'Mom with U' ' Maa Oo Maa'page 80

As many of my friends asked me to share my poems shayari here.. i thought to start with the one I personally like a lot. So this one from my collection of poem which i have written.. hope u enjoy reading them...

AAJ MAIN HOON


Aaj Badi Khushi Ki Shaam Hai,
Aaj Mere Shaadi ki Dhoomdhaam Hai.

Aaj Pyaar Ki Khushboo Se BHari Yeh Jhooli Hai,
Aaj Mere Humsafar Ke Saath Kheli Maine Holi Hai.

Aaj Mushkilon Ka daur hai,
Aaj Mere Saas Sasur Ki Umeedein Kuch Aur Hai.

Aaj Mujhe Apney Armaanoo Ko Bhulana Hai,
Aaj Apne Sath Apno ko Sambhalana Hai.

Aaj MUjhe Zindagi KI Naee Shuruwat Ka abhaas Hai,
Aaj Mujhe Maa Bananey Ka ehsaas Hai.

Aaj Asmaan Mey Badal Ghanghor Hai,
Aaj Zimedariyon Ka Badhata Shor hai.

Aaj Gam Ki Ajab Yeh Raat hai,
Aaj Mera Pati kisi aur Ke saath Hai.

Aaj Khamosh aur Gumsum yeh shaam hai,
Aaj Rishta kathm hona hi Anjaam hai.

Aaj Umeedon ki udaan Hai,
Aaj bachon ke saflta ke chooney Ka maan hai.

Aaj Suni yeh Dagar Hai,
Aaj Har Rishta ek Dusarey se Bekhabar hai.

Aaj Maine apno ko phir Kho diya hai,
Aaj Bacchoon ney Maa Ko boojh samajh liya Hai.

Aaj Ankhen Bheegi Aur Chehra udaas hai,
Aaj Haton se phisal jatey reth Ko rokhney Ki aas hai.

Aaj Samajh se Kaam Lena hai,
Aaj Kissi Brahm mey nahi jeena hai.

Aaj nahi banana Kisipe boojh Hai,
Aaj apnoo se Door Apnee Khoojh Hai.

Aaj Meri Umra Pachaas Hai,
Aaj bhi zindagi se mujhe aas hai.

Aaj ankhen Khulli aur yaadein sametein hai,
Aaj reth ki nahi haaton ki ahmiyat samajhtey hai.

Aaj Saflta hi nahi safal rah ki umeed hai,
Aaj Bekhoof humey chain ki neend hai.

Aaj Sooraj key dhalney se nahi ghabarana Hai,
Aaj atmabal sey chaltey jana hai.

Aaj zindagi mey har pal sangarsh jarii hai,
Aaj chehrey pe jhooriyan bahut sari hai.

Aaj sameta zindagi ka har ek hisaab hai,
Aaj apney anubhawo se Likhi ek kitaab hai.

Aaj Sooni dagar mey Roshni hai Bekharna,
Aaj apani samvedana se Jagato hoon Chetana.

Aaj Dil jawan hai, Kushi ki shaam hai,
'Aaj Main hoon' aur karna bahut kaam hai.


.................Bhoomikauttam

2) Chutta Ghar Baar Pardes ke Iss parr

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3) Sapno Ka Ghar

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4) Wah Thi Aur Hum

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1316573&TPN=5

5) Kaise Yeh Grahasti

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6) Sapno mey Ayee Tum

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7) Tumsey KAru baatein

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1316573&TPN=10

8) Rishta Bin Naam Ka

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9) Chehra

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10) HAi, Kya hua

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1316573&TPN=14

11) Khushi Ka Pal

12) Reet Ya Preet

13) Sukh

14) Zindagi Kabhi

15)Kahe Jo Mera Dil Aur Dimaag

16) Bacchi Kahe

17) Tum Ho To main Hun

18)Kyun

19)Sapno Ka Bharat

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/sher-o-shayri/1316573/mom-with-u-maa-oo-maapage-80?pn=32

20) Bitiya Rabi Ki Kahani

21) Prerna Ke Stotra

22) My Love

23)Bhikhari Meri Duniya

24)Friendship

25)Suhaney Pal

26)Dafan Hue Zindagi

27)Aawaaz Uthau Karz Chukau

28)Baawara Mann

29)Railgadi

30)mera Bharat Mahaan

31)Emrld & Diamond

32)What can I say

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33)Life

34)Adhura Sapna

35)Yeh Kal yug hai

36)Meri Maa

37) Ek Tarfa Pyaar

38)Heart asks mind

39)For a moment

40) Bin dekhe jo pyaar hua

41)Mr. Right

42)U &Me

43) Perfect two

44)Education

45)Saazani Tujhya Sangi

46)Umeed

47)Prabhaat

48)

49)

50)

51) Haal Bura Hai

52) Pyaar

Hi Mahak,

Am so glad that u read this one.. This thread i started or shoudl i say i posted this on ur instistance.. and gettign response form u firstly is a much much great feelings and am so glad u read and u liked it. For me as well it was written when i wanted answers to many questions u may say and when i wrote this longgg back i felt the flow of thoughts exaplaingin and giving me my answers.. I am glad that u liked this poem.. surely will try and post few more if u like to read them in this same page soon.... i woudl enjoy sharing my work and knowign how much its thougful or not..

Ur love ur appreciation surely is a boost and i feel lukcy to have u around to push me to share my work and write some more as well.. i guess kuch depressing poems post karu uuu so u wont mind na?? chal u tc.. luv u

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

hey di.........

i am the first one to comment..........

yipee!

di as usual i love ur work.......

God knows why but this poem touched me a lot.......

i felt it answering and asking many questions.........

loved it to the core di!

loved it..........

its awesome.....

and ya........

experiences make us learn something.........

wow!

u r a great poet and a writer........

u r seriously the best and my favorite...........

do write more........

and never forget to pm me...........

great poem,i feel u have described the whole life of a women in just a few lines...

we dedicate our full lives to our people we love n when they leave us n go to get their life,we start our journey alone again..but we still have the courage to start it afresh ,may be life would have taught it to us by then...

I realise that how much we ignore the presence of people now n repent for them later,,,

one more thing i really liked is u used the word "aaj",

i believe in philosophy live in present!!

and then the last lines..

Aaj Dil jawan hai, Kushi ki shaam hai,
'Aaj Main hoon' aur karna bahut kaam hai.

u deserve a 👏 👏 👏 👏

great one..waiting for other poems..

Happy new year 2010..

hope u have a great year ahead n we see more of u r work..

sri:-)