MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
this was awesome..
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys m really sorry but i will update tomorrow as i haven't finished it yet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update... Can't wait to see what Manik does to impress the Muthy's...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yipee cant believe Fb MaNan/Manik and Nandini page uploaded my story.. Thanks alot.. Ill pakka update till night..
Edited by kiaraMaNanholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing read all parts in a go plz update as early as possible waiting for it
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Part 18:
Morning..
Chachi: Nandu... Get up...
Nandini: Han Chachi aai.. She looks at the clock.. O shit m late.. She freshes up and come down..
Chachi: Kya kar ri thi.. She was waiting for you kab ka..
Alya: Its okay Chachi.. Chale Nandini?
Chachi: But breakfast??
Alya: Chachi canteen se kar lenge..
Alya and Nandini reaches college..
Manik comes there and suddenly goes and hugs Nandini.. Nandini gets shocked by his reaction..
Manik: I dint see you from last 16 hrs.. Ur phone was off kya hai?
Nandini feeling uncomfortable: Battery was down and sorry.
Mukti: Nandini dont be sorry isse toh sirf bahana chahiye tumhe hug karne ka..
Cabir: Wah ab mere sath ek aur jud gaya.. Mukti u rock..
Manik: sht up guys main woh.. Nothing..
Alya: Okay guys.. We have to plan today's meeting of Manik..
Nandini: But Alya hum usse ghar kis reason se le jaye..
Mukti: Nandini reason dogi toh lagega Manik sirf aaj k liye kar ra hai.. Let Chachi get a surprise visit by Manik.. What say guys?
CAbir knocks on Mukti head: Yar yeh to khali hi hai.. Idea aaya kaha se?
Manik: Shut up Cabir.. And Mukti I love you what a Idea...

Alya: Okay guys so listen to this.. Alya narrates the plan to all of them..

Its 7 pm..
Nandini was walking to and fro waiting for Manik..
Chachi: Kisika wait kar ri hai Nandu?
Nandini: Wait... Wat wait..
Chachi: Acha toh zarur kal fashin show hai..
Nandini: what?
Chachi: Isiliye tu aise chal ri hai..
Nandini: Nai woh Chachi..
Before she could complete there was a knock on the door.. Nandini went upstairs as she dint wanted to distract her.. Chachi opened the door.. Chachi was amazed to what she saw... Manik Malhotra.. Blue blazer.. Yellow tee.. Light blue denim.. Though it was not professional kinda but the way he gelled those hairs he was looking the most innocent person on earth. Chachi was dumstruck.. She thought.. Yeh mere chenna express ka shahrukh, main hoon na Ka shahrukh kaise ban gaya.. Itna bhola.."
Manik: Chachi main aau andar ya idhar hi khada rahu?
Chachi: Han beta.. Sorry.. Woh mera dhyan nai tha.. Aao baitho main PaNi lati hun.. Nandu neeche aau dekho Manik aaya hai..
Nandini came down and she was so shocked.. She just cant take her eyes off Manik. And suddenly her phone buzzed it was Manik" stop staring me.. O els plan execute ni ho payega"
Chachi: Arre Nandu tera dost aaya hai and tu hai ke phone main padi hai.. Chal ja andar ja and Manik k liye kuch chai ya coffee bana de?
Nandini: oky Chachi.
Chachi offers Manik water and Nandu starts making tea..

Manik: Chachi aap kuch bana re the na sach batao?
Chachi: Han beta.. Woh aaj main na ek nai recipe try ki hai.. Rajma noodles.. Tum khaoge..
Manik was thinking "Rajma noodles Manik tu to gaya beta.. Par dil jitna hai to kha le beta kha le"
Manik: Ofcourse Chachi!! Rajma Noodles kya invention hai..
Chachi: Main abhi lai..
Manik: Are Chachi Risabh kaha hai? Main aapke liya guess karo kya laya hun?
Chachi: Mere liye? Are beta.. Hhmmm.. Tum hi bata do..
Manik: aapke fav pasta.. Lo Risabh bhi aagay.. Rishab close ur eyes.. Manik keeps the pastries on his hand.. Kholo ab?
Rishabh in gestures: Thankyou and he hugged Manik..
Chachi thinking " hayyo rabba, isko hum sab ki kitni fikar hai.. Man karta hai abhi usse Nandini k sath hamesha rehne ki bat karu par thoda jaldi hojega and risabh bhi kitna ghul mil gaya hai"
Manik: Chachi kaha kho gaye.. Chachi if u don't mind kya aaj yahan kha sakta hun.. Maine kabhi mere mom ke hath ka toh nai khaya par aapke hath se khana chachta hun.. Emotions wer naturally coming in Manik.. This was not planned.. This was pure Manik.. Nandini who was silently listening all this knew that if she doesn't go there Manik would surely shed tears so nandini left the kitchen..
Nandini: Chai taiyar hai..
Chachi: Tum dono baitho main khana laga ti hun
Nandini: Chachi main aati aapki help karne.
Chachi was so touched that she was crying and so she said: Nandu Manik akela hai uske sath reh I'll do this..
Nandini: okay Chachi..
Manik tum thik ho?
Manik: M sorry Nandini pata ni suddenly kya hua?
Nandini: Its okay.. U know Chachi she always feels unke kids nahi hai par aaj tumne apna heart pour karke unko batadiya kem jab hum sab hai unhe afsos ni karna chahiye. Manik tum jab chaho yahan aa sakte ho to meet Chachi..
Manik was walking to her for a hug but she gestured Chachi hai..
Here Chachi was talking to herself.." Rabba aaj menu pata chal gaya tumne mujhe bache q ni diya agar bache Manik, Nandini Aur Risabh jaise ho to aur kya chahiye.."
Chachi bought the food on table..
Nandini: Chai kaisi hai?
Manik: Thik hi hai..
Nandini: Manikk???
Manik: Bht achi hai..
Chachi: Chalo bacha log dinner time..
All went to the table..
Manik: Par aunty Chacha kaha hai?
Chachi: tumhare Chacha ko tym lagega unka phne aaya raste main hai aahi rahe honge
Manik: Chachi unke sath khate hai.. Family complete hojayegi.. Mera matlab family aise hi complete hoti hongi..
Chachi: Okay par ek shart par..
Manik: Kya?
Chachi: Tum mujhe main puchu woh batana..
Nandini thot she should leave them alone.. They both share the same pain..
Nandini: Ahh Chachi Risabh k medicine ka tym hogaya hai and he wanted to hear me singing so hum upar jaate Chacha aajaye to bula lena.. With this Nandini and Risabh went upstairs..
Manik: Pucho Chachi..
Chachi: Tumhe konsi bat khaye ja ri hai..
Manik: Chachi ek bat bolun.. Aap jitna meri care karte ho mujhe awkward lagta hai Nandini karti hai to bhi q ki kabhi kisine itna care kia hi nai.. Mujhe yad nai hai last main aur nyo i mean mom kab sath main baith k khaya hoga.. Family kya hoti hai yeh maine unse kabhi sikha hi nai.. Meri family fab 5 hai.. Woh kabhi mera sath ni chodte and jab aap sabko dekhta toh khusi bhi hoti hai and dil bhi dukhta hai k kash main mom dad Tia hum sab.. Befre he completes some1 knocked..
Manik: main kholta hun..
Chacha: Aiyoo aaj itna trafic tha kya batau yeh lo bag lo... Arre Manik beta tum? Lao mujhe de do
Manik: Nai nai Chacha aap dedo.. Aur main..
Chachi: aap sare wuestions idhar hi puch loge Manik ghar aaya tha to maine kaha khana khaye aur jaye..
Chacha: Okay main fresh hoke aata
Chachi: Nandu Chacha aagae..
They all went to dining hall
Chacha: Aaj kya hai?
Manik: Chachi Chachi made anew dish.. Rajma Noodles
Chacha: aiyyo..
Nandini served everyone..
Manik: Wow Chachi this is so Awesme ssly..
Chachi: Dekha Murthyji kitna sona munda hai
Chacha: Makkhan laga ra hai tumko.
Manik: Nai nai Chacha sach.. Acha Chachi aapki story to batao..
Chachi: Aree hat aisa koi story thidi bata ta hai
Nandini and risabh too plead..
Chacha: Okay main batata hun.. Main aur tumhari Chachi pehli bar college main mile the.. Tumhari Chachi mereko bht tang karti.. Main mota aur tumhari Chachi she was so thin.. She uses to bully ppl.. Ek bar unhone mujhe kaha rain main khade raho mera pura din khada ra sham ko jab unhone mujhe pucha k yahan q khade ho maine kaha aapne bola isliye.. Us din k bat chachi ne mujhe kabhi bully nai kia.. Dhire dhire she started being sweet to me and we fell for each other.. Par parents ko mana na bht muskil so difficult but we made it.. And tum bhi karloge i know..
Manik and Nandini were lost somewhr coz they linked up the story with theirs..
Manik: Wah Chachi ekdum SRK ki movie jaise.. Acha main aap sab k liye gifts laya hun..
Risabh jumped in joy,.

Everyone sat in the hall..
Manik took out a white colored shirt and a black pant and a pen and a book..Chacha yeh aapke liye.. Nandini ne bataya aapko likhna bht pasand hai and black amd white is ur fav
Chachi you have this the collection of SRK best movies.. Chachi yeh recipe book hai isliye nai k mujhe lagta aap acha ni banate par inme un logo ki recipe hai jo apne khane main variations karte hai.. And aur kuch mujhe acha ni laga so main aapke liye red salwar kameez laya hun ..
Chachi: hayy so pretty..
Chacha: thanks beta it means a lot..
Manik: Risabh.. U have got lot many gifts.. This is ur fav video game.. U like caps so here are ur caps.. Risabh tumhare liye aur bhi kuch hai.. He took out a big parcel and asked risabh to open it.. He opened and was shocked.. It was a beautiful potrait in a form of collage where one side it was Risabh Nandini and other side Risabh with chacha chachi and Nandini.. And third was empty.. Risabh asked in gesture yeh khali q hai..
Nandini: Risabh yeh us insan k liye hai jo tumhare dil main humare jitni jaga banayega..
Risabh(gestures): Okay to yahan mera aur Manik ka pic aayega..
Hearing this Manik hugged him..
Manik: Chalo Chachi bht late hogaya hai.. Ghar jana padega
Chachi: Tum ham sab k liye kuch na kuch laye.. Nandini k liye..
Manik: Nandini k liye kya.. Kuch nai..
Nandini went upstairs getting upset..
Chachi: Naraz hogai.
Chacha: aiyyo Nandu..
Manik: Chacha.. Yeh Nandini ko de dena.. Main nai de pata..
It was a beautiful neckpiece.. It was platinum.. It had a ring pendant.. There was something written on it.. It was MaNan.. Ovio Chacha ko pata nai chala but Chachi unko pata chal gaya..
Chachi: main de dungi..
Manik: Chachi yeh bhi..
He gave her a dress.. White dress.. With earrings and shoes..
Chacha: Itna kuch..
Manik: she deserves more.. I mean main chalta hum.. And han Chacha Chachi.. Parso dinner with me.. Plz..venue Nandini ko bata dunga.. Aap aaoge toh acha lagega..
Chachi: Hum zarur aayenge.. With this he left.. He waved her goodbye as she was peeping and she made tomato face and went on bed..
Chacha: Yeh nandu ko chahta hai?
Chachi: Donno karte hai Murthyji..
Chachi went upstairs..

Precap: Chachi giving Nandu gift.. And their talk..
Next mrnin fab 5 setting the plan..
Nandini comes running to Manik..
Plz sorry if any typing mistake..
And sorry to bore as it went long
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
it was so blissful yet emotional update..
plz cont soon
n thanz for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
cont soomn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow.. This ws soo cute.. Nandu tomato face nh h potato face h..
Lol.
Awesome prt.. Cot. Soo
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's not boring dear..it's awesome loved how manik is getting close to nandini's family and also chacha chachi's love story is cute..n manik gifted Nandini with manan engraved on it 😳 now eager to read the next update...please continue soon and thanks for the pm

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