Tum Mere Kaun Ho?? - A Rikara SS ...Ch19 - 06/04 Pg 71 - Page 8

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nice chapter

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Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

Hey

I really like this story ... Omkara is Omkara ... I did not expect anything solid from him since the jelly custard days but I am glad that Gauri and bhavya took a stand here ... Show mein toh unko bhaang pilaake sula diya ... I loved the fact that Gauri and Bhavya got to know the truth and they exposed that caveman and then they even gave a piece of mind to Omru ... I loved tej too ... You have inspired me to write something on this plot ... Thanks so much 🤗

Originally posted by: ayeshakapoor

Amazing update...
Well written...
Looking forward to read future updates..

Originally posted by: KhwabonKiRani

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Originally posted by: lourel24

awesome outstanding. got both gauri and bhavya point here. loved how they took stand for themselves.loved it.

Originally posted by: rikarafan1

Nice take on the track

Loved how both Gauri and Bhavya took stand for themselves

Hey guys!! Without any bak bak today let's get to the chapter

Chapter 4

Leap of 5 years

In Sharma Mansion

There is a girl standing in the inhouse temple and is talking to a photograph...The photograph is revealed to be that of gauri's mother and the girl is gauri...

Gauri's conversation with the picture

Ek saal hogya aapko gye hue maa!! Kyun aap bhi chali gyi hume akele chod ke... Inn bte hue 5 saalon main aap hi wo ek insaan thi jisse humne apna har sukh aur har dukh baanta tha... Aur aapke wo nanhe shaitaan unhe sambhaalte sambhaalte toh hum thak gye hain maa!! Sunte he nhn hai humari. Aap jab thi toh kaise sambhaal leti thi unhe... Hume aapki bahut yaad aati hai maa...

( It's been 1 year since you left me mom. Why did you also leave me alone and go? All through the last 5 years you were the only one who was there with me to share my joys and sorrows. You were the one who could manage those naughty kids. I'm tired of handling them. They don't listen to me anymore. I miss you so much mom)

And a boy of 4 years comes running through the staircase towards gauri ... and says loudly MUMMA...

Gauri: Are!! Uth gya humara rayan... Kya hua??? Itne khush kyun ho subeh subeh?

(aww..my rayan has woken up. WhY are you so happy today morning?)

Rayan: ji muma...wo chutti hai na... aapki naani se baat hogyi kya..( yes mom...Today is an off day right...Are you done talking to grandma)

Gauri: ji rayaan hogyi humari baat aapki naani se... aap btao aapne brush kiya kya ( yes rayan I'm done talking to your grandma! You tell whether you've have brushed your teeth yet or no)

Rayan: ji muma...upar aunty ne karwa diya! (Yes muma! Aunty helped me in it)

Gauri: (strictly) Rayan kitni baar kaha hai aapse khud se kiya karo...aise cheejien bhi aunty se karwaani hain kya aapko? ( rayan how many times have I told you to do your chores by yourself. You don't have to trouble aunty for all these things)

Gauri calls out to alka ( the nanny of her kids)

Alka: ji mam! (yes mam)

Gauri: alka omira kahan hai (where is omira)

Omira and rayan are twins and rayan is elder by 5 mins

Alka: mam wo apni dance practice ke liye gyi hai...aaj uski teacher ne subeh bulaya tha!! Bas thodi der main rayan baba or main use le aayenge jaake! (Mam she has gone for her dance practice! Her teacher had called her for morning class...Rayan and I will go and pick her up in sometime)

Gauri: theek hai alka! Tum rayan ke liye naashta laga do! Main office ke liye taiyaar hoti hoon... ( Ok alka! Please make rayan eat his breakfast. I will get ready for my office)

Rayan: muma aap office se kab aayengi? ( mom when will you be back from office)

Gauri: sham tak aa jaungi...Kya hua rayaan? (Will be back by evening...What happened rayan?)

Rayan: muma aaj hume school se chutti hai toh hum sham ko park challenge na? (Mom today is our off dayso can we go to the park)

Gauri: jee bilkul chalenge...Main jaldi aa jaungi fer chalenge!

Chalo ab breakfast karlo (Yes sure! I will come early and then we will go...now do your breakfast)

Rayan goes to have breakfast while gauri gets dressed for her office and leaves...

Meanwhile at OM

At breakfast table

All the elder oberois are sittiing on the breakfast table to have their breakfast. Nobody speaks anything because gone are those days when the oberoi dinning table was full of laughter...Gone are those days since gauri and bhavya left this house leaving Omkara and rudra behind...

The elder oberois still sit together for their meals but the younger oberois hardly speak to each other...

In Shivika's room

Shivay: anika where is my breakfast?

Anika: maine mangwa diya hai aata he hoga...(I have told them to bring it...Must be here any moment)

Shivay: I'm getting late please make it fast...where is anshi?

Note: anshi is their adopted daughter...She is 4 years old.

Anika: dance class main gyi hai? ( She has gone for her dance class)

Shivay: aaj itni subeh kaise? (Why did she go this early)

Anika: school ki chutti hai toh subeh hai dance class... (since it's her off from school...)

And there enters the butler with the breakfast...Shivay hurriedly has it and leaves kissing anika...

In Ruvya's room

rudra is trying to calm his 1 year old son who is crying since his mother went to shower..

Rudra: bhavya jaldi karo yaar! Ruvyan kab se ro raha hai.

(Bhavya hurry up!! Ruvyan has been crying since long)

Bhavya comes out and takes ruvyan who calms down as soon as he goes in his mother's lap...

The butler brings in their breakfast and rudra makes bhavya have hers while she is putting ruvyan to sleep...After her morning chores she goes to hand over ruvyan to jhanvi

Bhavya: mom aap ruvyan ko dekh lijiye..main nikal rahi hoon (Mom Please take care of ruvyan; I'm leaving for work)

Jhanvi: theek hai beta.. Tum jaao ( Ok dear...you go)

Bhavya: Bye mom...

Jhanvi: bhavya!

Bhavya: ji mom? ( yes mom)

Jhanvi: beta gauri ka kuch pta chala kya?? Kahan hai wo? Kaise hai wo? ( Child! Did you find anything about gauri? Where is she? How is she?)

Bhavya: nhn mom...maine bhut koshish ki par unhone apni existence he mita di hai... (No mom...I've tried a lot but she has erased her existence altogether)

Jhanvi: beta main jaanti hoon ki mere dono bachon ne bahut badi galti ki thi par koi galti itni badi toh nhn ki uski maafi na ho ( Child! I know that both of my sons were wrong but every mistake has a punishment dear)

Bhavya: mom galti ek baar ho toh he galti rehti hai...baar baar ho toh gunah ya aadat hoti hai ; aur dono ki he maafi nhn hoti ( Mom; If done once it's a mistake but if repeated again and again then it's either a sin or a habit and both are unforgivable )

Jhanvi: hmmm...beta main tumahri shukar guzaar hoon jo tum yahaan laut kar waapis mere rudra ki zindagi main aagyi...( Child! I'm thankful to you that you chose to come back in my son's life)

Bhavya: mom rudra ne 2 saal apne ghar se door bitaaye muje manane ke liye...Toh main waapis sirf is liye aayi kyunki rudra ne mera bharosa jeeta aur mujhe yakeen dilaaya ki jo unhone pehle kiya wo galti wo dubaara nhn karenge!. Unhone hume dobaara se apne aap se pyaar karwaaya hai mom...agar yeh nhn hota oh hum waapis nhn aate.( Mom rudra stayed away from his family for 2 years only so that he is able to pacify me...And as far as my return is concerned I returned only because rudra worked hard and won my trust and made me believe that he would never hide anything from me again in his life...Had he not made me fall in love with him again I wouldn't have come back)

Jhanvi: jaaanti hoon beta! Aur main yeh chahti hoon ki kisi tarah gauri bhi waapis aajaye aur mere om ko fer se jeena sikha de... Na mera bacha hasta hai aur na he kisi se baat karta hai...bas ruvyan he hai jiske saath wo thoda halka mehsoos karta hai... ( I know child! And I want gauri to return just like you did...I want gauri to come back and teach om how to live his life...My son doesn't smile, doesn't talk to anybody anymore...Only with ruvyan he is a little relaxed)

Bhavya: aap chinta mat kijiye mom! Agar kismat main hai toh gauri bhabhi zaroor waapis aa jayengi!! ( don't worry mom! Gauri bhabhi will return if destiny has it in it)

And with this she leaves for her work

In Om's room...

A Room filled with darkness... A darkness that coincidently also fills his life... And there in between so many beautiful paintings we see omkara finishing off his painting- A Painting Of The Love Of His Life..- His GAURI...

Zindagi ke 5 saal beet gye gauri tumahre bina par bas beete hain...maine zindagi kaati hai jee nhn hai...aur na he aage jeena chahta hoon gauri...Uss din tumhari aankhon main mujhe mere liye pyaar nhn dikha tha gauri; wo apnapan nhn dikha tha; dikha that oh sirf tumahra toota vishwaas...kaise rok sakta tha main tumhe? Uss din mujhe samjh main aaya ki kisi apne ko khone ka dukh kya hota hai gauri. Par muje yeh dukh manzoor hai gauri kyunki maine tumhe itna dukh pahunchaya hai...Main tumhe rokna chahta tha gauri; main tumse kehna bhi chahta tha ki mujhe chod ke mat jaao; Main tumhe btaana chahta tha ki main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon...Par kaise kehta main; kaise btata main; kaise rokta main? Maine tumse pyaar toh kar liya par kabhi jita nhn paaya; Maine tumse shaaadi toh karli par kabhi nibha nhn paaya; Maine tumpe bharosa toh karliya par kabhi tumhe iska ehsaas nhn dilaaya...Yehi meri saza hai gauri ki tum mujse door raho! Yahi meri saza hai ki tum sirf meri yaadon main raho. Mujhe bhaut dard hota hai jab main humare baare main sochta hoon; sochta ki maine tumhe kitne dukh diye hain; kitni takleef pahunchaayi hai...Iss dard ki dawa tum ho par mujhe yeh dawa nhn chaheye kyunki main tumhe deserve nhn karta hoon...

( 5 years have passed without you gauri! 5 years of my life I have spent breathing...just breathing ; I haven't lived any of the moments in these 5 years and neither do I want to live any in the future. That day when you left I didn't see any love, any care, any emotion in your eyes for me. The only thing I saw was the deceive and the broken trust...So how could I have stopped you gauri? That was the day I finally understood how it feels to lose someone dear..But I accept this pain gauri because I deserve this for hurting you. I wanted to stop you gauri; I wanted to tell you to not go leaving me; I wanted to tell you that I love you...BUT how could I tell you; how could I stop you and how could I ask you? I loved you but could never express it; I married you but could never fulfill it; I trusted you but could never made you believe. My punishment is to stay away from you. My punishment is to live only with your memories. It hurts me everytime when I think of our memories...It gives me pain to think of how many times I have hurt you when you were there with me...The medicine to my pain is you gauri but I don't want this since I very well know that I don't deserve you)

Scene shifts to gauri...She is seen entering a big building which states---- Omiray Fashion Hub...

She is in her Business suit and as soon as she enters the entire staff greets her to which she greets back but without any emotions...

She gets into her cabin and her PA anjali comes in with her schedule...

Anjali: Mam The Oberoi Group wants to meet with us and they have been repeatedly trying to get an appointment

Gauri: Just tell them we aren't interested to deal with them... I don't want further discussions on this.. Are we clear?

Anjali: ( shivering) ye...yes mam!

Gauri: I'm going to leave early today so if you need my signatures make sure to get them done beforehand...

Anjali: sure mam!

And she leaves..

Gauri's POV

5 saal beet gye! Sab kuch badal gya; waqt; haalat aur hum. hum bhi badal gye; humari pehchaan badal gyi. Gauri kumari sharma se hum riya sharma ban gyi; humne apni padhayi poori karli; apna khud ka fashion house khol liya jo ki aaj india ka number 1 fashion house hai aur wo bina kisi ki madad se... Inn 5 saalon ne hume bahut kuch sikhaya hai...aage badhna; apne aap bar bharosa karna aur sabse badi baat apne aap se pyaar karna.. Ab humari zindagi bas humare bachon ke liye hai...Aaj hum ek aise muqaam pe hain jahan pe oberois; wo oberois jo kisi waqt pe hume kisi layaak nhn samjhte the aaj wo humse milne ke liye appointment le rahe hain. Par ab hum unse nhn milna chahte! Nhn chahte ki unka saaya bhi humpe yaa humare bachon pe padhe...

( 5 years have passed and everything has changed..time; circumstances and I. Yes I have changed; my identity has changed. I have become Riya Sharma from Gauri Kumari Sharma. I have completed my education; opened my own fashion house which is alsi India's leading fashion house at the moment and that too without anybody's help!. Hese 5 years have taught me a lot...- To move forward; to have faith in yourself and the biggest truth is to love yourself. Now my life belongs only to my kids... Today I am at the position where THE OBEROIS- the ones who didn't have any faith in me back in the day want to deal with me But now I'm not interested in keeping any relations with them; be it personal or professional)

her chain of thoughts was broken by a sudden entry and she shouts Siddharth ( sid) tumse humne kitni baar kaha hai ki aise mat aaya karo...office hai humara.. ( How many times have I told you to not come like this?? It's my office)

Gauri and sid are best friends..The only solace for gauri besides her mother...

SID: tumhe pta hai ri ki main sunne waala nhn hoon toh try bhi kyun karti ho? ( You very well know that I won't listen to you so why do you even try?)

Gauri ( rolling her eyes): acha btao kya baat hai jo itni jaldi jaldi main aaye ho? Waise itne days se ghar nhn aaye? ( Ok now tell the reason you are here in a hurry? And why did you not come home since so many days?)

SID: acha btao ki mera champ or omira kaise hain? Miss kiya unhone mujhe? Tumne he toh mujhe business deal ke liye bheja tha aura b khud he bhool gyi?? ( Ok now tell me how is my champ and how is omira?? Did they miss me?? And you were the one to send me out for a business deal and now you don't remember?)

Gauri: oh!! Haan yaar..bhool gyi! Waise bahut miss kiya hai tumhare champ or omira ne tumhe...( Oh!! Yes I forgot...But your champ and omira missed you a lot)

SID: chalo fer main sham ko aaunga unhe milne...bahut din hogye hain unse mile..( ok then I will come and meet them in the evening...It's been many days since I met them)

Gauri and SID are business partners along with being best friends...So while working they kept on chit chatting...

Meanwhile at Oberoi Group

Shivay's PA: Sir there was a call from Omiray Fashion Hub.

SHivay: so did we get the appointment for our meeting?

PA: ( bowing her head down) I'm sorry sir; but they said that they don't want to deal with us..

SHivay: Go and get me the damn appointment . We always want the best for our company and right now That company is leading...I want the appointment. You understand??

PA: Sir but the receptionist that Ms.Riya Sharma would not like to have any deals with the Oberois...

SHivay throws away his phone in anger seeing which his PA runs away... Running his hands through his hair...You will have to deal with The oberois Ms.Sharma ...

Meanwhile at OM

Omkara was going to his studio and while passing by he crosses jhanvi;

Jhanvi: beta tumne khaaya? ( did you eat)

Om: bhook nhn hai; jab hogi khaa loonga ( I'm not hungry. I will eat when I get hungry) and with this he walks off...

Jhanvi's POV

Gauri ke jaane ke baad se kisi se baat nhn karta; time pe khaana nhn khaata; time pe sota nhn hai . Jab dekho apni paintings main dooba rehta hai... Mujhe pta hai ki wo gauri ki paintings bna ke unse baatein karta hai; apne deukh such share karta hai...aur hazaar baar uski paintings se maafi bhi maang chukka hai...Par kaash yeh sab karne se gauri waapis aa sakti!!

Hey bhagwaan kuch toh aisa karo jisse mere bache ki zindagi main gauri waapis aajaye; usse maaf karde...Kyunki jab tak gauri om ko maaf nhn karti tab tak wo apne aap ko saza deta rahega...

( Since the time gauri has left; he doesn't talk to anybody; doesn't eat on time; doesn't sleep on time. He is always lost in his paintings! And I know that he is making potraits of gauri...I know that he talks to those paintings; discusses his sorrows and happiness with those paintings and I know that he must have asked for forgiveness from those paintings...I wish gauri could return with this!!

Oh God! Please do something and pave a way for gauri to return in his life and forgive him...for I know that he will keep punishing himself until gauri forgives him)

Outside a dance academy,

Omira and anshi were waiting for their respective cars to come and pick them up!! Bored and tired of waiting they started running around here and there when suddenly omira falls and ends up injuring her knee and starts crying...

Anshi's car arrives and anika gets down to get her daughter when she sees omira; her daughter's friend injured so she takes her to Oberoi Mansion for the first aid...On the way to Oberoi mansion omira calls gauri and tells her about her wound! Gauri panicks listening to her daughter's cries and calms her down and tells her to be strong and she will be there...

Sid who was with gauri when she received the phone call asks: kya hua ri??

Gauri: yaar sid omira ko chot lag gyi hai aur wo apni dost anshi ke ghar main hai ab ( Actually omira ahs hurt herself and now she is at her frien's place)

SID: toh chalo ri! Hume chalna chaheye! Meri princess dard main hogi.. ( come ri let's go...My princess must be in pain)

Gauri gets alka's phone who tells her that she was late because of traffic and now omira isn't there outside the dance academy.. Gauri tells her to reach anshi's house because omira is hurt and she along with sid will join them..

At OM

Omira comes in with anshi and anika and as soon as she enters omkara comes in too and he is shocked seeing omira who resembles gauri so much...

OM's POV

Yeh bachi toh bilkul meri aur gauri tarah dikh rahi hai...agar gauri aur meri koi beti hoti toh bilkul aisi he dikhti... mujhe iss bachi ko dekh ke kuch ajeeb sa feel ho raha hai... Iski aakhon main mujhe wahi mahsoomiyat nazar aa rahi hai jo gauri ki aakhon main hoti thi

( This child is an exact mixture of gauri and me...If gauri and I would have had a daughter surely she would be like her...I have a different kind of feeling looking at this girl...I can see the same innocence in her eyes like gauri had)

jhanvi comes out and is surprised seeing a new guest and gels with her quickly.. jhanvi is surprised when omkara offers to dress her wound... Jhanvi is happy seeing her son talk to the little girl who she feels rembles her son...

Omira: aapka kya name hai uncle? ( what is your name uncle?)

Omkara : (smiling) omkara aur aapka ( and yours)

Omira : Omira sharma

Then her brother comes running to her...

Omira: rayan! tum yahan kaise aaye? tumhe kaise pta main yahan hoon? ( Rayan? how are you here? How did you know of my whereabouts?)

Rayan: muma ne phone pe alka aunty ko btaya... ( Mom told alka aunty) tumhe zaada chot toh nhn lagi na ( You aren't hurt much right?)

jhanvi & Omkara notice the siblings and can't help but notice the resemblance they both have with om and gauri so omkara and jhanvi introduce themselves to rayan and asks him his parents name

Omira and rayan: Riya sharma is our mother..

Sid and gauri on the other hand are driving towards anshi's house and gauri is shocked when they reach...Gauri is shocked to see her past infront of her; she is shocked to realise that both of her kids are in OM and would have met them by now...Sid notices and understanding her condition says- Ri please calm down!! i know this isn't going to be easy but you will have to for champ and princess... Please ri... A scared ri hugs sid while he strokes her hair consoling her...

Bucking up gauri gets out of the car and walks towards the main hall with sid...Seeing her there rayan runs and shouts MUMMMAAA...and omira while limping walks over to sid and hugs him and kisses him...

Omkara is shocked to see that riya sharma is none other than his gauri...

Thank you for reading it guys!! i was very nervous while writing it and posting it... I don't if you guys liked it or no...Or if you were expecting something else... But guys please hit the like button if you enjoyed it and leave comments to let me know how it was and if you need any changes... I will be more than happy to do so for you!!

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