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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#611

Heyyyyy bhoomi
Superb poems
Loved maa o maa very much
Happy mothers day
Thanx for pm

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: Kanuk
speechless

Hi Kanu,

aww thanks for ur comments dear.. so glad u liked it so much..luvu tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: golu_1677
superb......

Hi Golu,

u enjoyed reading ..i am glad u liked it dear... thanks dear for ur comments..tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez
Just Wonderful bhoomi !!! 👏 👏 👏
It would be an insult if I analyse these two.....as anything about MOTHER has to be AWESOMEEEE !!!

Isn't it???

You know I dont believe in 'days' , coz family day, this day, that day are meant for those who remember the person in question on those particular days only....

Not for us, for whom not a single day pass without thinking about our mom,dad,family,etc...

But coming to think....I'd LOVE TO CELEBRATE WHATEVER and WHICHEVER days are there, regarding the most BEAUTIFUL CREATION on earth....MOM !!! 😃

Thanks for adorning this day with one of your beauuuuuutifuuuul poems 😊

loaddddssssss of luv,

mana😊

Hi Mana,

Aww so sweetof u dear..u liked both the poems so much i am very very glad ot kow that.. I agree with u .. i too feel like u ..and i do celebrate these days by not buying any card from an archie shop and gifting.. but actually take it as another chance to express my love for her which i may not may be next day.. i enjoy makign soemthign for her.. writing somethign for her or just surprisign her with somethign that she likes... for me any day if we can spread happiness and love is beautiful and can support it.. but when people call for bandh sayign its genuine and true and such days are not its sounds weird u want bandh to destroy but not any such days..

thanks dear ofr ur comments and loved sharing my work here withu.. such prompt comments means so mcuh to me and make me feel too good.. love u tc..

luvu tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur
Heyyyyy bhoomi
Superb poems
Loved maa o maa very much
Happy mothers day
Thanx for pm

Hi Seema,

Thanks dear u liked the poems I am glad dear.. Maa oo maa yup in few words it says so much more than the first one..i guess in hindi it beocmes so easy to say th exact emotions 😃.. luv u tc

Bhoomi

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ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#614

Nice poems bhoomi, You can never repay a mother but you can only make her happy by walking on her footprints and giving the same love and care to your children. Love ssh57

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-Sindhu-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#615

Hey Bhoomi!

Every single word of what you have written is true. She is the best thing in our life. Without her we wouldn't be there in this world.

Both the poems are beautifully written but Maa Ooo Maa is just out of the world. Thanks for writing and sharing with us.

And wish your Mother a Very Happy Mother's Day!😊

- Sindhu

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dont have one :P

@..imperfect..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#616

Very beautiful Bhoomi :)

loved it

x x

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Hussain

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Posted: 15 years ago

#617

Awsome Poems Bhoomi 👏👏

I Want To Dedicate A Ghazal To All Mothers In This World

Maut Ki Agosh Main Jab Thak ke So Jati Hai Maa
Tab Kaheen Jakar Raza Thoda Sukoon Paati hai Maa

Fikar Mai Bachoon Ki Kuch Is Tarha Ghul Jati hai Maa
Naujawan Hotey Hue Budhi Nazar Ati Hai Maa

Ghar Se Jab Pardes Jata Hai Koi Noor E Nazar
Hath Mai Quraan Lekar Dar Pe Ajati Hai Maa

Chahe Khushiyoon Mai Hum Maa Ko Bhool Jayen Dostoon
Jab Musibat Sar Par Padti Hai To Yaad Atiu Hai ma

Shadiyaan Kar Kar ke Bacchey Ja Basay Pardes Mai
Dil Khatoo Se Aur Tasveeroo Se Behlati Hai Maa

Gar Jawan Beti Ho Ghar Mai Aur KOi Rishta Na Ho
Ek Naye Ehsaas Ki Sooli Par Char Jati Hai Maa

Pyaar Kehtey Hain Jise Aur maamta Kya Cheez Hai
Koi Un Bacchoon Se Poochey Jinki Mar Jaati Hai Maa

Shukriya Ho Hi Nahi Sakta Kabhi Maa Ka Ada
Martey Martey Bhi Dua Jeeney Ki De Jati Hai Maa

LOve U Mom

And Happy Mothers Day To All Of U 😊

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ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: Alone_Prince
Awsome Poems Bhoomi 👏👏

I Want To Dedicate A Ghazal To All Mothers In This World

Maut Ki Agosh Main Jab Thak ke So Jati Hai Maa
Tab Kaheen Jakar Raza Thoda Sukoon Paati hai Maa

Fikar Mai Bachoon Ki Kuch Is Tarha Ghul Jati hai Maa
Naujawan Hotey Hue Budhi Nazar Ati Hai Maa

Ghar Se Jab Pardes Jata Hai Koi Noor E Nazar
Hath Mai Quraan Lekar Dar Pe Ajati Hai Maa

Chahe Khushiyoon Mai Hum Maa Ko Bhool Jayen Dostoon
Jab Musibat Sar Par Padti Hai To Yaad Atiu Hai ma

Shadiyaan Kar Kar ke Bacchey Ja Basay Pardes Mai
Dil Khatoo Se Aur Tasveeroo Se Behlati Hai Maa

Gar Jawan Beti Ho Ghar Mai Aur KOi Rishta Na Ho
Ek Naye Ehsaas Ki Sooli Par Char Jati Hai Maa

Pyaar Kehtey Hain Jise Aur maamta Kya Cheez Hai
Koi Un Bacchoon Se Poochey Jinki Mar Jaati Hai Maa

Shukriya Ho Hi Nahi Sakta Kabhi Maa Ka Ada
Martey Martey Bhi Dua Jeeney Ki De Jati Hai Maa

LOve U Mom

And Happy Mothers Day To All Of U 😊

I don't think Maut ke baad bhi maa sukoon paati hogi. Then also she'll be worrrying about her child's future. Tc ssh57

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: ssh57
Nice poems bhoomi, You can never repay a mother but you can only make her happy by walking on her footprints and giving the same love and care to your children. Love ssh57

HI Shardha,

Glad u liked these few lines randomly written dear.. yup one can never repay and when we think about many things we cant count them all.. its like every day we understnad one more addition to it..and it goes on.. we r lucky thats what we feel like saying when she is with us... luv her the most for sure..

yup i wish i could walk on her foot prints..

luvu Shardha..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: Sindhu92

Hey Bhoomi!

Every single word of what you have written is true. She is the best thing in our life. Without her we wouldn't be there in this world.

Both the poems are beautifully written but Maa Ooo Maa is just out of the world. Thanks for writing and sharing with us.

And wish your Mother a Very Happy Mother's Day!😊

- Sindhu

Hi Sindhu,

Glad dear to know u read and liked these poems, yes she is surely the best thing in my life.. I guess there is so much of giving in her we tend to take that granted and i see children in nowadys more so dont have respect for what a mother does for them...She is our inspiration and we when grow up understnad her much more..

glad ot know u liked Maa oo Maa.. i guess there is purity in that poem and a huge meotion in fewer words.. its written logn back while theone one a more recent one.. i enjoyed sharing my work with u all here dear..and thanks for supporting encouragign and sharing ur thoguhts with me with ur lovely set of comments..

yup thanks for ur wishes.. wish ur mom too..

luvu dear tc

Bhoomi

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