Tum Mere Kaun Ho?? - A Rikara SS ...Ch19 - 06/04 Pg 71 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

Wow its indeed emotional one...how can gauri say that the children's father is sid...poor omkara...he is hurt...but the slap to pinky was so nice...

Originally posted by: uma_dey

Wow Loved this chapter,love this strong Gauri who can shut anyones mouth though feel emotional for Om but now I wanted to know how they became parents and how He bridge the distance for five long years between him and her. Update soon.

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

even I am also a bit emotional reading this chapter... as i want all this... but still as I'm is my fav character I can't see him in pain...

update next chapter tomorrow...

so beautifully written ..

Originally posted by: aayushi1

Thank you so much😊

I am sorry if i made you cry! but om's emotional outbreak was imp.

Even i felt really bad for om...but he needed all of it to come out and he needs to repent...

I'm glad you enjoyed it though!

will update soon

Originally posted by: rikara94

Omg i loved it dear

Finally they met..

Wah..slap woh bhi pinky ko..loved it😆

Loved this strong and unaffected rii..she lies to kara about the babies..om's heart broke..was painful for him

Its too emotional yar..

Update soon

Originally posted by: sreya98

Emotional update

Originally posted by: priyadil

Beautiful and emotional update...

Hey guys!! I am back with the next chapter. last chapter was a little emotional from om's pov. I have tried to balance this chapter...So without any further bak bak let's jump into the chapter...

Chapter 6

It's 6 in the evening and om still hasn't opened his room's door to anybody who went to call him nor has he come out himself... Getting worried for her son Jhanvi decides to go and check her omkara...

Jhanvi : ( knocking) om!! Beta? Darwaza kholo bacha...main hoon.. ( Om! MY son. Please open the door. It's me)

Om: please jaao yahan se...mujhe kisike koi baat nhn karni hai ( please leave...I don't want to talk to anyone)

Jhaanvi: (pleading) beta please!...om please open the door...apni mom ke liye beta...( son please...Om please...Open the door for your mom)

Om: (emotional) Mom kaha na maine ki mujhe koi baat nhn karni hai,,,please chod dijiye mujhe akela... akela chod dijiye ( Mom I told you I don't want to speak to anybody. Please leave me alone. Leave me alone please)

Jhanvi: om! Agar baat gauri ke baare main hai...toh ( Om...If it's about gauri even then you won't)

Without letting jhanvi complete om opens the door hurriedly and asks her Mom kya hai gauri ke baare main? Kya wo waapis aayi hai mom? Boliye na mom ( Mom what is it about gauri? Has she come back? Tell me mom?)

Jhaanvi: gauri ka naam sunte he darwaaza khol diya aur maa itni der se bahar khadi bol rahi hai kholne ko toh nhn khola?? Hmm?? ( You have opened the door so quickly hearing gauri's name But you didn't care for your mother who was standing outside and knocking on the door for you to open?? Hmm?? And smirks)

But looking at her son's condition she says Om...Main tumahri maa hoon mere bache! Mujhe bahut takleef hoti hai tumhe iss haalat main dekh ke..Main jaanti hoon aaj jo hua uske baad tum..( Om I am your mother my son! I am pained to see you devastated like this. I know whatever happned today has)

Om:(tearing up and hugging his mom) Mom!! Dekho na kaisi kismat hai aapke bte ki? Bachpan se leke aaj tak koi khushi naseeb nhn hui.. Bahut saha hai maine par ab nhn seh sakta main aur. 5 saal tak gauri se door tha main; tadap raha tha uske bina; kitna baar uski paintings se maafi bhi maangi kyunki main jaanta hoon ki galti meri he thi aur mujhme himmat nhn thi usse face karne ki. Pichle 5 saalon main roz uski khushi ki dua maangi thi maine par yeh nhn socha tha ki mere ilaawa wo kisi aur ke saath khush rahegi; kabhi koi umeed nhn ki wo meri zindagi main waapis aayegi par mom aaj 5 saal baad usse doobara dekh ke dil ko umeed hogyi mom; par dard bhi hua yeh dekh ke ki wo apni zindagi main aage badh gyi aur uske bache...bache bhi hain mom uske. Mom gauri he meri zindagi ki khushi hai... kya yeh khushi bhi meri kismat main nhn hai mom? Kya bahut der hogyi hai mom? Kya main ab usse maafi nhn maang sakta? Kya wo mujhe maaf nhn kar sakti?

( mom look at your son's fate! Since childhood I have never had any moments of happiness. I have gone through a lot since a young age but not anymore mom.. I can't take all this anymore. I have stayed away from her for 5 years; I was longing for her. SO many times in the past 5 years I had apologized to her paintings because I knew it was my fault and I didn't have the guts to face her. For the last 5 years I have prayed everyday for her happiness but I never thought she could be happy with somebody else; I never kept any hopes of her return in my life but seeing her today after 5 years my heart has hopes mom...But it also pained me to see her move on in her life and that she has kids...Kids mom... Gauri is my life's happiness mom. Will I not get this happiness as well? Is it already very late mom? Can I not ask her for forgiveness now? Can she not forgive me mom?)

Jhaanvi: ( caressing her son's hair) Om! Meri taraf dekho mere bache... Om looks at his mom and she says beta! Zindagi aksar humare imtehaan leti hai; aur khaas karke tab jab zindagi main hume koi anmol cheez milti hai. Beta gauri tumahri zindagi ka wahi anmol taufa hai aur use paane ke liye pichle 5 saal tumahra imtehaan tha... ( Om! Look at me son.. Life often tests us; especially when life rewards us with something precious. Son! Gauri is that precious jewel in your life and the past 5 years was your testing period)

Om: Kya kehna chahti hain mom aap? ( what do you want to say mom)

Jhanvi: Om in simple words I just want to say everything is not over yet. You still have your chance om. You just have to try hard. Look rudra triedfor 2 years and he was able to pacify bhavya.. SO now I want you to put your entire emotional strength to win gauri back.

Om: par kaise mom? Wo aage bhad chuki hai mom. Mujhe chodke wo kisi aur ki hogyi hai mom. Aur ab toh uske bache bhi hain. Mom aapko pta hai gauri na hamesha mujhse kehti thi ki use meri jaise dikhne wala ek pyara sa beta chahiye. Ek aisa beta jo usse waise pyaar kare jaise main aapse karta hoon...aur mom aapko pta hai main usse kya kehta tha??? Jhanvi nods her head in a no so pm says : main usse kehta tha ki mujhe toh uske jaise dikhne wali ek masoom si beti chaheye; gauri jaise innocence; uss jaise aankhein aur usi jaisa character...humne bahut sapne dekhe the mom...humare bachon ke liye...Mom gauri ko na bache hamesha se he bahut pasand the...Aur ab toh uske khud ke do bache hain par unka baap main nhn hun mom. Saying this he falls on the ground and cries bitterly... Jhanvi on the other hand is so happy to know that how her son desired a family of his own..How he wanted a daughter more than a son...How he actually has kids whom he doesn't know about... ( But how mom? She has moved on in life. She has left me behind and now she belongs to somebody else. Moreover she has kids now. Mom you know Gauri always used to tell me how she wants a loving son who looks like me and loves her the way I love you mom. And mom you know what I used to tell her? I used to tell her that I want a lovely daughter just like her. Her innocence; her smile; her character.. Mom we had seen a lot of dreams for our kids. You know gauri had always loved kids and now she has 2 of her own but they aren't fathered by me mom..)

Jhaanvi: Om...agar main kahun ki shayad gauri bhi wahin khadi hai jahaan tum ho toh? Agar main kahun ki shayad unn bachon ka baap sid nhn hai toh? Agar main kahun ki wo ab bhi tumse pyaar karti hai toh?? ( Om what if I tell you that maybe gauri is also stuck in her life at the same point where you are? What if I tell you that maybe those kids aren't sid's? What is I tell you that there is a chance she might still be in love with you?)

Om:(confused) kaise mom? Kaise possible hai yeh? I..I mean main bahut khush hounga agar yeh sab sach ho toh but mom gauri ne he toh sabke saamne kaha tha ki sid uske bachon ka baap hai... ( How mom? How is it possible? I..I mean I will be beyond happy if any of this is true but mom gauri herself made it loud and clear that sid is the father of her kids)

Jhaanvi tells him what she had heard from omira when they were leaving and how gauri made her quiet... She also explains him how she felt connected to the kids as if they were her own and how both rayan and omira resemble him so much

Om: ma..mat..matlab..?? gauri ne jhooth? He asks astonished ( means...gauri lied)

Jhaanvi: om tum he socho...rayan aur omira dono he 4 saal ke hain...she tells practically ( Om think about it...both rayan and omira are 4 years old)

Om: ( confused) haan toh..?? ( yes so?)

Jhaanvi: mere bhuddhu bache toh yeh ki chances hain wo dono gauri aur tumhare bache hain... Tum dono shaadi shuda the and tum keh rahe ho ki tum dono ne bache plan bhi kiye the.. Aur wo dono 4 saal ke hain matlab ki gauri 5 saal pehle pregnant thi...matlab jab usne ghar choda tha uss time... Aur yeh toh possible nhn hai om ki usne tumhe chodte he kisi aur se shaadi karli ho aur bache bhi paida kar lye hon? Main gauri ko jaanti hoon. Woe k aise ladki nhn hai..uske liye rishton ka bahut importance hai om...!! Khud he socho na tum ( My stupid son! There are chances that those kids are gauri and yours. Before she left you guys were married and you also said that you guys had planned for kids so... And also going by the facts they both are 4 years old so that means gauri would have been pregnant with them around 5 years back; that was the time she had left all fs us my son! And going by gauri's nature she can't just get married and have kids with somebody else so quickly om... I know her very well.. She is the type of girls who value relationships a lot...)

Here jhaanvi's words had created a hope in his heart that there might still be a chance for him to get together with his love; his gauri and moreover with his kids.

Om: haan mom mujhe bhi bahut resemblance lagi thi bachon ki mujse aur gauri se...Aur aapki baat sunke mujhe yakeen hogya hai ki wo dono mere he bache hain... Mom!! I'm so happy mom.. Mere bache hain mom; main ek baap hoon mom! Aapka beta ek baap hai aur aap daadi... Mom I am so happy... he says all this with so much happiness in his heart ( Yes mom even I had felt the resemblance of the kids with gauri and me. And now after listening to you I am sure that those two are my kids. Mom...I am so happy mom... I have kids mom.. I am now a father...Your son is now a father mom...and You are a grandmom...)

Here jhaanvi could control her emotions and her eyes were moist...

But the very next moment she sees her son getting sad and she asks him what happened? Mom gauri ne kitne dukh sahe honge humare bachon ko akele paalne main; unhe bada karne main. Kaise kiya hoga usne yeh sab akele mom? Koi nhn tha uske saath? Kiske pass gyi hogi wo jab usse kisi cheez ki zaroorat hoti hogi... Mom main sabse special time pe uske saath nhn tha...Main uske cravings poora karne ke liye uske saath nhn tha..Main usse janam dete hue uska honsla badhaane ke liye nhn tha mom...i am very bad husband mom...I am a very bad husband omkara says sadly ( Mom gauri must have gone through a lot to bring up our kids by herself; She must suffered a lot alone. How did she manage everything by herself mom? There was nobody with her. Who would she have gone to when she needed something? Mom I was not there with her during the most special time of our life; I was not there to fulfill her cravings; I was not there to motivate her during the child birth...)...

Jhanvi consoles him and says: jo beet gya usse bhol jaao om! Main jaanti hoon ki woe k special time tha..Par uske peeche rone se acha hai ki tum apne aane waale time ko special bnaane ke baare main socho...socho ki tum bachon se kaise miloge? Kya kahoge unse? Socho ki gauri ko kaise manoge? ( Forget what has already happened om.. I know that was a very special time and you have missed out on that...But now you should focus on your future rather than running behind the lost time. Think about how you will meet your kids; how and what will you tell them? How will you pacify gauri?)

And om nods understanding and hugs his mom and thanks her

At Sharma house

Gauri along with sid and kids get back from the park...

Gauri: sid I am sorry yaar

Sid: kyu?? ( why)

Gauri: woh aaj oberoi mansion main maine tumse bina pooche yeh keh diya ki tum rayan aur omira ke pita ho ( Actually today at oberoi mansion; without asking you I told them that you are rayan and omira's dad )

Sid: ( side hugging her) ri! Chahe main inn bachon ka baap nhn hoon but baap jaisa toh hoon he na? inhe maine apne saamne bada hote dekha hai... Toh chinta mat kar ri...mujhe bura nhn laga ( Ri! Even though I am not their dad in real but I am like their dad... I have seen them grow infront of me. So don't worry ri! I didn't feel bad at all)

Waise abhi meri baap banne ki umar toh nhn hai...kaafi handsome hoon main papa banne ke liye ( By the way I am not that aged to be a father right now...I am too handsome to be a father) and winks making ri laugh

Gauri: sid tum bhi na!! and drags him inside ( sid you will never change)

Sid: acha ri! tum mujhe yeh btao ki tum itni nervous kyun hogyi thi gaadi main?? ( Ri! tell me why were you nervous in the car)

Gauri: Sid...wo.. ( that )

Sid: acha baba!! Rehnedo...jab btaana ho tab btao...koi jaldi nhn hai! And smiles at her and runs off to play with the kids ( Ok leave it! Tell me when you are comfortable! No need to rush in!)

Gauri smiles seeing sid and mentally thanks god for giving her such an understanding friend and a father like figure to her kids.

Oberoi mansion...

In Om's room

Om washes his face and picking up his keys starts to walk out...

Jhaanvi: om tum kahan ja rahe ho?? ( Om where are you going)

Om: gauri ke ghar mom...apni gauri ke pass; apne bachon ke pass ( Gauri's house mom! To my gauri and to my kids)

Jhaanvi: nahi om...mujhe nhn lagta tumahra aise wahaan jaana theek hoga. Hume nhn pta ki wo bache apne pita ke baare main kya jaante hain aur kya nhn? Pta nhn wo tumhe wahaan dekh ke kaise react Karen ( No om... I don't think its advisable for you to go there. We don't know what those two know and what they don't about their father? We aren't sure about their reaction on seeing you there om)

Om: ( emotional) Nhn mom!! Yeh jaanne ke baad ki mere do bache hain, aur maine unka bachpan miss kar diya hai main ab ek minute bhi unse door nhn rehna chahta mom! Mujhe poochna hai gauri se ki usne aisa kyun kiya? Kyun rakha usne mujhe humare bachon se door? ( No mom! After knowing that I have kids and I have missed on their childhood I don't want to stay away from them any longer. I also want to ask gauri the reasons for doing this... for keeping our kids away from me)

Jhaanvi: beta...meri baat suno...( Child! Listen to me)

But before she could stop him he he stormed out towards the main door...

Om found gauri's address and reached sharma mansion and is shocked seeing the mansion...but before he could enter he saw a very strange scene...

In the lawn,

A man in his 60s: bachoon... kaise ho...?? ( kids how are you?)

Rayaan: ( running towards him) yaayy!!! Daadu!!.. daadu... omira jaldi aao daadu aaye hain... warna main saari chocolates khaa jaunga... ( Yayyy!! Grand pa!! grandpa! Omira come fast grandpa is here... Or else I will eat all your chocolates)

Omkara is observing this scene and is curious to know who the man is...But he is also excited to see his kids running and playing around and admires them...

Omira: ( shouts) sochna bhi mat...

Tej hugs both his grandchildren and pecks their forehads lovingly; then taking omira in his lap...she continues daadu Pichli baar aap jo choclates laaye the na who saari rayan ne khaa li; mujhe ek bhi nhn di rayan ne daadu she complains and pouts. ( don't even think about it! Grandpa you know the chocolates you had brought for us last time were all eaten by rayan... He didn't even give me a single piece grandpa)

Omkara goes towards a side to see who the man is and is shocked to the core seeing him...Mr.oberoi escapes his mouth!

Tej: ( bending down) haaw... rayan...?? gandi baat hai rayan! Aapne omira ki chocolates kyun khaa li. ( Haaw rayan...This is bad manners rayan. Why did you eat omira's choclates?)

Rayan: daadu omira ki galti thi isiliye maine uski chocolates khaa li ( Grandpa it was omira's mistake so I ate her chocolates)

Tej: acha?? Magar humari omira toh kabhi koi galti nhn karti...kya kiya usne aisa? Btao while omira sticks out her tongue at rayan ( really? But our omira doesn't do any mistakes... Tell me what she did)

rayan: .daadu. maine na ek painting banayi thi apni family ki...usme na mein...omira ... mama papa...sid ...aur aap the...magar iss omira ne wo painting kharab kardi yeh keh kar ki humare papa nhn hai... issiliye meine uske choclate khaa liya daadu...aapko pta hai meri class main na sare bachon ke papa hai...mama bhi...par omira aur mere papa kyu nahi hai daadu...?? wo Rahul na mera roz mazak udhata haj yeh keh kar ke mere aur omira ke papa nhn hai and looks down sadly ( Grandpa...I had made a family painting which had omira,muma,papa,sid,you and me but omira just ruined it saying that we don't have a father that is why I ate her chocolates grandpa. You know in my class every student has a dad and a mom But why don't omira and I have a dad grandpa? That Rahul in my class always teases me saying that I don't have a father)

Gauri hears this and didn't want tej to feel sad so she goes there

Gauri: yeh bachein bhi na...huh... inhe chodiye aur aap btaiye ki aap kaise hai papa ji... speaks while touching tej's feet to take blessings... ( these kids...Huh! Ignore them and tell me How are you father in law)

Tej: ( blessing her) jeete raho beta...idhar tum teeno theek ho toh mein bhi theek hoon... Beta I really wish ki main inhe bta sakta inke papa ke baare main...par abhi yeh chote hain nhn samjhenge... ( Stay blessed my child! If you 3 are fine here then even I am fine seeing you...Beta I really wish we could tell them about their father but they are very small to understand all this)

Gauri: papaji! Kahenge bhi toh kya? Ki unke baap ko unki maa pe bharosa nhn tha. Ki unka baap unki maa ko waqt nhn deta tha...kya kya kahenge hum inhe papa ji? ( what all will we tell them father in law? That their father didn't trust their mother or their father didn't have any time for their mother. What will we say)

Tej: haan gauri beta! Main samjhta hoon tumhari baat...chinta mat karo. Hum inhe kuch nhn kahenge abhi...dekho na Rayan toh bilkul om par gaya hai...uski tarah he dikhta hai bas tumahri tarah natkhat hai... aur om ki tarah he achi painting bhi karta hai... dekhna mujhe yakeen hai ki yeh ek din ek bahut acha artist banega apne baap ki tarah... aur omira waise toh wo bilkul tum jaise dikhti hai par uski sach bolne ki aadat toh bilkul om par he gyi hai... ( Yes gauri! I can understand your concern. Don't worry we won't say anything yet! Look at rayan. He resembles om so much but the only thing about him that he has inherited from you is that he is as naughty as you... But other than that he is good at painting; I have faith that one day he will be a well renowned artist just like his father... and omira; she looks exactly like you but she speaks truth like her father) They both admire the kids and smile...

Gauri: jab se omkaraji ko choda hai tab se yahi dono toh hain mere jeene ka sahara...inhe dekh ke he omkaraji ki kami poori ho jaati hai thodi... and a tear escapes her eye ( These two have been the sole purpose of my existence since I left omkaraji...Seeing these two angels I feel like omkaraji is near me)

Omkara is shocked seeing everything

Om's POV

Mr.oberoi pehle se jaante the gauri aur mere bachon ke baare main? Par kabhi kuch kaha kyun nhn? Kyun kabhi nhn btaaya humme se kisi ko bhi? Mom ko bhi nhn. Aur gauri ...wo bhi mujhe miss karti hai. ... Mere bache? Rayan ; woh toh dikhta bhi meri tarah hai and meri tarah painting bhi karta hai aur Mr.oberoi usse support bhi kar rahe hain..aur omira kitni sundar dikhti hai who! Bilkul apni ma ape gyi hai...par sach meri tarah bolti hai woh... Ab samjh aa raha hai Mr.oberoi kitne kitne din gaayab kyun rehte the...Kiske phone aate the inhe...Kisse itni khushi se baat karte the...wo mere bache the...par mujse yeh baat kyun chupaayi mr oberoi ne?? kya mera haq nhn hai mere bachon ke baare main jaanne ka

( Mr.oberoi had known about gauri and or children from before. But why did he not say anything? Why did he not tell anybody? Not even mom. And gauri; she misses me too... My kids; rayan- he looks like me and he also has a passion for painting...moreover mr.oberoi is supporting her. Omira- she is just so beautiful...Has taken after her mother! But she speaks truth like me... Now I understand where mr.oberoi used to be for so many days; whose calls he used to get; whom he would speak to smilingly...they were my kids... But why did he hide it from me. Is it not my right to know about my kids?)

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