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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#231

That was really very sweet Bhoomi!!! A very pleasant one....and this tym I'm not sad at all....in fact it has brought a sweet smile on my face....and yes.....I realize not everything the ending can be a happy one.....and I was sad coz u had that flow in ur writing....after all thats wat I was meant to be....isnt it? If I wudnt be sad it wud mean the poem didnt touch my heart....which is so not true....hehe. And yes, "Kyun" is lovely.....simply beautiful dear!!

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monika

@monikaseth

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam
.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗
KYON?

Kyon Tum Sahati ho,
Aur Kuch Nahi Kahati Ho.

Kyon Apney Aap Mey jalati ho,
Aur Roshani Bekherti ho.

Kyon nahi khood ke liye jeeti Ho,
Dusaroo ke liye Mittati ho.

Kyon Sarpe Sara Boojh leti ho,
Aur Doosroo ki Kamjhoriyaa Chupati Ho.

Kyon Tum Itna Pyaar karti Ho,
Aur nafarat ko bhi pyar mey badaldeti Ho.

Kyon Saya banaker chaaya deti Ho,
Aur Khood to Dhoop mey tapati Ho.

Kyon Har Kadam Sath deti ho,
Magar phir Do kadam peechey chalati ho.

Kyon Tum Khudko Kamjhor Samajhti Ho,
Aur Doosaroo Ki takat banati Ho.

Jaanati Hoon Is Kyon? Ka koi Jawab nahi hai,
Kyunki tumharey jeevan mey Dene ke Baad paney Ka Hisaab nahi hai.

...........Bhoomikauttam

👏Awesome Simply awesome "Jawab Nahi Hai Kyuki Tumhare Jeevan Mien Dene Ke Baad Paney Ka Hisaab Nahi Hai"...Tru Said Its Speechless thank you so much Bhoomi .👏

Some Hugs For You My Dear You Made Me Proud Of You ...🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#233

di!

wow!

i loved this poem to bits.......

it reminds me of my mother and father........

both take care of me........

they r my life.......

i can never live without them.........

and this poem goes for ma very easily......

i think that u kept this in mind while writing this poem.........

its brilliant........

ur ma gave u a hug for writing this..............isn't it?

i mean its simply beautiful.........

u always touch my heart..........

awesome!

and the answer of this kyun is love....

she loves us so much that she does that...........

i totally loved this poem.......

grt!

love,
Mahak

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#234

Bhoomi... I would be lying if I say that this Poem didn't touch my heart.. This is for you...

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Kanu K

@artizia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#235

Bhoomi I loved it ...
the only thing i cud imagine while reading this is"woman"

no body can be as strong as a woman
great work once again

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ssh57

@ssh57

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#236

Hi Bhoomi,
If I've commented on each of your poems you have taken the time to reply to each one of them individually.One thing I agree with you cent percent, is that I am very young at heart. Even my daughters and their friends tell me that. And I want to remain like that forever. I believe you are as old as you feel.So I'm forever sweet sixteen.😃
I'm so glad to see so much social awareness in you (a lacking in many of the younger generation) and a wanting to address each issue. You may not be a professional poet but your thoughts are fresh and your selection of words convey the exact feelings of your heart. And without any compromise on all this you are able to present it in the poem format.You could have just written it down like an essay. But the poetry form adds to the beauty. So in my eyes you are an excellent poet, by far the best I have ever interacted with.
Basically I love poetry and have loved poets like William blake, R. L. Stevenson and of course my favourite Lord Tennyson. But I couldn't exchange views with any of them could I????
God bless u. Write many many more poems and PM me everytime you do so.Ever thought of publishing them?
❤️ ssh57

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ssh57

@ssh57

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#237

KYON?

Another very beautiful poem with a simple question. But I think its the basic nature of woman, especially an Indian woman, to give unselfishly expecting nothing in return.There's immense joy in giving. Only thing she should see that her giving nature is not exploited by her near ones. Loved it.You convey so much with such economic use of words. love ssh57

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey bhoomi
great one..

i rememebered my mom after reading it..i dont knw who u thought when writitng it..,,its really good..especially these lines..

Kyon Apney Aap Mey jalati ho,
Aur Roshani Bekherti ho.
Kyon nahi khood ke liye jeeti Ho,
Dusaroo ke liye Mittati ho.
Jaanati Hoon Is Kyon? Ka koi Jawab nahi hai,
Kyunki tumharey jeevan mey Dene ke Baad paney Ka Hisaab nahi hai.

some people just know to give never to take..they are too good ,,,,n mother is one of the foremost one..

good wishes

sri:-)

Hi Sri,

Aww u know ur excitemtn in writign how much u felt all this is for ur mom.. yes.. u r right .. even i wrot this one keepgin my mom in mind.. i never udnerstnad how they becoem so givign in nature... we get angry irritated , at this age say we r tired an all...but mom they wotn complain even if in middle of the night we ask them to make somethign as we r hungry they will be conerned but not crib abotu gettign up late at night... its awesome to have such Mom... and lucky we have them... 😃

chalo Sri I am glad u enjoyed reading this small bit and it made u smile as well na😃.. luvd to read ur comments..tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
That was really very sweet Bhoomi!!! A very pleasant one....and this tym I'm not sad at all....in fact it has brought a sweet smile on my face....and yes.....I realize not everything the ending can be a happy one.....and I was sad coz u had that flow in ur writing....after all thats wat I was meant to be....isnt it? If I wudnt be sad it wud mean the poem didnt touch my heart....which is so not true....hehe. And yes, "Kyun" is lovely.....simply beautiful dear!!

Hi Sumaiya,

U liked readign this one.. heheh abotu that makign sad.. areey i did understnad u ..just was tellgin u i love more to write humour ones but inpoems emotions ka tadkaa jyada easy lagta hai😆.. so sweet of u dear to epress ur selves and for ur lovely comments towards me.. i am glad u read, u ove my work and u are a great support here for me to share more of my work.. a good friend i have found.. cherish our friendship here.. chalo so u liked Kyun bhi... good that most of my poems are makign soem sense. that means grey dead cells kuch kuch kaam kartye hai in my brain..😉 tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: monikaseth
👏Awesome Simply awesome "Jawab Nahi Hai Kyuki Tumhare Jeevan Mien Dene Ke Baad Paney Ka Hisaab Nahi Hai"...Tru Said Its Speechless thank you so much Bhoomi .👏

Some Hugs For You My Dear You Made Me Proud Of You ...🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗

HI Monika,,,, yeh sareee applauds sey main sirf smile kar rahi thi..but as soon as I got those hugs..uff i just satrted laughgin and smilgin more... soooo sweet of u to send them across me... i am forwarding u loads of jadu ki jahppi ur way for makign me feel so awesomely nice dear... lu vu for that.. and feels always good ot know u liked my work and liked enjoyed reading whatever little piece i posted...

luvu always MOnu

Bhoomi

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