Tum Mere Kaun Ho?? - A Rikara SS ...Ch19 - 06/04 Pg 71 - Page 43

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome ayushi

I loved it

I loved the breakdown and the way he console her..dialogues were beautifully penned down

And the kiss☺️

Yeah a day out with rikara and kids...i'm really excited for this

Update soon han
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update..
Thanks for pm !
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Posted: 7 years ago
Just read last two parts...
Awesome updates...sid to acha nikla 😲 last part was which I hadn't expected...
Glad that om decided to trust gauri this time... woah they kissed
And still gauri is not ready to forgive him 😭 looks like om still has a long way to go but he kinds of deserve it as well because of his past behaviour
Yayy om moving in with gauri..and now she's gonna show him who the real GKS is
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rikara94

Awesome ayushi


I loved it

I loved the breakdown and the way he console her..dialogues were beautifully penned down

And the kiss

Yeah a day out with rikara and kids...i'm really excited for this

Update soon han



Thank you so much jyoti😊

I'm glad you loved the update

Kiss...😳 I think gauri needed to get everything out from her system...
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Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

Superb update..
Thanks for pm !


Thank you so much😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

Just read last two parts...
Awesome updates...sid to acha nikla 😲 last part was which I hadn't expected...
Glad that om decided to trust gauri this time... woah they kissed
And still gauri is not ready to forgive him 😭 looks like om still has a long way to go but he kinds of deserve it as well because of his past behaviour
Yayy om moving in with gauri..and now she's gonna show him who the real GKS is
Continue soon



Thank you so much for reading😊

Kaha tha maine ki rulo sid kuch karega...

Yeah...finally after a gazillion years om listened to his heart...

Kiss...😳 but now om will become a ghar jamai...😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update dear
Loved it very much...
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

And once again a masterpiece!

I love the way you show us both their feelings.
Gauri is torn between her Love for him and her self respect.
He hurt her so many times, he promised her to change so many times she is afraid to trust him
to fall into his arms.
Who can guarantee her that he will catch her?
Om knows that he knows that right now he needs to win her back, he needs to prove to her that he believes in her, that she and their family is his priority

I love how he told her that her life could never be misfortunate because of their twins
and how he told her that he knows she could never be with someone else( like the pictures suggested)
he knows his Gauri more than anyone else and that leap of trust made gaurs go weak
It was the perfect moment for a kiss, a kiss that sealed her undying love. A promise to maybe one day make amends

Gauri asking him if he won't leave again made me cry because you saw how deeply she wanted to be with her husband, to have a complete family but the next morning made her cautious once again

I love Om for saying he wants to stay with them ;) ( I always wanted that to happen)

I wonder what will happen now that he will stay with her😉


Thank you so much mel😊

Self respect and love are like oxygen and water for life...Om will try different things to win her back...

A kiss...I really felt they needed to kiss and forget😉 but it isn't possible for her to forget everything..

Ghar jamai is om is going to be fun😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Riddhimaa...

Amazing update dear

Loved it very much...



Thank you so much!!😊
i'm glad you loved it!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Chapter 16


Gauri and om takes the childrens to Essel World park...

A park with lots of rides; water park and jumping hack attracts the kids and they squeal in happiness...

Chalo na gauri hum bhi thode maze karte hain; ab aa he gye hain toh kyun na jhoole bhi le len...Om tells her.. ( Come gauri! Let's enjoy since we are here; let's go on some rides)

Dekheye Mr.Oberoi! aap na zaada free hone ki koshish mat kijiye humare saath. Bachen hain saath toh hum aapse tameez se pesh aa rahe hain warna...Gauri warns him in whispers yet a stern tone.. ( look Mr.oberoi! don't try and mingle with me. I am in my limits only because the kids are here with us or else)

Dekho na bachon; aapki muma nhn aana chahti jhoole lene...Om tells the kids and winks at gauri.. ( See kids; You mother doesn't want to enjoy the rides)

Gauri gasps at his outright lie and understands what he wants to do...Hum chal rahe bachon...Aisa kabhi hua hai ki humare bachon ne humse kuch maanga ho aur humne unhe wo na diya ho...She asks... ( I'm coming my dearies!! Has it ever happened before that I refuse you two for anything?)

Kids nod no and gauri gives a winning smile to om..

Mumma! Paapa! Agar aap dono ka hogya ho toh chalen; omira aur main khelna chahte hain...dekhiye na kitne ache rides hain yahan...rayan tells him looking at his parents whispering to each other.. ( Mom dad! Can we leave if you two are dono arguing...omira and I want to play. Just look around and see we have so many rides that seem to be fun)

Omkara;gauri;rayan and omira finally head towards the rides for the kids...The kids enjoy kangaroo hopping; big apple ride; Caterpillar and junior go karting...Gauri is busy taking pictures of her playing kids; laughing like maniacs while enjoying their childhood...And om; he is busy admiring his happy familya family that he had not known about since so long; a family that has now become his very reason of living; a family that he would do anything for.

Rayan, omira chalo aajao ab..Kuch khaalo fer chale jaana khelne ...Gauri calls them out! ( Rayan; omira come let's go and eat something! You guys can continue playing later)

Haan bachon aa jaao; papa ko bhi bahut bhook lagi hai...Om tells them pouting ( Yes my children; come on even papa is hungry)

Rayan and omira run towards their parents and hug them...Gauri and om kiss both of them and holding their hands take them towards food court..

Kya khayenge mere nanhe shaitaan?? Om asks them ( what do you naughty kids want to eat?)

Scanning through the food court; rayan and omira shout at once CHINESE...making all heads turn at them...

Gauri and om mouth sorry to the other guests while taking their naughties towards the TAIPAN chinese restaurant...

Settling on their table...They get their food which is sweet and sour chicken with noodles; Chicken with sauted mushroom sauce and fried rice; Some soup and egg rolls along with fortune cookies and drinks...

Enjoying their meal to the fullest they move towards the ride section again...But this time they go towards the Family ride section and enjoy...aqua drive; crazy cups and zipper dipper along with others...

Muma hum thak gye! Omira says... ( Muma! We're tired!)

Ghar chalen? Rayan asks... ( can we go back home)

Par abhi muma aur papa ne toh rides liye he nhn..aur tum dono itni jaldi thak gye?? Om asks them ( But your mom and dad haven't taken any rides yet and how did you guys get tired so fast)

Mr.oberoi hum koi rides nhn lene waale...Gauri declares ( Mr.oberoi I am not coming on any rides with you)

Aise kaise Ms.sharma! rides toh aapko leni he padengi..om tells her.. ( That isn't happening! You will have to come)

Bachon kya kehte ho?? Muma ko ride leni chaheye papa ke saath ya nhn...Om asks the kids while pouting.. ( what do you say kids?? Should muma enjoy a ride with your papa or no)

Haan haan!! The kids shout in unison... ( yes yes)

Ajeeb chirotta hai ek dum. Kaise besharmo ki tarah bachon ka istemaal kar rahe hain humse apni baat manwaane ke liye...bache hain saamne nhn toh ek jhaap se dewaar pe sata dete inhe..gauri mutters under her breath...

Mujhe sun raha hai Ms. Sharma ki aap mujhe kitni duaen de rahi hain...Om tells her sarcastically. ( I can her your well wishes for me Ms..sharma)

Kya ab aapka yahin khade rehne ka iraada hai?? Agar nhn toh chaliye; bache bhi thak gye hain...jaldi se ek jhoola le ke nikalte hain...shaam bhi ho rahi hai! Gauri tells him faking a smile... ( Do you intend to just stand here? If not; let's leave because kids are tired so we should hurry up and take a ride and get going; it's lareading starting to get dark)

Haan zaroor par...meri pasand ka ek jhoola lene ke baad he hum yahan se jaayenge...Om tells her.. ( yes sure! But after we take and enjoy a ride of my choice)

Gauri without thinking much about the depth of his words agrees and goes with him leaving the kids to play in the play center..

Om runs towards the ride holding gauri's hand when he sees the guard announcing their names...

Humara haath chodiye!! Hum kahin bhaag nhn rahe hain...gauri tells him huffing ( leave my hand! I am not running away)

Gauri hume late ho raha hai! Darwaaza band hone waala hai...chup raho aur bhaago...om replies... ( gauri we are getting late. Look the door is about to be closed so shut up and keep running)

They finally reach the gate and gauri is dumbfound seeing the ride in water...

Mr.oberoi ! kya yeh hume paani main jhoola dilwaayegi.?? Yeh kaisi ride pasand kari hai aapne? Hum extra kapde nhn laaye hain apne saath...Pagal hogye hain kya aap?? Demaag pe chot lagi hai kya aapko?? Gauri asks him ( Mr.oberoi! Is this ride going to throw us in water?? What kinda ride have you chosen? I don't have any spare clothes on me at the moment...Are you mad? Have you hurt yourself on your head??_)

Nhn gauri! Tumhe spare clothes ki zaroorat nhn hai...! Tumhe bahut maza aayega saying this om drags her towards their seat and tells her to buckle up the seat belt... ( No gauri! you don't need a change. Trust me you will enjoy a lot)

Soon the ride starts and...Gauri screams...AHAHHH!!!!...

Omkaraji bachaiye hume! Unchaayi se darr lagta hai hume! Aapko pta tha fer bhi aap hume yahaan leke aaye? Hey bhagwaan raksha karo apni iss chirraiya ki!! Gauri speaks looking down from 190 feet!!...( THE RIDE IS SHOT N DROP) ( Omkaraji! Save me! I am scared of heights and despite knowing this you got me here why? Oh god! Please protect me)

A panick struck gauri clutches om's shirts and hides her face in his shoulder hugging him...om is happy for his purpose of getting gauri close to him is fulfilled...

Gauri sshhh!! Main hoon...Main tumhre saaath hoon! Daro nhn.. kuch nhn hone doonga main tumhe! Bahut maza aayega gauri. Mera haath pakad lo agar tumhe zaada dar lag raha hai toh! Om tells her trying to calm her down ( Gauri shh!! I'm here...I am here with you. Don't panic. I won't let anything happen to you.. Just hold my hand if you feel loosing it all out; trust me you will enjoy this)

Hume koi darr nhn lag raha hai! Bikul theek hain hum... Aur kyun pakde hum aapka haath; hum jaante hain ki aapke iraade kya hai samjhe? Gauri tells him understanding his intentions... ( I'm not at all scares! I'm absolutely fine... And why shall I hold your hand? I am very well aware of your intentions..)

Gauri's POV

Shankar ji! Raksha karna humari... Humare bachon ka humare ilaawa koi nhn hai; kuch mat hone dena please Shankar ji... Aur yeh omkaraji! Kya samjhte hain ki hum befkoof hain? Sab samjhte hain hum ki yeh ride unka socha samjha plan hai ek...par hum bhi gauri kumara sharma hain; apna darr dikhaane waalon main se nhn hai...Mar jaayenge par unka haath pakad ke unhe jeetne nhn denge...

(Oh god! Please save me...My kids have nobody in this world except me; please let me survive this for them... And this omkaraji! Huh what does he think of himself? Does he think I'm mad to not understand what is going on in his mind? I know that this ride is his plan; a well thought about plan..But I am also gauri kumara sharma; I am not the one who shows her consternation.. I will die but won't hold his hand and let him win over me)...

Her trance is broken by the free fall of the ride with a bung; a frightented gauri clutches tightly on om's arm digging into his skin with her nails...Om doesn't flinch on feeling the pain; rather he wraps his arm around her and pulls her closer to himself...Gauri doesn't look up or stops him...

Gauri losing all her calm during the rude's movement holds om's hand which was lazily resting on his lap...unconsciously they entwine their fingers together...The ride hereafter was not as petrifying for gauri as it was earlier... May be because she had om with her; holding her hand; wrapping his arm around her protecting her; promising her to be there for her... Can he be trusted again?? Should I just risk it all to give him a chance?? Should I do it for my kids? But then what about my happiness? How will I keep my kids when I don't have that peace and happiness within me. But isn't his presence itself comforting for me.. My acrophobic self is calm even though I am at this height..Is it because of him?? Ughh!! I have to think about this...I have to think about not just my kids but for myself too! Gauri thinks...

Finally with a speed the ride falls in the water; A loud splash before it stops completely allowing everyone to disembark themselves.

Gauri and omkara get off; and start moving and reach their kids...

Papa aapne aur muma ne haath kyun pakde hue hain...rayan asks.. ( papa why are you holding onto mumma's hand)

Gauri and om look down at their hands and sees them entwined...pulling off her hand from his as if it gives him electric current; he says rayan aapki muma ko darr lag raha tha toh isiliye maine padka tha unka haath... ( Rayan your mother was scared so I had held her hand to calm her down)

Nhn meri muma nhn darti kisi se...he answers' ( No my mom is't sacred)

Nhn rayan! Muma ko unchaayi se darr lagta hai aur kuch logon ne iska fayada uthaya hai...par tum chinta mat karo; muma abhi theek hai...Gauri says caressing his face ( No rayan! Actually mumaa is scared of heights; and some people do know how to take advantage of that. But mumma is fine now)

Haan aapko muma ki chinta karne ki tab koi zaroorat nhn hai jab papa hain muma ke saath...aur aapke saath...Kyun mumma sahi kaha na papa ne?? om asks gauri with a smirk ( Yes you don't have to worry about mumma when your father is there with her and with you both...Am I right mumma?)

Such a jerk he is...! Gauri thinks in her mind!...Haan bilkul..she says faking and glares om a murderous look

Mumma ab hum kahaan jaa rahe hain? Omira asks gauri once they are in their car! ( Mumma where are we going now)

Daadi ke pass jaa rahe hain bacha! Om replies when gauri looks towards him for an answer.. ( we are going to your grandmother)

Kya hua?? Kuch chaheye aapko?? Om asks omira.. ( what happened? Do you both want something?)

Nhn kuch nhn! Bas bhook lag rahi hai thodi thodi...omira tells him (No nothing. I'm hungry)

Mujhe bhi..rayan speaks in ( me too)

Acha toh kya khaoge?? Kuch bahar se khaana hai ya daadi ke pass jaake?? Om gives them options.. ( So tell me what do you want to eat? You want to grab something from a restaurant or wanna wait until we reach grandma)

Bahar se he khaane dijiye! Kyun jhanvi aunty ko pareshaan karna hai...Gauri tells om making him frown.. ( let them eat from a restaurant. Why do you want to trouble jhanvi aunty)

Gauri! mom bachon ki daadi hai! Unke liye khaana bnaane main kaise tangi? Om asks her hurt ( Mom is their grandma so it won't be a hassle to make food for them)

Nhn mera matlab wo nhn tha!...gauri begins.. ( no I didn't mean it that way)

Daadi ko keh den ki white sauce pasta bna den...Bahut acha bnaati hain wo rayan and omira tell om cutting gauri and preventing their war of words... ( just tell grandma to prepare white sauce pasta for us...She makes it the best)

Theek hai done!! Chalo ab main sunroof kholta hoon; hawa achi chal rahi hai! Tum dono ko maza aayega... theek hai? Om asks them while looking towards gauri for permission.. ( okay done! Now I am going to open the sunroof; it's nice and windy outside I'm sure you two will enjoy the wind...Okay??)

The kids get their heads out of the sunroof and enjoy the wind after their mommy nods at them for doing so...Gauri clicks their pictures...

Soon they reach OM; and om tells his family about his decision of shifting with gauri! He doesn't fill them in with what happened the previous night...jhanvi even though is happy for her son; is sad that gauri isn't ready to come here forgetting everything...

Daadi; daadu kahan hai.. humse milne nhn aaye? Rayan asks jhanvi.. ( where is grandpa?? He didn't come to meet us)

Bache wo bahar gye hain kaam se...Thode dino main aa jayenge; tab tak daadi ke saath khelo...jhanvi tells him ( he has gone out for some work; he should be back soon until then enjoy with grandma )

Acha bachon om ne mujhe btaaya tha ki aaj aap chaaron Esselworld gye the...Toh zara btao toh kitna maza kiya; kya kya khaaya konse rides liye...jhanvi asks them settling both of them on her lap... ( OOk! Kids; so your father told me that you guys had a time of your life in essel world. Let me also know what all you did and how much fun you had; what did you eat)

Gauri and om meanwhile settle on the sofa...and admire their kids explaining each and every detail of their short trip with so much fervor..

Gauri and om then show them the pictures they had clicked while on their trip...and everyone excluding pinki is happy for om...For gauri and for children... For om because he has started to smile and open up; for gauri because these pictures are giving them the hope that she might forgive them all one day; for children because despite a dysfunctional family they haven't lost their innocence, their childhood...

Jhanvi kisses rayan and omira; with this the kids run away to play... Riya chaliye; hum dono bhi thodi baatein karte hain! Bhavya tells her...to which gauri agrees ( Riya come; let us both go and talk)

Bhavya! Main khaana dekh ke aati hoon jhanvi excuses herself. ( Bhavya! I'll take care of the food arrangements)

Hum kuch madad karden jhanvi aunty? Gauri asks her not willing to sit around idely... ( Do you want me to help you jhanvi aunty?)

Nhn beta! Jiss din tum mujhe maa bulaana aur samajhna shuru kardogi uss din se tum mujhe madad kar dena; nhn rokungi main tumhe...jhanvi tells her in tears and leaves.. ( no my child! Not yet. You can come and help me the day you call me and accept me as your mother. I won't stop you then)

Gauri sulks...but bhavya places a reassuring hand over her shoulder... and says! Hum jaante hain ki sab kuch theek hone main waqt lagta hai; aur maa bhi samjhti hain buss hurt ho jaati hain... Unki badi bahu nhn hai na unke pass unhe sahara dene ke liye yeh soch ke dukhi hoti hain wo...aap chinta mat kijiye sab theek ho jayega.. ( I know it takes time to settle everything; and mom also understands this but she is hurt...Hurt because her elder DIL isn't there by her side to support her. But don't worry everything will soon fall into place)

Bhavya! Chah ke bhi nhn bhula paa rahi hoon main sab kuch. Aur main jhanvi aunty ko jaan booch ke hurt nhn karna chahti par kya karun; hamesha kuch aisa ho he jaata hai ki unhe bura lag jaata hai...gauri tells defeated (Bhavya! I can't get myself to forget all that even If I want to... And I am not hurting jhanvi aunty deliberately but I don't know what to do...Everytime I try to be cautious but end up hurting her)

Hum jaante hain!! Rudra and bhavya tell her and hold her hands... ( we know)

Hum zara aate hain bhavya! Saying this she was about to get up when; ( I'll be back bhavya)

Gauri! mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...Kya kuch time milega mujhe...shivay asks her ( gauri I want to have a word with you...Will I get some time)

Riya! Riya sharma naam hai humara...aur kya baat karni hai aapko Mr.oberoi. Mujhe kisi se koi baat karne main dilchaspi nhn hai...gauri tells bitterly ( Riya! I am riya sharma. And what do you want to speak Mr.oberoi? I don't have tiny ounce of interest to talk to any of you)

I know ki tumahra naam riya hai! Par wo duniya ke liye hain; apno ke liye nhn...shivay begins to say ( I know that you are riya but that is for the world; not for family)

Aur aap sab usi duniya main aate hain... Humara koi rishta nhn hai iss ghar ke kisi bhi sadasya se...gauri says cutting him and begins to leave ( and you guys are a part of that world...I have no relation with any of the memebers of this family)

Dekho main jaanta hoon ki tumhare saath jo hua wo nhn hona chaheye tha; par main abhi personal nhn professional level pe baat karna chahta hoon...shivay tells her (look I know whatever happened with should not have happened but at the moment I would like to have a professional conversation)

Aur uske liye bhi humara jawaab naa hai..! gauri tells him in finelity ( And the answer to that is NOO)

Bina business proposal dekhe reject kardena ek ache business man ki nishaani nhn hai...shivay tells her angry ( It's not a sign of a good businessman to reject a proposal without even looking it)

Aur kisi doobti hui company ke saath deal sign karlena konsa kisi ache business man ki nishaani hai Mr.oberoi...Gauri tells him in equal anger ( Signing a deal with a company that is on the verge of its closure isn't as well)

Dekhiye hume pta hai ki aap humari company se deal sign karna chahte hain...aur pichle kayi mahino se milne ki koshish main the aap; par humne har baar reject kar diya tha aapko...kyunki hume apni company doobane ka koi shok nhn...Gauri tells him truthfully! ( look! I know that your company is looking forward to sign a deal with my fashion house; I also know that you have been trying to meet me since the past feew months but I was rejecting the prospective meeting every time...That was because I have no interest in losing my company)

Waise ek salah den aapko! Jis cheez ka tajurba na ho insaan ko; wo cheez usse nhn karni chaheye... zaroori toh nhn ki insaan ko har cheez bakhoobhi karni chaheye..gauri says ( let me just advice you to keep yourself away from what you don't know...It's not necessary for a human to be perfect in every single field)

Himmat kaise hui ladki tumahri mere bte se iss lehze main baat karne ki?? Pinky asks her angry hearing her argue THE SSO ( How dare you talk to my son in that tone)

Everyone comes out of their rooms hearing pinki shout

Aapko beech main kisi ne bulaaya Mrs.Oberoi...gauri asks her enraged ( Did anyone invite you to come here and listen to us)

Main iss ghar ki maalkin hoon! Mujhe invitations ki zaroorat nhn hai samjhi tum...pinki rebukingly tells her ( I'm the owner of this house so I don't need any invaitations..DO you get that??)

Aur ho kon tum jo mere bte ka business proposal reject karogi! Poori duniya marti hai mere bache se business karne ke liye...she adds ( and who are you to reject my son's business proposal. People are dying out there to sign a deal with my son)

Tabhi toh unki fashion company doob rahi hai...gauri remarks putting him down...making shivay embarrassed ( that is the reason why is fashion house is sinking...Isn't it?)

Aur humne kab kaha ki aap iss ghar ki maalkin nhn hai...Hongi aap maalkin magar humse baat karne ke liye aapko invitation...oops sorry invitationS ki zaroorat hai kyunki hume yani ki RIYA SHARMA ko aapse baat karke apna sar dukhaane main koi interest nhn hai.. gauri says shooting daggers at pinki for crossing her path ( And when did I say that you aren't the owner of this house. You might be the owner for all you want to but you will need an invitation ooops..invitations to speak to me; that is RIYA SHARMA..because I don't unneccary headache by talking to people like you)

Himmat toh dekho zara iss ladki! Saari tameez bhool chuki hai...galti khud ki aur ilzaam humpe laga rahi hai...! Pinki tells her.. ( just look at this girl! She has forgotten all her manners; She is blaming us for her own mistakes)

SHUT UP Mrs.Oberoi! galti kiski thi aur kiski nhn yeh sab jaante hain...gauri tells her... ( Shut up mrs.oberoi! Everyone knows the person who was at fault)

Choti maa!! Kya milta hai aapko bina matlab ke bawaal khade karke...kya zaroorat hai aapko gauri ki baton main bolne ki..! om asks her ( Choti maa! What do you get by exaggregating. Why do you not stay without speaking in between gauri's matters?)

Haan pinki please tum gauri se kuch mat kaha karo! Tumahri bahu nhn hai wo...aur tumhe koi haq bhi nhn hai usse kuch kehne aur sunaane ka...yeh sab jo aaj ho raha hai shivay ki wajah se he hai...Agar wo om ko na mana karta toh itna kuch kabhi hota he nhn...Jhanvi tells her ( Yes pinki! Please don't say anything to gauri! She isn't your DIL and you have no right to say or taunt her. Shivay is responsible for whatever is happening today; This wouldn't have happened had he not advised om on not sharing the matter with gauri..)

Mom please ! aap bhi mujhe defend karne ke liye shivay par saara dosh mat daaliye...Main kamzor tha isiliye apna faisla khud nhn le paaya aur doosron ki baton main aagya...Toh us waqt jo hua usme meri galti zaada badi hai shivay ki galti se...Om tells her owning up his mistake.. ( Mom please! Don't blame shivay solely when I was the one who was wrong. I was infirm and couldn't take my own decision; I was the one who blindly followed shivay. SO whatever happened that day was my mistake more than it was shivay's.

Gauri even though happy to see om own up for his mistake doesn't let it show on the outside...!

Hume lagta hai hume nikalna chaheye; kuch logon ko aankhon main chubhan ho rahi hai hume dekh ke aur humare bachon ko dekh ke yahaan...gauri tells om ( I think we should leave now since my kids and I are stinging in someone's eyes)

Gauri puttar! Aise kaise keh sakti ho tum? Yeh tumhara apna ghar hai; om aur tere bachon ka ghar hai yeh; unka haq hai yahan..kaise kisi ko ghar ke bachon se chubhan ho sakti hai? Aur agar kisi ko ho bhi rahi ho toh hum us insaan ke liye bachon ka haq nhn maar sakte na...Daadi starts telling gauri but then finishes looking at pinky... ( gauri my child! How can you say something like this? This is your own home. This house belongs to om and your children; they have rights on this house like all the other oberois. How can they sting in anyone's eyes? And even if they are then that person can leave because we can't keep the children of this house away from their rights...)

Dekhiye hume jo laga humne kaha; jab bhi hum yahan aate hain kuch na kuch ho he jaata hai...Mrs.oberoi ka mooh kabhi bhi band nhn hota hai.. ..Pta nhn wo kyun jalti hain humare bachon se ki un nanhi jaano ko dekh ke moo bna leti hain...Par fer bhi hum unhe yahaan le aate hain taakin aapko yeh lage ki hum unhe aap sab se juda rakhna chahte hain..Gauri makes her points clear... ( I have just said what I felt. Everytime I come here something happens...Mrs. oberoi can never keep her mouth shut. I don't understand why is she so jealous of my children; why she always makes a sick face seeing those two innocent angels and despite of all that I get them here just so you people don't feel I am intentionally trying to keep you away from them)

Par ab hume lagta hai ki bachon ka yahan aane se behtar yeh hoga ki jo unse milna chahte hain wo humare ghar aa jayen... Humare ghar main mehmano ko taane nhn milte hain...She further adds and walks out calling the kids. ( But now I feel that it's better if you guys come to my house to meet rayan and omira instead of them coming here with me...Anyhow my house is very welcoming to guests unlike yours)

Shivay please tum choti maa ko thoda samjhao! Jitna yeh ghar tumhara aur tumahre parivaar ka hai utna he mera aur mere parivaar ka bhi hai...Aur unhe haq nhn hai ki wo mere bachon se ya meri biwi iss lehze main baat Karen...om requestingly tells shivay with a finality.. ( shivay please explain choti mom to behave. This house belongs to my family and me s much as it does to your family and you. And choti maa doesn't have any right to talk to my wife in that tone)

Aur rayan toh waaris bhi hai iss parivaar ka; aakhir sabse bada beta jo hai wo...Mere om ka bacha. Kyun pinki sahi kaha na maine?? Jhanvi says ( Moreover rayan is the heir of this family; Afterall he is the eldest of all...My om's son...Isn't it true pinki??)

Pinki angrily walks out with shivay following her to explain her...while the rest of the family silently stands and watches...

Papa??? Chaliye muma bula rahi hai...rayan comes in calling him ( papa! Come mumma is calling you)

Bache maine tumhare liye khaana bnaaya hai kha toh lo...jhanvi tells him ( Child! I have made food for you' atleast eat)

Par mumma... Rayan says ( but mumma)

Mumma ko main samjha deta hoon..tum jaao aur betho; main omira ko bhejta hoon...om assures him and goes... ( I will explain muma; you just go and eat...I will send omira as well)

Rayna and omira have their dinner after omkara assures gauri that no body will tell anything to them...

Gauri doesn't eat anything rather she just sits and watches her children having a time of their life with their father's family!

After their dinner...

Bhavya tum aur rudra aana humare ghar ruvyan ko leke...rayan aur omira ko bahut pasand hai unka chota bhai...gauri tells her ( bhavya! Rudra and you should take some time out and visit my home with ruvyan...Rayan and omira love ruvyan)

Aap nhn aayengi kya yahan? Bhavya asks her even though she knew the answer ( will you not come here)

Pta nhn bhavya! Har baar kuch na kuch ho he jaata hai jab bhi hum yahan aate hain toh! Gauri tells her ( I don't know bhavya! Everytime there is something or the other going on here...)

Abse kuch nhn hoga; shivay tells her and comes forward with pinki following him! ( nothing will happen hereafter!)

Mujhe maaf kardo..pinki apologizes with anger and insult... ( forgive me)

Maaf kiya magar yaad rahe ki hume gauri se riya sharma banne pe majboor na he Karen toh aapke liye behtar hoga...isiliye humare bachon se aap door rahiye; agar aap unhe pasand nhn karti toh unhe aapki koi zaroorat nhn hai..unki daadi hai unke pass unhe pyaar dene ke liye...gauri tells her in a slow and

calm threat ( I have forgiven you but just remember Don't force me to become riya sharma from gauri! It won't be good for you. Stay away from my kids. They don't need you in their life if you can't wish well for them and adore them.. They have their grandmother to give them a lot of love)

Chalo gauri! om calls her out...( let's leave gauri)

Om leaves with his family...

They reach Sharma mansion; gauri along with om put rayan and omira to bed..

Chaliye ab yeh so gye hain...aap bhi so jaayie jaake gauri tells om and walks out ( Go and sleep now that the kids are asleep)

Theek hai om says and follows gauri ( Ok fine)

Gauri reaches her room and turns around to close the door...

Aapse humne kaha ki jaake so jaayie...fer aap yahan kar rahe hain? Gauri asks om ( What are you doing here when I told you to go and sleep?)

Toh main sone he aa raha hoon...om tells her and yawns( so I am coming to sleep)

Yeh humara kamra hai...Aap yahan kyun aaye hain...aapka kamra uss taraf hai...gauri tells him irritated ( This is my room; why have you come here when yours is over there on the other side)

Pati aur patni ke beech mera tumahra nhn hota; jo hota hai wo unn dono ka hota hai...chalo hatto ab mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai; sona hai mujhe Om tells gauri and moving her aside gets inside leaving her hot headed ( There is nothing such as yours and mine between a husband and wife. Whatever they have is theirs..Now move aside I am very sleepy; I need to sleep)

Yeh kya batmeezi hai mr.oberoi? aap aur hum aise? Nhn reh sakte aise hum gauri tells om while holding his arm and dragging him out ( What is this misbehavior? You and I here?? No we both can't stay like this)

Nhn reh sakte kyun? Saari duniya ke pati patni ek he kamre main rehte hain; aur hum koi alag tarah ke pati patni nhn hai...om tells her confused ( Why can't we stay like this?? All the couples in the world would share a room and we aren't any different)

Hum aapki patni nhn hain; toh aap humare saath nhn reh sakte...chaliye jaayiye yahan se...Gauri tells him dropping him outside the room ( I am not your wife so you can't stay here with me...Now leave from here)

Main toh yahin rahunga! Agar tumhe itni problem hai toh tum chali jaao... main apne bachon ko toote aur adhoore rishte ki chaaun ke neeche nhn bade hone doonga gauri...Om tells her moving towards the bed by kicking her with his side ( I will stay here! You can leave if you have any problem...I can't let my kids grow up under the shadow of expurgated and broken relations)..

Gauri just stamps her foot loudly and goes towards the bed: Uthiye aur jaake sofe pe soyiee..!! yeh humara bistar hai...AAp yahan nhn so sakte! She says ( Go and sleep on that couch; this is my bed and you can't sleep here..)

Tum so jao sofe pe! Main poora nhn aaunga! Om tells her..( you go and sleep there; I won't fit)

Yaad hai na aapko aise he bartaav kiya tha aapne jab hum aapke ghar aaye the aapki patni banker aapke kehne pe...gauri reminds him ( This is exactly how you had behaved when I had come to your house as your wife on your insistence. Do you remember?)

Yaad hai gauri! aur pachtava bhi. Ghinn aati hai khudpe soch soch ke ki maine tum par kaise julm kiye hain; kya kuch kaha hai tumhe...Par main nhn chahta ki tum apne aap se nafrat karo wo sab mere saath karke; main nhn chahta ki tumhe bhi waise pachtaava ho jaisa mujhe hai ab tak...om tells her disgusted by himself ( I remember! And I regret. I hate myself thinking about the tortures I had put you through; the way i had spoken to you... But I don't want you to hate yourself for behaving like that with me; I don't want you to have that regret which I still have)

Gauri feels rubbing and peeling his old wounds...And says omkaraji!!

Waise hume aapse ek baat poochni hai?? She says trying to cheer him up ( I need to ask you something)

Haaan pooch na om tells her ( yes go on)

Wo aapne apne ghar main kyun kisi ko sid ke bartaav aur kartoot ke baare main nhn btaaya...Gauri asks him ( why did you not inform anyone at your home about sid's behavior and deed)

Mujhe nhn laga zaroori hi unn sabka jaanana...aur waise bhi Main nhn chahta tha ki koi meri biwi ke baare main kuch bhi galat soche! Bardaash nhn kar sakta hoon main jab koi tumhare oopar ungli uthaaye toh! Khoon kholta hai mera jab main kisi ko tumhari bezati karte dekhta hoon toh... om tells her his reasons... ( I didn't think it was important enough for them to know moreover I don't want anyone to think lowly about my wife. I can't bear to see anyone pointing fingers at you...My blood boils when I hear somebody hurling insults at you)

Kyun nhn kar sakte bardaash aap?? Gauri asks him ( Why can't you bear)

Omkara pulls her over himself and making her lie down hugs her tighly by her waist says huskily: Pyaar karta hoon main tumse! Biwi ho tum meri! Meri zindagi ho! Aur mere bachon ki maa ho! Kaise sun loon tumhare khilaaf kuch..

Insaan apne baare main bura sun sakta hai par apne khuda ke baare main nhn...aur tumahra ishq meri ibaadat hai aur tum meri khuda...and kisses her on her forehead before sleeping ( I love you! You are my wife! You are my life! Mother of my children! How can I listen against you? A person can hear against his ownself but not against his god. And your love is my worship while you are my god)

Gauri tries to get out of his hold feeling herself loosing under his spell...She with his tiny hand hits him on chest but to no avail...finally giving up she sleeps...


Thank you for reading! i hope you enjoyed...But this chapter i am not sure about; i am not much satisfied...Let me know how you found this chapter by liking and commenting!

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