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@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#41

hey bhoomi
😆
i never knew u r poems could be hillarious too..
especially that pati n dever line.

but some how i cud see it from another point of view that lady has used him for her comfort n money..or say haar..

uski nazar chaalak lagati aur humney Maathe ka paseena ponch to liya,
Chalo Pyaar ki patti ko khool Ankhon se sachh ko dekh to liya,

Hum boley,"tumhara pyaar haar hai, mera pyaar haar gaya lagata hai."

that line was emotional again..

u surprised me with this poem..
do continue..😊
sri:-)

Edited by sri_4 - 15 years ago

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Bhoomi... You are really leaving me speechless again and again... I am so lucky that I got to be the runner up of the Poets contest with you in it... Beautifully written..

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Hehe...Bhoomi...this was simply gr8!! Aur emotional bhi nahi hui main...balki mujhe bahut maza aya....aur hassi bhi. The first four lines n the last two lines r gr8!! Loved it....well u can see that I guess....coz main xam k bawjud comment kar rahi hu....donno y naam padhke hi laga this wil be gr8!!! I mean its always gr8 to read ur writings but this one attracted me....and I'm very happy to read this.

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#44

wow bhoomi this is a real treat all ur poems together awesome i loved all of them till date but the 1st one was the best and the last one was hilarious

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

guess what???????
di i came first again!!!!!!!!!

isn't this great?

wow!

what a poem!

hans hans ke pet mein dard ho gaya......

jab usne kaha na ki woh devar aur pati hai to toh main hans hi padi.......

baap re baap!

itni mazakiya poem!

😆

good one!

and a very lovely poem........

bechara!

ek aise insaan se pyaar kar baitha jo ki already shaadi shuda tha!

poor he!

cool!

do write more!

and i will try to be the one always........

thanks di for such a humourous poem..........

loved it a lot........

love u,

Mahak

Hi Mahak,

Wah wah.. Tum HO hamesha No.1... 👏.. I felt itna emotional kiya with poems iss poem key sath to make u smile and laugh ... and i guess u did.. its a kind of strange fact but i wanted to show another side of a woman.. she can be really mean too.. not always ht ebechari one.. here the man is the bechara type.. and he s sared of this owman that whats makes us smile.. he is scared again her fake beauty and nakhra may well take him towards her which is not right..

heheh tum bohat hassi aur bohat smile kiyana..ab i am feelgin good.. will post one more soon and hope ur smile stays on dear..

aur haan coffee bhi hogaye sath mey..ab first ayee ho to lets have a party with some disco dance and lets call some celbrities too.. mayur r in no mood let us call shahid and genlia chance pe dance u see. hehe..

Will be postign one more sooon dear.. u check it out luv u lots

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey bhoomi
😆
i never knew u r poems could be hillarious too..
especially that pati n dever line.

but some how i cud see it from another point of view that lady has used him for her comfort n money..or say haar..

uski nazar chaalak lagati aur humney Maathe ka paseena ponch to liya,
Chalo Pyaar ki patti ko khool Ankhon se sachh ko dekh to liya,

Hum boley,"tumhara pyaar haar hai, mera pyaar haar gaya lagata hai."

that line was emotional again..

u surprised me with this poem..
do continue..😊
sri:-)

Hi Sri,

Actually I started my journy in a gorup online with hilarious writeups.. even in IF had a parody contest which i won and it was hillaiour to read comedy u see... later when i wrote these poems serious types everyone actually felt i was mature soemwhere😆 and dekho it feels good to hear from u that u feel surprised that i coudl write humourous hillarious things too.. 😃..

yup this poem i posted purposly to show the other side where no always a woman is behcari and pativrata type few r weird and selifh and they look simple beautiful but r too smart and want to enjoy money wealth and use their beauty for it..

the man is emotional in pain but he is a scared guy , he is afaraid how he fall for her and is scared what she may do more to trap him..

good ot nkwo u enjoyed reading this bit too dear.

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Bhoomi... You are really leaving me speechless again and again... I am so lucky that I got to be the runner up of the Poets contest with you in it... Beautifully written..

Hi Divya,

U r lucky as u got runner up in the contest..yaar u coudl be the winner too..actually i had a blast with u all around i have actually started writign such short poems after a logn time due tot he contest.. few of the poems there surprise me actualy so great u were there and made me write some more.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
wow bhoomi this is a real treat all ur poems together awesome i loved all of them till date but the 1st one was the best and the last one was hilarious

Hi Jyothi dear,

wow!! good to see u here dear.. yup u must have read these poems na.. may be the 2nd one u may nt have as in SG gourp i had not osted that .. u enjoyed reading htm.... jythi poem in story were included after a lot of ur encoruagment.. and postign here peoms and gettign reply comment from u makes me feel special.. thanks for writing in here..tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Hehe...Bhoomi...this was simply gr8!! Aur emotional bhi nahi hui main...balki mujhe bahut maza aya....aur hassi bhi. The first four lines n the last two lines r gr8!! Loved it....well u can see that I guess....coz main xam k bawjud comment kar rahi hu....donno y naam padhke hi laga this wil be gr8!!! I mean its always gr8 to read ur writings but this one attracted me....and I'm very happy to read this.

Hi sumaiya,

good to know u smiled and emotional to nahi huee I am sure u must be wonderign kaise yeh admi phass gaya..and how he is scared of this owmna.. and this woman too is quite smart and looks different but inside is sharp and wants to make money ussing her charm .. exams hain..i guess my poems shodul be like break time for u .. so smile karwaye to jyada easy hoga for u to concentrate on ur exams.. hehe.. all my best wishes dear.. thanks so much for commenting on it though u r soooo busy with ur studies..

luv u hugs ur way..tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Kaisi Meri Grahasti

Dulhan Bani Piya sang main Chali,
Peeche Ma-Baap Jhod Sapno ki Gali,

Shaadi ke Kuch hi dinomey Garbhawati thi,
Apne Maike gayi to dekhi unki berukhi thi,

Ek din Raaste par sath chalte piche jo rah gayi,
Na jane bheed ki maujhdgi mey kaise unka chanta sah gayi,

Ek Ek payi ka hisaab unko batana padta tha,
Bina pooche Ek paisa bhi kharch karna nahi chalta tha,

Unka Gussa Mujhe Maar Khilata tha,
Unka Pyaar mere jakhm par marham lagata tha,

Hamari Beti apne Pita se bahut darti thi,
Hamare jhagade mey kai baar chot usebhi lagati thi,

Sharirik aur Aarthik roop se wah mujhse jyada takatwar the,
Sharminda ho Roote mere Budhe saas- sasur the,

Raat ke nashe mey Bazaru aurat jaisi izzat milti thi,
Din ke ujale mey Sabko zindagi meri samanya si dikhti thi,

Kahan jaati? teen saal ki beti thi jo sath,
Aur ab to nahi tha sar par ma-baap ka bhi hath,

Logon se kahte woh ,apni biwi ko rani bana jevaro se ladate hai,
Yeh to sirf main hi jaanu, ki wah to mere shareer ke Ghaav chupate hai,

Sochti Hoon kaise Is Nark se Nikalti Main,
Beti ko janm na diya hota to shayad khudkhushi karleti main,

Karva chouth ke Din , chand ko dekhon main jabhi,
Prarthana karu, Aisa Var Na mile Kisiko Kabhi!!!

Kaisi Yeh Grahasti chala rahi hoon,
Angaro par roz chal rahi hoon.

................Bhoomikauttam

Edited by bhoomikauttam - 15 years ago

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