Tum Mere Kaun Ho?? - A Rikara SS ...Ch19 - 06/04 Pg 71 - Page 11

Nice story dear...

Originally posted by: priyadil

Nice story dear...

Do continue soon pls...

Awesome update...so they have twins...that's interesting...gauri is in a business woman attire...i just loved that...

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

Awesome update...so they have twins...that's interesting...gauri is in a business woman attire...i just loved that...

Interesting n awesome update.

Hey guys!! Here i present to you the next chapter...please read it and i hope you enjoy it...Without much bak bak let's get into the chapter...

Chapter 5

Omkara is shocked seeing that riya sharma is none other than his gauri; yes his gauri! He thought he is still dreaming and was just staring at gauri who was busy with the kids and sid... His trance was broken...

Gauri: omira chot kaise lagi tumhe? Kitni baar kaha hai dhiyaan se khela karo... ( Omira how did you get hurt..How many times have I told you to play carefully)

Omira looks towards sid for help and pouts...

Sid: chod na ri! Bachi hai...khelte khelte chot lag jaati hai...daanto mat meri princess ko... ( Leave it RI! She is a kid and kids do get hurt while playing. Don't scold my princess)

Omkara is shocked seeing sid refer gauri as ri and omira as princess and has tears in his eyes. He is surprised to see that gauri hasn't reacted at all seeing him and is even more shocked when he sees that she has no sindoor and mangalsutra on...

Om's POV

Kya yeh meri gauri hai? Wahi gauri jisne mujhe apne shankarji ke equal jagah di thi? Kya yeh wahi gauri hai jiske liye shaadi zindagi bhar ka ek anmol bandhan tha? Kya yeh wahi gauri hai jiske liye apne sindoor aur magalsutra se bada aur koi gehna nhn tha? Kya yeh waake main he meri gauri hai? Kya itna badal diya 5 saalon ne isse? Kya itna badal diya ki mujhe dekhke koi ehsaas nhn hua use? Kya yeh 5 saalon ka asar hai ya mere diye hue dard; mere tode hue bharose ka?

( IS she my gauri? Is she the same gauri who had given me a place equivalent to her Lord Shiv? Is she the same gauri for whom marriage was a pious bond of lifetime. Is she the same gauri who never valued any jewel more than her Vermillion and the nuptial chain? Is she really my gauri? Have the last 5 years changed her so much that she didn't react seeing me. Is this because of the 5 years that we have spent away from each other or is it due to the pain that I gave her; the broken trust that I was responsible for?)

Omkara's thoughts are broken when he hears gauri speaking to jhanvi:

Gauri: thank you so much Mrs.Oberoi. thanks for looking after my daughter..

Jhanvi: ( emotional ) gauri beta kaise ho tum.. kahan chali gyi thi tum hume chod ke...Kitna dhoondha tumhe hum sabne... ( Gauri my child how are you? Where did you go leaving all of us? We tried so hard to find you)

Gauri: riya sharma Mrs oberoi...It's Riya Sharma The CEO of Omiray Fashion Hub..

Jhanvi: yeh kya Mrs.oberoi Mrs.Oberoi lga rakha hai gauri. Main tumahri maaji hoon na...( Why are you ranting Mrs.oberoi; Mrs.oberoi! I am your Mom right...You call me maaji) Tum duniya ke liye hogi Riya sharma par mere liye tum gauri ho ( you might be riya sharma for the world but for me you will always be gauri)

Omira: ( with curiousity) Jhanvi aunty aapko kaise pta hai ki muma ka name gauri hai.. Bahar toh sab unhe riya sharma ke naam se he jaante hain ( Jhanvi aunty How do you know that my mom's name is gauri? Everyone outside our home know her as riya sharma)

Pinky, Daadi, Shakti and shivay also come back along with rudra and Bhavya... All are shocked seeing gauri and some other people who they don't recognize and are shocked to see gauri in a business attire...Ruvya and shivay seeing their chulbul bhabhi and little sister.

Pinky: Oh my maata! Yeh besharam ladki fer aa gyi yahan? Ab kya lene aayi ho? Itne saalon tak kahan thi? Ab kaise tumhe humari yaad aagyi ( Oh My maata! This shameless girl has come back here again... What have you come here for? Where were you all these years? And how did you suddenly remember us?)

Rayan: ( shouting) aap meri mumma se aise baat nhn kar sakti. ( You can't speak to mother like that)

Pinky: to rayan- Itni bhi tameez nhn sikhaayi tumahri muma ne tumhe ki badon se kaise baat karte hain? And turning to gauri she says pta nhn kiska ganda khoon...( Did your mother not teach you manners to talk to elders? And Don't know whose bad blood??)

Sid: ( shouting) dekhiye aap job hi hain... koi bhi bacha apni maa ki bezati bardaash nhn kar sakta hai...aur aap meri ri ke khilaaf kuch na bolen warna ... ( Look who so ever you are... A child can never bear anybody insulting his mother. And you can't insult my Ri like this...or else)

Pinki: warna kya?? Haan?? Warna kya? ( Else what?? Tell me else what?)

Gauri: ( verbally threatning) Warna aapko Riya sharma ke saath batmeezi karna bahut mehenga padega...samjhi aap?( or else you will pay heavily for threatning riya sharma)

Shivay is shocked to know that gauri is riya sharma who he was trying to meet since so long.

Daadi and Jhanvi also tell her to shut up! But pinki makes a face

Jhanvi: ( goes towards the kids) gauri beta yeh tumahre bache hain kya? ( Gauri are these your kids)

Gauri: ji Mrs.oberoi...yeh mere bache hain? ( yes mrs.oberoi. these are my kids) and introduces rayan and omira to jhanvi.

Omkara still can't believe that these are gauri's kids. He feels a stabbing pain in his heart imagining gauri having kids with somebody else.. But then he thinks of the moment when jhanvi and he felt resemblance between the children and him and an unknown happiness fills in his heart...

Daadi: gauri puttar kaisi hai tu? Kahan chali gyi thi tu? Mera ghar mera om sab tere bina soona hogya tha puttar ( Gauri my child! How are you? Where did you go? My house my om both were lonely without you)

Gauri: namastey daadi! Main yahin thi Mumbai main...( I was here in Mumbai itself)

Daadi: puttar humne tujhe bahut dhoondha par tu kisiko mili he nhn...( Child we had searched a lot for yo...But everyone failed) tumne apni pehchaan kyun badal di puttar ( why did you change your identity my child?)

Gauri: ( looking towards om) daadi zindagi main kuch gam aise milte hain jinhe bhulaane ke liye apne aap ko bhulaana aur badalana padta hai... ( grandma! Sometimes in life you get so much pain and to forget that pain you have forget yourself and change into a new person)

Om: gauri! He speaks

Gauri: ( sternly) It's Ms.Riya Sharma for you Mr.Oberoi .

Omkara is hurt seeing gauri being formal with him and hates himself when she calls him Mr.oberoi instead of omkaraji and expects him to refer he a riya instead of gauri. Ignoring his emotions he speaks because he wants to know if they are his kids because he did feel something in his heart seeing the two young souls who are a perfect blend of gauri and him...

Om: Gauri... he says again

Rayan tugs gauri and asks her Mumma how do they all know your name? Do you know them muma?

Gauri: I knew them 5 years before rayan! Not anymore..

Rayan: Can we go to our house mumma! I'm not liking it here..

Gauri: yes rayan...Go to sid and we will go to our home..

Sid calls rayan and he happily jumps in his arms.

Gauri: Yes Mr.oberoi you were saying something?

Om: ( controlling his emotions) kaisi ho tum gauri? Kahan thi tum? ( How are you gauri? Where were you?)

Gauri: ( maintaining a stern face) I'm good Mr.oberoi. How have you been?

Om: kaise ho sakte hain tumhare omkaraji apni gauri ke bina he says while a lone tear escapes his eye seeing her unaffected ( How can your omkaraji be without his gauri)

Gauri: ( masking her emotions) Mr.oberoi please let's not dwell into the past...

Om: main toh kabhi uss din se ubhar he nhn paaya gauri! wo din jab yahaan se chali gyi hum sab ko chod ke...mujhe chod ke ( I could never come out of that unfortunate day gauri when you left leaving everyone, leaving me)

Gauri: Mr.oberoi I think I should leave.. Sid and I need to take the kids out and she begins to leave...

Om holds her wrist and says you can leave gauri but just answer ki yeh bachon ka pita kon hai? ( who is the father of these kids gauri)

Jhanvi joins in and says haan gauri please btao ki kiske bache hain? Yeh bilkul tumahre or om ke jaise dikhte hain. Kya jo main soch rahi hoon who sach hai ya nhn ( Yes gauri please tell us whose kids they are? They resemble om and you a lot. Please tell me if what I am thinking is right or no)

Without waiting for gauri to respond; Pinki opens her dirty mouth and says: jethani ji! Kya aap bhi? Ek aise ladki jiska 5 saal tak kuch ata pta nhn tha...Kya aap usse pooch rahi hain ki uske bache ka baap kon hai? Hongen yeh iske kisi aashiq...and thud ( SIL? how can you ask a girl about whose whereabouts we had no idea for 5 years about her kids? God knows who fathered these kids of hers...Must be one of her lovers and a slap)

Everyone cups their faces seeing gauri in such a scary avatar..

Gauri: ( with anger) Just shut up Mrs.Pinky Singh Oberoi. Just shut up! Mere bachon ke khilaaf ek shabd nhn bolna warna main bhool jaaungi ki maine kabhi aapki izzat ki thi..

Mat bhooliye ki main ab wo gauri nhn jisne kabhi aapko palat ke koi jawaab nhn diya; aapki har baat chup chaap suni; aaplogon ka diya hua har zakham aur dard saha... Main riya sharma hoon aur main Uss insaan ko kabhi maaf nhn karti jo mere bachon ke khilaaf kuch bhi bole... aayenda yeh thappadd yaad rakhiyega apna ghatiya mooh kholne se pehle

( Not a word against my kids or else I will forget that I had respected you once in my life! Don't you forget that I am no longer the old nave gauri who would never answer you back; who would listen to everything that you would say and who would bear every betrayal and pain without a wince. I'm riya sharma and I never forgive the people who insult my kids. From now on just remember this slap before you open your filthy mouth)

Om: gauri agar yeh bache tumahre hain toh inka pita kon hai? ( Gauri if they are your kids then who is there father?)

Gauri: Waise to Mr.oberoi main apni personal life ke baare main kisi ko answer nhn karti but since hum past main kabhi ek saath the toh uske liye main aapko bta deti hoon ki yeh bache sid aur mere hain... ( Mr.oberoi I don't answer questions related to my personal life but since we have shared our past together let me tell you that these are sid and my kids..)

Omkara is disheartened listening to this and jhanvi goes towards him...

Gauri takes her kids hands and walks off and whispers a sorry to sid who nods understanding her reasons of doing so...while leaving omira asks her mom why did you lie to that uncle?? Lying is bad right? Rayaan is clinging onto sid... Gauri hushes her up and gets into the car...

Jhanvi hears this and is shocked to know that gauri lied and there is a possibility that these are om's kids and she didn't want us to know...Jhanvi is happy knowing about her grandkids but decides to calm down om and then tell him...

Om wipes his tears and goes towards his room and locks himself

Om's POV

Itna aasan tha kya gauri?? Itna aasan tha kya tumahre liye mujhe bhool jaana? Kaise tum aage bhad gyi gauri jabki wo tum he thi jo kehti thi ki main tumhari zindagi main pehla aur aakhri mard hounga...kaise gauri kaise??? Aur kyun gauri?? kyun???(in agony) Main jaanta hoon ki maine tumhre saath bahut bura kiya tha...par ek aakhri mauka toh de deti gauri... ek aakhri mauka apne aap ko tumahre kaabil bnaane ka...ek aakhri mauka tumahre liye apna pyaar jataane ka; bharosa dikhaane ka; humari shaadi nibhaane ka. Kya humara pyaar itna kamzor tha gauri ki tumne ek baar bhi aage bhadne se pehle mere baare main nhn socha... tumhe pta tha na gauri ki mujhe bache kitne pasand the...main humesha tumhe apne bachon ki maa bante dekhna chahta tha...par kisi aur ke bachon ki maa ke roop main kaise dekhun main tumhe gauri? main nhn dekh sakta tumhe kisi aur ke saath gauri...nhn dekh sakta!! Bahut pyaar karta hoon main tumse...bahut zaada pyaar...main kitna hurt tha yeh dekh ke ki aaj tum mere itne pass thi fer bhi main tumhe chooo nhn sakta gauri?? Tumhara aisa aanjan jaisa behavior nahi seh sakta main gauri...Tumhara mujhe Mr.Oberoi bulaana nhn seh sakta main kyunki mujhe omkaraji pasand hai tumahre mooh se...Tumahri aankhon main meri parwah na hona nhn seh sakta main.. mana meri galti bahut bari hai par tumahra dil bhi toh bahut bara hai na...maaf nhn kar sakti kya tum apne omkaraji ko gauri?? Maaf kardo na gauri...ek baar kehdo ki tum bhi wahin khadi ho jahaan main hoon...ek baar kehdo ki tum bhi mujhe utna he miss karti ho jitna main karta hoon tumhe...ek baar keh do gauri ki tum ab bhi mujse utna he pyaar karti ho jitna main karta hoon...Gauri please ek baar!! Bas ek baar... Main wo sab kuch karunga jo maine pehle nhn kiya par mujhe karna chaheye tha...wo sab karunga jo tum chahti ho!! Tumhe khoke maine tumse aur bhi zaada pyaar kiya hai...tumhari kadar jaani hai tumhe kho kar...aaj tumhe 5 saal baad dekh ke doobaara nhn khona chahta main tumhe gauri...please gauri and cries loudly taking out all his agony

(Was it this easy?? Was it this easy for you to forget me gauri?? How did you move on when you were the one who said that I was and will be the only man in your life...How gauri...How??? And Why gauri??? why? I know that I have wronged you but you could have given me one chance gauri...one last chance...One last chance to make myself suitable for you; one last chance to express my love for you; one last chance to prove you that I trust you; one last chance to fulfill the vows of our marriage. Was our love so frail that you didn't even think about me once before moving on in your life? You were aware of my fondness for kids gauri...I always wanted to see you being the mother to my kids but how do you expect me to see you be a mother to somebody else's kids gauri? I...I can't see you with anyone else...I can't gauri! I love you a lot gauri..I really love you. I was so hurt thinking that I can't touch you even though you were so close...I can't see you behave so indifferent towards me; I can't bear you calling me Mr.oberoi for I miss you calling me omkaraji; I can't bear to see no concern for me in your eyes gauri...I can't gauri...I really can't!. I agree what I did was a very big mistake but you have a big heart gauri...an't you forgive your omkaraji gauri? please forgive me. Tell me once that you are also stuck at the same point as I am. Tell me that you miss me like I do...Tell me that you still love me like I love you.. just once gauri...Please ! just once. I will do everything that I should have done earlier but didn't... I will do everything you want me to. I have loved you even more after losing you...I have valued more than ever after losing you! Today I saw you after 5 years and I know that I don't want to lose you again gauri.. Please gaurii...please )

excellent update

Ooo I am loving this New Gauri..ruthless and wont back down when it comes to her kids. Update soon.

I love it!!! I got emotional reading Om's part. :( it is beautifully written. Can't wait to read more :)

This was an amazing update. I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for updating .Can't wait for the next chapter.