Tum Mere Kaun Ho?? - A Rikara SS ...Ch19 - 06/04 Pg 71

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Hello guys!! this is aayushi and i am presenting to you a new story which is based on the present track...My friend lubna and I are working together on this... enough of my bak bak and let's get into the story






Chapter 1


A new morning; a morning with a new hope seeps in...And our gauri is very happy because it is her day 23 feb... Exactly a year back from today she got married to her jatadhari...Though it was a marriage just to save her back then but now she believes that they both have together come a long way in their realtion...She believes that her jatadhari has accepted her.. And to wish her jatadhari she wakes him up which is more like a everyday thing for her...

Rikara's room

Gauri: omkara ji...uthiye na...pleej... bahut der hogyi hai... 9 baj gai...aur aap yaha kumbkaran ke tarah so rahe hai ka?? ( omkaraji wake up...It's already 9 am ...and you are still sleeping like a kumkaran)

Om: gauri...please...disturb mat karo yaaar...sone do... kal mein late soya tha na...please...chodo yaaar... ( gauri please don't disturb me and let me sleep...I slept late last night...so please)

Gauri: hamne kaha tha aapse late sone ko??? nahi na...aapki khud ki marzi thi na..aur aajke din aap kaise der tak so sakte hain...uthiye...aur waise bhi pta nhn hume ki aap teeno chirotte raat raat tak jag kar ka karte hain ( did I tell you to sleep late?? No right?? It was your own wish to be up until late...and how can you be careless enough to sleep till late today...Get up.. anyways I don't even know what you 3 brothers are upto till late in the night)

Om:(coming into senses by the word teenon chirotte) Oh my god..!!!!gauri time kya hai?? ( gauri what is the time)

Gauri: haaa...vahi toh bola tha na...9 baj gai... aur omkaraji aapko yaad hai na ki aaj kya hai?? Konsa din hai aaj ( It's 9 am...and omkaraji you remmebe today's date right)

Om: OOHHH SSHHITT!!! HAAN gauri muje yaad ki hai ki aaj meri ek important meeting hai...tumne kyun muje jadi nhn uthaya...ab late ho jaunga main tumahri wajah se ( Gauri I know I have an important meeting today...Why did you not wake me up early...now I will be late and all this is because of you)

Gauri (lil scared and sad that he doesn't remember): aap humpe chilla kyu rahe hain...??hamne koshish ki thi par aap uthe nahi toh isme humara kya kusoor hai... ( why are you shouting on me?? I tried to wake you up but you din't wake up...what's my fault)

Om: Kya gauri apni galti ko tum kyun nhn maan leti ho?? Behes kyun karni hai tumhe... (to himself) ab chod om...isse batein karke time mat waste karo...aaj hi toh hai hamare plan ka last day...we will have to execute it perfectly warna sab kuch barbaad ho jayega...isiliye hame uss veer ka khel khatam karna he hai aaj... ( why can't you just accept your mistake gauri?? Why do you want to argue?? Leave it om...don't waste your time here...it's an important day for you...it's the last day of our mission veer and we can't afford to miss out anything...or else all of our hard work will go down the drain...)

Gauri: kya kaha?? kaun sa plan.?? ( what did you just say??? What plan??)

Om:(tensed)hhuuh?? Pl..pla...plan...??nahi...kuch toh nahi... ( plan?? No... I didn't say anthing)

Gauri: par aap veer ji ke baare mein abhi ... ( you just now said something against veer)

Om:(to stop his wife and her questions he started to fake shouting) Gauri will you PLEASE LEAVE ME ALONE FOR SOMETIME...?? SAB KUCH JAANA HAI TUME?? ALREADY KAAM KO LEKAR MAIN BAHUT FRUSTRATED HOON AUR UPAR SE TUM EISE APNI JASSOSI SE MUJHE PARESHAAN KAR RAHI HO...?? ( Why do you have to know everything gauri?? I am so tensed because of my work and you are just adding onto my frustrations ...please leave me alone and stop interfering)

here om felt very sad for what he said right now..but he had to do this for sake of his bhaiyya and bhaabhi...but gauri on the other side stood numb and shocked with a bleeding heart...his last words made her feel that she was no more the old gauri for om...

Gauri: *****silence****** Om understood that his words have hurt his cute chirayya...

Om: sorry wo mere kehene ka wo matlab nhn tha..bas wo kaam ke karan main bahut pareshaan that toh gusse main nikal gya... ( soory I didn't mean it like that...I am just a liitle tensed because os my work...so it was all in anger...)

Gauri: hmm...ham jaannte hai...hame maaf kijiye ki humne aapki pareshaani badha di... Saying this she walked out of the room... ( I know...I'm sorry to be adding onto your frustrations)

Kitchen

Bhavya: GAURI BHABHI...!!!!AAP KAHA KHO GAYE HO...??? (bhavya puts off the stove and continued) kya hua bhaabhi...??aap bahut pareshan lag rahe ho...sab kuch theek to hai na ...?? ( Where are you lost SIL?? What happened??? You look very tensed to me...Is everything alright??)

Gauri:****silence***

Bhavya: ( shouting near her ear) BHABHI!!!! ( SIL)

gauri: (coming into senses)..haa...haa..bhavya bolo...aur yeh chai kaise jalgai?? ( yes bhavya...tell me what is it..How did this tea burn)

Bhavya: bhabhi...sab theek toh hai na...?? ( SIL...is everything alright)

Gauri: haaa... sab theek hai na...hame ka hua hai...ham theek hai... (saying this gauri took the salt tin and was ready to put salt in the tea) ( yes everything is good...what will happen to me)

Bhavya: bhabhi...!!!aap yeh kya kar rahi hai ...chai mein sab chakkar dalte hai...namak nahi... ( SIL what are you doing?? Who puts salt in the tea??)

Gauri: ( realizing) uhh!!!!sarry bhavya...galti se... ( oh...it was by mistake)

Bhavya:(holding gauri by shoulders) bhabhi...aap hamari bhabhi hai...aur aap hamesha kehti hain na main aapi behen hoon...hai na...?? ( you are my SIL right?? And you always say that I am like your sister)

Gauri: haa..toh...?? (yes so)

Bhavya: toh yeh ki agar aapko koi pareshani hai toh aap mujhse baat kar sakte hai... ( so please share your worries with me...)

Gauri then shares her thoughts with bhavya...And bhavya explains to her that omkara might actually be busy and she should make his favorite breakfast for him to cheer him up... Even though gauri isn't fully convinced but she still goes ahead and makes breakfast for om and takes it to their room

Bhavya's POV

Humne bhabhi ko toh samjha diya hai ki omkara bhaiya kaam ki wajah se pareshaan honge par hume nhn lagta hai ki baat sirf itni he hai kyunki rudra bhi kitne he dino se ajeeb sa behave kar rahe hain... Aakhir kaar iss ghar main ho kya raha hai...kya chupa rahe hain yeh sab log humse... ( even though I have explained SIL but deep down inside I myself am so confused...Because rudra has been acting all weird too...What is happening in this house?? What are these Obros trying to hide from everyone)

Rikara's room

Om is speaking to shivay on phone about the plan that are going to execute today but as soon as he sees gauri entering the room he whispers that gauri is here over the phone and hangs up... Seeing this gauri feels weird and her insecurities start building up..

Gauri: ( ignoring evevrything) voh humne aapke liye aapka phavarite (favorite) aalo paratha banaya hai...aab aao..sath mein khayenge... ( I have made you your fav breakfast...Come let's have this together)

Om: haa...kyu nahi...agar meri beevi itne pyaar se bula rahi hai toh kaise mana kar sakta hoon main... But by then he got a message from shivaay ( yeah..Why not?? My lovely wife has made it with love so how can I refuse)

Message: om come meet me at my office right now... veer ke against ek saboot mila hai...jaldi aana...abhi...zyada vakt nahi hai humare paas...rudy ko bhi le aana... ( We have got our hands on an evidence against veer...come fast and get rudy with you...we can't afford to let this go)

Gauri:(took a piece of paratha nd forwarded it to om) yeh lijiye...ham aapko khilate hai... ( let me feed you)

Om: gauri tum kha lo ...actually mujhe na ek important meeting hai...aur abhi khana nahi kha sakta... and walks out without listening to her ( gauri you eat I need to leave urgently...and I don't have time to eat)

Gauri's POV

Aakhir chakkar kya hai...aajkal roz omakraji subeh jaldi nikal jaate hain ghar se and raat ko der se laut te hain... ghar laut kar bhi yeh teeno bhai ek saath beith ke kuch baat karte rehte hain aur wo anika bhaujai ki hamshakal bhi humesha unke saath he hoti hai...aur kuch pooch toh kuch nhn hai keh ke taal dete hain...

Abhi bhi kisi se phone pe baat kar rahe the aur humare aate he phone kaat diya...aur abhi bhi ek message aaya toh sab kuch chod chaad ke bhag gye...aakhir kya chal raha hai in teeno bhaiyonke beech jo omkara ji hume nhn bta rahe...kya unhe abhi tak humpar bharosa nhn hai...kya unhe nhn lagta ki hum unki taklef baantne ke laayak hain...pta lagaana he padega ki aakhir baat kya hai...

Ek kaam karte hain bhavya se poochte hain ki kya usne bhi rudy bahiya ke behavior main koi badlaav mehsoos kiye hain...

Gauri goes to bhavya's room and asks her

Bhavya hume tum ek baat sach sach btao...pleez kuch mat chupana ( what is the matter...everyday omkaraji will leave early in the morning and will come back home late in the night...and even after getting back home he will just by the pool side with his brothes and anika's lookalike and they just let the matter pass by saying nothing whenever I try to ask them...

Even now he was speaking to somebody over the phone and hung up as soon as I entered...and now just by seeing a message he ran off...What is all this happening?? What are these 3 brothers trying to hide...and why is omkaraji not confiding in me?? Does he not trust me still?? Does he not feel that I am worthy enough to share his worries with him...I will have to find out the matter...

Let me ask bhavya if she has also observed any changes in rudy bro...maybe that can help )

Bhavya: ji bhabhi kahiye...aapka breakfast kaisa raha?? Bhaiya ko pasand aaya na ( yes SIL tell me...how did the breakfast go...did omkara brother like it)

Gauri: bhavya tum breakfast ko chodo hume yeh btao ki kya tumne rudy bhaiya ke behavior main kuch badlaav mehsoos kiya hai kya?? ( Bhavya leave aside the breakfast...Tell me if you have noticed any changes in rudy's behavior)

Bhavya : ji bhabhi...roz subeh jaldi jaldi nikal jaate hain aur raat ko der se waapis aate hain...waapis aane ke baad bhi apne bhaiyon aur anika bhabhi ki humshakal ke saath he hote hain... ( yes SIL...i have...he goes out early in the morning and gets back late in the night and even after getting back home he is by the pool side with his brothers and anika's lookalike)

Gauri: humne bhi omkara ji ke baare main yeh sab mehsoos kiya hai...hume toh lag raha hai bhavya ki zaroor kuch baat hai jo sab log humse chupa rahe hain... ( even I have noticed the same changes in omkaraji...and I doubt that these brothers are hiding and planning something)

Bhavya: bhabhi lagta toh hume bhi yehi hai...par aap he btaiye na ki hum kya kar sakte hain jab wo log hume kuch btaana nhn chahte toh... ( SIL even I feel the same but what can we do if they don't want to tell us)

Gauri: job hi ho bhavya pta toh hume lgaana padega...( whatever it is bhavya I need to find it out)

Bhavy and gauri discuss about ways that they can use to find out what these brothers and anika's looalike are upto...

Bhavya: bhabhi chaliye aap hum pehle ghar main dhoondhte hain agar koi hai toh ( SIl let's start from home itself)

Bhavya and gauri tour around the house to see if the Obros are present or no...

And they come across the study where they hear shivay telling omru to come with him and anika and that they need to finish this veer's chapter today...

SHivay: omru please aaj humare mission ka last day hai toh hum koi chance nhn le sakte hain... gauri aur bhavya ko kuch btaaya toh nhn na tum dono ne ( OMRU it's the last day of our mission today and we can't take a chance today...I hope you haven't told anything to gauri and bhavya)

Om: nhn shivay...btaaya toh nhn par... ( no shivay I haven't but...)

Shivay: koi par war nhn om...hum zaada logon ko involve nhn kar sakte hain apne plan main...bas anika main tum aur ru handle kar lenge...baakiyon ko btaane ki zaroorat nhn hai... and haan apne phone switch off kardo taakin koi bhi hume phone karke pareshaan na kar sake..( no buts om...We can't involve more people in it...anika , you; rudra and I are enough we don't need anybody else and yes just switch off your phones so that nobody an disturb us...)

Bhavya and gauri are shocked to the core listening to all this and feel cheated...gauri's world has come upside down...she just takes bhavya's hand and walks off without listening further and locks herself and bhavya and cries loudly...



Thank you for reading it guys...Let me know how you guys found the first chapter...I plan to end this in a few shots...please keep supporting me guys...


love

aayushi and lubna!




INDEX

146257614 - Ch2

146269245 - Ch3

146299795 - Ch4

146304908 - Ch5

146322690 - Ch6

146342535 - Ch7

146346691 - Ch8

146374008 - Ch9

146421931 - Ch10

146438366 - Ch11

146462165 - Ch12

146485957 - Ch13

146507692 - Ch14

146545222 - Ch15

146582800 - Ch16

146641096 - Ch17

146676558 - Ch18

146741615 - Ch19

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It is awesome.just the way we want Current track to be proceed.but we r not lucky that much.my all rikara writers r giving us what we expect from serial.

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It is awesome.just the way we want Current track to be proceed.but we r not lucky that much.my all rikara writers r giving us what we expect from serial.

Thank u so much. Waiting for update.


Thank you for reading😊
i agree to you that we aren't lucky enough to get something substantial in terms of rikara...

will update soon...I hope i will be able to meet your expectations...
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