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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Heart Asks Mind:

Thats a cute poem Bhoomi....I loved it....specially these lines:

When that someone will get inside the heart,
Mind n heart see-saw will then have to start,
So be relax until blood pressure's are sailing smoothly,
When love happens, heart will be happy, sad or comfused
but never empthy...

Its just sooooooo cute yaar.....dont hav any more words to describe....hehe.

For a moment:

This is a touching one....sumtyms one loss takes away the pleasure of every other gain.....and I just loved these lines from here:

I want to have a look at u
and in ur arms for a moment can I be...

Again a very awesum job Bhoomi....keep it up dear.

Hi Sumaiya,

Nice to know u liked both the peoms dear. First one u felt sute and those lines u liked glad to know it ... the secondone u felt touchign with those lines..awww thanks for ur wonderful comments.. i always always appreciate the way u encourage my efforts.. really sweet of u. thanks for reading and commenting.. tc

luvu

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: ssh57
Heart asks Mind, For a Moment

Hi Bhoomi,
You are back I see. Both the poems are short and sweet. Are these also from the poem Antakshari series? Good ones.
Love ssh57

Hi Sharadha,

Yes i am back, but my comp is down these days so u all willhave to wait for my next set of work to share withu all..

U felt they r sweet feels really good. Yes u r right they are among the poem I wrote in that Antakshri series. U liked glad yaar... will try to improve and keep in mind the things u have told me shared iwth me dear...

luvu tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: ssh57
Ek Tarfa Pyaar

Even though the love is one-sided the hurt is always for both sides.The one who loves is hurt that the other doesn't reciprocrate while the other feels hurt that he/she has been misunderstood because friendsship is all they can offer and expect. Nice Poem. tc. ssh57
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HI Sharadha,

Yes love is one sided but the impact i can say can be on both sides... if one feels the other love is not even relevant to say its love then obviously for that person the feelings emotions will be different .. one in love and u cant make the other trust his intentions..its much much painful..and sure love hasnt touched the other even little..its apainful feeling.. yess we cant blame anyone..friendship and crossign the limit..u certianly cant blame na... misunderstanding and delay in confession is all happens with this fear of rejection..

good to getur comments on it..dear.. always enjoy to read them..tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: topsyturvy23
beautiful poem
thanks for pm

Hi,

i should be thanking u for reading and for commenting thatu liked it ..and felt it was beautiful..thanks ..tc

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#484

Ek tarfa pyaar[B][/B]

Heyyy bhoomi
Amazing poem
Amazingly potraited the emotions of the person
Thanx for the pm

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#485

Heyyyy bhoomi
Just loved both the poems
Heart asking mind was amazing
Loved the way u said when there is love heart is not empathy
N for a moment was awsome
Thanx for the pm

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

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Posted: 15 years ago

#486

Hey bhoomi...

i will be busy with my studies for next few months so i may comment late on u r poems/stories ,,,hope u understand n wont mind..but please do send me Pms..will read when ever i get time n will try to comment,,,

sri:-)

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania
mind blowing
heart touching

Hi Sur,

Glad u liked it.. thanks for commenting..tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2
Ek tarfa pyaar[B][/B]

Heyyy bhoomi
Amazing poem
Amazingly potraited the emotions of the person
Thanx for the pm

Hi Seema,

glad to know u read and liked it.. i tried but ur comments make me feel that it touched u all..will hope ot write more and improve too ... tc

luvu

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2
Heyyyy bhoomi
Just loved both the poems
Heart asking mind was amazing
Loved the way u said when there is love heart is not empathy
N for a moment was awsome
Thanx for the pm

Hi Seema,

u read both the poems ..😃U liked these small bits of english poetry cant even say it is poetry just a small attempt to write my thoughts into words. u liked that..glad to know u liked the other one as well.. all ur comments always give me enough push to write more and share my work with u all..thansk for lovely comments..tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: kmh.fan
Wow great work bhoomi 😊

Hi,

good to get ur views.. u liked it makes me very happy..tc

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: sri_4
Hey bhoomi...

i will be busy with my studies for next few months so i may comment late on u r poems/stories ,,,hope u understand n wont mind..but please do send me Pms..will read when ever i get time n will try to comment,,,

sri:-)

Hi Sri,

u r going to be busy with studies.. all the best dear..and am sure u will work hard and results will be very good. No problem dear if u delay in commenting or u cant comment.. u read or go thorguh my poem whenver u get time makes me know u gave me space in ur life thats equally very very awesome feeling .. i know u have throughly encoruaged each n every work of mine here.. and when u little busy i surely can understnad dear. I am late in posting my work withmybackup to upload in m,y comp ..Got a new one atlast.. 😊.

tc dear.. luv u ..and thanks for ur support here.. it surely made me to post these numerous poems here.. my best wishes with u always..

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#490

Bin dekhe jo pyaar hua

Chehra Jo Kabhi nahi dekha naa hi Pehchana tha,
Shabdon ke jariye computer se jaana tha,

Unka Farji Naam Chat pe 'Anjaan' tha,
'Albeli' naam hi meri pehchaan tha,

Zindagi ke lamhon ko humne Sang Bantaa,
Apne ander ki bhawanao ko sang jhanta,

Jeevan ke khalipan ko Unhoney bhar diya tha,
Mere aatma vishwas ko jagrut kar diya tha,

Unmey jeevan ke prati hausla,himmat main jagati thi,
Unki Samasyaoo ko aasani se Suljhati thi,

Mehsus kiya ek dusre ke liye behadd lagaav aur aadar ,
Ahsaas tha Ek dusre se judey the hum kuch Is kadar,

Apni vyatha, Uljhan, Asuun Ko kabhi nahi chupatey the,
Dil ke , Yaadon ke, har darwaje ko khula jhod jatey the,

Vishwaas to pura tha Dost jise dekha nahi baaton ka saccha hai,
Hamari Ghanto ki chatting se pata tha Dil ka bahut achaa hai,

Ek baar To miley aisi tadap jaruur hoti thi,
Uss chehre ko ek nazar dekhne ki hasrat rehti thi,

Saath samunder paar kar jab wah mujhse milne ayaa,
Dono ke Dil mey bechaini thi , chehra Khil khilaya,

Dil mey humsafar ki jo tasveer basa liye the,
Jab mile to usmey ab saare rang bhar gaye the,

Ek Dusre Ko jaanch rahe the hamare parivaar,
Humne to ek dusre ko kabse karliya tha swikaar,

Computer ke chariye shuru huey is rishte ka kaionay majak Udaya,
Kuch ney to Isey naii peedhe ko behkane wali samasyaa bataya,

Kitno ko hamara yeh Rishta bevakufi lagati thi,

Hame to Is rishte mey Ishwar ki manjuri dikhti thi,

Kismat ya Khushnasibi humdono bina dekhehi sahi jeevan sathi parakh sakte hain,
Hamari Pyaar Ki gehraai Ko shayad Sirf humdono hi samajh sakte hain.

Hamare pyaar ki shuruwat mey naa rang roop ka dikhawa tha,

Ek ajeeb sa apnapan, na kissi baat ka chalawa tha,

Bin bole Dil ki baat jaanlete, ek dusre ka sath sukun de raha tha

Hamari Vichaar, sacchi bhawnaye hi dilon ke taar jod raha tha,

Aaj Umra bhar ke rishte mey kadam se kadam milakar chalte hain,
Hamari Grihasti Ko kisiki nazar naa lagey yehi dua karte hain.

...............Bhoomikauttam

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