FF: Pyar Ishq Mohabbat_14th Chap(Pg. 91)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Title courtesy: Aabrayy

Character Sketch:

Pratigya: eldest child of Naina and Prof Shyam, no aim in her life as of yet 😃

Aadarsh: her younger bro who has just got his 1st job

Aarushi: kid of the house, just passed her 12th and now contemplating whether to get married asap and boss around her house or study further and get a job n be self dependant

Naina: their mother, a housewife, firm believer in family values

Prof Shyam: their dad, lover of chai

Dadi1: doesn't like to go out much even with women of her age, of the belief that boys can escape even after committing mistakes, it is the girls of the family that are the flag bearers of the family honour šŸ˜• šŸ˜†


Chapter 1:

It was 6 in the morning and Naina had woke up before anyone else in the house. It was her daily routine and she had learnt to accept it from the day of her wedding. She started preparing breakfast for all and tiffin for prof and Aadarsh, made pooja preparations for dadi1, put clothes in the washing machine and then went on to wake up everybody. Waking up Pratigya was easy but Aarushi made all the fuss of, 'Mummy bus ek min aur' , that 1 min was always = more than an hr

Pratigya heard the milkman call and ran off to take the milk so that Naina could take a breather! Newspaper came and Prof and Aadarsh disappeared behind the papers.

Pratigya and Naina knew that once Dadi1 woke up they would not get any respite so they tried to wrap up the work asap.

'Pata nahi ye ladki kab sudhregi, sasural mein naak katwa k rahegi' are ladkia kabhi itni der tak soti hain bhala?' the familiar voice echoed and Naina knew that Aarushi was still asleep and Dadi1 got her 1st prey of the day'

But, once the breakfast table was ready, all of this was forgotten. It was the best start of the day for Pratigya, when the whole family gathered together to have food. The Saxenas sat at the round table and had hot paranthas, achchar and 'tea'. Aadarsh didn't like paranthas so Naina had made him cheese sandwiches, his favorite.

The phone rang and Pratigya went to attend the call. It was Samira, her best friend, at the other end. šŸ˜‰


Index:

Chap 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/32071423

Chap 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/32132347

Chap 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/32306317

Chap 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/32486867

Chap 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/32653091

Chap 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/32748531

Chap 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/32946311

Chap 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/33157664

Chap 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/33341299

Chap 11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/33626251

Chap 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/33812173

Chap 13: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/34525327

Chap 14: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/38125400

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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww really nice starting divya!!!😳😳😳😳lubb it !!!šŸ˜† and do continue dear!!!šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Divya 😊
I'm so happy your writing an FF I love it, very realistic you even kept tea their favorite beverage šŸ˜† nicely written I like your character sketch, (dadi found her 1st prey šŸ˜†) I can't wait to read more pls do continue. 😊
Edited by Binny1247 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lubb your character sketch - especially Shyamji's sketch (Lover of CHAI!) šŸ˜† Can't wait for you to post your next chapter! Nice one dkmystery! šŸ‘šŸ¼
Edited by -sunlight- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I love ur Introductions of the fam...so funnyy...n sarcastic also..lover of chai...n i like how ur ff moved pased the afternoon phase...apart from the show where it seems even after 5 episodes...its still morning..LOL and shyam ji is asking for morning chai!! hahahhaha plzz cont..n why do i get the hint tht maan singh khurana is goin to be a huge part of thisor maybe harshad chopra..?!?! OOlala...wud lub tht..get a break from krishna for once...cuz im in love w/ MK aka DD..lol
Edited by sanaya11 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wah beta, to ab apne bhi FF start kia!

I loved the character sketches! 🤣 Awesome max! šŸ˜† šŸ‘

Will read the chapter as and when I reach home! šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 15 years ago
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You should consider writing. Good writing skills!

Enjoyed your timely and accurate wit!
Edited by KB2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow divz...u too started...gr8 yaar...lubbed the 1st chap.......
and samira....hmm...so u wanna giv sth in return for her FF?
anyways do PM me wen u update..oke..lubb it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Your first FF! Congratulations and celebrations 🄳.

Oh my god! I'm in it! 😳😳

That's so sweet of you Divs! šŸ¤—

Continue soon and PM me, I loved it!

😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello Diva!!! Liked the character sketch and narration of ur first ever FF!!!ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø
Congrats and will be WAITING for the NEXT Part! 😃
PS: Even I get the feeling that Harshad Chopra is gonna be a part of ur FF!!šŸ˜›šŸ˜†
Edited by limits - 15 years ago

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