4 the PM
Cont soon Xx...

very true.....but thats the maan singh khurana i have made.....or shud i say his past in the story have made

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

luv u'r explanation that really doesn't explain much😆 🤣
no no no i don't mean that u'r explanation isn't good enough..i'm just getting a kick out of it coz u'r explanations r confirming my scared heart & u were cool enough not to give away the story.😎
i understand what u r trying to say..more like geet's innocence will change dramatically after falling for the guy not from her league(in all sense)
initial chapters had sumthing like where maan asked her"missed me" and i don't think he was saying it all in a lovy dovy feeling. .........no matter what ..i believe and have seen ppl change for luv. so hopefully they'll meet eachother on the equinox, halfway through 😍

have u written more ffs? u'r stuff's really incredible👍🏼

yes i have another one ''Dirty,rotten,scoundrels''.....i guess u know abt it.
and if u dont then let me warn u if u r a purist,stay away 4m this 1 😆

and coming to ''not-revealing the story'' part,i guess the writer is a fool who gives away all the suspense at one go ain't it?