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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Awesome Update Goldie. Love You Lots.🤗

Another beautiful story meets it's conclusion and I can't be more happier.⭐️

Loved Yog Anika's morning scene.❤️Yog is such a cutie pie who wants Anika to be in his arms.😆😆😆I loved how Anika called out his bachpana.😳
Their consummation was beautiful and it just added on to their luck. So many happy news back to back!⭐️
Loved their Amsterdam and Mauritius trip.❤️

I'm so so proud of Anika for her achievements as being the youngest police officer, and Yog toh is the coolest doctor.😉
So Radhika And Anay got married too, and I liked how Anika worked up for this relationship too. :*
She's a doll.

Awieee Yog and Anika got blessed with fraternal twins! Yaganshi and Aniket.❤️
Even Jannat and Jahnawaaz got blessed with a baby boy.😳
I'm happy that things got sorted between Manohar, Ramakant and Manjula. Glad that they realized their mistakes.

Happy that Om and Adya got settled in their lives too and finally Anika's step mother realized her mistake.
Everything settled down happily and Yog Anika's love just goes deeper.❤️
I will miss this story.
Start something new soon, please.


Thanx For Pm.
Keep Writing.


Thanks Shanu dear glad you liked it
Love you lots 🤗
Yes definitely all well that ends well ... Finally all settled at perfect place
Yes it was their fresh start to a new phase of life ... And now definitely Yog will be more naughty and surely wants Anika in his arms 😳 True for Anika these things are bachpana as she has never been into such relationships
It's was really important for their mutual understanding
Yes many good things on their way
As a lady yes I. Am too and infact her entire family is proud of her as her achievements are very rare ... Yog is really a sweetheart and cool person
Anika knows her brother well that's why she selected a girl like Radhika
Yes they are blessed with cute twins even Jalal is really sweet
It might have sorted but the crunch will always be there in the family ... Even if everything is normal but Manjula had drawn a line which cannot be erase ever
Yes finally Mamta got a great lesson from what happened and now she realized that she was completely wrong in judging Anika and her attitude too changed completely
Yes their love became deeper and beautiful ... Miss karo to dubaara pad Lena
Keep loving my work 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
thank you 👏👏such a wonderful journey you took us to. enjoyed the story.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shoobie

thank you👏👏such a wonderful journey you took us to. enjoyed the story.


Thanks Shoobie dear
Glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: duhasaad

amazing update dear

continue soon


Thanks dear glad you liked it
Story ended dear
Keep loving my work 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SJ001

Awesome update dear,continue soon

Thanks Jiya
Story Ended dear 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG!!!
diii... this beautiful FF ended?? so soon?! nooo...😭

coming back😆
so many thins happened, quite quickly! life has its pace, but loved it! every event was beautifully penned!⭐️ loved it to the core!
a family reunion, happy one, how sweet! everything ended on a happy note, wonderful! 👏
mummy papa, bachhe, dada-dadi, nana-nani, chacha-chachi, mama-mami, maasi,...haillaa.. itna saara ek saath, delicious cocktail! 👍🏼

Perfect relation is .. bounce back to normal, whoa, superb!! these lines stole the update! Very rightly said, affection is always greater than perfection!❤️👏

I'm eager to read more from you, so come up with another awesome ff! Don't know when I'd read it, but I will surely do it! 😃

thanks for pms

🤗
Lots of love,
You know😛😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

OMG!!!

diii... this beautiful FF ended?? so soon?! nooo...😭

coming back😆
so many thins happened, quite quickly! life has its pace, but loved it! every event was beautifully penned!⭐️loved it to the core!
a family reunion, happy one, how sweet! everything ended on a happy note, wonderful!👏
mummy papa, bachhe, dada-dadi, nana-nani, chacha-chachi, mama-mami, maasi,...haillaa.. itna saara ek saath, delicious cocktail!👍🏼

Perfect relation is .. bounce back to normal, whoa, superb!! these lines stole the update! Very rightly said, affection is always greater than perfection!❤️👏

I'm eager to read more from you, so come up with another awesome ff! Don't know when I'd read it, but I will surely do it!😃

thanks for pms

🤗
Lots of love,
You know😛😉


Thanks Neha dear glad you liked it
Main ye ab tak ki sabse Badi FF likhi hai ye
Yes life ha it's pace ...So many things back to back
True a complete picture of a happy family
But there is a still line drawn in the family by Manjula that cannot be errase
These are not mere lines but truth of life
True no one is perfect but such love makes you complete
Sure you will shortly read new stuff
Keep loving my work 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chalo di finally i sat back to write some lines about this baby of urs for the last time. Iss bar no sorry for being late kyun ki meri mood off hai thori, with a heavy heart i am writing, as the journey ended but at the same time it fills the mind with a unique sense of completeness coz yog and ani's life, it seems has entered a new phase. The rhythm of life never stops just as u say there is no end to love & affection. Everyday its a new beginning with the renewal of the same feelings , emotions and promises to cherish whatever life has offered till now.
Yog and ani's morning romance was really sweet and i must say these two inspite of being so mature sensible and responsible citizen r cuteness personified. Congrats to this lovely couple for all the big achievements in such an early age which rings in synchrony with their success of life.

Loved their trip which made their bond ever strong. Ani, now with every bit of insecurity and hitches removed is at complete bliss and enjoying with yog. Radhika is a sweet girl and omg what a surprise she got but introduction with shashank was probably much more. Not only her project strengthened but she also got a life partner in anay. Loved ani's matchmaking and anay's style of answering was too gud. Anay and radhika made a nice couple.

Oh, the pregnancy news made ani speechless & overwhelmed. Its bound to be. The birth of all the kids just added to the fun and merriment. These small ones r symbol of their parents love as their names suggests. While reading the updt i was imagining all the kids at play. Lovely. Thank god that jhanvi also got back her family after getting fully cured.

Finally, with manjula and mamta realising their mistakes made the family complete and increased the optimism of the story. Though they have permanently creased the relationships and what they have done, though can be forgiven but never forgotten, still the fact that their respective families have accepted them, only lessen the effect of their deeds.

Yog ani's convo at the end was superb di. Marvellous lines which not only enriched the essence of the story, but at the same time increased the aptness of the title "MERE HUMKADAM". An awesome story altogether and beautifully wrapped up with no ragged edges. Precise choice of characters with perfectly scripted dialogues enhancing the beauty of the emotions.

Feeling sad to let it go but kya kare...its one of the fundamental rules of life and this is undoubtedly the best ending that this story can have. Just like life goes on, i hope similarly does ur story writing.

Waiting for the next one to come on board. Till then... I bid adieu. Thanks for such a fabulous story di. Love u lots and loads.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: utsha

Chalo di finally i sat back to write some lines about this baby of urs for the last time. Iss bar no sorry for being late kyun ki meri mood off hai thori, with a heavy heart i am writing, as the journey ended but at the same time it fills the mind with a unique sense of completeness coz yog and ani's life, it seems has entered a new phase. The rhythm of life never stops just as u say there is no end to love & affection. Everyday its a new beginning with the renewal of the same feelings , emotions and promises to cherish whatever life has offered till now.

Yog and ani's morning romance was really sweet and i must say these two inspite of being so mature sensible and responsible citizen r cuteness personified. Congrats to this lovely couple for all the big achievements in such an early age which rings in synchrony with their success of life.

Loved their trip which made their bond ever strong. Ani, now with every bit of insecurity and hitches removed is at complete bliss and enjoying with yog. Radhika is a sweet girl and omg what a surprise she got but introduction with shashank was probably much more. Not only her project strengthened but she also got a life partner in anay. Loved ani's matchmaking and anay's style of answering was too gud. Anay and radhika made a nice couple.

Oh, the pregnancy news made ani speechless & overwhelmed. Its bound to be. The birth of all the kids just added to the fun and merriment. These small ones r symbol of their parents love as their names suggests. While reading the updt i was imagining all the kids at play. Lovely. Thank god that jhanvi also got back her family after getting fully cured.

Finally, with manjula and mamta realising their mistakes made the family complete and increased the optimism of the story. Though they have permanently creased the relationships and what they have done, though can be forgiven but never forgotten, still the fact that their respective families have accepted them, only lessen the effect of their deeds.

Yog ani's convo at the end was superb di. Marvellous lines which not only enriched the essence of the story, but at the same time increased the aptness of the title "MERE HUMKADAM". An awesome story altogether and beautifully wrapped up with no ragged edges. Precise choice of characters with perfectly scripted dialogues enhancing the beauty of the emotions.

Feeling sad to let it go but kya kare...its one of the fundamental rules of life and this is undoubtedly the best ending that this story can have. Just like life goes on, i hope similarly does ur story writing.

Waiting for the next one to come on board. Till then... I bid adieu. Thanks for such a fabulous story di. Love u lots and loads.


Thanks Utsha dear glad you liked it

Love you lots too

Well Yes Yog & Anika are now in a new beautiful phase of life in which they are supporting & cherishing their love for each other & yes it's really a satisfaction to see their life complete & full of Love & happiness which Anika desired since her childhood

Very True life never stops ... it changes & keeps on going but with a companion everything becomes easy to handle ... & with a partner like Yog & Anika it really becomes a bliss. You said it rightly there is no end to love & this emotion & feeling only makes love time less deep & a pious feeling.

Yog will now become bit sweet & romantic towards his wife as now finally in true sense they are soul mates &he has a strong reason after so much difficulties he got Anika back ... & yes they both are cuteness personified. Very few get such opportunities and such success in such a young age but credit goes to their hard work & determination that they had showed towards their work & this happiness & success is deserved by them.

This trip was required to bring both of them closer & understand each other in a better way. True Radhika is sweet & poor girl got a surprise when she came to know that Anika is her Sister in law. True it's turned out to be fruitful for her project & her life too. She really got a beautiful life partner Anay. Anika knows her brother too well that is why she selected a girl like Radhika for him who can complete his life & his home.

Being a mother for every female is overwhelming & Anika is no different & it completed them in every sense. Yes Kids are symbol of their parents love & affection. Home full of children is full of happiness. Jaanvi & Maanv also got together after the instance they realized that they were wrong.

Regarding Mamta & Manjula, Mamta can be forgiven for as she what she did was insecurity of a mother but what Manjula did cannot be forgotten she has drawn a line which no one can erase in Vashisht family, but still all are humans & imperfect so they were accepted.

Yes the story essence is all about loving sharing & caring all life that is why I named it "MERE HUMKADAM".

You know you will surely get a new stuf soon so don't feel sad & you already had a glimpse of it too

Keep loving my work

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