MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ty everyone for appreciating will write the next part by tonight
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely surving on these fics only
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wooow it was awesome ..manan date can't wait
continue soon
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this is nice
cont plz
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Part 4:
DhruLya were in there own world of love!! Exploring their sides and those love which was lost somewhere!!

Nandini's house:
Nandini: Risabh chill!! I will tell you me and Manik. We..
Risabh: (in his gesture) u too are together forever.
Manik and Nandini wer shocked how Risabh understood their silent. Rishab(gesture) i like manik and I don't mind.
Manik and Nandini were on top of this world but more then Manik it was Nandini coz the two ppl whom she love the most were with her no matter what!
Thy played games with Risabh till he slept.!!
Thn MaNan went in Nandini's room.. Manik hold her from waist And bought her close he was about to kiss but jus then..
Chachi: Nandu, come down fast i have to show you something..
Manik: perfect timing
Nandini: I'll be back!!
Manik was wondering, agar aaj main uski bat nahi sunta toh we would have broken apart.. Thank you nandini for always telling me being impulsive ruins relation.
Jus then Nandini saw him thinking..
Nandini: Manik why are you so lost..
He lifted her and landed her on bed n was about to go to the couch..
Nandini: Manik you can stay her with me on the bed. I trust you!!
Manik: You are Trusting me on this with a grin!!
He came on bed took Nandini in his arms and thy felt content!!

Cabir's house
Cabir: Navya i got the candles.. Food is ready kya m hungry!!
Navya: Bade besharam ho tum help ni ki and commanding me!! Anyways go and get fresh ill take out plates!
Cabir: fresh kya hona main fresh hi hun!! Madhubala lets eat.
Navya: khana hai to pehle fresh hoke aao..
Cabir went to bath meanwhile Navya decorated the room with candles and arranged table and placed candle on it..
Navya(thinking): Cabir apne hasi k piche bht kuch chupata hai i can do this much for him..
Cabir came out and was shocked to well decorated room.. He was searching for Navya but she was no where just then he saw someone in white dress.. She was looking beautiful!! Red Cabir and White navya perfect..
For the first time cabir said.,
Cabir: beautiful!
Navya: kya?
Cabir: decorations
Navya(innocent): humare bihar main toh isse bhi acha hota hai.. Yo navya!!
They started dinner. Cabir served fruit drink to Navya and himself had beer!!
Cabir: What a food Navya. M..maa bhi..
Navya: Cabir bolo speak ur heart out!!
Cabir( abit high due to drink): Maa bhi aisa hi banati thi...

Nandini: Manik kya fab 4 will accept me!? They are all angry on u and me!!
Manik: I'm everything to them! I'll make them understand.
Nandini: but they hate me
Manik: no one can hate u!! Look at ur smile its so enchanting. No one can hate you. Ur innocence amazes everyone. They will take time coz they are hurt! Coz i hide it from them!
Nandini: are you sure?
Manik kissing her forehead: yaa sure
Nandini: Manik you wont leave me na? Never ever!!
Manik: Nandini u doubt i can prove that to you!
Nandini hits him playfully: no thanks..
Thy wer in each other arms that was enough for them on that night.. Thy din wanted nethn els..

In hospital,
Mukti decorated abhi's ward with red flower and she was too in white dress looking like and angel.
Abhi: what is this mujti just leave i wanna be alone..
Mukti: but i want to be with you!!
Abhi: why are you doing this i dont need your sympathy..
Mukti: bought her close abhi due you see sympathy o love
Abhi: i dont have time for love..
Mukti: whatever time you have be with me!!
Abhi no mukti..
Mukti brings him close mad hugss him..

Precap:
Cabir's outrage of emotions..
MukBhi's love..
MaNan entering together in college everyone shocked
New entry!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Finally u updated ...
Thanks for update do continue soon...
And new entry... 😉 its gonna be fun
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...its gona be fun...continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry sorry sorry for late..

Cabira's house,
Cabir: Mumma ne mujhe chod diya coz m gay!! She said she will accept me as i'm but now she doesnt want to.. R said he will be with me 4eva but he left.. Sab mujhe chod k jaate hai.
Navya: Cabir main tumhe nai chodungi( jus consoling as a fren)
Cabir: this are my own sins.
Navya: stop blaming urself..

In hospital,
Mukti gets cal from doctor and says Abhi can be cured by new techniques as his body is showing improvement..
Mukti was on top of the world..
He went and said this to abhi but Abhi was okay with the news as he knows plan always fails..

Nandini house,
Manik wake up and finds Nandu is not beside him.. He keeps wondering where is she.. He goes out carefully and gets bumped into risabh..
Risabh(in gesture): where are you going?
Manik: where ia nandu,?
Risabh: she us down as chacha chachi wait for a tour for a weak..
Manik: ohkk..
Manik goes down and sees Nandini making tea..
He goes n held her waist n on sudden touch Nandini gets puzzled..
Thn she say manik tum.. Tum bhi na dara dete ho.. Thn thy have tea n goes to college together.. And manik appoints a maid to look after risabh...

In college, everyone gets shocked seeing Manik and Nandini together from a car..
Fab 4 were shocked and they were waiting for answers..
Nandini ask Manik to handle fab 5 as she will meet him after panditji class..

A young girl was listening to music and dancing playing around and get bumps to a guy..
Guy: hey you dekh k ni chal sakti?
Young girl: hey tumhe prob hai to tum yeh kar do..
Guy: you show this tantrum... As soon as this words came Manik comes and say han bolo kuch bolna hai..
Girl: why dont you understand n you know who m i..?
Manik: hugging the girl,, pata ni chala yeh kon hai..
The gal turns and then Bhai... I missed u..
Manik: I know m ur bhai but don't cal me here with this line...

Precap:
New entry- manik sister
Manik sissi nandini
Fab 4 understands..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
nice ff
cont soon and pm me updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys am really sorry many mistakes in last epiode but today it would be amazing! i will update by night!!

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