Tum Mere Kaun Ho?? - A Rikara SS ...Ch19 - 06/04 Pg 71 - Page 30

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Beautiful update...

Waiting... update soon


Thank you so much😊
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Thank you so much😊
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Finally Gauri met the whole Oberoi family.. I loved BhavRi convo here.. Though Gauri is ready to let her children meet their family, she is not willing to stay with them.. Hopefully Omkara will be able to make her realise how much he loves her.. Continue soonish..
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Thank you so much😊
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Finally Gauri met the whole Oberoi family.. I loved BhavRi convo here.. Though Gauri is ready to let her children meet their family, she is not willing to stay with them.. Hopefully Omkara will be able to make her realise how much he loves her.. Continue soonish..


Thank you so much😊
I'm glad you liked it...There is some more to it!!!

Keeping children away from family wouldn't be right!!! But om needs to win back his chirraiya❤️
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Beautiful story...read all in one go...this pinky can nvever change
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Hey guys!! I hope everyone is doing good. I am here with the next chapter of this book so without much bak bak from my side let's get into the chapter...


Chapter 11

Soon the kids were busy playing with each other...While gauri and bhavya were sitting and chatting with sid..

Bhavya hume tumse kuch poochna hai...Agar tum mind na karo toh kya hum poochen...Asks gauri ( bhavya I want to ask you something only if you don't mind me asking it)

Zaroor bhabhi...Poochiye na...replies bhavya. ( Why not bhabhi? Go ahead)

Bhavya pehle toh tum hume yeh bhabhi bhabhi kehna band karo. Hum yahan sirf rayan aur omira ki maa ki hesiyat se aaye hain...Tum chaho toh hume gauri ya fer riya main se kuch bhi bula sakti ho...says gauri ( Bhavya just stop addressing me bhabhi please. I have come here as the mother of my children. If you wish you can call me either as gauri or riya)

Though a little sad; still bhavya agrees and says: riya bulaayenge hum aapko! Himmat nhn hai humme apni bhabhi ko unke asli naam se bulaane ki ( I am not bold enough to address my bhabhi by her real name so let me just stick by riya)

Gauri nods understanding while daadi jhanvi and om are sad seeing gauri's cold emotions for them... Never had they thought that the once loving gauri would turn into an emotionless person..

Riya aap humse kuch pooch rahi thi...Kahiye na kya baat hai asks bhavya ( Riya you wanted to ask me something? What is it??)

Haan poochna hai; kya hum kahin bahar jaa sakte hain. Sabke saamne nhn poochna chahte hai hum says gauri ( Yes I do want to ask you; but can we please get some personal space to talk since I don't want to talk about it infront of so many people)

Bhavya agreeing to gauri took her out to the garden; They both sat there and spoke about how life has changed; how they have changed. Bhavya goes ahead and tells her how the family that once was very much together is now no longer the same; how the brothers who once couldn't stay without each other have now become so distant that they even avoid the site of each other. Both of them discuss about how that one day changed the fate of this household...

Bhavya tumne hume itna kuch btaaya par yeh nhn btaaya ki tumhe rudy bhaiyaa ne maanaya kaise?? Asks a curious gauri ( Bhavya you have beating around the bush since a long time but still haven't come to the main point- you haven't told me how rudy bhaiyaa convinced you)

Riya!! Jab hum iss ghar ko chod ke gye toh hum meerut chale gye the since humari koi family nhn hai...Humne apni duty join karli thi aur hum wahin staff quarters main rehte the...Bahut baar phone aate the rudra ke par humne kabhi nhn uthaya...Hum nhn jaana chahte the unke paas; bharosa toda tha unhone humara..Par unhone kabhi phone karna nhn choda---mobile se leke academy yahan tak ki police station main bhi phone karte the par humne kabhi unse baat nhn ki. Hum apni duty main mashroof hote gye aur yun he 3 mahine guzar gye; par roz raat jab hum apni tanhaayi main hote the toh sab kuch yaad aata tha...Bahut roye hain hum inn sab ko soch soch ke... Fer ek din jab hum duty se laut rahe the toh humne dekha ki rudra saamne khade the humare.. Wo saara dard wo saare toote sapne sab humari aankhon ke saamne aagye! Hum unse bina baat kiye wahaan se chale gye the...par unhone humara peecha nhn choda. Wo humare peeche peeche aaye humare quarter tak...!! Humara dard bahut bada tha; unhe dekhne se bhi kam nhn hua. Par unhone himmat nhn haari!! Unhone wo sab kiya jo humne kabhi sapne main bhi socha nhn tha. Ek ameer ghar ka beta jisse AC ke bina rehne ki aadat na ho; humare liye wo meerut ki tapti garmi main raha. Ek ladka jisse sports bike aur luxury gaadiyon ki aadat ho; humare liye wo paidal chala ya public transport main usne dhake khaaye. Ek aise ghar ka bacha jisse 3 course meal ki aadat ho usne humare liye canteen ke daal chawal khaaye. Humare liye usne apne protein shake ki bajaaye nukar ki chai pee. Usne humare liye apna har aisho aaram choda. Usne hume har kadam pe yakeen dilaaya ki wo humare laayak hai; wo humare bharose humare pyaar ke laayak hai. 2 saal tak wo humare liye meerut main the. Wahan se unhone apne sports gym ki shurwaat ki; wahaan se hum rudra aur bhavya se hum bane. 2 saal lage unhe humare zakham bharte bharte. Jhanvi maa ko wo ek din leke aaye meerut aur unhone humse rishte ki baat ki aur humne haan kardi. Shaadi se baad hum log waapis Mumbai aagye aur hum dono ne ek doosre se kabhi peeche na mudne ka waada kiya; waada kiya ki hum kabhi ek doosre se kuch nhn chipaayenge. Aur fer 1 saal pehle hum dono ki zindagi main ruvyan aaya; humari khushi aur om bhaiya ka sukoon ban gya wo.

( Riya I had joined my duty in meerut since I had no family to go back to after leaving OM. I was staying in staff quarters throughout my duty. Rudra had called me a million times but I never bothered picking up because I had no intention of going back to him. He had broken my trust; he had broken me...Despite the ignorance that he received from my side he never stopped calling; He called every possible place he could be it----police station or the academy but I never spoke to him.. I couldn't speak to him as everytime those memories came gushing over as soon as I heard the name RUDRA. I was so buried down with my duty that I failed to realize how and when 3 months had passed but that in no sense meant that I never missed him. I missed him like crazy; I used to cry whenever I would be alone; I would cry thinking of his not trusting me. But then one fine day I was in for a concussion when I saw rudra present in front of my academy in person. Seeing him there made me fall weak in my knees; all those memories ; all those broken dreams flashed across my eyes. I was not ready to face him so I just walked off but he followed me; followed me till my quarter. I couldn't bring myself to forgive him by just seeing him.. My heart was fragmented. But he never gave up; he didn't loose hope. He did everything that I could never imagine him doing. He struggled; a super rich boy who was acclimatized to stay in AC dealt with the sweltering heat of meerut; An opulent guy who was very fond of sports bikes and luxury cars commuted using public transport or even walked distances. He ate the mess food and drank the simple tea without a fuss when all he ever ate was a 3 course meal and protein shake. He made me believe him; he proved to me that he is laudable for me...He made me fall in love with him again and I couldn't help but fall for him again. He had gone all out for 2 years to be with me ; to be there for me in meerut; he even opened his own sports gym in meerut. Thus began our journey as a couple. Then jhanvi maa came and asked me if I was ready to maary her son and I just couldn't refuse then. We both mutually decided to shift our base back to Mumbai and there has been no looking back ever since... A year before we were blessed with ruvyan; our happiness and joy but om bhaiya's solace)

Hume khushi hai bhavya ki tumhe tumhari khushiyan waapis mil gyi...Gauri says with tears in her eyes

Hume bahut dukh tha iss baat ka ki humari wajah se tumhari aur rudy bhaiya ki zindagi bhi barbaad hogyi but ab hum khush hain tumhe dekh ke she adds... ( I'm ecastic seeing you happy. I was saddened thinking that your and rudy bhaiya's life will be bereaved of love..)

Mummma!! Mummma calls rayan who comes running because he hasn't seen his mommy for a long time...

Chaliye bhabhi...oops riya andar chalte hain nhn toh omira aur ruvyan bhi aa jayenge...Bhavya speaks seeing rayan drag his mother.. ( Come bhabhi oops riya let's go inside or else even omira and ruvyan will come out)

Gauri and bhavya go inside... Tej and Shakti enter the house along with shivay and seeing tej both omira and rayann just jump onto him calling him daadu which shocks everyone except jhanvi and om..

Tej? Yeh sab kya ho raha hai... Tum toh bachon se aaj pehli baar mil rahe ho fer wo tumhe daadu kyun keh rahe hain? Asks a shocked daadi ( tej what is all this?? How do they know that you are their granpa?? You guys are meeting for the first time..isn't it?)

Kyunki Mr.oberoi ko bache pehle se he jaante hain Omkara tells her.. Bahut lambi kahaani hai; baad main aapko mom bta dengi adds om... ( that is because Mr.oberoi knows the kids from before. It's a long story mom will fill you in later)

Kaisa lag raha hai rayan; omira?? Papa ka ghar pasand aaya kya? Asks tej lovingly while kneeling down ( how do you feel rayan, omira. Did you like your dad's place)

Ji daadu reply rayan and omira noddingly...

Pta hai daadu hum dono ruvyan se bhi mile; kitna chota hai wo. Aur bahut pyaara bhi. Main big sister hun ab daadu adds omira chirpily ( yes grandpa. You know we have met ruvyan too! He is so tiny and cute. Now I am a big sister grandpa)

Tej is amused seeing his grand daughter so happy...and kisses her lovingly... mera bacha toh humesha se he big tha...kaisa laga aapko ruvyan se milke?? Aur rayaan aapko kaisa laga big brother ban ke?? Asks an amused tej.. ( my child was always a big sister. How was it meeting ruvyan?? Rayan and omira did you enjoy)

Omira smiles at her daadu's compliment while rayan says daadu ab mujhe ek brother mil gya hai na toh main bore nhn hounga..omira toh hamesha apne dolls ke saath he khelti hai; mere saath car chalaane waala ab ruvyan hai... ( Grandpa I'm so happy to have finally got a brother to play with. Now I won't be bored when omira will be busy playing with her dolls... I will have ruvyan to play cars with me)

Daadi is so happy to see her house filled with laughter after a long time...Shakti is happy but a look from pinki and his happiness dissolves...

A lone tear escapes shivay's eyes seeing the kids mingling with the family and om being so happy... He vows to bring gauri back in this house; in his brother's life because all this happiness and chirpiness is just because of her... But not wanting to talk about it at the moment he just goes to his room to check on his family where he sees both mother and daughter sleeping...He wakes them up and tells them about gauri's visit with her kids...

Anika and anshi quickly dress up and go downstairs... Omira and anshi hug and greet each other while anika goes towards gauri...

Kaisi ho gauri?? asks anika in her chirpy tone..( how are you gauri)

Hi; hum theek hain aap kaisi hain Mrs.Oberoi... and it's riya sharma.. emotionlessly said gauri turning towards her with bhavya on her side.. ( Hi: I'm fine..How about yourself?)

Anika's face falls not expecting gauri to react like this...kya Mrs.oberoi bol rahi ho main toh tumahri anika bhaujai hoon na...aur tum gauri ho meri; yeh kya riya sharma ka naam leke ghoom rahi ho...says anika while trying hard to control her tears that threaten to fall off her eyes... ( I'm your anika bhaujai then why are you referring to me as Mrs.oberoi?? And you are gauri; I won't agree to riya sharma)

Sorry Mrs.Oberoi par hum apne ateet ke panno se bahar aa chuke hain aur aage bhi bad chuke hain... Humari ab koi bhaujai nhn hai. Koi rishta nhn humara kisi se sivaay humare bachon aur papaji ke... Duniya ke liye humari pehchaan riya sharma hai toh behtar hoga ki aap bhi hume usi naam se bulaayenn...Tells off gauri (I'm sorry Mrs. Oberoi but I have come out of my past and have moved on in my life. I don't have any bhaujai in my life now. I have ni relation with the members of this house except from papaji and my children. The world knows me as riya sharma and I would really appreciate you addressing me as riya too!)

Shivay is shocked seeing his wife cry and immediately comes by her side to support her...

Gauri dekho...main maanta hoon ki meri galti thi par anika ka koi dosh nhn tha..tum usse kyun beech main laaake aise bartaav kar rahi ho... shivay starts to negotiate ( Look gauri! Whatever had happened in the past was my mistake; anika had no say in it so why are you dragging her into all this.)

Dekhiye Mr.oberoi! hume koi faraq nhn padta ki kiski galti thi aur kiski nhn. Hum bas yeh jaante hain ki humara iss ghar main kisi se koi rishta nhn hai sivay papaji aur humare bachon ke aur na he hume koi rishta bnaane main koi dilchapsi hai..Aur rahi baat beech main lane ki wo humari aadat nhn hai..Humare jo dil main hota hai wo hum keh dete hain...replies gauri in her business tone... ( Mr.oberoi I don't care about whose mistake it was or whose it wasn't. The fact is I am not related to this house anymore except for papaji and my kids. Also I am least interested to make a bond with any of you in the future. Let me also tell you that I am not a person who likes to intrude into somebody else's matters. I speak what I think I should)

Shivay please! Aage he bahut problems hain aur main nhn chahta hoon ki problems badh jaayen...Main apne bachon ko kisi ki bhi wajah se khona nhn chahta hoon toh please sab log waise he kijiye jaise gauri keh rahi hai...says om with a finality... ( SHivay please! I would really appreciate you stepping back from this. Already I have a lot on my plate right now and I don't want to be burdened by more. I don't want to lose my children due to any misunderstandings; so let's just do what gauri says)

But Om..Yeh bache tumhare hain; aur koi tumhe inse door nhn rkh sakta hai; hum custody ke liye file kar sakte hain Om...says shivay ( But om! They are your kids; you have full right to be with them. Nobody can sntach them from you; we can file for their custody)

Shivay I said please...starts om only to be cut off by gauri...

Mr.oberoi!! himmat bhi mat kijiyega custody ke liye apply karne ke liye nhn toh aisi dhajiyan udengi courtroom main aapki izzat ki aapki lakh koshishon ke baad bhi sameti nhn jaayengi... Hum riya sharma hai aur haarna humne seekha nhn hai. Aur aap hote kon hain humare bachon ke liye faisla lene waale? Hume humaare maamlon main dakhal andaazi pasand nhn hai isiliye behtar hoga ki aap kuch karne ki na sochen...replies gauri gritting her teeth in anger.. ( Mr.oberoi! Don't you dare file for a custody case for my kids. I will tarnish your image in a way that a 1000 years will pass but you won't be able to gather the broken pieces of your family's lost prestige if you even think about doing so. I'm riya sharma and I haven't learnt losing. And woul you please care to explain who are you to make decisions for my children?? I don't like interference in my life so please refrain from giving your unasked suggestions)

Ehh ladki!! Himmat kaise hui tumhari mere heere bte se aise baat karne ki?? Aukaat kya hai tumahri...asks pinki ( How dare you talk to my dear son like that?? Who do you think you are? What is your social standing??)

Oberoi empire se dugni turnover hai iski...do minute main wo hume barbaad kar sakti hai... Aur kuch galat nhn kaha hai usne; aage he sab kuch bahut bigda hua hai aur shivay aur bigaadne pe tula hai... choti maa kabhi toh aap apne heere bte ke bajaaye kisi aur ko dekh liya kije says a frustrated om.. ( The turnover of her company is twice as compared to the Oberoi empire. If she wants she can ruin us in seconds...And she hasn't said anything which is untrue. Already everything is ruined and shivay is hell bent on worsening the scenario.. Choti maa please rise and see beyond your son someday)

Om!! Kya tum bhool gye ki mere bte ne tumahre liye kitna kuch kiya hai? Tumhari andheri zindagi ko roshan kiya hai mere bache ne?? Aur tum iss ladki ke liye mujhe aur mere bache ko suna rahe ho asks an offended pinki??? ( Om! Have you forgotten my son's favors on you? He was the one to pull you out of the darkness and he was the one to brighten up your life. And you are speaking against us for this girl)

Kuch nhn bhoola hoon main! Aur agar shivay ne meri zindagi ko roshan kiya hai toh maine bhi uski zindagi main anika bhabhi ko waapis laake use gamm main doobne se bachaaya hai. Aur waise bhi aaj jo meri zindagi barbaad hai usme kahin na kahin dosh shivay ka bhi hai... Agar wo mujhe majboor na karta toh shayaad meri zindagi abaad he rehti...Aur choti maa aap toh please rehne he dijiye...Aapse kisi aur ki khushi bardaash nhn hoti yeh baat sabko pta hai... Tails of a frustrated om ( I haven't forgotten anything! And if you think shivay has brightened my life then let me remind you that even I had saved him from drowning in the pool of meloncholy by bringing back anika bhabhi in his life. Also shivay has a hand in my life's misery right now. My life would have been complete had he not compelled me to listen to him... And choti maa;everyone in this hall is well aware of the fact that you can't put up with anyone else's happiness)

Aur jis ladki ki aap baat kar rahi hai wo mere bachon ki maa hai; meri biwi hai wo; aur iss ghar ki bahu. Chahe wo yeh baat nhn manna chahti hai par aapko koi ya kisi aur ko koi haq nhn uske khilaaf bolne ka... adds om sternly.. ( The girl you are talking about is the mother of my children; is my wife; is the DIL of this house. Even if she doesn't agre to being my wife and the DIL of his house nobody has the damn right to open their mouths against her)

Gauri has tears in her eyes seeing omkara speak for her; stand up for her for the first time ever...

Gauri's POV

Kitni hairani ki baat hai na? kisi roz hum taraste the ki aap humare liye apna pyaar zaahir karen; humare liye khade hon jaise ek pati ko apni patni ke liye hona chaheye par aap ne kabhi nhn kiya bola kuch. Aur aaj jab hum aapse doori bnaaye rakhna chahte hain aap wo sab kar rahe hain jiski umeed humne chod di hai... Kyun kar rahe hain aap aisa? Hume itna dukh dene ke baad kyun marham lagaane ki koshish kar rahe hain...

( I'm blown away thinking that once I used to pine for your attention; for you to stand up for me; voice out your thought for me but now I when those desires are dead you are showing me what you hadn't in the past. Now when I want to stay away from you; you are doing wha a husband should for his wife. Why are you doing all this now? Why are you trying to heal my wounds when the one who gave those wounds is you)

Om's POV

Main jaanta hoon gauri ki tum kya soch rahi ho. Mujhe bahut afsos hai ki main kabhi tumahre liye khada nhn ho paaya jab tumhe umeed thi aur ab jab tum apni saari umeedon ko dafnaa chuki ho main wo sab kar raha hoon jo ek pati karta hai apni patni ke liye... Par gauri main sirf tumahre zakham bharna chahta hoon; tumhe yakeen dilaana chahta hoon ki main tumhare layaak hoon.. Please ek baar ek chance de do gauri..

( I am aware of your mind's turmoil gauri. I am ashamed that I could never stand up for you; voice out my love for you in the past when you had hoped for all this and now when you have buried down your desires I'm expressing my thoughts; speaking up for you; doing what a husband should for his wife. But gauri believe me I am just trying to heal you; make you realize that I deserve you. Please give me one last chance gauri)

Gauri quickly turns around to hide her tears but sid holds her hands and whispers behne do ri! Yeh khushi ke aansun hain... Tum jo hamesha se apne pati main dekhna chahti thi aaj wo tumhe dikh gya hai ri... ( Let the tears flow ri! These are the tears of happiness. You have seen what you have always wanted to see in your husband)

Haan sid par... gauri begins...

Shhh sid says and hugs her...


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Edited by aayushi1 - 7 years ago
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Just a word "fantastic di"
This is awesome
loved how he stood up for Gauri 👏👏👏
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Awesome update
Loved it
Thank you for the pm dear
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Dabang Ri...
I love her...
Nice update dear...

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