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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: KehanT

bhoomi i loved the one on education.
you have put my feelings in words

thats how our education system is now , what matter is score ..not the means u get it ..and nor what that score actually means ....

less attention to make sure u understand what you are doing..

The world seems like a business where everything is calculated and done in light of profits and losses

Hi Kanu,
Glad u liked that one and felt it made so much sense.. i was thinking of writing more on this topic and these four lines were just posted to get a lot of views and let me get inspired to write more on it..and glad ot read ur views and comments.. u r so right..its all abotu money making process.. u r right business..na... pressures, depression, competition and race..all this is part of education?? why?? childhood for many of us was fun enjoyment..but slowly stress if half part whenver school studies is concerned... many children can count on fingers when their teacher in their 10 years os schooling has ever smiled in the class....😆.. this is the state.. strict, serious and discipline they call that... ah..
profits and losses rightly said.. hope things change for better... thanks for comenting..tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago
Zindagi Kabhi
hi bhoomi you will thought why i am writing so late
sorry for the delay i will comment one by one bhoomi i don't want to miss any of poem written by you and you fantastic work.again here is your fabolous work ......every word is so true bhoomi


Kabhi barish mey lagata hai sara akash nachata hai
To kabhi lagta hai maano hamary sath yeh assoo barsaata hai.
Zindagi Kabhi

Kabhi maut ka samana mushkil hota hai,
To kabhi jina ,maut se battar hota hai.

Kabhi bheed ke shoor se mann ashant hota hai,
To kabhi akaleypan ka sanaata mann ko gherta hai.

Kabhi geyroo ke bura kaheney sey man dukhi hota hai,
To kabhi apnoo ke kuch na kaheney sey mann niraash hota hai.

Kabhi ekpal ka pyaar sare jeevan keliyey kafi hota hai,
To kabhi saloo ka sath, bewafaee mey badal jaata hai.

Zindagi ajeeb rang lati hai,
Har laher ek tufaan uthati ha


bhoomi this time i want to hugg you every word is true bhoomi
life show different color kabhi lagata hein ke hum jee kyo rahey hein kabhi is life ke liye god ko thanks kartein hein......
kabhi apno ke na bolne per naraj hote hein or kabhi unse nahi boltein
or kabhi un ke piche bagtein hein jo apni nahi hain unke liye rotein hein
true words bhoomi
hatts of to you.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kahe Jo mera Dil aur Dimaag

first sorry for the delay bhoomi .......
i love this poem tittle lovley dil or dimmag kahi kahi dil ko kaam karna padta hein kahi dimaag ko

na kahe,"Tumhare sunder chehrey se sab ki dhadkane tej hoti hai"
Bas kahe," Tumhare mann ki sunderta har taraf khushi ki lehar
bikherti hai"

wow beautifull yaar if everybody not only say this but also feel this word then the world and our lifes become beautifull ,agar koi kissi ke mann ke sunderta ko pehchaan le to ye life swarg ho jaye.
bhoomi when ever i read your poem i alwys feel positive weavs in my conscience
i love the way you describe every word
i love to read it again and agin


na kahe,"Tumhi to Mere sapon ki rani ho"
Bas kahe,"kalpana ki thi, tum jaisi meri ardhangini ho"

na kahe,"Hamare rishtey ki kashish yunhi barkarar rahe"
Bas kahe,"Hamare upar Apno ke Ashisho ki bowjhaar rahe"

Pyaar ka ehsaas sach mey bahut hi meetha hota hai,
Saccha pyaar Mile Aisa naseeb kisi kisi kahi hota hai.


agar real mein log pyar ko samaj jaye to kitni log yo barabd na ho kitno ke dil na tutu na
ha sacha pyar truely great hota hein
very well said bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

Zindagi Kabhi
hi bhoomi you will thought why i am writing so late
sorry for the delay i will comment one by one bhoomi i don't want to miss any of poem written by you and you fantastic work.again here is your fabolous work ......every word is so true bhoomi


Kabhi barish mey lagata hai sara akash nachata hai
To kabhi lagta hai maano hamary sath yeh assoo barsaata hai.
Zindagi Kabhi

Kabhi maut ka samana mushkil hota hai,
To kabhi jina ,maut se battar hota hai.

Kabhi bheed ke shoor se mann ashant hota hai,
To kabhi akaleypan ka sanaata mann ko gherta hai.

Kabhi geyroo ke bura kaheney sey man dukhi hota hai,
To kabhi apnoo ke kuch na kaheney sey mann niraash hota hai.

Kabhi ekpal ka pyaar sare jeevan keliyey kafi hota hai,
To kabhi saloo ka sath, bewafaee mey badal jaata hai.

Zindagi ajeeb rang lati hai,
Har laher ek tufaan uthati ha


bhoomi this time i want to hugg you every word is true bhoomi
life show different color kabhi lagata hein ke hum jee kyo rahey hein kabhi is life ke liye god ko thanks kartein hein......
kabhi apno ke na bolne per naraj hote hein or kabhi unse nahi boltein
or kabhi un ke piche bagtein hein jo apni nahi hain unke liye rotein hein
true words bhoomi
hatts of to you.....

Hi Adi,
Thanks for commenting, for me delay in commenting doesnt matter at all..u read and took out time or felt like writing replying is a much much great feeling to know my work was worth of ur time. Zindagi kabhi... so u liked reading it and felt it was true in the words whcih tried to describe the thoguhts.. hey i got ur hug..and a jadi ki jhappi to u too.. i feel really nice ot know u could as well relate to the words thoughts i tried to bring out in this poem... it is one of those poem where i felt every line is somethign all could realte and to get such welcomign commetns makes me feel nice abotu my thoughts... hatts of to u all for reading my work and appreciating which makes it pretty easy for me to share , to write and to feel confident of my thoguhts which i try to brign outhere throguh words..
tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

Kahe Jo mera Dil aur Dimaag

first sorry for the delay bhoomi .......
i love this poem tittle lovley dil or dimmag kahi kahi dil ko kaam karna padta hein kahi dimaag ko

na kahe,"Tumhare sunder chehrey se sab ki dhadkane tej hoti hai"
Bas kahe," Tumhare mann ki sunderta har taraf khushi ki lehar
bikherti hai"

wow beautifull yaar if everybody not only say this but also feel this word then the world and our lifes become beautifull ,agar koi kissi ke mann ke sunderta ko pehchaan le to ye life swarg ho jaye.
bhoomi when ever i read your poem i alwys feel positive weavs in my conscience
i love the way you describe every word
i love to read it again and agin


na kahe,"Tumhi to Mere sapon ki rani ho"
Bas kahe,"kalpana ki thi, tum jaisi meri ardhangini ho"

na kahe,"Hamare rishtey ki kashish yunhi barkarar rahe"
Bas kahe,"Hamare upar Apno ke Ashisho ki bowjhaar rahe"

Pyaar ka ehsaas sach mey bahut hi meetha hota hai,
Saccha pyaar Mile Aisa naseeb kisi kisi kahi hota hai.


agar real mein log pyar ko samaj jaye to kitni log yo barabd na ho kitno ke dil na tutu na
ha sacha pyar truely great hota hein
very well said bhoomi

Hi Adi,
glad that u read this pooem.. this is a Timepass work for me..but somewhere i feel all the filmy talk soemwhere r so much fake in nature..i mean for the fact that giving this giving that to ur wife ..its more important whatver promises u gave fulfill those chand aur taree baadmey... just these thigns came very easily i felt it was funny when i wrote and felt many will laugh reading..but glad that u all felt the maturity in the way love should be and the practicality of life where love is shown presented which isnt what love is about.. even many songs describe that way but with living life alognside day in day out there is much more than just physical beauty u need.. and glad to know u felt whatver i tried to write was right in some way..
thanks for commenting..i enjoyed reading ur replyas well..tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Saazani Tujhya sangi

(Marathi Poem)

Tu Gauri Pooja Karat basli Asel,
Mrityunjay Tujha Navraa Raho Hi Vinanti Karat,
Mee Ganapti Pooja Karat Basala Asel,
Vigna Harun Majhe Sukhache Sansaar Asoo hi Prathna Karat,
Mundavali Va Peevli Saadi tujyavar khub nikhrun yet Asel,
Laajat Ubhi Ashil Ani me topi barobar karat Ubha Asel,
ShubhMangal Saavdhaana Aikat Muhurutachi Vaat Paahu Ya,
Antarpaat Nighel Ek maikaanna Baghun Varmala Ghaluya,
Mangalsutra Ghalnyachi Aata Vel honaar,
Jhaval Yeun Tujhya Galyat Mangalsutra Ghalnaar,
Mantrancha Awaaz Mala Apley Kartavyachi Jhaniv Karun denaar,
Akshata Aaplyavar Ghaalun Sarv NaateyVaik Aplyala Ashirwaad denaar,
Lajja Homamchi Agni chya pudhe aapan prmaan gheuya,
Ya agnila Sakshi thevun Dampatya jeevanachi suruvat karuya,
Saptapati Sang Sagley SaatVachan Kheuun Ek mekanaa Vishvaas Deuya,
Tu Majhi Me tujha Asey Swikaar karu Ya,
Lagnachya bandhanaat chal ga Rani guntu ya,
Prem karto ekmekanvar chal Ukhaney kheun Naatey joduya,
Aapley Mann ek hotech pahiley Chal Aataa Ek Kutumb hounrahuya,
Navra ani tu Majhi Bayko Asey hey Apley Naatey Zulnaar,
Ek don Chimukley Aplya Premachey Pratiroop houn jhulnaar,
Aaplaa jevan Ekatra Hoonaar,
Pritichya sarv rang Disnaar,
Nisargachya barobar phiruya,
Premaat Bheejhun Manala Swach karuya,
Saazani Jeevan rathaavar chalga Majhya sangi,
Lagnachi Mangni ghaltoy Aaj Mee.

.............................Bhoomikauttam
I dont know how much of the words in marathi r accurate.. do tell me if any errors are there. Many words are sanskrit so I hope non marathi readers also can understand little.
Edited by bhoomikauttam - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
I really donno maine kya samjha iss marathi poem se....mujhe laga...shaadi ho rahi thi shayad...and kuch usise related jazbat bayan kiya gaya hoga....actually Bhoomi...I donno anything....but I'm sure.....it must hav been brilliant!! Sry for not getting it much.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Bhoomi... u know Marathi.. agdi surekh kavitha lihilayes tu... ved laglay mala... khup khup sundar kavita aahe... apratim aahe..... khup chaan 👏
Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Bhoomi. I am sure this one is also mind blowing But i don't know Marathi..but can you write this is himdi 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

I really donno maine kya samjha iss marathi poem se....mujhe laga...shaadi ho rahi thi shayad...and kuch usise related jazbat bayan kiya gaya hoga....actually Bhoomi...I donno anything....but I'm sure.....it must hav been brilliant!! Sry for not getting it much.

HI Sumaiya,
without knowing marathi u have guessed a lot of thngs right... here the startign is abotu the rituals in marriage which the boy is expressign how they will go throguh each vidhi ritual of marraige and later he describes that they r in love and lovers for sure but they shoudl now get into a marital relaitionship so he is putting across marraige proposal to her askign her to get married with him and expressignhe wants to share hsi life with her.. the marraige rituals are the basic ones in any marathi marriage ceremony and the theme behind them and the how they bring happiness.. in todays speedy register marriage process thoguth to add such a poem..but dont know the 2words flowed in marathi so thoguht to go alogn writing in marathi..
thanks for commenting thoguh u may have not got all what i wrote..it makes me know how mcuh u care for me and my work..thanks a bunch..
tc
Bhoomi

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