FF: Pyar Ishq Mohabbat_14th Chap(Pg. 91) - Page 38

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yasmeeneee

i love ur work its awesome ... keep it up sweetie 😊 .... i m becoming ur fan guys ve been reading Arhiana FF thats sooo beautifully written n now u .... u guys should try in creative writting ... BEST OF LUCK 😊


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Posted: 15 years ago

Good writing.

So it was Angad who held her and not Krishna.😆
Good. Otherwise, it would have been too typical.
Continue with your original and unpredictable twists and turns.
Edited by KB2010 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: KB2010

Good writing.

So it was Angad who held her and not Krishna.😆
Good. Otherwise, it would have been too typical.
Continue with your original and unpredictable twists and turns.


Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Chapter 6:

The bikes came near and stopped, the boys stepped out and Krishna noticed that Tunna's right cheek was red as an apple! But, right now, the name was more important.

Krishna: batao, ka naam hai uska?

But Tunna didn't reply. He was in tears. It was Chandu who spoke, 'bhaiya e Tunna to maar kha k aa raha hai, aap nahi maaro to hum batayenge ki ka hua'

Krishna was getting impatient and promised to be at a 2 hand distance from both of them! 😆

Chandu: hum log u class mein gaye the jaha Samira padhti hai, humne dhoondh bhi lia tha usko, Tunna u k paas gaya aur usne puchna shuru kia hi tha ki peeche se un logo ki u madam aa gai, u ka naam tha uska, ha, Shruti maidam, aur u pehchan gai ki hum us class k nahi hai. Unko laga ki hum waha ladki chedne aaye hai, aur wo gusse mein aa gai. To hum to bhag liye, per Tunna uski pakad mein aa gaya aur ise chatta pad gaya. Uske baad hum log bahar intejaar kiye Samira ka, per u bahar aai to saath mein uske, ek launda tha, to hamari himmat nahi padhi uske paas jane ki

Krishna didn't know what to do. First, a 'female' had slapped Tunna. Secondly, they got scared by a guy who was with Samira, Krishna was sure it was Maan. And thirdly and most importantly, they had come back without a name!

K: are, to saath mein ek launda hi tha na! usse ka hota hai be? Ek launde se darr gaye tum dono?

T: bhaiya, aapne use dekha nahi hai na isliye aisa keh rahe hain! Per ek baat jaroor pata chali, Samira keh rahi thi ki uski best phrend Mumphodganj mein rehti hai.

Krishna instantly knew it was that girl. Mumphodganj was not a small area, but he had already narrowed down the search and he vowed to find out the name before the 24 hrs got over!

The Saxenas sat for their dinner and shared their day's events with each other. Pratigya didn't have much to say other than, that she met Samira since they hadn't met since a long time. The phone rang and Aadarsh picked it up. It was his Mausi who had called to inform them that her daughter's wedding had been fixed and that it was in 2 week's time!

Aadarsh: mummy papa! Nita didi ki shadi fix ho gai hai, 2 hafte baad hai

They all were so happy! Pratigya and Aarushi jumped with joy coz now they would be attending the marriage and have lots of fun.

Suddenly, dadi spoke up, 'Naina, ye apni Pratigya bhi to Nita ki hi umar ki hai na?' All went silent. Pratigya knew where the conversation was heading. Naina managed to say yes while looking towards Pratigya who shifted nervously. Though Pratigya always obeyed her elders but this was one topic where she thought different. She didn't want to be married off in an arranged marriage; she wanted to fall in love with someone, someone who would fall in love with her. She wanted to know the person 'before' her marriage and not 'after'. She had seen her mother adjusting according to her father, many a times not knowing how the Prof would react to something or what his views were on some topic. But, Naina was lucky coz Prof understood this and he too would try and adjust while still being able to keep dadi happy! Pratigya didn't want to leave this on her fate. She 'knew' she had no admirer but still was hopeful of finding someone, somewhere, somehow…
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely chapter hun 👏👏.......xx
Hmmm so you added samira with Maan..... thats sweet.....
hmmm was wondering is that our Shruti.... who beat up Tunna? Poor lad.... he had it coming😆
Cant wait for your next update.... keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice Part Divya 😛
Hmm who beat up Chandu
Look forward to the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hello Diva!🤗

Just finished reading Chap 5 and 6 at ONE GO!😆
Me likes the humour and fast pace of ur FF!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Was 🤣 @ Dadi keeping the Gown IN the house and throwing OUT Pratigya!
Again, Shruthi Madam reminded me of a certain someone 😉😆 and Samira-Maan made me😃!
Hope to read the NEXT chapterwa SOON!😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aleena1

Lovely chapter hun 👏👏.......xx

Hmmm so you added samira with Maan..... thats sweet.....
hmmm was wondering is that our Shruti.... who beat up Tunna? Poor lad.... he had it coming😆
Cant wait for your next update.... keep it up👍🏼


thank you 😳

yeah, that's our Shruti 😉 hope she won't mind it 😆 😛

Keep commenting n liking 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Nice Part Divya 😛

Hmm who beat up Chandu
Look forward to the next part


thank you 😳
yeah, it's our Shruti who slapped Tunna 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Divya Di 😊

Loved the chapter it had quite a bit of action all I can say is Go Shruthi 😆

Was tunna crying interesting I guess our Krishna is going to have to take matters in to his own hands 😉 Samira will be pleased with Mann by her side😳 I love the fact that you have portrayed prats like any normal girl waiting for her Mr. Right to fall in love with but poor thing she thinks she has no admirer 😆😳 Okay I can't wait to read more 😃


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