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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: utsha

AWESOME update di. U r back with a bang. Suspence packed and a lot of questions clogging the mind. The story starts taking baby steps towars the unfolding of the mysteries.

Wonderful portrayal of the depth of the characters. Fb of their meet is quite realistic.

Yog - sensible, caring, with a slight touch of yet not lost humor. A depiction of matured innocence. Having a hard time in managing Anika and also the secret. but we guess he will sail throuh the tough times by virtue of his pure love for his wife.

Anika- matured and idealistic, which has quite shaped up her professional attitude as well. She is suffering from severe guilt conscious now, but will probably get over it after knowing the truth.

Janawaaj and Jannat- true friends who will prove to be an inevitable part in Yog and Anika's life and help them getting closer .

Last part is really beautiful where yog could finally manage to feed anika. No body did bow down before each other yet managed to have their way with each other and also convey their emotions too.

Thanks for the pm di and a lot more thanks for the story as well. Pls cont soon. Will be waiting eagerly.


Thanks Utsha dear
Glad you liked it
As it's a first part have patience
You will come to know soon about this
Regarding Yog you guessed it right but he has much more flavors that you will see in coming parts
Anika is an emotionally weak person & reason for that is also justified
Many more things coming up
& yes Jannat and Jaanawaaz are true friends
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Thanks Jiya 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
awesome start, n cs di
loved it
very interesting n intriguing story
bahot maza aaya padhne me
sorry for short comment
do continu soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

awesome start, n cs di

loved it
very interesting n intriguing story
bahot maza aaya padhne me
sorry for short comment
do continu soon
thanks for pm


Thanks Neha dear
Glad you liked it
Abhi to bas shuruaat hai
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
awsome yaar.
wow Aham Sharma as Yog. nice.
fabulous start yaar. Pm ke liye thanks.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ArjunfanNAJAAN

awsome yaar.
wow Aham Sharma as Yog. nice.
fabulous start yaar. Pm ke liye thanks.


Thanks dear
Glad you liked it 😊
Yes since I saw Mahabharat I liked Pooja and Ahem a lot 😃
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37


PART 2 A

Yog & Anika in no time rushed to the hospital to keep see Girish health as he was a heart patient thou he use to take care of his health but a heart stroke suddenly means something or the other has happened that had disturbed him.

Anika was thinking of all this in a drive and Yog could sense it that she was quite worried about her father. He said calming her "Don't worry sab theek ho jaayega"

After 20 minutes of drive they reached the hospital quickly and saw Girish in ICU & Mamta was waiting outside with tense expressions on her face. Yog without glancing at anyone went inside the ICU to check Girish & saw few Doctors were already treating him he gave a look at the report & once satisfied came out of the ICU.

He looked at the anxious faces of Anika & Mamta & said "ghabrane waali koi baat nahi hai ... mild stroke tha bas thode precaution ki zaroorat hai within 10 days wo theek ho jaayenge aur please dhyan rakhiyega ki unhe koi sadma na lage" with that he marched to the main Doctor's room to check with the arrangements and the treatment process.

Mamta & Anika were still not convinced after seeing Girish in ICU. After coming back from the room Yog said "aap loog itna tension kyu le rahe hai wo bilkul theek ho jaayenge unhe bas thode rest ki zaroorat hai aur ek baar wo hospital se discharge ho jaaye to main khud unhe monitor karunga ... jaanta hoon Doctors bahut bure patients hote hai"

Anika & Mamta took sigh of relief and after that all three started to wait for Girish to get back to senses. After a wait of 3 hours Girish opened his eyes & Nurse informed Doctor that Girish is now stable & in senses.

Anika Yog & Mamta rushed to the room but as it was ICU only few people were allowed inside. Yog first went inside & said looking at Girish "Kyu Papa research main meri madat nahi karni pade isliye bistar pakad liya?"

Girish smiled lightly at him & said "Beta! Ab to jab tak ye shareer chalega main tumhari madat karunga aur tum to waise bhi mujhe jaldi chutti dooge yaha se"

Yog smiled & said "aap kyu itna pareshaan ho rahe hai sab theek hai aur jitna nahi hai wo hum sab milkar kar leenge"

Girish said "Haan main jaanta hoon beta par Anika ke liye bahut darr lag raha hai mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise maine apni bacchi ke saath bahut galat kiya"

Yog said "aap dono na ek hi track pe sooch rahe hai aur aap Anika ki chinta mat keejiye wo aur main ab alag nahi hai ... aap usse baat kaeejiye aapko bhi tasalli ho jaayegi"

He calls Anika inside and Anika rushes to her father & asks "Papa aap kaise hai? Please aap zaroorat se zayada tension mat liya kariye aapko pata hai na aapki tabiyat kharab ho jaati hai"

Girish said with a light smile "Tabhi to tere liye Doctor dhoonda hai jo teri choto ka aur mere Dil ka khayal rakhe"

Anika smiled with teary eyes & said "ab aap aaram kariye warna yaha se jaldi chutti nahi milegi"

Girish said sweetly "Par yaha se chootte hi mujhe tere haath ke bane malai ke ladoo khane hai"

Anika smiled & said "aap jab ghar aayenge to appko tayyiyaar milenge" with that they marched out of ICU.

Anika was still not normal she was feeling guilty about her father's condition as she knew her father well he was stressed about her sudden marriage with Yog & his thoughts & hitches were completely justified. Even she was not sure about her relationship & how it will shape in future.

Her trance was broken by Mamta's call who said "Anika beta tum theek ho na? aur fikar mat karo tumhare Papa bahut jaldi theek ho jaayenge damaad ji aur doosre doctors hai na"

Anika smiled lightly at her. Mamta again said "tumne jobhi faisla liya wo theek liya beta varna tumhare Papa ko tumhari chita hamesha rehti hai ... meri Adya se baat hui thi wo apne Pati ke saath abhi Singapore main hai isliye maine tumhare Papa ki tabiyat ke baare main use kuch nahi bataya"

Anika said "Apne theek kiya choti Maa waise bhi wo 10 - 15 din main laut aayegi aur tab tak Papa bhi theek ho jaayenge"

Mamta said "Dekho Beta ab tumhari shadi ho chuki hai ab tumhe apne pati aur uske pariwaar ko samay dena hoga tumahre papa tum dono se emotionally bahut zayada jude hai is liye to tum dono ki shadi ke bad unhe ye sab ho gaya ...

main bas ye chahti hoon ki wo bhi is sach ko maan le ki ab sirf tum unki beti nahi ek patni hoo ek bahu bhi hoo tum dheere dheere unse thodi doori banana shuru karo shayad isse wo ye saari cheezein dil pe nahi leenge aur unhe bhi dheere dheere aadat ho jaayegi" Anika just nodded at her.

Here Yog who was speaking to a doctor nearby heard the conversation & boiled in anger. Yog came to her & said in a bit stern voice "Mummy Ji Anika ki shadi ho gayi hai iska matlab ye nahi ki use apne ghar se saare sambandh khatam karne hoonge aur Papa ki chinta jaayaz bhi hai aur main aapko yakeen dilata hoon ki unhe bahut jaldi itminaan ho jaayega ki unki dono betiyaan sukhi hai fir unhe chinta bhi nahi hoogi"

Mamta said "Damaad ji main jaanti hoon aur Anika humari bacchi hai ab uspe bahut saari zimmedaariyaa hongi na main nahi chahti ki koi uunch neech hoo aur ..."

Cutting her short "Mummy ji kya aapko apni beti pe bharosa nahi hai? ... yadi nahi hai to koi baat nahi mujhe meri patni pe poora bharosa hai aur hum dono humare pariwaar saari zimmedaariya acche se nibhayenge aur haan ab main aur Anika alag nahi hai to humare pariwaar bhi alag nahi hai isliye jitna haqq Anika ka is ghar pe hai utna mera bhi hai ... raat ho gayi hai hume chalna chahiye" he joined his hands wishing her & turned to Anika saying "Anika chalo deer ho rahi hai"

Anika nodded & after bidding bye to Mamta both sat in the car. Suddenly Yog exclaimed "Are Main apna mobile bhool gaya hoon tum wait karo main abhi leke aaya"

He rushed to the room inside & saw Mamta sitting on a bench he went to her & said in a deadly calm tone "Aapse baat karni hai Mummy Ji zara mere saath aayiye"

Mamta seeing his tone got bit panicked but controlled herself & went along with him to the corridor. Yog started without beating around the bush "aap jo karne ki koshish kar rahi hai na wo mere rehte to kabhi nahi kar paayengi ... Kam se kam aapne chooti Maa shabd ka maan to rakha hota jo Anika aapko kehti hai"

Mamta was totally stunned for while but said composing herself "aisi koi baat nahi hai damaad ji main to bas..."

Yog said cutting in between "Baat jobhi ho mujhe isse farak nahi padta par ek cheez aap saaf saaf sun leejiye aur samajh leejiye aapki kisi bhi ghatiya harkat ki vajah se main Anika ko kabhi hurt nahi hone doonga aur yadi aisa hua to shayad fir aapko apne Pati aur apne pariwaar ki nafrat ka saamna karna hoga uske liye tayyiyaar rahiyega"

Mamta said controlling the situation "Par maine aisa kya keh diya?"

Yog said gritting his teeth "Aapne jobhi kaha tha na mujhe ab tak sab yaad hai main sirf Anika ki vajah se chup hoon shayad use ab bhi lagta hai ki uski Choti Maa dil ki acchi hai aur main uska ye bhram toodna nahi chahta hoon wo already haut pareshaan hai aur aapki vajah se wo aur dukhi hui to shayad jis rishte ki maryada se main aur aap bandhe hai wo sab khatam ho jaayega ...

aur isse pehle main sabke saamne bade choote ki doori khatam doon apni harakato se aap baaz aa jaaiye ye aapki sehat ke liye accha hoga"

He turned and was about to leave when he said turning back " aur haan ek baat aur aapko Anika ke baare main fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai use khush kaise rakhna hai aur kya karna hai ye main acchi tarah jaanta hoon ...

aap shayad ab bhi use apni emotionally kamzoor beti smajah rahi hai jo aapki har baat chup chaap maan liya karti thi par ab wo Vashist pariwaar ki bahu hai meri patni hai ab usse kuch bhi ulta seedha kehne se pehle 100 baar sochiyega" with that he turned & walked out of the hospital leaving a pale face Mamta behind.

He joined Anika at the car & Anika said looking at his frustrated face "Kya baat hai kya hua achanak"

Yog said with a smile "Kuch nahin hua ... tum itna mat soocha karo" with that they marched back to their house & as it was quite late both changed into something comfortable & went to sleep after a tiring day.











SCROLL DOWN PART 2 B 😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38


PART 2 B

It was late hour of the night when Anika got out of her nap as she was not able sleep properly after seeing her father condition in ICU. She fetched herself a glass of water and after quenching her thirst she lay back resting her head on the head rest closing her eyes when suddenly she felt a shadow passing by her room & got alerted.

She saw the shadow perusing towards the room of Yog she tiptoed quietly clutching her Service mouser & started to follow at a safe distance. As soon as the shadow tried to attack Yog she banged the butt of mouser on the head & shadow went unconscious on the ground.

Yog too got out of the nap after hearing the sound of scuffle and saw a man collapsed on the floor & Anika was panting lightly clutching her gun.

Anika said looking at him "meri aankh khuli to ise kamre main ghuste hue dekha maine ...aapko maarne waala tha"

Yog asked perplexed "Kya ! par mujhe kyu maarna chahta tha"

Anika said "Usse pehle ye pata lagana hai ki ye ander kaise aaya?"

She went outside to the guards & said "abhi abhi ek aadmi ander aaya hai aur usne attack karne ki koshish ki hai aap logo ne ander aate dekha use?"

Guards replied "Nahi Madam humne nahi dekha"

Anika said growling "Duty pe soote ho kya jo nahi dekha" then calming herself a bit added "theek hai dhyan rakhiye aur koi faaltu ghoomta nazar aaye aas paas to seedhe arrest karna aur abhi se is ghar ki security badao"

Guards nodded & informed about the attack to control room. Anika went inside & saw Yog is treating that person he had taken off his mask & Anika was shocked to see the person.

Yog asked looking at her state "Kya hua tum jaanti hoo ise?"

Anika replied "Haan main jaanti hoon ye choota moota jeb katra hai iska naam ganpat hai isko aur iske poore gang ko abhi kuch mahine pehle arrest kiya tha maine saza bhi hui thi isko fir zamanat pe choot gaya tha par ye yaha kya kar raha hai?"

Yog said "zara hosh main aane do fir yahi batayega"

After 20 minutes Ganpat came to his senses & seeing Anika along with Yog he tried to ran but Anika was quick to hold him back.

Ganpat muttered "Mar gaya ... he deva mala vaachva" (Oh God save me)

Anika said grabbing his collar "ab bura kaam karne waalo ki to bhahwaan madat nahi karte hai na ganpat"

Ganpat said raising his hand in salute "Salaam Madam aur kaisa hai sab aur aap idhar kaise?"

Anika said in a stern voice "Accha mere ghar main mujhse hi pooch rahe ho ki main yaha kaise?"

Ganpat asked surprised "Pan ye to Dr. Vashisht ka ghar hai na?"

Yog added "haan ye mera ghar hai aur aapki Madam se parso hi meri shadi hui hai"

Ganpat said with a surprise "are madam aapne shadi banaya lagnaachi bahut bhaut shubhiccha"(Good wishes for your marriage)

Anika said grabbing his neck "ab batao yaha kya karne aaye ho aur tumhe kisne bheja hai?"

Ganpat said scratching his head "wo lafda zaala madam mere ko thodi pata ki ye aapka ghar hai warna aapke ghar ka supari thodi leta"

Anika was totally stunned hearing this & next moment slapped him hard saying "kisne di thi supari tumhe?"

Ganpat said "Mere ko nahi maloom Madam mere paas sirf phone aaya tha ki Dr. Yogendra Vashisht ko khalaas karne ka hai ... 50 hazaar advance bhi diya tha ... mere ghar pe uske aadmi loog pauncha kegaye"

Anika asked "un aadmiyoo ko pehchaan sakte hoo?"

Ganpat said "Nahi madam wo loog paise mere ghar ke bahar bag main chod ke gaye mujhe phone pe bola ki tumhari jeb main jobhi 10 rupee ka note hai uska number batao kal paise tumhe tumhare ghar ke bahar milenge aur bag pe wahi number likha hoga ...

mujhe laga ki koi mera popat bana raha hai pan jab paisa mila to main kaam karne idhar aaya aayi shapath Madam apun ko insab ke baare main aur kuch nahi pata"

Ankia asked the guards to take him away keep him on remand. Anika slummed on the couch with a sigh sensing the graveness of this matter & asked "Yog aap yaad karne ki koshish keejiye koi aisa dushman ya fir koi jaan pehchaan ka jo aisa kar sakta hoo"

Yog said "Mujhe bilkul idea nahi hai aur maine kisi ka kya bigada hai jo mujhe koi maarna chahega ...shayad Papa ya kaka ka koi dushman hoo"

Anika said "Yaa fir kisi ko aapse kuch important chahiye hoo ... kyuki ye rakam kisi Don Minister ya fir kisi 2 number ka dhanda karne waale ne hi di hai aur aapko ye bhi yaad hai ki mere saamne aap par 1 baar attack ki koshish ki gayi hai"

Yog said thinking "Par wo to haadsa ..."

Anika said cutting him short "Haadsa ek baar ho sakta hai Yog aur Ganpat ne bhi kaha hai ki use kisi ne aapki supari di thi "

Yog said "par jaha tak paise ki baat hai sab jaante hai ki main charitable hospital main kaam karta hoon aur rahi baat kuch important to mere paas research papers ke alava to kuch nahi hai ... tumhe yaad hai na Girish Uncle aur main atomic aur electronic radiations or unke side effects pe research kar rahe hai tumhi ne to mujhe wo papers uncle se laa ke diye the"

Anika said nodding in positive "ab hume chaukanna rehna hoga Yog ... Ye jobhi hai bahut chalaak hai maine aapse kaha bhi tha us waqt ki aap par goli chalane ki koshish ki gayi hai"

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It's been few weeks after their meet Yog & Anika gelled well as companions even Jaanawaaz & Jannat too gelled along nicely with her & this companionship was because of Girish as he was one of seniors of Yog & was helping him in his research and Anika was his sweet daughter.

Girish use to send important data for the research through Anika as it was the safest option. In this process all 4 gelled very well.

One day suddenly in a critical case Anika's arm got injured badly and she was taken to hospital for treatment. Yog dressed her wound & said "aapko to kaafi chot aayi Anika ji aap do teen din rest leejiye warna haath pe stress dene se dard bad jaayega"

Anika said with a smile "Ye sab humare kaam ka hissa hai Dr. Vashisht so nothing to worry & thanks a lot"

Yog said with a smile "Your Most welcome & take care"

Next moment Anika sees something and pushes him on the ground with her injured hand and lost her balance too and both fell on the ground. Yog was bit stunned but what made her more stunned was the voice which came from Iron bed placed on the side.

Yog and Anika got up & Anika said "Maine abhi abhi Lazer light dekhi thi isliye aapko dhakka diya warna goli aapko lagti"

Yog said "What! Par aise kaise ... shayad app kuch zayad hi sooch rahi hai"

Anika said "Dr. Vashisht main ek trained police officer hoon aur ye sab rooz kareeb se dekhti hoon ek minute rukiye"

She checks near the bed from where voice came & finds the bullet pierced in the lower foot of the iron bed she shows it to Yog saying "Ye dekhiye goli yaha lagi hai I was right kisi ne Lazer gun se aapko maarne ki koshish ki hai"

Yog said with a smile "ab mujh jaise seedhe saade Doctor ne kisi ka kya bigaada hai jo koi mere peeche padega mujhe lagta hai shayad koi haadsa hoga"

Anika said in a serious tone "Dr. Vashisht main aapki well wisher hoon aur ek Police officer bhi meri samajh se to koi aapko target kar raha hai aap please FIR likhwaa deejiye in fact aap chaahe to main security bhi arrange kar sakti hoon"

Yog said "Uski zaroorat nahi hai aap apna khayal rakhiye ... waise mera koi aisa dushman nahi hai jo aisa kare"

Anika said with a smile "Dr. Vashisht dushman kabhi kabhi aapke apne bhi hote hai paraye bhi hume waqt pe unhe pechaanna padta hai ... aur jo abhi abhi hua wo koi chooti baat nahi hai aap ek Politically well connected aur strong family se hai to ye sab risk aur bad jaata hai ... be careful and whenever you need me I am just a call away"

Yog thanked her & Anika left the hospital.

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Yog with a deep sigh said "Mujhe abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki koi aise mujhe ..."

Anika said cutting him short "Yog yakeen karna hoga warna ye sab nahi hota maine ghar ki security ke liye bol diya hai aur kal hi aap mere saath chaliye FIR ki formalities poori karke main pata karne ki koshish karti hoon"

Yog nods and starts thinking Anika says "aap abhi so jaayiye main yahi hoon aapke paas aur ab se main yahi couch pe so jaaungi" with that Yog and Anika lay at their places trying to sleep after the shock that they had got.

Anika's MV "Ye jo koi bhi hai ise main dhoond ke rahungi aaj Yog pe doosri baar hamla hua hai par aisa kaun ho sakta hai"










So how was it guys please drop in your comments as I write for you guys so please do let me know all your bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love you all


Regards Goldie 😊😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

<font color="#0000FF">Lovely update!
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Thanks Radhika 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice update dear
loved it soo much

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