MERE HUMKADAM [COMPLETED]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Guys I am back with a new idea of mine to torture you all 😆 I had some free time so this idea clicked my mind it is not related to any serial or so that is why I didn't posted it & now I wanted to post here to have your reviews .

I hope har baar ki tarah ye aatyachar bhi aap loog jheel lenge 🤔 Hope you all will like this concept & support me. I will post the parts soon & please give your feedback on CS & Prologue given below.






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Posted: 9 years ago
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MERE HUMKADAM

PROLOGUE


There is a saying "Marriages are made in heaven" & relation of husband & wife has many flavors and it is the closest relation to anyone's heart as it is considered to be for the life time.

It may have many ups & downs, tiffs and some bitter-sweet moments but still when the time comes to stand by each other in difficult situations true life partners always stay strong in such situations. True life partners might have different like's dislikes different life styles & aspirations but their love and compatibility makes everything easier between them.

Love trust and compatibility are the three main pillars of any marriage but what about 2 people having different background, life & aspirations get married without any of these feelings then their relation will surely won't survive for a longer time. Will this journey make them soul mates for ever or will they part ways in the tough situations of life.


SNEAK PEAK


A Lady in late twenties in bridal attire appears to be sleeping on the decorated bed with flowers. After a while a Man in early thirties enters the room locking the door behind.

He sees his bride, her face didn't have a glow of a new bride it was pale and anxiety was evident from her face, dried tear drops on the corner of her eyes showed that she had cried a lot.

Man sighed in defeat and marched towards his new wife on the bed to speak to her as she had gone through a big shock.

He went near her and sits down placing a palm on her shoulders and gently called her "Anika! ... Anika!" When she didn't responded to the call after several attempts he with a jerk turned her to himself & she landed on his chest in totally unconscious state.

Man panicked at her state and scooped her in his arms & ran down instructing the old caretaker "Kaka meri dispensary ka door jaldi kholiye"

Seeing unconscious Anika in his arms caretaker asked in a worried tone opening the door "inhe kya hua Chote Malik"

He said handling the situation "Wo uski tabiyat theek nahi hai isliye behosh ho gayi aur dhyan rahe ye baat kisi se mat kahiyega kham kha sab pareshaan hoonge ... ab aap jaayiye" with that he placed Anika on the table closing the door & started to check her properly.

Her hands were cold and her pulse was slow, it was clear that it was a panic attack. After giving her injection and some medicines he kept on monitoring her.

He held her hand sat near her taking a chair and after few hours she opens her eyes muttering for water. He gives her water & after dinking she turns to her husband with a choked voice saying "Yog! Ye kyu kiya aapne? "

AI MERE HUMKADAM

MERE DIL KEE DHADKAN ME, SANGIT TUMHARA HAI

JARA SUN KE DEKHO TUM

SANGIT TUMHARA HAI, HAR GIT TUMHARA HAI

KAHE SANSO KEE SARGAM, AI MERE HUMDAM

MERE DIL KEE DHADKAN ME, SANGIT TUMHARA HAI

JARA SUN KE DEKHO TUM

KABHEE KABHEE SOCHU MAI, KYA HU MAI TERE BINA

JO BHEE HU USAME HAI TEREE SADHANA

TUJH ME HU MAI MUJH ME HO TUM

AYE MERE HUMKADAM MERE DIL KEE DHADKAN ME

SANGIT TUMHARA HAI, JARA SUN KE DEKHO TUM

PUREE HUYEE AASHAYE, MUJH SE MIL KE SABHEE

MILTA RAHE SATH TERAA, DUR NAA HONA KABHEE

BANATEE KHUSHEE BATENGE GUM

AI MERE HUMKADAM, MERE DIL KEE DHADKAN ME

SANGIT TUMHARA HAI, JARA SUN KE DEKHO TUM

SANGIT TUMHARA HAI

HAR GIT TUMHARA HAI, KAHE SANSO KEE SARGAM

CHARACTERIZATION: Characters are:

ACP Anika Purohit: A simple sweet natured girl from a middle class family & an IPS officer by profession & very tough cop with a sharp vision loves her family a lot now married to Dr. Yogendra Vashish




Dr. Yogendra Vashisht: He is from a high class political family a famous Doctor and surgeon by profession. He is soft sweet hearted and a carefree person. His friends call him Yog'




Dr Jaanawaaz Siddiqui & Dr. Jannat Siddiqui: Friends of Yog they support him a lot they both are Doctor by profession & assist Yog in his hospital & researches.




IAS Manohar Vashisht: Father of Yog he is a famous Senior Bureaucrat with an honest reputation he loves his only son a lot. He lost his wife long ago & brought up his son all alone.



Rama Kant Vashisht & Manjula Vashisht: Younger brother of Manohar famous political personality and Manjula is his beautiful wife and a pure home maker.




Raghavendra Vashisht & Bhoomija Vashisht : Son & Daughter in law of Rama Kant Raghav is an year older than Yog and Bhoomija is a sweet natured girl and a home maker. They got married 2 years ago




Dr. Girish Purohit & Mamta Purohit: Girish is a renowned senior Doctor and a helpful person Mamta is his second wife his first wife Manasvi died in an accident leaving a small Anika in his lap. Mamta is a home maker but being a step mother of Anika she doesn't like her much.



Adya Purohit: Daughter of Girish & Mamta she is on a way to become a Doctor like her father and is bright sweet natured girl. She loves her sister Anika a lot.






I will add more characters if required as the story progresses.😊


So how was it ? please give your Reviews 😊







Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CS N PROLOGUE -- PAGE 1
PART 1 ---- PAGE 3
PART 2 ---- PAGE 6
PART 3 ---- PAGE 10
PART 4 ---- PAGE 13
PART 5 ---- PAGE 16
PART 6 ---- PAGE 19
PART 7 ---- PAGE 23
PART 8 ---- PAGE 26
PART 9 ---- PAGE 29
PART 10 ---- PAGE 32
PART 11 ---- PAGE 35
PART 12 ---- PAGE 39
PART 13 ---- PAGE 45
PART 14 ---- PAGE 48
PART 15 ---- PAGE 52
PART 16 ---- PAGE 57
PART 17 ---- PAGE 61
PART 18 ---- PAGE 65
PART 19 ---- PAGE 69
PART 20 ---- PAGE 74









Edited by --GOLD-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NOTE

Guys I will update this FF depending upon my work & ur responses too If u don't find the prologue apt n I have less comments I will stop right here n will not update the parts further or I will be shifting it to blog for my genuine interested readers I think itna attyachaar kaafi hoga 🤔 so please let me know that weather I should continue or not 😊 & If you guys liked it please let me know through your comments & wait for this story to unfold. 🤗


Love & Regards


Your's Goldie







Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ah! Goldie Is Back with a new story! 😃
Lovely Concept and The Prolouge Is Amazingly Intriguing. 👏
Love The CS and few characters are lovely and well suited for the role too. ❤️


Thanx For Pm.
Update Soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hmmm...nice concept dear
thanks for PM
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very awesome prologue goldie
and i like the concept
mujhe cs bahut pyaara laga i love all
thanks for the pm dear
update soon.. okkk
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing prologue,continue soon n thanks for pm

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