MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt

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HiGuys m trying my hand on writing the new FF for MaNan.. Plz do lemme know if u guys like it..
I'll be continuing the present track...
Part 1
Nandini saw Manik leaving from the police station..She tried to stop him but in vain. She told the taxi driver to follow him. Manik was trying to think why Nandini did this to him. He thinks "par Nandini aisa q karegi? Does she actually feel that I can murder Soha?" Manik drove really slow as he was thinking and suddenly he saw a taxi in front of him n he stopped. Nandini paid the taxi driver, Manik saw Nandini getting out of the taxi. He was dammed pissed of n decided to drive but our tigress stood in front of his car. Manik said "what the hell Nandini? Get out of my way"
Nandini: I won't. Manik you have to listen to me y I did that.
Manik: Seriously like seriously tumhe lagta hai mujhe tumhe sunna chahiye.
Nandini sat inside the car and held Manik's hand. But Manik was in no mood to listen n finally Nandini said, Nyonika told me that I should lie about that day that I was conscious and I knew that u din kill Soha. She even showed me the footage in which you pushed Soha n she was on fire. Manik I told her we can prove that Soha wanted to kill me she sedated me and was about to set fire on me and you came to my rescue n this footage can show what you did in self-defense but she didn't listen. Manik Nyonika didn't even defend you when the press came to ask her about you. She should have said at least that you can't do such things but instead of that she said me that my love bought you in this condition. Manik in the court room you said listen to your heart I was around so many thoughts n that Harshad scenario flashed my mind & I got confused. Manik I trust you I know you haven't done anything. Plz understand me I can never ever let anything happen to u.

Here Navya's health worsens due to that powder. Cabira took her to hospital and he saw Soha alive he was so shocked. He started thinking its Nyonika's trap. He asked a nurse about her n she said "Han Soha zinda hai but with major burn injuries"

Here Manik said to Nandini, now I understand everything. he gets a cal from Cabira.
Manik: han Cabir bol..
Cabira: Manik tu believe ni karega.
Manik: han Cabir I know yeh sab Nyonika ne kia hai.. She did it purposely so that me n Nandini gets separated I have to dig out what actually happened in Soha's death.
Cabir: Manik but the news is Soha is alive.

chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9

chapter 10
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 18
chapter 19
chapter 20
chapter 21
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24- The Space Celebration
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
chapter 28
chapter 29
chapter 30
chapter 31
chapter 32
chapter 33
chapter 34
chapter 35
chapter 36
chapter 37
chapter 38
chapter 39
chapter 40- Much awaited love..
chapter 41
chapter 42
chapter 43

Chapter 44

Chapter 45

Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter 48

Chapter 49

part 50
chapter 51

Chapter 52-pg148,149 in 3 parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is goood!! 😃
Continue soon! I'd like to know how they handle it :) also MaNan date?! I'm excited!
Dude FF likhne se kabhi nahin hesitate karna. 😎 neki aur pooch pooch?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome start...loved it pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsm start
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ty so much guys so much.. It really means alot.. I wnt keep u waiting.. I promise ill update the nxt post by today's nght..
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nice one
I got goosebumps while reading... kaash aisa kuch show me bhi blast ho...
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nice start gal really amazing ... kash show main bhe asaa kuch ho
update soon
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Guys here is the second part..
Part 2:
Manik got damn angry after hearing whatever Cabir said about Soha's present state.. He started driving fast n when Nandini asked him where were they going he replied to meet nyonika.
Nandini: Manik just stop the car please mere liye please Manik. Manik stopped the car.
Manik: Nandini ab kya hua? Why did you ask me to stop the car.
Nandini: Manik meri bat suno. Aaj humari date hai yaad hai.
Manik: seriously Nandini date!! We could have been separated by her n you are talking about date.
Nandini goes close to Manik hold his hand, Manik tumne itna kuch arrange kiya hai and today is the day i want to wear those earrings n shine for you like a star.!! I want to wear that red dress and wanna see will i look that good k you will decide to be lenient with me o nt. I wanna wear those heels and see whether i can try now to match your height o not.!! Manik i wanna b with you the entire night. Manik was so numb n finally agreed to her and dropped her home.
Nandini was thinking in her mind on the way (Manik ne bhale meri bat sun li ho maaf bhi karlia ho but i can still sense manik is upset with me coz somewhere he thinks i din trust him) on other hand manik thinks (Nandini was confused is justified but doesn't she trust me that i cant do such things) Nandini thought to herself (i should do something for him)
Nandini: Manik, kya hum 9pm ko mil sakte hai instead of 8pm mujhe chachi ko help karna hai!
Manik: Okay Nandini this time i would be there at sharp 9.!
Nandini goes to her room n from the window she sees down but manik has left she felt disappointed but thn Manik came back jus to wave her bye with a zillion dollar smile.!!

In hospital, Cabir ask doctor is Navya alright on which doctor says there was the same powder as we found in your friend Nandini's blood. Its good she came on or else she would have lost her baby. Cabir feels he can be nice to Navya and he should be supportive as she needs support.
Dhruv asks Alya whether she still wanna accompany Rohit o wil she go out with him as he has something special!!

Back to home Nandini thinks what she can do for Manik! She orders dozens of candles and bucket of rose petals.. She goes to the venue by 8 and she says she wanna decorate it herself.!! And asked to change the venue from room to terrace...
She kept ol the candle n the whole terrace was filled by rose petals and red ballons. She arranged it on terrace as she wanted the best things for Manik the stars..
Manik came before time and as he reached the room manager said sir m sorry but the room was not vacant so he shifted the date to terrace.!
Manik got angry but thn thought it might be better.!!
When he reached there he saw no lights only candles n he saw her star shining at a corner of the terrace area.!'
She was shining!!
She began to sing for him.."hui main teri joganiya main joganiya"
He was overwhelmed...
He went near her hold her in his arms twirl a little n kissed her forehead!!

Next part: Love confession between MaNan.. Cabir to be a cupid for DhruLya and to win support for MaNan from fab3..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice... continue sun... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 2 was awsome...loved manan...pls continue soon...would love to read more...take care😊

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