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Divya lady! Am reading your FF and this chapter is cracking me up! 🤣 I will specifically comment on the sections that are damn hilarious! 😉

Originally posted by: dkmystery

Chapter 3:

'Sorry uncle', muttered Pratigya!
The guy would have answered back but his phone rang, 'ha Angad Yadav bol rahe hain, ka hua be?'
🤣 🤣 🤣 So Pratigya was lost in Angad's arms! 🤣

Krishna knew he was handsome; he saw the mirror everyday and didn't need anyone to tell him that! 😆 You Behoodi! 🤣

Pratigya was not a very beautiful girl and Krishna did notice that, but he saw that she was cute!
🤣 mere mann ki awaaz cheen li beta! 🤣 Pehli baar kisi FF main reality likhi gayi hai! 🤣 I am ROFL! 🤣


S: Maan. His name is Maan Singh Khurana! Doh! I forgot Sammy is in love with Maan, my other Jiju! 😆


S: yar, it is an insult to call him good looking. He can give the Greek gods a run for their money! And well, his looks were partly responsible of why I offered to help' I don't know when our topic drifted from studies to our lives and families. We are going on a date in the evening, I called you here coz obviously I don't want my parents to know anything at this moment' and I can't keep any secrets from you!
Is this your dedication to Sammy in response to her FF on you? 😆

Krishna, who had again followed her, was stunned! She looked gorgeous. Ka be, abhi to comment maara tha, uska kachra kar diya be! 😆 Ohk, so your Pratigya looks pretty in gowns! Nice! 😆



Nice FF beta! 😉 Update soon! 😛
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Originally posted by: pritirays

Divya lady! Am reading your FF and this chapter is cracking me up! 🤣 I will specifically comment on the sections that are damn hilarious! 😉



Nice FF beta! 😉 Update soon! 😛


Pritwa! your commentwa lived up to my expectations 😆
thx for reading it 🤗 😛

I tried to make funny situations as possible..
wondering how funny yur FF would be if you write one 😆
'Mirror Mirror on the wall...' 😆
my FF is as realistic as the show claims to be 😉 😆
did u watch yesterday's geet? 😍 I think Samira has fainted 😆
I love Evening gowns, ab kahi to achchi dikhni chaiye na chori! 😛

thanks yara and oh I have uploaded a pic in the picture gallery, do chk it out 😉 u will love the caption 😆
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Originally posted by: dkmystery


Pritwa! your commentwa lived up to my expectations 😆
I love living upto behooda's behoode expectations! 😆
thx for reading it 🤗 😛 anytime buddy! 😃 You forced me to dissect your chapter, as earlier I was planning on writing a simple post here! but I went ROFL reading chapter 3 and hence ..................! 😆

I tried to make funny situations as possible.. you rock! 👏
wondering how funny yur FF would be if you write one 😆 Iss janam main nahin ho paayega! 😆
'Mirror Mirror on the wall...' 😆 to bang your head and come to doctor Divya! 🤣 Ohk arbit comment! 😆
my FF is as realistic as the show claims to be 😉 😆
Behoodi! 🤣

did u watch yesterday's geet? 😍 I think Samira has fainted 😆
Geet show is rocking! 🤣 My sisters and I made so much fun of Maan n Geet! 🤣 But they are giving overdose of the "Mahi" track! 🤪 It irritates me now! I mean change the music yaar or don't play it in every 5 second! 😆
I love Evening gowns, ab kahi to achchi dikhni chaiye na chori! 😛
Make her marry to ANgad and she will go all red! 🤣

thanks yara and oh I have uploaded a pic in the picture gallery, do chk it out 😉 u will love the caption 😆
Let me go n see that! 😉

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😆

same here for the Mahi track, specially yesterday it was unnecessary... when he sat on his knees it was d best 😛

achcha black gown n red face! 😆
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Originally posted by: dkmystery


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same here for the Mahi track, specially yesterday it was unnecessary... when he sat on his knees it was d best 😛

achcha black gown n red face! 😆

And now don't ask me - why the face will be red? You already know it! 🤣 Paan khayee Angadwa tohar! 🤣
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Originally posted by: pritirays

And now don't ask me - why the face will be red? You already know it! 🤣 Paan khayee Angadwa tohar! 🤣


I was about to write it, but then thought paan to Angad khata hai, laal Prats ka muh... got some imagination n hence didn't write it 🤣

btw, I'm watching Komalia in Comedy Circus, she is damn good!
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Originally posted by: dkmystery


I was about to write it, but then thought paan to Angad khata hai, laal Prats ka muh... got some imagination n hence didn't write it 🤣

btw, I'm watching Komalia in Comedy Circus, she is damn good!

I saw the videot hat you once posted in the new home! 😛 But somehow I do not enjoy comedy reality shows! 😆 Geet amuses me more! 😆
Loved how Maan Jiju broke the door and feel!
🤣 And Geet was so irritating in all that - SIR apko kya ho gaya hai - drama! 🤣
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I saw the videot hat you once posted in the new home! 😛 But somehow I do not enjoy comedy reality shows! 😆 Geet amuses me more! 😆
Loved how Maan Jiju broke the door and feel!
🤣 And Geet was so irritating in all that - SIR apko kya ho gaya hai - drama! 🤣


I love comedy shows specially after all work all day long... I need to see stupid things, but some1 pls mute Archana 😡 😆
Maan was too good n Guru in his vid interview said that 'D' is lucky for him 😉 😆
n before you say, that I'm being a bad girl, I'd like to add that Harshad's name ends with a D 😳 😆
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Chapter 4:

Krishna looked here and there frantically searching for her but couldn't find her. He realized that she had got the bus, but he didn't even know where she lived! He went to the parking area to get his bike and drove to his 'adda' cursing himself for losing her so easily. But, he was Krishna Thakur, no one could escape him. Tunna and Chandu were at the adda, Krishna saw them and knew his loyal friends would gather all information about the girl.

Tunna: are bhaiya, filim jaldi khatam ho gai ka?

Chandu: jaldi kaise khatam hogi, 3 ghante ki hoti hai na be, bhaiya ko filim achchi nahi lagi hogi, to beech mein hi aa gaye, hai na bhaiya?

K: are, baithne to do na. saans le le, fir koodna hum pe

Krishna showed them the untouched ticket and told them how he had seen 'this girl' at the mall, had followed her, instead of going to the filim and then lost her eventually. He didn't tell them what was in the gift pack and Tunna n Chandu didn't dare ask him what it was. Though Krishna loved them as his brothers but they were fully aware of his anger. He was a short tempered guy and once anger took hold of Krishna, nothing could be done. Krishna told them that now, it was their responsibility to find out everything about 'the girl' and her family and report it to him within 24 hrs.

T: theek hai bhaiya, sab pata kar k aate hain

C: lekin bhaiya, u laundia ka naam bata dijiye, dhoondhne mein aasaani hogi

This struck hard! Krishna realized that he didn't even know her name!!!
He knew only 2 names, Samira and Maan. What could he do with their names! Samira had not even once spoken the girl's name! Tunna n Chandu waited for the name but Krishna looked sheepishly and accepted that he didn't even know her name!

Tunna gathered some courage and said, 'bhaiya, ab laundia ka naam hi nahi pata aur aap chahte ho ki hum uska kal aaj kal pata kar k aaye, aisa kaise ho sakta hai?', Tunna regretted saying this, coz the next moment Krishna was fuming in anger. 'Saale, ek baat aaj keh rahe hai tum dono ko, dobara nahi kahenge, thoda na theek se bolna seekho, ee laundia ka hota hai, dobara uske liye laundia shabd nahi aana chaiye tumhri jubaan pe, samjhe?'

Tunna was dumbfounded so Chandu stepped in, 'sarry bhaiye dobara aisa kabhi nahi hoga. Aap itta bata do ki ka bole usko, fir wahi kahenge'. The answer was 'bhabhi'. Tunna n Chandu looked at each other, Tunna innocently asked, 'per bhaiya, aap usko ka kahenge? Matlab aap to bhabhi nahi bulaoge na usko?'

Krishna heard this and burst into laughter! 'hahahaha.. abe saalo, hum usko bhabhi thode hi bulayenge, u to tum log ki bhabhi hai, hum to usko, uske naam se bulayenge. Aur wo tum log pata karo ki uska naam ka hai!'

Tunna n Chandu knew about Samira and Maan and their psychology classes and decided that it was the best place to start. On the other end, Krishna was surprised that he had asked Tunna n Chandu to address the girl as 'bhabhi' even though he knew nothing about her, other than, that she loved her burger, loved the black gown that he owned right now and that she didn't have any vehicle of her own! He had never experienced love before, had actually never given a thought to this matter and was not able to understand what was going on! He waited impatiently for his friends to come with some +ve news. He had to know the name of the bewitching girl by night, he needed to have a name or else he knew he won't be able to sleep and he didn't like to miss his sleep!


Evening stars had appeared and Krishna was still at the adda when suddenly he spotted both the guys returning!

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