Tum Mere Kaun Ho?? - A Rikara SS ...Ch19 - 06/04 Pg 71 - Page 28

Originally posted by: sreya98

Chap 7: nice update

Originally posted by: devildiva21

Hey just read last two parts...
Awesome... finally Jhanvi and Om knows the truth...loved tge way Gauri made a place for herself in the industry...
om has a long way to go in order to win Gauri's trust back...
Loved Om and Jhanvi's bond with the children
Continue Soon

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

now update super fast

Originally posted by: sakshi0123

Nice ff...enjoyed reading it ..plz update it soon

Hello everyone!! I hope you guys are doing good!! I'm so sorry for not updating this since 4 days. Had a family emergency to tend to so was away.. But now i am back and without much bak bak let's get into the story...

Chapter 10

Om was over the moon hearing gauri say about him being a good dad.

Holding her hands in his he says gauri tumhe pta hai main humesha se papa banna chahta tha; apne bachon ko wo sab dena chahta tha main jo mujhe nhn mila. Main tumhara shukarguzaar hoon jo tumne mujhe yeh mauka diya.. Tumhari wajah se he aaj mere...Nhn nhn humare bache aaj iss duniya main. Main tumse yeh waada karta hoon ki main humare bachon ko sabse oopar rakhunga; hamesha une liye wo sab karunga jo aaj tak mere liye kisine nhn kiya; kabhi main wo galti nhn dohaaraunga jo maine tumhare saath ki hai... and bows down his head

( Gauri I had always desired to be a dad. I wanted to give my kids what I had craved for and never got in my childhood. I'm indebted to you for giving me this golden chance. Today, because of you I have myno no our kids in this world. I promise to be always prioritize our kids; I promise to do everything I wanted somebody to do for me; I promise to never deal with them like I did with you..)

Gauri has happy tears in her eyes seeing om prioritize the kids. She is happy seeing this change..

Gauri beta!! Main bhi tumse maafi maangna chahti hoon. Main tumhari gunhegaar hoon; Uss waqt main tumhare saath nhn khadi ho paayi jab tumhe meri zaroorat thi. Main tumahre liye ek achi maa nhn ban paayi; bat gyi thi main uss waqt. Bat gyi thi apne pati ke pyaar aur apni bahu ki dekhbaal ke beech; galat chunav kar liya tha maine. Shayad issiliye ab tak main uski saza bhugat rahi hoon... Apne bache ko roz tadapta dekhna kisi maa ke liye aasan nhn hota; aur na he aasan hota hai apne pote poti se door rehna kisi daadi ke liye. Please mujhe maaf kardo beta...!! Main sahi roop main rayan aur omira ki daadi tabhi banungi jab tum mujhe maaf kardogi...Tumahari maafi ke bina aadhori reh jaayegi meri yeh khushi mere bacha!! Says jhanvi stepping forward...

( Gauri my child!! I would also like to apologize to you. I am your felon; I wasn't there for you; I could not stand with you or for you when you needed me the most. I could not prove to be a good mother to you; I was divided; Divided between the love for my husband or the care of my DIL; I became selfish and made a wrong choice. Probably this is why I am suffering till now... Neither is it a piece of cake for a mother nor is it as cinch as it may seem for a mother/grandmother to see her child suffer everyday or to stay away from her grandkids. Please pardon me my child!! I can only take on the role of being a grandmom for rayan and omira after you have forgiven me completely. My joy of being a grandma will not be fulfilled until I get you to forgive me from your heart.)

Jhanvi aunty main aapse naaraz nhn hoon..replies gauri politely.. ( Jhanvi aunty I am no longer angry wuith you)

Naraaz nhn ho toh kyun aunty keh rahi ho...Dil main chubta hai yeh shabd mujhe...Waise he maa kaho na jaise pehle kehti thi...Kaan taras gye hain mere tumahre mooh se maa sunne ke liye jhanvi speaks emotionally while folding her hands. ( Why are you addressing me as aunty if you aren't angry any longer. My heart stings everytime I hear you call me aunty. Call me maa like you used to before; My ears are waiting to hear maa with your soulful voice.)

Aunty aapko maa kehna sahi nhn hoga humare liye. Pehle hum inki patni the aur usi naate aapki bahu bhi par ab hum sirf inke bachon ki maa hain aapke liye aur duniya ke liye humari pehchaan riya sharma hai.. Mera koi haq nhn hai aapko maa kehne ka...says gauri with a calm face. ( Aunty it won't be right on my part to address you as mother. I was his wife and your DIL thus used to call you as maa but now things have changed and now I am just the mother of his kids for you and riya sharma for the world. I have no right to call you maa)

Gauri kya tum abhi tak mujhe maaf nhn kar paayi ho? Asks om seeing gauri not obliging to his mother... ( Gauri have you not forgiven me till now)

Aapne maafi maangi kab? Aur waise bhi aapka maafi maanga aur humara maaf karna hum dono ki puraani aadat hai... Chaliye fer ek baar hum aapko maaf kar dete hain replies gauri sarcastically... ( when did you ask me for forgiveness?? Anyways isn't this an everyday thing in our relationYou commit a mistake and say sorry and I forgive you. Nevermind!! Once again I will forgive you)

Omkara is hurt listening to gauri... Edificing courage he speaks up; gauri! main jaanta hoon tum sahi ho par agar tum aise karogi toh kaise main aur tum milke apne bachon ko sahi se bada kar payenge. Main apne bachon ko doosra omkara singh oberoi bante hargiz nhn... ( gauri I know you are right but if you behave like this then how will we as a team bring up our kids befittingly? Never in my life can I see my kids become another omkara singh oberoi...)

Chinta mat kijiye kabhi bhi nhn banne denge hum humare bachon ko Omkara singh oberoi. Replies gauri not letting him complete... ( don't you worry about that. I will never ever let my children become OSO...)

Toh fer tum bachon ke saath oberoi mansion aa jao gauri.. Tabhi bachon ko maa aur baap dono ka pyaar mil paayega says om hopefully... ( Then come to OM with the kids only then they can have the love of a father and mother)

Kabhi nhn gauri says roaring... ( never)...

Kyun asks a shocked omkara listening to hie petite wife scream... ( why??)

Hum hargiz ek aise ghar main apne bache nhn laayenge jahaan hare k insaan farak karta hai apne he ghar ke bachon main; jahaan sirf ek he bache ki suni jaati hai; jahaan parivaar main log to bahut hain par pyaar bilkul bhi nhn; bharosa bilkul bhi nhn hai. Says gauri in a split of a sec ( I can never bring my children to a house where there is partiality among the children of the same house; Where there is an inclination towards one particular individual and only one person is heard. I can never bring my children to a house which lacks trust and love amongst the members.)

Kya unhe haq nhn hai apne parivaar ko jaanne ka? Kya mere parivaar ko haq nhn hai mere bachon ko janne ka? Asks om... ( Don't they have a right to meet their family?? Does my family not have a right to know and meet my kids??)

Wo sab yahaan aake mil sakte hain agar wo chahte hain toh! Nhn toh hum unhe wahan apne saath leke aa sakte hain..Par kabhi hum unhe aapke ghar main nhn rehne denge. Hum nhn chahte ki toote rishton ka saaya bhi humare bachon par pade...says gauri in outright frustration... ( They can come here and meet them if they so want to. Or I can bring them with me for a visit to OM but never to stay there... I don't want my kids to be shadowed by broken relations)

Omkara; gauri bilkul sahi hai. Main bhi nhn chahta hoon ki mere pote poti waaris waale jhagdon main paden.. Apne bachon ke saath maine jo galtiyaan kari hain main nhn chahta ki wo mere pote poti ke saath dohraayi jaayen... Says Tej butting in and supporting his DIL... ( gauri is right omkara! Even I don't want my grandkids to be involved in the hier race. I don't want the mistakes that happened during your time to be repeated with my grandchildren)

Aapke mooh se yeh baatein shobha nhn deti Mr.oberoi says om rudely... ( Such things don't suit you mr oberoi)

Yehi karaan hai ki hum apne bachon ko aapke saath nhn bhej sakte... WO bahut chote hain inn sab baton ke liye aur aapke ghar main yeh sab roz ka hai says gauri defending tej and her actions... ( This is why I don't want my kids to go with you. They are very young for all such things and its' an everyday affair in your house)

Theek hai gauri. Jaisa tum chahogi waise he hum karenge. Tum chinta mat karo hum nhn leke jaaynge bachon ko tumhare bina...Speaks jhanvi trying to make peace... ( okay gauri!! we will do what you want us to..Don't worry we won't take the kids without you)

Par kya tum bachon ko aaj shaam leke aa sakti ho OM main. Main chahti hoon ki ek baar sab log mil len bachon se... She adds after a brief pause... ( but can you please bring the kids to OM in the evening. I want everyone to meet them today)

Gauri looks at tej and sid for confirmation and they both nod ...Theek hai hum aayenge par sid humare saath aayega. Bache uske bina kahin nhn jaate hain says gauri... ( okay sure!! But sid will come with me since the kids don't go out without him)

Theek hai quickly says jhanvi much to omkara's displeasure... and takes him out with tej following them..

Ri!! Tumne yeh kyun kaha ki main tumahre saath chalun?? asks sid ( why did you tell them that I will accompany you)

Kyunki hum chahte hain ki humara dost humare saath chale says gauri ( because I want my friend to come with me)

Soon it's evening and gauri reaches OM with the kids...

Jhanvi stops them from entering and brings a pooja thaali to welcome them...

Gauri is about to step back but jhanvi tells her against it so she stops...

Arre gauri puttar kab se hum sab jhanvi se pooch rahe hain ki kon aane waala hai jo wo itni saari taiyaarian kar rahi hai par wo bta he nhn rahi thi...hamesha keh deti thi ki koi khaas aane waala hai..Ab samjh aaya ki tumse khaas koi aur nhn ho sakta hai jhanvi ke liye...says daadi!! ( Gauri my child!!! All of us had been asking jhanvi about the guest that she had been so busy preparing stuff for but everytime she would dodge off saying somebody special..Seeing you I believe there could not be anybody more special than you)

Aap galat soch rahi hain!! Wo meri nhn apne pote poti ki baat kar rahi thi. Unke liye taiyaari kar rahi thi Jhanvi aunty subeh se replies gauri politely ( You have got it wrong!! She was preparing for her grandchildren and not for me)

Pote poti??? Yeh kya keh rahi gauri jhanvi?? Matlab rayan aur omira jo kal yahaan aaye the wo?? Asks a shocked daadI ( grandkids..What is she saying jhanvi?? Does she mean rayan and omira who came here yesterday?)

Ji mummyji!! Bahut lambi kahaani hai. Baad main aaram se btaungi. ABhi ke liye yeh jaan lijiye ki rayaan aur omira mere omkara ke bache hain. Jhanvi tells daadi and takes gauri and team with her.

Yeh kya jethani ji?? Aap kisi aur ke bachon ko humare om ke bache kaise bna sakti hain?? Main nhn maanti ki ye hiss ghar ke bache hain taunts pinki ( What is this jethani ji? How can you claim somebody else's kids to be om's?? I don't agree that these kids have this house's blood slowing in their veins)

Aapke maanne na maanne se kuch faraq nhn padhta. Wo mere bache the, hain aur rahenge aur mujhe iss baat ko saabit karne ki koi zaroorat nhn hai. Iss baat ko saabit karna matlab gauri ke apni pati ki taraf ki bhaavnayon ki bezti aur yeh main hargiz bardaash nhn karunga... Tells om angrily.. ( I don't care whether you agree or not! They were my kids; they are my kids and they will forever be my kids and I don't see the requisite of proving this to you! Proving this fact would be an insult to gauri's devotion towards me; her husband and I won't tolerate that)

Bhavya comes running and hugs gauri...Gauri hugging her back asks her kaise ho bhavya? Waapis kab aayi tum? Ek baar bhi phone nhn kiya jaane ke baad. Itna paraaya kar diya kya tumne mujhe? ( How have you been bhavya? When did you return?? You never felt it was important enough for me to know your whereabouts? Did you not think of me as your own)

Nhn bhabhi! Aise baat nhn hai. Hum meerut main the. Duty join karli thi aur bas apne beete kal ko peeche chodne ke chakkar main kisi se baat karke kamzor nhn padhna chahte the. Says bhavya defensively ( No bhabhi! It's not what you are thinking. I was in meerut. I had joined back my duty and I didn't want to fall week while moving ahead in my life. That is why I didn't speak to anyone bhabhi.)

Samjhte hain hum bhavya answers gauri and pats her back... ( I can understand bhavya)

Waise bhabhi humne toh bas baat nhn ki par aapne toh apne baare main sab kuch he mita diya tha aisa kyun asks bhavya? ( Bhabhi I had just not spoken to anyone while you had erased all the proofs of your existence...Why??)

Bas bhavya! Tumahri tarah aage bhadna chahte the! Apne liye; apni maa ke liye kuch karna chahte the. Apne ateet ki bediyon ko tod ke udna chahte the says gauri coming out of the hug ( I wanted to move forward in life. I wanted to achieve something in life for myself and my for my mother. I wanted to fly high breaking through all the chains that had once caught me)

Waise aap thi kahaan bhabhi?? Humne bahut dhoondha tha aapko par kuch nhn mila aapke baare main says bhavya... ( Where had you been bhabhi? I tried very hard to find you but failed everytime)

Hum yahin Mumbai main he the..bas apni pehchaan badal thi humne replies gauri ( I was in Mumbai but I had changed my identity) kabhi himmat nhn hui humari Mumbai chod ke jaane ki...( I was never able to leave mumbai and go)

Waise bhavya acha kiya jo tum waapis aagyi!! Bahut pyaar karte hain rudy bhaiya tumse...Unh eek mauqa dena sahi tha bhavya...adds gauri ( Bhavya your decision of coming back was absolutely correct. Rudy bhaiya loves you a lot and I'm glad you did give him one chance)

Aapse bhi toh bahut pyaar karte hain na omkara bhaiya fer aap kyun nhn chance de sakti unhe?? Ek mauqa de dijiye na bhabhi.. says bhavya ( Even omkara bro loves you a lot then why can you not give him a chance; one chance is all he needs)

Haalat alag hain bhavya. Galti ek baar ho toh maaf kiya aur mauqa diya jaa sakta hai par jo roz ek galti ko dohraaye usse hum kaisa mauqa den bhavya? Aur waise bhi jitna hum tumhe jaante hain tum sirf isiliye waapis nhn aayi kyunki tum rudy bhaiya se pyaar karti thi; unhone tumhe manaya;tumhe yakeen dilaaya isiliye tum waapis aayi?? Haina?? Speaks gauri while slyly looking at omkara from the corner of her eye ( Circumstances are different bhavya. A mistake can be forgiven once; a chance can be given once but how do I forgive and give a chance to the peson who repeats his mistake every single day?? And bhavya as much as I know you; I am sure that you didn't come back solely because of rudy's bhaiya's love for you. He must have repented and made you believe on his love...Am I right??)

Rudy enters the hall with his son and goes towards his bhabhi and hugs her

Chulbul bhabhi...!!??? Acha surprise diya hai aapne. AAp toh hume chod ke aise gyi ki mud ke yaad bhi nhn kiya... complains rudy ( chulbul bhabhi! What a pleasant surprise! You never missed us after leaving from here)

Yaad karne ke liye choda he nhn aap logon ne replies gauri ( I wan't in a state to miss anyone; courtesy all)

she see the baby in rudra's hand and continues Bhavya kya yeh bacha?? ( Bhavya this kid??)

Bhabhi..YEh humara beta hai ( This is our baby boy) Ruvyan says rudra to which bhavya nods...

Hearing this gauri takes him from rudra and starts pampering him...

aawwee.!!!kitna cute hai...aankein toh bilkul bhavya par gai hai...aur kehna padega...weight toh rudy bhaiyya par... Bas I hope deemaag bhavya par chala jaaye... Says gauri ( He is so cute! His eyes are inherited from his mother while he built looks like his father's. I hope he takes after his mother's brain..) Rayan and omira ko khelne ke liye ek bhai mil gya...( rayan and omira now have a baby bro to play with)

hearing this everyone had a small smile on their face exept pinki

Holding the baby she tells bhavya and rudra : Acha chalo hum aap dono ko humare bachon ke milwaate hain and introduces rayan and omira to everyone... ( come I will introduce you two to my kids)

Rudra and bhavya are happy seeing rikara's kids while the kids are happy seeing ruvyan and they play with him...Omira dons the hat of a big sister and takes care of ruvyan along with playing with him...

Jhanvi is happy seeing her family complete while pinki is upset seeing the 2 male childs in their house...

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aayushi and lubna!

How adorable :D

excellent update

wow finally the family gets to meet the kids...glad it was a happy reunion and I can't wait to see what drama unfolds since Pinky is obviously unhappy. She probably is concerned with who will be heir of Oberoi fortune?...😲. Looking forward to how Om and Gauri will make things work.

ye pinky ka kuch nahin ho sakta. nice update.

It's an adorable update