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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Thanks Sona 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: etfr

superb dear...

nicely written
thanks for PM
update next soon


Thanks dear
Glad you liked it
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Awesome Update Goldie. Loved It.

Hmm.. So Anika and Yog have a flavor of misunderstandings among them. Anika wanted Yog to marry Adya but he liked her and asked for her hand instead owning to her father's health.

I don't see anything wrong in this, but then, I understand Anika's POV as she feels that Yog deceived her and tarnished her image in front of her step mother and Adya, that's understandable but she should really stop blaming herself for it. And for starters, I love Yog's sense of humor and Anika's Fieriness.😆😆😆
Both are like Fire And Ice!😆😉

But Yog is right that for her step mother, she never had any importance. I loved the FB of their first meet.😆😆
Anika is a strict ACP but a sweet lady at heart.😳


The conversation between Yaadav and that other man was..😆😆😆
Poor men got caught by her only.😆

Jannat And Jaanwaaz are one cute couple! Jaanawaaz and Yog!😆😆😆
Ek Piece mein waapas to Allout ke saath macchar! 🤣🤣
Its sweet, that Jannat understands Anika's Dilemma. ❤️

But I loved Anika Yog's last scene. ❤️
Hope Anika's father is alright.


Thanx For Pm.
Update Soon.


Thanks Shanu dear glad you liked it
Love you lots ⭐️
Yes it will start as a misunderstanding ... truth of this marriage will come in further parts
Anika is feeling deceived and helpless but once she knows truth will settle down
Yog ka gussa Anika se bhi khatarnak hai you will know that soon
Abhi to bahut kuch baaki hai
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
very nice one
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

very nice one

loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon

Thanks Tumpa Dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Thanks Haleema 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Awesome update yaar
Ek dam mast.loved it
N thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: ramshaasrar

Awesome update yaar
Ek dam mast.loved it
N thnx for pm


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
AWESOME update di. U r back with a bang. Suspence packed and a lot of questions clogging the mind. The story starts taking baby steps towars the unfolding of the mysteries.
Wonderful portrayal of the depth of the characters. Fb of their meet is quite realistic.

Yog - sensible, caring, with a slight touch of yet not lost humor. A depiction of matured innocence. Having a hard time in managing Anika and also the secret. but we guess he will sail throuh the tough times by virtue of his pure love for his wife.

Anika- matured and idealistic, which has quite shaped up her professional attitude as well. She is suffering from severe guilt conscious now, but will probably get over it after knowing the truth.

Janawaaj and Jannat- true friends who will prove to be an inevitable part in Yog and Anika's life and help them getting closer .

Last part is really beautiful where yog could finally manage to feed anika. No body did bow down before each other yet managed to have their way with each other and also convey their emotions too.

Thanks for the pm di and a lot more thanks for the story as well. Pls cont soon. Will be waiting eagerly.

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