'Mom with U' ' Maa Oo Maa'page 80 - Page 64

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Kaisi Ye Dastaan:

Okay....I knw am super duper late....but I also knw u dont mind....u r too sweet to do that Bhoomi....so I'll just leave the comment hehe. I must say....u did a gr8 job in portraying the little boy's feelings....as he grew up and began to understand....he grew adherent to his father....and am glad he took notice to his mom and not his father. Again....his dilemma was beautifullt described by you....and as always u r awesum wid wat u do!!

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Haal Bura Hai:

Ohh....so wonderfully u depict everything Bhoomi. The way u wrote it down....it just feels so correct. Jab bhi padhti hu....tab aisa nahi lagta ki am disturbed or sumthing like that....bas lagta hai....its opening my eyes....and thats wat it actually does.....and again u choose such beautiful concepts....write wid such simplicity....that it becums easy to read and grasp the idea of the whole topic. Lovely work once again Bhoomi....

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Pyar:

As I started reading this poem.....I knew u r gonna describe in a beautiful way abt 'love',,,,and I was prepared to knw another aspect of this ever known term "LOVE"....I was ready for the beauty u r gonna cum up wid....still as I read these lines:

Pyaar dil,dhadkan aur jeevan se jhudta hai,
Pyaar annt nahi anant mey safar karta hai.

I gasped sooo hard.....I was amazed and amused....u r awesum in depicting things....slightest things u write seem like wonders....thank you for this poem...and yeah dont think I'm over-praising u.....u deserve every bit of it...

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Mom with U & Maa Oo Maa:

Such wonderful poems on mother Bhoomi....u hav again described the feelings so smoothly and nicely....yes there is so much to say....yet we just cant at the end.....and despite that mother seems to knw it all....thats mother I guess....Lovely work again Bhoomi....thank you!!