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Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

di!

i guess this is the first word i always use...... 😆

its the beautiful poem.......

u know what?

i too think that a confession should be only like this......

i believe in arrange marriage......

but i do think that the person who loves u should confess to you only like this.......

chand taare are all filmy stuff.........

and i dont like that...........

and i loved all the lines.......

they are the things i love.......

i mean i never want a confession with cheezy lines........

but a confession with realistic lines.......

which which touch my heart and i give it to the person.......

this is the most beautiful poem i loved..........

u know why?

coz the girl who says these is exactly like me........

typically me!

i am typically confused which one to highlight.........

coz all r exceptionally good.......

and u know what?

i love ur stories and poems.............

and this one is the best poem of urs......

na kahe,"Tumhare sath jeena aur marna hai"

Bas kahe,"Tumhara sath hai to jeevan ka safar suhana hai"

i highlighted this line coz i believe in this strongly........

i mean - jeene marne ki sabhi kasmein khate hain,

bas baat yeh hai ki kitne unhe nibhaate hai.

i think that seemed like a two liner............

i simply love this poem!

i wanna use it in my story "arrange marriage".......can i do so?

its simply mind blowing...........

simply beautiful..........

i am sure that now our bond has now beocme so strong that u have developed telepathy......

coz this are the thoughts which always come in my mind.......

this is breathtakingly beautiful...........

awesome!

awesome!

and simply awesome!

i would love to read this poem again........

and that's what i am gonna do.........

love,

take care,

good wishes,

hugs,

Mahak

(well this pink is my favourite colour)

Hi Mahak ,

Bacchi kahey

wonderful bhoomi!

wonderful awesome bhoomi! I am glad to have a friend like you . you are very talented dear i want to meet you and thank you for all these beautiful poems .

Bacchi Khhey
👏Saree bacchon ko bas yehi hai kahna,
👏Chup nahi tum har baar yun rahna,
👏Kaho aur In dukhon ko ab na Sahna,
👏Aise kakaon ko sabak sikha ke rahena.

.............Bhoomikauttam⭐️

di!

sorry but i wont comment this time.......

not because its bad or its something that i dont like.......

but because its something which i have seen happening........

and becoz it is really very close to my heart..........

hats off to u for writing this........

this is a really socially related topic..........

my frd had suffered this in her childhood........

she has suffered this.......

she couldn't tell this to anyone........

she told me...........that at that age.....

she didnt had the knowledge that she was being used for pleasure.........

she couldnt tell to anyone becoz she couldnt even know what was happening with her.......

i know this becoz she once told me abt this........

and i really feel hatred for her relative.......

and i too urge every child to tell everything to her parents.......

Saree bacchon ko bas yehi hai kahna,
Chup nahi tum har baar yun rahna,
Kaho aur In dukhon ko ab na Sahna,
Aise kakaon ko sabak sikha ke rahena.

awesome poem!

i loved it to bits.........

👏

i am lucky to have a person like u in my life.........

love,
Mahak

hye

Originally posted by: manatated

wonderful bhoomi!

first of all i would like to thank you for writing on such a sensitive issue....

And I admire , the way you have put it in simple words...

I just liked it so much!

Hi,

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wat more to say dear....this is a very sensitive topic....I'm glad u wrote this poem....and even I hope lil children talk abt their fears n probs....and adults also gain enough of their confidence. And rahi baat aise Kakao ki....zinda zameen pe gadh du...to bhi kam hai....huh.

Anyways, it was a very nice attempt Bhoomi. Loved it.

Hi Sumaiya,