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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#431

hey bhoomi awesome poem what a writing so nice and perfect , i am glad to read all your poems ....This poem refresh your thoughts dear thanks a lot .

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#432

hey bhoomi great one
lifes really a mystery .... is a journey full of ups n downs,happiness n sadness.......u have put out it very nicely...

somelines i liked...

Go through them wanting to face everything that comes,
Make ur self strong, face the storm u will surely overcome.

Happiness isnt in the outer world or in costly things,
Happiness is an internal blessings which makes u sing

We dont need to be saints or a religious leader,
we only need to be true in charcter and bring goodness near....

great!!
sri:-)

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ssh57

@ssh57

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#433

Life

Nice poem.Two mantras which I feel can make life easy, contentment and positivity.Frankly life has been quite kind to me so these mantras work for me. But many people say when you face one problem after another unendingly, you tend to become negative. But as you have said a person who faces eac problem head on and does not give up striving, has already won.Keep writing more and more. Love ssh57

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#434

Wow....I never read such a definition of life....where it is compared to pages....I simply loved it....where u said...."it doesnt matter how many pages r there....it matter how many pages u want to read again n dont want to tear....."....this was lovelyBhoomi. And I also loved these lines:

Every moment has its glory,
Every time has its destination,

Just awesum dear.....another beautifulllllllllllll work!!

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania
again, i must say, im stumped...i thought u write only hindi, even ur english poems are fantastic
take my advice for it and get them published

u r amazingly talented(i know i keep saying this but its d truth!)

thnx for d pm

Hi Sur,

I find it very easy to convey my feelings through Hindi but English now usually i am use to speakign so much in this language these days that some lines just come abotu while i think and i write it down.. its like not trygin to write in hindi or english btu if some lines strike in a certian language i do write to complet that.. thanks for makign me feelgin in both languages i was good.. hope to improve myself in both ...

awww that very very sweet of u to assure me that i do a good job at this.. i will take ur advice attempt to write more. atleast gettin gmy confience to post here so who knows what future may hold..

thanks for ur lovely comments.. tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: monikaseth
hey bhoomi awesome poem what a writing so nice and perfect , i am glad to read all your poems ....This poem refresh your thoughts dear thanks a lot .

HI Monika dear,

I guess we all go throguh numerous problems in life and its only the person who goes thorguh them knows the difficulty to come out of it.. its always a question of how much u tried and how much u wanted to survive .. and felt like writign this one which shows everyone is a winner until he /she faces and never gives up ... good to know that u liked it. really very sweet of u for such lovely comments.. it refreshes u ..glad to hear it.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey bhoomi great one
lifes really a mystery .... is a journey full of ups n downs,happiness n sadness.......u have put out it very nicely...

somelines i liked...

Go through them wanting to face everything that comes,
Make ur self strong, face the storm u will surely overcome.

Happiness isnt in the outer world or in costly things,
Happiness is an internal blessings which makes u sing

We dont need to be saints or a religious leader,
we only need to be true in charcter and bring goodness near....

great!!
sri:-)

Hi Sri,

nice to know u liked it.. yup life is such a mystery na. many times i feel its vry simple but we make it look so complex.. but does we do it on purpose we dont. it happens.. and life thats why i felt is like a game and we nee to play it well.. with our soul to be honest to our self.. good to know dear u liked readign this piece.. just a small attempt..

awww u liked those lines.. u know when i read hwat lines u liked i see the perspective which u felt and coudl relate.. really glad there were soem thoguhts in it whcih u coudl feel n relate and liked them.. thanks for such warm reply everytime it surely encoruages my efforts which are not much stilll😆...

luv u tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: golu_1677
really good👍🏼

Hi Golu dear,

😃glad that u liked.. and happy that u r reading my poems.. feels ncie ot get reply from u .. u are amogn the ones who have always alyas been there to encoruage me through out here in IF.. thanks..

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: ssh57
Life

Nice poem.Two mantras which I feel can make life easy, contentment and positivity.Frankly life has been quite kind to me so these mantras work for me. But many people say when you face one problem after another unendingly, you tend to become negative. But as you have said a person who faces eac problem head on and does not give up striving, has already won.Keep writing more and more. Love ssh57

Hi Sharadha,

Ya ur two mantras are correct Contentment and positivity and i feel there is no other way to survive.. really no other way to live life... u have to have a postive outlook be optimistic and have peace of mind or else surviving in this world with somuuch stress pressure can be very very disturbing...

ya u r right unending problems.. i guess i have gone thorguh many phase dotn know i am old enoguh to go throguh them or not but i feel many problems have no solution no reason but u can fihgt it out only if u have will and somewhre peace of mind u urself derive .. i think life for many is very difficult and inspiration is learnign from them...

ya my poem did give that out .. winning is not always ... u can win even before ht race starts when u attempt try which in itself is a big big achievment.

Thanks Shardha for reading my work and for lovely comments , i learn from them, i understnad different outlook and I feel proud ot have such amazing readers for my story n poems.. really.. luv u

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Wow....I never read such a definition of life....where it is compared to pages....I simply loved it....where u said...."it doesnt matter how many pages r there....it matter how many pages u want to read again n dont want to tear....."....this was lovelyBhoomi. And I also loved these lines:

Every moment has its glory,
Every time has its destination,

Just awesum dear.....another beautifulllllllllllll work!!

Hi Sumaiya,

Awww feels so ncie that u liked that staring lines there.. ya sometimes we feel loooong life means somuch u have achived u saw u felt.. comeon its always baotu how much we cherish.. same like how many frineds we have..but its abotu with how many do we share a great bond, we cherish memories together.. Life ha many many dimensions and glad in that life I got some wonderful readers friends to know and my life is intresting as u all r part of it i feel..😃.. life mey choti choti khushi bhi is very valuable na😃..

aawww u liked those lines also.. feels wonderful these all lines which u mentioned came just randomly and feels ncie u there liked them... happy u rad my poems and comment so beautifully... thanks for giving me such a lovely reader to my work..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#439

Adhura Sapna

Jabse Usney chalna sikha tha,
Pairon Ki aahat ko samjh raha tha,
Usne Mehsus kiya Annginadd Awaazon Ka jadu,
Unpe Nachta rehta nahi rakhpata dil par kaabu.

Naachta to yunh lagta usey Baadalon ko sang lena hai,
Chehre ke bhaav vyakt karte nrutya mey magn ho jana hai,
Thoda badaa hua to nrutya pe lagi Paabandi thi,
Maata pita ko uske Naachne se hoti sharmindgi thi.

Kai jantey mantey the usmey nrityakala ka bhandaar hai,
Gharwalon ko lagta Padhai key agey yeh sab bekaar hai,
Chup Chup kar Galli ke ek kone mey naach leta,
Doston ko naye gano pe nritya kar ke dikhaata.

Kitno ko Nritya Pratiyogita ke liye Usne sikhaya,
Swayam kabhi Aise bhavya manch par nahi naach paya,
Badalo ke paar jab wah Is Duniya se chala gaya,
Uska yeh sapna to hamesha keliye adhura reh gaya.

..........................Bhoomikauttam

(Based on a true story)

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#440

hey bhoomi
wow a true story
..hmm..i too somewhere heard a story like this,,but the ending was definetly happy..i am talking about sudha chandran!!!shes a great dancer...i dont why i remembered her after reading u r poem....

Kitno ko Nritya Pratiyogita ke liye Usne sikhaya, Swayam kabhi Aise bhavya manch par nahi naach paya, Badalo ke paar jab wah Is Duniya se chala gaya, Uska yeh sapna to hamesha keliye adhura reh gaya.

great 👏 👏
sri:-)

Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago

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