Tum Mere Kaun Ho?? - A Rikara SS ...Ch19 - 06/04 Pg 71 - Page 23

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Really emotional update.

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My heart...My broken Heart...

Oh my I just don't know who's side I am on

I want them both to fight for their love, I want them to be afamily

the family they deserve to be😭

It was sooo heartbreaking to see Om asking her if he is so bad to not be there for her during her pregnancy, his fall on his knees realizing she did and him not understanding

And Ri...The strongest Woman of all...not being able to the man she loves in pain, finally addressing him as Omkaraji healing his wounds...

Damn

pls pls pls can we have some family time between them and their twins with a lot of sparks flying *_*

and then maybe Om asking to stay for a day or two to be with his kids truly

*_*

loved it very much

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Chapter 5

Amazing update

I loved it! Finally Om got his answers...and Gauri calling him Omkaraji once again...wow...Loved it! UPdate soon

Hey guys!! I'm back with another update. This one is a long one..Please be patient while reading this...all your chamelis and tamatars and ande are welcome... Chalo now without anymore bak bak let's get into the story...

Chapter 9

Seeing om calm; tej says let's go back home it's already late.

Nhn papaji; aap log sab yahin ruk jaayie aaj raat. Bahut raat ho chuki hai and hume nhn lag raha ki Mr.oberoi ki haalat abhi theek hai.. Subeh chale jaayega aaram se Gauri calmly says getting back into her business form ( No father in law; It's already late so you all should stay back. Mr.oberoi doesn't look in a presentable condition at the moment so it will be better staying back. You guys can leave after breakfast.)

Omkara is hurt realizing that gauri has again addressed him as Mr.oberoi but is happy too seeing that she still does care for him and his family.

Tej agrees because he knows that when gauri means business when she uses that tone.

Soon the dinner was laid since nobody had the chance to grab something and everyone ate quietly with omkara stealing a few glances at gauri every once in a while. Jhanvi was happy seeing her son content.

After the dinner was over; Gauri called for the house help and told her to show Mr.oberoi the guest room while tej takes jhanvi to his room...Omkara is sad realizing that gauri instead of inviting him to her own room has sent him off to a guest room...

Kya main gauri ko guest lagta hoon? Pati hoon main uska? Toh kya hua agar hum dono itne saalon se alag the toh? Par ab main sab kuch theek karne he toh aaya hoon na toh kya hum ek kamre main nhn reh sakte?? Kitna miss kiya hai maine uski mojoodgi ko apne side pe. Kitne saalon se uski kamar pe haath rakhke nhn soya hoon main..Tells om's brain to him ( Does gauri think of me as a guest? I'm her husband. So what if we were not together for so many years; but now that I am back here I will sure to fix everything. Then why can we not stay in the same room? I have missed her presence on my side. It has been so many years since I have slept with my hands resting on her waist)

Shut up omkara! Yeh kya bakwaas soch rahe ho? Abhi toh sirf bachon se mile ho; gauri se sulha nhn hui hai jo wo tumhe aone kamre main sone degi. Tub hi na bilkul pagal hogya hai om. Yeh shukar mana ki usne tujhe apne ghar pe rukhne de diya. Chup chaap apne kamre main jaa aur jaake soch ki aage kya karna hai; kaise manana hai apni chirraiya ko. Kaise usse or apne bachon ko apne saath unke asli ghar lijaana hai. Kaise usse riya sharma se kaise ek baar fer Gauri omkara singh oberoi banana hai. Tells om's heart to him ( Shut up omkara! What nonsense are you thinking? She has just allowed you to meet the kids yet; You are yet to make up to gauri so how in the world do you think she will allow you to sleep with her in her room? You are just being mad as a march hare Om. You should rather be indebted to her for letting you stay in her house for a night. Just go to your room and think about ways of winning back your chirraiya. Think how will you take her and the kids back to OM; their real home. Think how will you visiccitude her to Gauri omkara singh oberoi from riya sharma..)

With this resolve omkara retires for the night while sid wishes gauri good night and leaves undeterred by gauri protesting against his idea. Gauri huffs and shouts I HATE YOU SID...while I LOVE YOU RI comes from the other end of the hall...omkara's eyes turn green with fury hearing sid's words and he punches the wall angrily..Taking long strides towards his room he locks himself up and running his hands through his luscious locks he resolves to keep sid away from his gauri..

Gauri reaches her room and gets into her bed after getting ready for the night... Resting her head against the headrest she rewinds the day's events and tears start flowing through her eyes.

Gauri's POV

Kitni haraini ki baat hai na omkaraji. Aapke itne dukh dene ke baad bhi hum aapki parwah karte hain; rota hua nhn dekh sakte hum aapko. Kyun hota hai pyaar main itna dard. Aapka humpe us pal main bharosa na karna hume kahaan se kahaan le aaya aaj omkaraji? Kaash wo sab na hua hota toh hum aur aap bhi khushi khushi humare bachonn ke saath rehte. Inn 5 saalon main humne aapko bahut yaad kiya hai; jeena nhn chahte the hum aapke bina; zindagi ka koi maqsad nhn nazar aa raha tha hume aapko chodne ke baad par hum sirf humare bachon ke liye gir ke uthe the omkaraji. Unhe dekh dekh ke he humne aapke bina yeh 5 sadiyon se bhi lambe 5 saal guzaare hain. Aaj bhi shayad hum aapse... And she does off thinking all this

( A bewildering fact it is but I still care for you; after all that pain I went through- I still couldn't bear you crying; I still care for you omkaraji. Why does love hurt so much? That one moment when you didn't trust me changed our whole life; changed us so much. We would have lived as a happy family had you trusted me back then; I wish you did omkaraji. Not even a moment had passed without missing you in the last 5 years; I had lost the zest to live. It was as if I had lost the aim of my life; but still I lived; I rose beyond those broken pieces for our kids. 5 years went by looking after them; living for them. I think may be even today...)

Next morning,

Omkara and jhanvi wake up to a very pleasant sound ...Omkara knew that it was his gauri who was doing her morning aarti so he quickly went towards the source..

The kids were woken up by alka and were brought down by her after getting ready for school... Omkara is mesmerized seeing gauri in her actual avatar...not that he didn't like the new one but because he missed his old, nave chirpy gauri whose glimpse he could see right now...

His trance was broken when gauri called him Mr.oberoi Prasad!

Coming down the pike, all of them move for breakfast.

The table had different kinds of food laid on it.

Gauri quickly changes into her business suit and comes down to join.

Mumma aaj aap khila den na mujhe says rayan cutely ( mumma can you please feed me today?)

Kabhi toh apne aap khaana kha lo; kyun pareshaan karna hai mumma ko adds omira promptly ( Why don't you try and eat by yourself; why do you always have to bug mom for that)

Koi baat nhn omira; tum khaao main khila deti hoon rayan ko says gauri defending her son.. ( Don't worry omira; I will feed him. You eat yours...)

Jhanvi is smiling recalling her days with young omru where om was as calm as omira but ru was always a pampered child and had to be fed like rayan...

Omkara after getting dressed comes down the stairs while thinking of sitting next to gauri for breakfast but his happiness turns into immense anger when he notices Sid coming in happily and gauri calling him to join them. Sid happily goes and sits next to gauri and says champ aaj bhi muma ko duty pe lga diya ( Champ you can never let your mother free? You always want her to feed you)

Jhanvi notices om standing on the stairs with an irritated face and calls him out to come and have breakfast. The kids run up to him and says papa come let's have breakfast and drag him to the dining table.

After a little bit of chattering; the breakfast was over and gauri kisses her kids before seeing them off for school. The kids bid bye and exchange kisses with everyone before leaving... On om's turn

Rayan kisses him and asks him: papa aap jab hum ghar aayenge toh humare saath khelenge na ( Dad will you play with us when we get back home)

Kyun nhn rayan? Zaroor khelenge hum replies om in an enthusiastic tone...( why not rayan? We will definitely play)

Kya aap mujhe bhi apne saath khelne denge asks omira ( Will you let me also play with you)

Haan papa ki princess bhi toh papa aur rayaan ke saath khelegi na says om cheering her up( Yes papa's princess will also play with rayan and papa)

Clapping her hands and smilingly she says yeahh!! Main papa ki bhi princess hogyi...pta hai sid uncle bhi mujhe princess bulaate hain ( Yeahh!!! I'm now papa's princess too...You know sid uncle also calls me princess)

Om smiles seeing his daughter so happy...

Gauri says chalo jaao ab late hojaooge warna. ( Ok you guys leave now; else you will be late)

Soon the kids leave leaving the elder behind...Om taking this oppuurtunity asks gauri:

Om: gauri tumne yeh nhn btaya ki Mr.oberoi ko bachon ke baare main kabse aur kaise pta tha? ( gauri You didn't tell me about when and how did mr.oberoi found out about kids)

Jhanvi: haan gauri beta ! yeh baat toh main tej se raat se pooch rahi hoon; par har baar wo yeh keh dete hain ki gauri ke saamne btayenge. Ab tum he bta do..Please beta ( yes gauri; my child! I have been asking about this from tej but every time he dodges saying he will tell me infront of gauri. So now that you are here, please tell me child)

Gauri looks at sid and tej and seeing them both nod at her begins: papaji bachon ke baare main unke paida hone se pehle se he jaante hain... Hum tab doosre mahine main the tab se papaji ko pta hai...( Father in law had known this before the kids were even born. I was in my 2^nd month when father in law knew about this)

Jhanvi and om: kya??? Kaise?? Turning to tej; Omkara says Mr. oberoi aapko agar bachon ke paida hone se pehle pta tha toh kyun nhn btaaya mujhe? Kya aapko nhn laga Mr.oberoi ki mera mere bachon ke baare main jaanne ka haq hai...Gauri ne mujhe ek baar bola tab maine us cheez ko nazaradndaaz kar diya par aapne toh mujhe mauka he nhn diya Mr.oberoi. Kyun kiya?? Kya mila aapko mere saath aise kar ke?? Kya mila Mr.Oberoi he shouts angrily

Aap kabhi mere baap nhn ban paaye; aur aap mere bachon se bhi unka baap chenna chahte the kya Mr.oberoi??

( what?? How?? Omkara says Mr.oberoi why did you not tell me if you had known about this even before the kids were born? Did you not think it was my right to know about my kids? Gauri had atleast given me a hint which I ignored in my guilt but you; Mr oberoi you didn't give me a chance to know about this. Why did you do this?? What did you achieve Mr.oberoi?? You could never be my father and now you wanted to snatch my happiness of being a father to my kids.)

Aisa nhn hai omkara. Main manta hoon ki main tumhare liye kabhi ek baap ka farz nhn nibha paaya par iska matlab yeh hargiz nhn ki main tumse pyaar nhn karta ya nhn karta tha.. Main kabhi nhn chahta tha ki tumahre bache bina baap ke saaye ke rahe. Main jaanta hoon ki kitni taklef hoti hai jab aapka bacha aapko papa ki bajaaye Mr.oberoi keh kar bulaaye. Aur main yeh kabhi nhn chahunga ki jis takleef se main guzra hoon mera beta bhi wahi takleef aur dard sahe. Jo galtiyan maine ki hai wo main kabhi tumhe nhn karne doonga. Par haalat he kuch aise the om ki main chahkar bhi tumhe nhn btaa sakta tha. Par omkara tum bahut khusnaseeb ho ki tumahre bachon ki maa gauri hai kyunki itna sab kuch sehne ke baad bhi usne kabhi bhi bachon se tumhare khilaaf ek shabd nhn kaha...Hamesha usne bachon se kaha ki unke papa ek bahut ache insaan haiek ache baap zaroor banenge. Tej tells his son emotionally..

(It's not what you think om. I agree that I could never fulfill my duty of being your father but that in no way means that I don't love you or I didn't love you. I never wanted to keep your kids away from you my son. I am aware how it feels when your child calls you by your name instead of saying PAPA and I would never want my son to go through what I had gone through; to bear the pain that I bore; to repeat the mistakes I did. But my child! I had to bend infront of the circumstances.

Omkara you are a very lucky guy! You are lucky because gauri is the mother of your children. A selfless girl who never spoke against you to her children despite of what you had put her through. She always told the children about how good of a human being you are and how you will be a very doting father to them)

Par tej aisi kya wajah thi jo aapne hume nhn btaaya asks a curious jhanvi ( what was the reason for not informing us tej)

Tej looks towards gauri and gauri nods affirmatively..

Gauri ke OM chodne ke kuch he ghaton main ghar ke number pe ek phone aaya tha. Sab log apni guilt main itne doobe hue the ki kisi ko hosh nhn tha ki koi phone sun le. Aur maine wo line uthaayi...Phone pe mujhe kisi aadmi ne city hospital pahunchne ko kaha aur main jaldi nikal gya bina kisi ko btaaye. Wahan pahunch kar pta chala ki gauri behosh hai...Jiss adami ne phone kiya usne btaaya ki gauri uski gaadi ke saamne aagyi thi par usne break maar di waqt rehte. Usse zaada choten toh nhn aayi thi par wo behosh thi...takreeban 4-5 ghanton ke baad gauri ko hosh aaya aur usse mila main. Doctor se usne sabse pehla sawaal poocha he yeh tha ki uske bacha kaisa hai? Muhe yeh baat tab pta lagi thi.. Maine gauri ko bahut samjhaaya ki wo mere saath ghar waapis chale par wo nhn maani. Kaha ki wo uss ghar main nhn aayegi jahan uske pati ke mann main uske liye koi izzat; ya bharosa nhn hai. Wo uss ghar main hargiz nhn aayegi jahaan uska sharadh hua tha.

(There was a call on the Om's landline after gauri had walked off. Everyone was drowned in their guilt so nobody was there to receive the call; luckily I did. The person on the other end just told me to reach City hospital. Without any further delay I started for the hospital. Reaching there I received a shock when I heard I was called because gauri had escaped an accident but she was unconscious. I didn't know if I should be happy ( because she is safe ) or sad ( because she is in hospital laying unconscious. She wasn't much hurt because she escaped. Finally after 4-5 long hours she finally had opened her eyes and I went inside to meet her. The first thing that she had asked the doctor had swept me off my feet- It was is my kid fine doc?? That was the moment I knew about gauri's pregnancy. I tried really hard to explain her; I coaxed her to come back for her kids but she was adamant on her decision. She said she doesn't want to go back to that place where her husband has no trust and respect for her. She doesn't want to go back to a place where her last rites were performed and nobody had the audacity to speak up a word against the person performing those.)

Wo uss ghar main hargiz nhn aayegi jahaan uske liye koi awaaz na utha sake. Usne mujse waada liya tha ki main kisiko na btaaun aur agar maine btaaya toh wo yahaan se dor chali jaayegi. Mera yakeen maano maine bahut koshish ki thi par gauri bahut ziddi hai nhn maani. Maine gauri se maafi maangi aur poocha ki main aisa kya karoon ki wo mujhe maaf karde. Wo mujhe bhi Mr.Oberoi bulaati. Usne mujhse kaha tha ki wo kabhi bhi uss ghar me nahi jana chahti; wo aage badhna chahti hai; wo padhna chahti hai; zindagi main kuch banna chahti hai; apni ma aka naam roshan karna chahti hai. Maine usse madad karne ke liye offer kiya par usne nhn maana. Maine bahut manaaya par usne nhn li meri madad aur kaha ki usse kisi ki bhi kisi madad ki zaroorat nhn hai. Usne mujhse kaha ki wo apne dam pe kuch banegi par humesha oberoi family ke bache ka khayaal rakhegi; kabhi unpe kharoch nhn aane degi. Main tab gauri ko mana nhn kar paaya aur maine bhi usse waada liya ki agar usse koi bhi takleef hogi toh wo sabse pehle mujhe phone karegi. Maine usse bina btaaye uske peeche do aadmi rakhe taakin humesha mujhe uski khabar rahe aur uski maa ko bhi baryelli se bulwaaya...wahaan se shuru hui gauri se Riya Sharma Banne ka safar.

( She had made me promise that I will under no circumstances leak this news; and if I did she would go far away from this place. Believe me; I did try a lot to explain her but she remained hard nosed. I apologized gauri for my misdeeds and asked her to punish me but please come back but she stood firm. That time she used to address me as Mr.oberoi as well. She firmly told me she would never return to that house. Instead she wants to move ahead in life; complete her education; become something in life; stand up on her own feet and make her mother proud. I did offer her help which she obviously declined stating that she wants to do everything on her own without any help. I reluctantly agreed only after she promised me that she will look after the heirs of Oberoi Family; will never let any trouble environ the child. I also made her promise that she would without thinking about the time call me if she has any troubles. I ended up appointing two of my trutsed members for her and the child's security)

Gauri ne ghar se padhaayi shuru ki aur saath main apni silaayi ka kaam. Wo aur uski maa dono ek saath kaam karte the...thode waqt baad jab hum doctor ke paas gye tab hume pta laga ki gauri ko judwaa bache ho rahe hain...Bahut khush the hum teeno. Dekhte he dekhte waqt nikalta gya aur gauri ke 9 mahine poore ho gye...usne mujhe maaf nhn kiya tha...par fer bhi main roz usse milne jaata tha; roz beth ke main tumhare; haan om tumhare bachpan ke kissse usse sunaata tha.

( Gauri had started off her studies along with working as a seamstress. Her mother would assist her in her orders. Time lapsed and soon during a doctor's appointment we were informed that gauri is pregnant with twins. 3 of us were ecastic with the news. Time flew by and soon it was her 9^th month of pregnancy...She hadn't forgiven me but still I made it a ritual to visit her everyday. I would sit with her for hours reciting to her the stories of your; yes om your childhood.)

5 saal pehle 24 dec ki subeh ko gauri labor main chali gyi..Uski ma aka phone aaya tha mujhe raat ko 2 bje aur main bhaagta bhaagta bina kuch soche nikal gya..Jhanvi agar tumhe yaad hoga toh tumne mujhse poocha tha ki mujhe kiska phone aaya hai; main kahaan jaa raha hoon par tumse yeh keh ke nikla tha ki koi zaroori kaam hai sahi waqt pe btaunga. Wo zaroori kaam yeh tha jhanvi. Gauri ki labor bahut lambi thi..takreeban 5 ghante baad dono bache deliver hue the. Unke naam gauri ne rayan aur omira rakha kyunki tumne yeh naam soche the om. Gauri ne bachon ke janam ke baad mujhe maaf kiya aur mujhe papaji bulaana shuru kiya. Usne mujhse kaha ki wo mujhe papaji isiliye bulaayegi kyunki main uske baap ki tarah hamesha uske saath khara tha naaki isiliye ki main tumhara baap hoon omkara. Tab jaake mera paschyataap khatam hua tha om.

( 5 years before, on 24^th dec morning gauri went into labor. Her mother had worriedly called me at 2 am and I ran without caring for anything else. Jhanvi if you remember you had asked me whose call it was and where was I heading to but I just told you that I will tell you everything once the time is right. The reason why I ran off that night was because our grandkids were on their way to this world jhanvi. Gauri's labor was tiresome and long. It took her about 5 long hours in labor after which the children finally entered this world. She named them rayan and omira because you wanted those names for your children om. That was the moment she forgave me and started calling me papaji; but she made it clear that the reason she is calling me papaji is just because I was there with her; for her like a father. I was there when she needed me. That is why she called me papaji om.)

Jab bache 3 mahine ke hogye the toh gauri ki padhayi bhi khatam hogyi thi; wo awal number se pass hui thi aur usne naukri ke liye apply kiya ek local shop main... usne local shop se kaam shuru kiya aur dekhte he dekhte ek din uske designs ko ek fashion designer ne notice kiya...Wahan se shuru hua Omiray Fashion Hub. Aur jaante ho wo designer kon tha...SID. Aur aise shuru hui sid aur gauri ki dosti.

(3 more months passed and gauri had finally completed her education with flying grades; She had then applied for a job in a local shop. Within a span of months her designs were noticed by a famous designer and from there began Omiray Fashion Hub. And you know, who that designer was---SID and then started gauri's and sid's friendship.)

Concludes tej leaving jhanvi and omkara appaled and spellbound... Omkara's chest was beaming with pride thinking about his chirraiya's achievements but at the same time his heart was sulking when he thought about the tortures he had put her through... He goes towards gauri who was standing in a corner with tears flowing through her eyes remembering how she had crossed over those hard years of her life. She was listening to tej but was thinking about her inner turmoil during those 5 years without omkara... Sid on the other hand had tears in her eyes listening to how much did his friend go through...She went through everything without a hiss...She never spoke about her past with hum because she wasn;t comfortable and he never wanted to pressurize her..But now he feels so proud looking at his best friend; a lady so selfless; a lady so strong and fierce.

Sid side hugs her and rubbing her shoulder with his plam says mujhe pta nhn tha ki meri ri itni himmatwali hai...Pta hai main bahut lucky hoon ri ki mujhe tum mili meri zindagi main... acha hua jo tumne mujhe pehle kabhi kuch nhn btaaya aaj tej uncle se pta chalne par mujhe tumpar garv hai.. garv hai ki tum meri dost ho and smiles. Gauri mouths a thank you through her tears.. ( I never knew the valiantness my ri possessed. You know how lucky I feel to have you in my life.. Good that we never discussed your past before this because today I am so proud to have you as my friend.)

Omkara gets irritated seeing sid with his wife and has fire coming through his eyes. A fierce look and sid moves away...Om moves ahead and cupping gauri's face says I'm sorry gauri. Main tumhe deserve nhn karta; pta hai mujhe par aaj samjh bhi aagya. Acha hua jo tum waapis nhn aayi; tum OM se zaada bahut zaada deserve karti ho gauri. Tum mujhse bahut zaada deserve karti ho. I'm sorry ki tumahre liye ek acha pati nhn ban paaya. Shaayd Main humare bachon ke liye ek acha baap nhn ban paayun...Shhh gauri says.

(I'm sorry gauri. I know I don't deserve you and today I have understood the reason why? Good that you didn't come back to OM; you deserve more than that gauri; you deserve more than me. I'm sorry for not being the best husband to you. Maybe I won't even turn out to be a good father to our children)

Maana ki aap ek achi pati nhn the Mr.oberoi par yaad kijiye aap ek ache bte aur bhai hamesha se the. Isiliye mujhe yakeen hai ki aap ek ache baap bhi zaroor banenge.

( agreead that you weren't a good husband; but you were a good son and a good brother from the beginning.. I have faith in you; I have faith that you will be the best father for our kids)

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Aw Gauri underwent so many hardships but I'm glad that her father was with her. Funny how Tej could never become the father to his own son when he had the capability to become one for how daughter-in-law! Lovely redemption!

Wow..really enjoyed reading how Tej was there for Gauri during her toughest time..I hope Gauri can give Om another chance to be a good husband.