MERE HUMKADAM [COMPLETED] - Page 29

Originally posted by: utsha

Sorry for being late again di. But still coming straight to the point.

PART 4:

Anika is going through a big dilema but its refreshing to see that her mind has started reasoning out the situation she is stuck into without being a damsel in distress & thus the slow, gradual realisations which is dawning on her is equally welcoming which is the outcome of her strong rationality and mental framework.

Once she realises that she has started falling for Yog, then probably it will be easier for her a little bit , to give a ear to what Yog has to convey. And moreover it will be easier for him to reveal the secret which i already do have a vive that it will be in the favour of Yog only.

Its hightime Yog should understand that why anika behaved like a patient witnout anaesthesia and ofcourse a machchar too. Kaisa doc hai bhai??? Hell bent on making anika understand his feelings but he couldnt decipher her behaviour!!!!!. Probably its beyond his anticipation for the time being. He he he bechara.

I think jannat understood, even hinted but left it in the hands of time. Liked Yog & Jannat convo. Anika and dutta will make a neat team in finding out the culprits. Hope they will get a breakthrough soon.

Loved and laughed along with Yog's one liners and this update is filled with them. Starting from anaesthesia to goodnight mosquito to rakshash...each one was too good to cherish.

OMG! Again attack. And anika injured like this. This is not just responsibility for sure. Ek dil doosre se mil rahe hai ahista ahista.

Feeling bad for anika. Its a relief that she started listening to Yog without a protest.

Chalo Adya ka phn aa gayi. Waiting too see how she gets involved in Yog and Anika's life.

Originally posted by: utsha

I just forgot to mention that the recent findings by anika about DRDO has changed the course of my thoughts and channels of logic regarding the attacks on Yog. Its truly really grave and way too profound to anticipate right at this moment.

PART 5:

So finally Adya came to meet her sister and becoz of her the curtains were drawn from the much awaited secret. Anika was surprised to discover the level of comfort b/w Om and adya but i have a question. Even if she didnt know about their affair still she did have a knowledge about their wedding. Isnt it?? And as far as i remember she thought about a proposal for yog and adya's marriage. Its was purely arranged so if Yog chosed anika and adya felt bad about it , then could she had married somebody else that early???

Yog was absolutely right in judging anika. I now fully appreciate that he was waiting for the correct time to blurt out the truth. Anika couldnt have bear this given that she had pushed some part of her logical sense behind regarding yog and girish health didnt help her either. Only if she could have used her cop mind a bit. She is a little bit too good for her own harm. Its ok as long we live alone in this world but its alarming when others close to us has to pay for it.

The confrontation was very much needed but never thought that a sorry by anika and its acceptance by yog will make matters this complicated. But all is well that ends well. Finally even if not everything ,but the foundation of the staggering relationship has ultimately sailed through the tough times. Though , not all, but the major insecurities were erased , and most difficult questions were dealt with, albeit in a complex manner but hope this lovely couple find the right track of their life soon.

Yog's worries about their life were very justified and i will definitely go by his decision of taking the first step towards making everything normal. Its obvious that Yog's I LOVE U ANIKA will have a diffetent impact on her now. Anika will feel it in a completely different way this time. Yog's last lines left me speechless even more. We often love somebody and like to understand the person without him or her talking about his or her likes and dislikes. But its not so often that, when someone loves the other one so deeply that even after understanding her so well, cares to know about the human being from the person herself. Yog was thinking of making the first move and the step he has taken... its the best to ease anika, nothing could have been better.

Well again its known to all that FRIENDSHIP is the basis of all relationship. Hope now anika will acknowledge Yog ang his love towards her quickly. And wish to see the case progressing as well.

Originally posted by: utsha

Ha ha ha ha ha. Thanks a ton for PART 6A di. Was dying to see this side of yog. He provided the much needed relief to the tensed phase of life they are going through. The walk was needed for anika and i was missing yog's tremendous sense of humour. Trust this guy to ease up any situation. Wow, toh our doc had a long list of gf to boast of... Even anika answered back in the same tone.

Anika is a source of inspiration for others as she has become so successful in her life but her childhood story makes others sympathetic towards her. Even yog too have an ideal supportive family.

Toh finally the flower of love is blossoming between the lovebirds. Even anika is responding too. Good to see the cop hasnt lost her feminine shyness and yog's lame excuse he he he he pani hata raha tha he he he.

Finally it seems anika and dutta got a lead even though small but who can say that this ash doesnt hide a glowing fire beneath it. I have complete trust on anika that she will find the intruders.

Oh no anika is getting over stressed. Her dreams are proof of her mental state and the tension she is handling. Hope she gets a bigger lead from dutta which helps her in unravelling the mystery.

Originally posted by: utsha

Thank u so much di for all the replies.

Though the story has progressed so far still i am posting my comments like this but i felt just becoz i am lagging behind doesnt mean i just do away with a single comment about what i felt regarding the story so far. It wont be justified. But at times i feel i get carried away while writing as i have read till part 10 already. So if u ever feel i am mixing it up all, pls mention.

And before i forget to mention i am overwhelmed seeing ur replies. U took time out to write such beautiful replies. THANK U once again. I will surely try to finish the rest asap.

Originally posted by: utsha

PART 7:

Yog , though a bit reserve but at the same time is a free spirited guy who is capable of giving serious gyan in the most humorous way any one can even think of. Just think about his lines on zindegi. Thus its quite refreshing to see him back to his old form all smiling and giggling. Afterall the burden is removed. Liked the convo b/w the 3 friends which left me pining for such true friends in my life also. Though i keep on saying i am content with life inspite of being a loner, but this story made me realise that even if we can manage without some relations but still its heavenly to have them in our life. As in friends like Jaanawaaz and Jannat.

The way anika dealt with the dacoit case ...👏👏👏. Superb. Di u r a master craftsman. When ever i read the updates and write the comments it usually get so large that i refrain form pointing some things which i like too. But its time to raise those i think. If i take it as a fiction, its really good, intriguing and many more adjectives will follow no doubt about it but often we fail to notice that u have managed to keep it so REALISTIC di. Simply hats off to u. Anika it never seemed is a female protagonist of the story.

On one hand she is dealing with terrorists, and on the other hand she hesitantly asks jannat whether yog told about his love to them or not. When we write something or form a character we have some qualities in mind. Its as if we r making idols but not many r there who can stick to the reality till the end. U deserve all the eulogies not only for writing such a story but also make us feel as if we r listening to somebody's struggle when ever we read it. Thus anika's q never seem out of place neither jannat's temporary blank reaction. Each word , each emotion add its own beauty to the update.

I am patting my back. See i guessed right. Ganapat was deliberately chosen so that a big hungama doesnt take place. And OMG 4 crore!!!!!!!. Finally anika and dutta are making a headway into the case. Really really hoping for major advancements di. And also a big fish to get caught in anika's web. Ending it now, will continue in the next part.

Thank u for the pm di. I forgot to mention it in the previous comments. Sorry.