Tum Mere Kaun Ho?? - A Rikara SS ...Ch19 - 06/04 Pg 71 - Page 35

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AMIEO

❤️Omkara pouring his heart out to Gauri 😳..slowly melting her heart. HOping for Gauri to give them both another chance to be happy because its so clear that they are so sad when theyre apart 😊


Thank you so much!!😊

Om needs to be expressive... And gauri will melt!! girls are soft at heart...

Om needs to earn that chance...hopefully soon
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Thank you so much!!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mailanchi

I hope those clenching fists are not of sids and that he had not fallen for Ri


Thank you so much for reading😊

I will reveal this in the next chapter...Keep reading till then😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
It was emotional but a beautiful update...Loved it...❤️
Itz good that they talked n shared their pain with each other...😊
I think Sid saw them togethr n overheard their convo...Is he the villain in RiKara relation...? Or any other...? Waiting for next update...Come soon...😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Woo Sid stay away :(
Gaudi finally opened up to Om!!
Please please don't let him interrupt them I can't bear it
That was sooo emotionally and beautifully written
How she saw his paintings, how he told her what he felt when she left
her questioning him why he never came for her
I need them to talk it out, I need Gauri to have a moment of weakness in his arms PLS PLS PLS

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hello!! i hope everyone is alive after the hot holi we had for rikara.. Even though for 1 minute but we atleast got something😊... I toh am super happy and with my sanskaari thoughts polluting my mind i present to you my not so sanskaari chapter... chalo chalo let's start!!


Chapter 13

Gauri removing om's hands from her waist says Omkaraji shayad bahut der ho chuki hai! Ab inn sab baton ka koi fayada nhn hai. Chalieye neeche chalte hain bache intezaar kar rahe honge..!

Gauri comes out of the room and is surprised to see sid there...

Arre!! Sid tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?? She asks him ( Oh!! Sid what are you doing here?)

Omira ne neeche btaaya ki tum ro rahi thi; toh chala aaya apne dost ke paas. Sid tells her ( Omira told me that you were crying; so I just came running to be with my friend)

Tum theek toh ho na; sid adds taking gauri into a hug... ( Do you feel ok now?)

Omkara comes out of his room and is shocked seeing gauri hugging sid...

Clenching his teeth he goes and separates sid and gauri angrily. Door raho gauri se. jab dekho usse hug karne ke bahane dhoondhte rehte ho om tells him angrily. ( Stay away from gauri! Why are you always looking for ways to hug gauri?)

Gauri is shocked and happy seeing this side of om...But controlling her smile she says; kya kar rahe hain aap Mr.oberoi? sid mera dost hai aur yeh koi tareeqa nhn hai kisi se baat karne ka... ( what are you doing Mr.oberoi? Sid is my friend and this is not the way I would want anyone to speak to him)

Dost hai toh dost banke rehne ko bolo; chipak kyun raha hai wo tumse... om tells her... ( Tell him to stay like a friend then, why does he have to stick to you like a glue?)

Tum mere bachon ki maa ho; meri biwi ho. Chahe abhi humare darmiyaan thodi an ban hai par fer bhi tum sirf aur sirf meri ho. Mujhe yeh bilkul bardaash nhn hai ki koi tumhe dekhe ya chuhe..Yeh haq mera hai; aur mera he rahega.. om adds possessively holding and pulling gauri from her waist... Even though he is looking at gauri his speech is hinting sid.. ( You are the mother of my children; you are my wife. Even though we have misundestandings between us and we don't stay together but the fact is you are mine; just mine. Never even in my dremas can I tolerate anyone else touching or checking you out. This right is mine; and will forever be mine)

Samjh gye na aap Mr. SID?? And takes gauri away from there despite her protests. ( I hope you have understood Mr.sid?? )

SID's POV

Nhn aisa nhn ho sakta! Gauri maaf nhn kar sakti hai omkara ko. Main hargiz nhn hone doonga aisa. Gauri meri hai.. Main uske saath tab tha jab usse ek sahaare ki zaroorat thi; aise kaise wo mujhe chodkar kisi aur ke pass jaa sakti hai. Rokna hoga mujhe usse. Maana maine apne pyaar ka izhaar kabhi nhn kiya par who isliye kyunki mujhe nhn laga tha ki gauri ka pati kabhi uske pass waapis aayega; aur main ache se jaanta tha ki gauri pyaar par bharosa nhn karti. Kyun gauri ko itne saalon main mera pyaar nhn nazar aaya. WO toh hamesha mere bina kahe mujhe samjh jaati thi; toh kyun? Par ab main intezaar nhn kar sakta. Omkara ne aaj apne pyaar ka izhaar ek baar kiya hai gauri ke liye; aur chahe wo jitna marzi dikhaye ki use faraq nhn par mujhe pta hai ki ri ko khushi he hui hogi..Par main khush nhn hoon! Nhn hoon main khush. Kaise khush ho sakta hoon main; jab main bhi ri se pyaar karta hoon; kaise kisi aur ka hote hue dekhun main apni aankhon ke saamne ri ko. Omira aur rayan se toh main bhi bahut pyaar karta hoon; baap ka pyaar main de sakta hoon unhe. Mujhe ri ko btaana hoga ki mere dil main kya hai uske liye isse pehle ki bahut de hojaaye...

( No this can't happen. Gauri can't forgive omkara. I will not let it happen; no;no; no...he shouts...! Gauri is mine. I was with her by her side when she needed somebody; How can she leave me and go to someone else? I have to stop her. I agree I have never confessed my feelings for her but that was solely because I had never imagined gauri's husband to come looking for her and also because I knew how much gauri despised the idea of love. But why could gauri not see my love for her; she always understood me without me having to say anything. Then why? But I can't wait any longer. Today omkara has confessed his love for gauri; even though gauri is acting to be indifferent but I know she must be dancing with happiness hearing his love confession. But I am not happy. I am not at all happy. How can I be happy when I love gauri. How can I see her belong to someone else infront my own eyes? I also love omira and rayan; I can be their father and give them all the love. I will have to tell ri about my feelings before it's too late)

And looks up with blood shot eyes...

In hall;

Gauri and omkara come down and join everyone.. chalo bachon chalen ab ghar? Gauri asks them.. ( shall we go home now??)

Nhn gauri; ab aayi ho toh khaana khaa ke jaana jhanvi requests her... ( No gauri; please have dinner and go)

Par aunty.. Gauri speaks with hesitation.. ( but aunty!)

Par war kuch nhn gauri; kya tum meri itni si baat nhn maan sakti? Maana tum mujhe maa nhn samjhti ab toh uske naate na sahi par apne bachon ki daadi samjh ke meri baat maanlo...jhanvi says sadly.. ( Not ifs and buts gauri. Can you for once not agree to me? I know I have no rights to stop you as your mother because you don't consider me one but I am requesting you as the grandmother of your children.. Please gauri)

Aur waise bhi maine bachon ke aane ki khushi main khud khaana bnaaya hai apne haathon se; jhanvi adds... ( I myself have prepared the dinner for the kids)

Om feels defeated seeing his mother so weak and craving for her DIL... Sorry mom; aapko meri wajah se yeh sab sehena pad raha hai. Par gauri ki bhi koi galti nhn hai mom. Hum sabne usse itna dukh diya hai ki wo chah ke bhi humse koi rishta nhn rakhna chahti... Om thinks in his mind.. ( sorry mom! You are oing through all this because of me. Mom; it's not gauri's mistake in thus. We all have hurt her so much that she is absolutely off the idea of keeping any relation with us...)

Seeing gauri still hesitate jhanvi looks towards tej hopefully; Haan gauri beta! Khaana toh khaalo. Bachon ko bhi bhookh lagi hogi tej tells her understanding jahnvi's gesture... ( yes gauri! please have dinner. Even the children must be hungry)

Haan mumma! Bahut bhookh lagi hai hume...omira and rayan say.. ( yes mumma! We are very hungry)

Gauri agrees reluctantly and they all move towards the table...

Jhanvi makes rayan and omira sit with her so that she can feed them while gauri sits opposite to om... Sid comes there and tej tells him to join them so he goes and sits next to gauri since that is the only chair left besides the one next to om...

Om is brutally murdering his food with his fork seeing gauri and sid sitting together and talk... His jealousy reaches a peak and he glares his father who has been noticing him all along... Resentfully he just walks off leaving his food and without heeding to his mother's call..

Tej goes behind him sensing the anger in his son's eyes.

What's wrong om?? Tej asks him as they reach away from the dining table..

Really Mr.oberoi? even after all this you are asking me what's wrong?? Om speaks in fury without facing his father

Kya tumhe apne pyaar pe bharosa nhn hai om?? Tej asks shocking om... ( Do you not trust your love om)

Kya?? Asks a shocked om facing his father ( what?)

Wahi jo tumne sunna? Bharosa nhn hai kya tumhe apne pyaar par. Tej asks him again. ( what you just heard? DO you not trust your love for gauri)

Hai Mr.oberoi. Par...Om begins to say ( I do Mr.oberoi but)

Kahin aisa toh nhn ki tumhe gauri pe bharosa nhn tej speaks cutting him inbetween frowning ( is it that you aren't certain about gauri??)

Nhn nhn! Aisa kuch nhn hai. Om immediately speaks not wanting to doubt ever again... Mujhe sid pe bharosa nhn hai Mr.oberoi he adds sighing ( no ! not at all. It'snothing like that... It's just that I don't trust Sid)

Sid pe?? Tej asks him curiously ( on sid)

Kyun bulaaya aapne use khaane ke table par; dekha nhn kaise gauri ke bagal main jaake beth gya jabki mere side waali chair bhi khaali thi...Om speaks turning into a green eyed monster... Jab dekho chipakta rehta hai wo gauri se; do minute bhi mujhe wo gauri se alag nhn dikhta hai... om adds ( why did you call him on the dinner table? Did you see how he grabbed the chair next to gauri despite the chair next to me being unoccupied... He just sticks around gauri the whole day; I have never seen him not accompanying gauri)

Ahaan!! Toh tumhe jalan ho rahi hai...tej asks amused.. ( Ahaan!! So you're jealous?)

Haan ho rahi hai om shouts.. ho rahi hai mujhe jalan. Bahut zaada jalan hoti hai jab main uss sid ko gauri ke nazdeek dekhta hoon toh. Kyun nhn honi chaheye kya?? Om asks him in thwarted ( Yes I'm he shouts.. I'm jealous. I'm very envious when I see sid close to gauri. Should I not be??)

Nhn nhn! Jalan toh tabhi hoti hai jahaan pyaar hota hai. Aur agar shayad main tumahri jagah hota toh mujhe bhi jalan hoti agar koi jhanvi ke nazdeek aata toh...Tej assures him.. ( No. I din't mean it like that. A person is envious only in love. May be I would have felt jealous if somebosy was close to jhanvi)

Par omkara main tumhe yeh btaana chahta hoon ki sid aur gauri sirf dost hain. Sid ek acha ladka hai; usne gauri ka uss waqt saath diya tha jab uske pass koi aur sahara nhn tha... Main jaanta hoon sid ko...Tej adds ( But omkara let me assure you that gauri and sid are nothing more than friends. Sid is a nice boy; He was there for gauri when she needed strength. I know sid)

Mr.oberoi! main maanta hoon ki sid ne gauri ka saath diya tha aur main uska shukarguzaar bhi hoon par main kya karun ek toh waise he gauri mujse seedhe mooh baat nhn karti hai aur oopar se yeh sid jab dekho uski pooch ban ke ghoomta hai... Mujhe kuch samajh nhn aa raha hai...Om tells him defeated... ( Mr. oberoi I agree sid was the pillar of strength for gauri in times of need and I am thankful to him for being there for her when I couldn't But what should I do? Gauri doesn't even want to look at me in my eye and seeing sid close to her is just adding to my misery...I am all the place right now)

Agar tum chaho toh main tumhari madad kar sakta hoon. Tej speaks not able to see his son like that... ( I can help you if you desire)

Par aap meri madad kyun karenge?? Na he aap mujhe apna beta maante hain aur na he main aapko apna baap...Om asks him looking for any fowl play ( But why will you help me? We don't have a father- son relation amongst us)

Chahe tum mujhe apna baap maano na maano; yeh asliyat badal nhn sakti ki main tumhara baap hoon aur tum mere bte ho; mere pehle bache ho tum. Maana ki maine baap hone ke koi farz nhn nibhaaye par shayad tumhari madad karke tumhari maafi paa sakun tej tells him smiling and goes to sit on the nearby chair... ( Not having a father-son relation doesn't change the fact that I am your father and you are my first born; my boy! I agree I haven't ever fulfilled my duties of being your father but I hope for forgiveness by helping you in this)

Kaise madad karenge aap meri?? Om asks joining him on the chair... ( how will you help me)

Dekho om! Jo bhi gauri ke saath iss ghar main hua usme sabse zaada galti agar kisi kit hi toh wo the tum..Om bows down his head listening to this...Om mere taraf dekho! Abhi sir jhukhaane ka nhn dulhan ko manaane ka time hai. Agar tum apne shaadi ke waqt strong rehte aur gauri ko uss tarah support karte jaise ek pati ko karna chaheye toh tumahri zindagi main koi problems aati he nhn...Tej explains him lovingly.. ( Look om! You are the main culprit behind whatever gauri had to go through in this house. Om don't look down; This is the time to act upon your mistakes; This is the time when you to convince your bride. Your life would have been a bed of roses had you been strong in the beginning of your marriage; had you taken a stand for gauri like a husband should for his wife.)

Aur haan doosron ki baat sunna achi baat hai par unhe blindly maan lena befkoofi hoti hai om aur yeh tumne kiya hai. Par main umeed karta hoon om ki apne rishte ko tum bina kisi ki madad ke sawaroge. I'm sure gauri ko bhi tabhi acha lagega jab use sirf uska pati manayega. Yeh tum dono ki zindagi ka sawaal hai jo karo soch ke karo aur bina apne bhaiyon ki madad ke karo. Om zindagi main har rishte ki ehmiyat aur jagah alag hoti hai aur hame humesha unhe alag he rakhna chaheye. Ek bhai ki jagah aur ek biwi ki jagah main bahut faraq hai om. Tum bhaiyon se baatein chipa sakte ho par biwi se nhn. Ek aadmi ke sukh dukh ki saathi sirf aur sirf uski biwi he hoti hai. Main yeh nhn keh raha hoon om ki tum apne bhaiyon se rishta todo; balki main yeh keh raha hoon ki tum apni biwi ko sabse oochen jagah pe rakho; usse yeh mehsoos karwaao ki tumhe usse pyaar hai; uspe bharosa hai; aur wo tumhari zindagi ka ek aisa hissa hai jo kabhi koi aur nhn ho sakta...Tej adds. ( And om! It's nice to listen to what other people advice you but it's utter foolishness to follow those advices blindly and you have done that follishness om. But now I hope that you will Festoon your relation without anyone's help. I can tell you for a fact that gauri will like it more when her husband will take some pains for her. Om this is about gauri and your life so just think carefully before getting into action and think against involving your brothers. In our life; we are bound by a lot of relations but om always remember that each relation has its own destined place and importance in our life and we should keep it that way. There is difference between a brother's and a wife's place om. You can not confide in your brothers but you should always share your problems with your wife. Om; A wife is your companion for your sorrows and for your prosperity. Don't get me wrong thinking I am telling you to break apart from your brothers; My intention is to make you realize that you should always prioritize your wife come what may; Make her believe that you desire her; you trust her and that she is an inseparable part of your life; a part that only she deserves.)

Thank you Mr.oberoi! kaash aap pehle mujhe yeh sab samjhaane ke liye hote. Shayad main yeh galtiyaan nhn karta. Par ab mujhe samjh aa gyi hai aur main apni koi galti nhn dohraunga; gauri ko main waapis paakar rahunga; uska pyaar aur bharosa jeet kar rahunga main...om speaks resolving... ( Thank you Mr.oberoi. I wish I had you earlier in my life to stop me from making these mistakes. But now that I have understood and realized my faults; I promise to never repeat my follies; I promise to win gauri back; I promise to win back her love and trust)

Aur haan sid ki fikar mat karo; peechle 5 saal gauri ne tumahri yaadon ke sahaare he guzaare hain; main aksar usse tumahara haal btaata tha. Wo kuch dikhaati nhn hai par andar he andar wo roti thi sunke apne omkaraji ka dukh... Wo abhi bhi tumse pyaar karti hai bas dikhaati nhn hai. Ab yeh pyaar ko dhoondhke bahaar laana hai tumhe omkara...samjh rahe ho na??? tej tells him ( and yes don't worry about sid. Gauri had spent the past 5 years in your memories; I often used to tell her about you; your condition in those years. She never showed her emotions but I know how broken she was to think about her omkaraji's plight. She still loves you. Now it's upto you to get her to express her love. I hope you have understood)

Aur yaad rahe! Meri beti ko dukh diya toh You will have to face TEJ SINGH OBEROI... tej says and walks off... ( and yes you will have to face TEJ SINGH OBEROI if my daughter is hurt again)

I promise! Ki main kabhi gauri ko dukh nhn doonga. Thank you dad..om speaks to himself. ( I promise to never hurt her.. Thanks you DAD)

Tej joins back for the dinner with om behind him. Assuring jhanvi that everything is kosher; all of them enjoy their dinner. Jhanvi is happily feeding rayan and omira all the while pampering and showeing her love on them. Bhavya feeds her 1 yo son with rudra's help and shivay and anika feed anshi. Daadi is happy seeing her whole family sit together and have and enjoy their meal after almost what seems like agaes but what doesn't go unnoticed by her is gauri; gauri who is still aloof...

Daadi's POV

Yeh sab sirf gauri ki wajah se he mumkin hua hai. Uski wajah se he mera parivaar aaj saath betha hai.. Main usse iss ghar main waapis laake rahungi... Mere om ki zindagi main waapis laaungi usse main; uski sahi jagah yeh hai.

( My family is sitting together because of gauri. I will make sure that she comes back to this house. I will make sure she comes back in om's life and to her destined place)

Om's POV

Kyun gauri? yeh tumhara apna ghar hai; fer kyun tum aise gairon ki tarah bartaav kar rahi ho. Please mujhe aise til til mat tadpao gauri. Please thodi jagah toh do mujhe apne dil main. Main waada karta hoon ki tumhe tumhari asli jagah pe bahut jald le aaunga main. Tumhari jagah yahaan mere bagal main hai; mere dil main hai; meri baahon main aur mere ghar main hai.

( Why gauri? This is your own house then why are you behaving indifferently. Please Don't put me to death this way gauri. Let me enter your heart gauri. I promise to get you back to your rightfull place very soon. Your place is here besides me; In my heart; in my arms and in my house)

After all the good byes and good nights done; Gauri with sid and kids decide to call it a night and start to leave.

Main tumhe chod deta hoon. Itni raat ko tumahra akele jaana theek nhn hai gauri. om speaks worrying for her safety ( I will drop you. It's very late and it won't be safe for you go alone at this hour)

Hum akele rehne aur safar karne ki aadat ho chuki hai inn 5 saalon main. Waise aapko takleef karne ki zaroorat nhn hai; bache aur hum sahi se pahunch jayenge... she replies ( These 5 years have taught me to live and travel alone. You don't have to worry I will take care of the kids)

Gauri main nhn keh raha ki tum nhn kar sakti; main yeh keh raha hoon ki main nhn chahta tum karo. Please mere aur apne liye na sahi par bachon ke liye toh please mujhe aane do; maan lo meri baat...om pleads ( Gauri I don't mean to say that you can't; all I mean is I don't want you to. Please if not for you and me; let me drop you for the children; please listen to me and let me come)

Main hoon na; main chod dunga ri aur bachon ko; aap kyun chinta kar rahe hain Mr.oberoi. Sid says controlling his anger ( I'm here and I can drop them. Why are you worrying Mr.oberoi)

Thank you so much sid; but aap pehle he inn 5 saalon main meri family ke liye bahut kuch kar chuke hain; ab please mujhe karne dijiye. Mujhe apni family ke liye kuch karne ka mauka toh milna he chaheye na...After all haq hai merea yeh...Om says smirking at him rightfully...( Thank you so much sid. You have helped my family a lot in the past 5 years so please let me do the honors now. Let me take some responsibility for my family; after all it's my right)

Sensing a possibility of verbal commotion gauri agrees to let om drop them while telling sid that she will meet him tomorrow morning... Sid leaves in anger; anger of being rejected the chance of spending time with gauri..

Om rejoicing his small victory moves towards the car with gauri and kids...and drive off with gauri in the front and kids at the back like a perfect family... Tejvi smile seeing that site...

Not a word was spoken between gauri and omkara; but they were stealing glances of each other whenever possible...

Mumma aap aur pap chup kyun hain?? Omira asks ( why are dad and you quiet)

Haan aur aap dono kyun ek doosre ko chup chup ke dekh rahe hain...rayan pitches in embarrassing his parents.. ( yes and why are you two stealing glances at each other)

Rayan!! Gauri says strictly

Mumma par hum sab chup kyun hai?? Omira asks saving her brother ( mumma but why are we quiet??)

Nhn beta wo aapki muma thak gyi hain na isiliye; par aap papa se baat karo na...om says ( no child!! It's just that your mother is a little tired; but you talk to your father)

STOP-----The kids shout on the top of their lungs seeing a ice cream vendor making om apply the break suddenly...

Kya hua?? A panicked om asks ( what's wrong?)

Ice cream ----omira and rayan slyly say...

What??? Asks a shocked om while gauri chuckles...

Bilkul apni ma ape gye hain; jaise maa waise bache om murmurs under his breath earning a glare from gauri ( They have taken after their mother; They shout just like their mother)

Papa chalen; ice cream khaate hain...rayan asks him cutely ( papa let's go and have ice cream)

Chaliye muma omira says dragging her ( come mumma)

All 4 of them go and enjoy ice cream while putting it on each other's noses...

After a good family time; omkara drives them to their home.

Alka; please inhe change karwake sula do---gauri says ( alka lease put them to sleep after getting them changed)

Ji mam---alka says ( yes mam)

The kids kiss and say good night to om before leaving with alka...

Okay then Mr.oberoi gauri says

Thank you gauri om says ignoring her desire of throwing him out of her house...

For what?? Gauri asks raising a brow

Bachon ke saath aur apne saath waqt bitaane ke mauqe ke liye om replies smiling ( for giving me a chance to spend some time with kids and you)

Mujhe family ka ehsaas dilwaane ke liye...Om adds ( for letting me feel the warmth of having a family)

Maine koi ehsaan nhn kiya; aapka haq hai bachon par; unke waqt par...gauri tells him frankly ( I have not done you a favor. They are your children so you have right on them and their time)...

Aur tumahre upar??? Om asks hesitating ( And on you)

Bahut raat ho chuki hai; hume lagta hai aapko chalna chaheye...gauri tells dodging his question ( I think you should leave; it's already very late)

Mere sawaal ka jawaab wo nhn hai gauri. Bolo na kya tumhare upar nhn hai mera koi haq? Om asks ( That is not the answer to my question. Tell me do I have no right on you)

Aapke bachon ki maa hain hum Gauri tells him seeing him not leaving ( I'm the mother of your children)

Haan wo pta hai mujhe; par uske saath saath tum biwi bhi ho meri ; iss haq ki baat kar raha hoon main om tells her truthfully ( Yes I know that. You are also my wife and I am talking about that right)...

Please Mr.Oberoi! I think aapka yahan se chale jaana behtar hoga...gauri tells him sternly...

Theek hai gauri! lo jitna time lena hai; but yaad rakhna main tumahra intezaar kar raha hoon...omkara tells her sighing ( Ok fine gauri!! you can take as much time as you want but just remember that I will be waiting for you)...

Gauri kya kal main bachon se mil sakta hoon...He asks her before leaving.. ( can I meet the kids tomorrow)

Aapko ya jhanvi aunty ko unse milne ke liye permission ki zaroorat nhn hai... Bas unhe bahar ya OM nhn leke jaa sakte hain. Wo mere bina OM nhn jaayenge Gauri declares ( Jhavi aunty and you don't need permission to meet the children. You can meet them whenever but you can't take them out or to OM. I will accompany them to OM whenever needed.)

Gauri tum meri family ko kyun saza de rahi ho meri galtiyon ki?? Om asks her ( why are you punishing my family for my mistakes)

Apne ateet ki chotein kuredne ka koi shok nhn hai. Par haan job hi sab humare saath aapke ghar main hua tha usme galti sabki thi; aapke poore parivaar ki. Kisiko yaad nhn raha ki kaise gauri ne apni jaan pe khel ke doosron ko bachaaya tha... She says angryily ( I am not fond of pulling on the wounds of my past but yes whatever happened with me while I was in your house was everybody's fault. Nobody remembered how gauri had staked her life to save your family)

Omkara leaves defeated...But with a stronger than before will...


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Spyngli

It was emotional but a beautiful update...Loved it...❤️

Itz good that they talked n shared their pain with each other...😊
I think Sid saw them togethr n overheard their convo...Is he the villain in RiKara relation...? Or any other...? Waiting for next update...Come soon...😃


Thank you so much swathi!😊

I am glad ki you loved it❤️


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Woo Sid stay away :(

Gaudi finally opened up to Om!!
Please please don't let him interrupt them I can't bear it
That was sooo emotionally and beautifully written
How she saw his paintings, how he told her what he felt when she left
her questioning him why he never came for her
I need them to talk it out, I need Gauri to have a moment of weakness in his arms PLS PLS PLS


Thank you so much amel😊

Yes their walls had to be broken down; the agony needed to come out...

hopefully soon❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update.

I just loved this possessive Omkara and strong Gauri.

Yaar yeh sid to Bada chipku nikala hope Gauri will find about his intentions very soon.

Let Omkara do more pleading and Gauri should not forgive him easily.

Waiting for next update

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