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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Alone_Prince

Hey Bhoomi I'm Just Speechless Yaar

Very Well Written MIndblowinG Awsome Great 👏👏👏👏👏
Hat's Off For You Keep WritinG And SharinG
Thanks

Hi, thanks for reading and appreciating my poem so much.. I am glad it touched u and u felt it was worth. Ur applause works as a boost to writemore ans ahre more of my work here.. thanks for it.. I guess i can keep writing and shairng as readers bring my thoguhts out and make me able to share with them..i have awesome readers ..including u now.. thanks..tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago
Haal bura nahin... meri haalat achchi ho gayi tumhara poem padh kar..
Haal bura hain.. such a beautiful poem Bhoomi... you have essayed it all in such a soothing, simple yet determined feelings.. Gr8.. Bravo Poem Bhoomi..👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ab aur kya likhoon tere liye!!! Keep sharing your talent with us like this!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

Haal bura nahin... meri haalat achchi ho gayi tumhara poem padh kar..

Haal bura hain.. such a beautiful poem Bhoomi... you have essayed it all in such a soothing, simple yet determined feelings.. Gr8.. Bravo Poem Bhoomi..👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ab aur kya likhoon tere liye!!! Keep sharing your talent with us like this!!!

Hi Divya,
heheh tumhari halat achi hogayi aur meri halat kuch jyada achi hogayi after getting ur comments dear.. glad key u liked it.. i did try to brign that buraaa lagney wala.. to feel for the girl and her emotions dont know how far i could but glad ot kow u felt it was been essayed well... i cant writing anythign except simple words as thats what alli know.. feels great to have readers like u for my poetry that in itself is a great achivment for me.. i would share my work dear.. with someone as talented as u for sure.. tc luvu
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Pyaar

Koi Sunder chehre ki kashish ko pyaar samjhte hain,
Koi chamak-damak ki roshni mey, dikhave ko pyaar samjhte hain,
Yeh banavat jo kuch pal khushi hame deta hai,
Dil ke ander key khalipan ko, kuch pal sahlata hai,
Shouhrat ka nasha yunh har ekke dil mey bas gaya hai,
Apno ko ek nazar dekhne keliye insaan to taras gaya hai,
Aisemey Sacha pyaar kahan hame aajkal dikhta hai,
Bas daya aur jhutha dikhawa hi rahjata hai.


Ishwer ne baniyi shrusti mey,har jeevan se jo pyaar kartein hain,
Hamesha unkey ird-gird woh pyaar ki fasilein lehratien hain,
Jo har ek ki bhavno ki ehmiyat jaantey hain,
Woh hi pyaar ko bahut khub samjhtey hain ,
Magar Jo pyaar mey marne takka dawa kartey hain,
Woh to bina pyaar ko samjhe hi haar mantey hain,
Pyaar dil,dhadkan aur jeevan se jhudta hai,
Pyaar annt nahi anant mey safar karta hai.

.....................................Bhoomikauttam
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Bhoomi!

This poem is just wonderful... and very much true.

I loved the last line Pyaar annt nahi anant mey safar karta hai

You know what... I believe in love but I'm not ready to fall in love at the moment but after reading this I do wanna fall in love at sometime because its a beautiful feeling which should be experienced by everyone at one point of our lives and that to with the right person.

Thanks for the beautiful and realistic poem Bhoomi.

- Sindhu

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Posted: 15 years ago
Once again awesome poem Bhoomi...

it felt like im reading my own mind.

pyaar ek aisa jasba hai jo shayad bayan karna mushkil ho. kyun log kehte hai pyar sirf ek baar hota hai ? kya hum sirf ek dost rakhte hai ? kya baaki sab se pyaar jhootha hai ???

pyar sirf care hai, aap kisi ke ehssas ki qadar karte hai , kise ko samjhte hai ....

Kanu
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sindhu92

Hey Bhoomi!

This poem is just wonderful... and very much true.

I loved the last line Pyaar annt nahi anant mey safar karta hai

You know what... I believe in love but I'm not ready to fall in love at the moment but after reading this I do wanna fall in love at sometime because its a beautiful feeling which should be experienced by everyone at one point of our lives and that to with the right person.

Thanks for the beautiful and realistic poem Bhoomi.

- Sindhu

Hi Sindhu,
Wrote this long back..and yes the last line is my fav line too..i cant take people sayign they can die for thei girlfriend, cut their wrist and cant see them knowing whats love.. to show ur love why do such things i never understood.. u want to die in front of the person or live with the perosn u love? glad u liked the poem dear. ehhe i guess Love isnt soemthign u can cal upon or get into.it in its own sweet way brign u and u dont realise until u have got into it totally.. woh kehtey hai na..pyaar kiya nahi jata hojata hai.. :))
luv u tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanuk

Once again awesome poem Bhoomi...

it felt like im reading my own mind.

pyaar ek aisa jasba hai jo shayad bayan karna mushkil ho. kyun log kehte hai pyar sirf ek baar hota hai ? kya hum sirf ek dost rakhte hai ? kya baaki sab se pyaar jhootha hai ???

pyar sirf care hai, aap kisi ke ehssas ki qadar karte hai , kise ko samjhte hai ....

Kanu

Hi Kanu,
glad dear that u have liked this poem.. its written long back.. and feels so nice that what my thoughts are , its are the same for u ..our feeligns bat love its deifnitions and its real nature are quite similar thats make me feel very good to know.. Pyaar for sure is not the romance filled love.. i just remember few line si had written..
Love is not just romance and intimacy,
Love is not about showing pity or mercy,
Love doestn change the other but it shows the mirror,
Love brings out the best and makes one stronger...
So its cn be ur close friend or anybody u feel too close.. who make u feel stronger and blesed.. thast all Love..
tcdear
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi friends,
I have already written one poem on Mom .. let me share on thsi day few more.. hope it keeps gogin liek this..as there is so mcuh to say and so little at the end it looks liek we have.. LOVE her the most..
Mom with You

You and me together our world is so much beautiful,
You love me throughout and made my life wonderful,
Food you cook has every flavour of love that u steer,
Feels heaven when I taste, nothing can be compared to it ever,
The time you have spent with me telling bed time stories,
I still have those memories and smile forgetting all worries,
You have taught me important lessons of life,
Given me love & strength to face every strife,
I know I cant repay all that you have done for me,
I know at every step you have prayed for me,
A warmth filled cuddle from you makes my day,
Few minutes in your lap my problems seem to fly away.
What can I do or say but show in every way,
How much I love you though there arnt enough words to say,
Amma,Maa, Mom, Aaee You are my world, my blessing,
You have given me life and gave it meaning,
You are my mother and I am your little daughter,
Emotions of love, care, warmth, affection all cluster,
You have Nutured me, healed my wounds foremost,
Supported stood by me when I needed you the most,
sacrificed a lot of your dreams for me,
Shared smiles tears and became best friend to be,
Mom I have learnt from you,
How beautiful is the gift of giving,
Mom I know Our bond is amazing,
with time roots got deeper and beautifully growing,
Mom I love you through and through,
I respect , owe a lot for all that you do,
Our relationship is my life's precious treasure,
Every moment from childhood is carved in my heart forever.
"Happy Mother's Day"
MAA OO MAA........

Maa mey hai mamta ka kazana,
Maa mey hai pyaar ka nazrana.
Maa jaisa to koi bhi nahi hai.
Maa se badkar koi kahin nahi hai.
Unse Milta Pyaar Hi Pyaar,
Humse Shuru Aur Khatm unka Sansar.
Karti Hai wah Bahut hi Pyaar,
Wah Hamarey Jeevan ka Adhaar.
Wah Hamey Chalna Sikhlati,
Wah Hamey Sahi Raah Dikhlati.
Hamarey Jakham Wah seeti hai,
Hamarey asoo wah peti hai.
Hamarey Sayhat ki hamesha phikr karti,
Hamarey liye har mandir masjid duaa karti.
Sar par hath phartey hi pareshaniyan mittati hai,
Maa ke godh mey Hi to Jannat Milati Hai.
Apney Khoon Se Hamey Sijhati Hai,
Hamarey liye hi wah jeeti hai.
Maa Tujhe Mera Shat Shat Pranaam,
Tere Charno mey paoo Sare Tirath Dhaam.
Happy Mother's day..
..........................Bhoomikauttam
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Posted: 15 years ago
Just Wonderful bhoomi !!! 👏 👏 👏
It would be an insult if I analyse these two.....as anything about MOTHER has to be AWESOMEEEE !!!
Isn't it???
You know I dont believe in 'days' , coz family day, this day, that day are meant for those who remember the person in question on those particular days only....
Not for us, for whom not a single day pass without thinking about our mom,dad,family,etc...
But coming to think....I'd LOVE TO CELEBRATE WHATEVER and WHICHEVER days are there, regarding the most BEAUTIFUL CREATION on earth....MOM !!! 😃
Thanks for adorning this day with one of your beauuuuuutifuuuul poems 😊
loaddddssssss of luv,
mana😊

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