MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
When may we expect the next update, please let us know?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
really amazingg read in one goo ,,

update soon

an possible PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
M sorry for the mistakes in yesterday's episode.. I will write from the girl part...

Sorry to make you wait..

Part 6:

A new girl was seen in the college.. She was fair, long hairs, gothic look..
She was on her headphones and was dancing in the corridor and suddenly *BUMPP*!!! She collides with a guy..
A bright handsome hunk.. A rich but nt a spoiled brat.. A serious musician to whom music is everything..
Boy: What the f***!!? Dekh k nai chal sakti...
Girl: what? Kya??
Boy removing her headphones,
Boy: aakhe nai hai?? Cant u watch your step??
Girl: dude get a life! Do u know whom u r talking to..?
Boy: u rich brats.. What you think you can do nethn...?
Just then Manik comes and see that boy arguing with the girl..
Manik: wo wo macho man.. What's wrong? And tujhe pata hai with whom you are talking??
Girl(thinking): aaj to yeh gaya.. Why god mera sath q hamesha..
Girl: Manik Manik relax listen..
Manik raises his hand for punch.. But then Nandini comes..
Nandini: Manik what's wrong?
Girl: Bhai bhai.. I mean sorry Manik chill i will handle calm down..
Nandini and the boy were shocked..
Boy: Manik bha...bh..bhai m..m.. So..orr...ryy..
Girl: get lost and never come in front of my eyes..
Nandini: Manik you never..
She was interrupted with that girl..
Girl: What's wrong with you bhai?
Manik: tumhe kitne bar bolne ka..
Girl: ya ok Manik.. But wat wrong? I thot she changed you.. Anyway thankyou girl for saving that boy( girl to nandu)
Nandini: mm.. Its k!!
Girl: Oh by d way m Tia... Tia Malhotra.. Manik's sister..
Nandini: me... Nan..
Manik: ahh tia come na i hv to tell something ..
Manik messages Nandini:
"Sorry can't introduce ur name to her she knows abt us so lets meet at dinner tonight.. Will be waiting at 8"
Nandini: He is mad..

Music Room,
Mukti: What the hell is wrong? Yeh Manik kaha hai..
Cabir: Seriously Mukti tu yeh puch ri hai.. He must be with Nandini..
Alya: How can he do this to us.. He hide all this from us.
Dhruv: Big deal Alya! Agar hume batata to kya hum usse accept kar lete.. Even m upset coz par then its ok..
Alya: I feel cheated Dhruv.. Don't you?
Mukti: O cmon Dhruv after wat she did in court room u still support her..
Cabir: Guys guys guys jus chill.. I wanna tell you that.. I was knowing about them.. But i cant tell you coz they dint realize it themselves.. And what i have seen in their eyes for each other its magical.. And alya he dint cheat you infact he was nt with her at that time.. This happened when i was injured.. Manik has always supported us its now our to support him.. To respect his choice.. Cmon we are fab 5 remembered one for all n all for one.. This time he needs us..
Dhruv: I think Cabir is right.
Alya: If he dint cheat me and he really loves her i dont mind..
Mukti: Sab agree karte hai toh m in..
Cabir: thanks everyone.. Let..
Alya stops him..
Alya: Guys i need to tell you guys something..
Ahh nothing..
Fab 3: wat say..
Alya: Nothing i was about to say..
Just then Manik enters..

Manik: hey guys m really sorry i hide that..
Fab4: Get lost..
Tia: guys guys yar its Manik plz forgive him..
Fab 4: Tia u stay outta it.. U came today. How can he hide..
Manik: Guys i was scared. I cant break fab5..
Mukti(hitting on his shoulder playfully): What han kya u thought U'll hide n hume pata ni chalega.. U cheat u liar.. Get her we want to celebrate..
Manik and Tia were shocked..
Manik: thanks guys.. Thankyou so much..
Cabir: saale thanks bol ra hai Group hug..
They were hugging amd totally forgot about Tia..
Dhruv: Tia come..
Tia: its ok dhruv it's worth watching u guys hugging..
Cabir: U met her?
Tia: No bhai i mean Manik din let me meet her.
Manik: guys at dinner sharp at 8pm.. Farmhouse..
With her
Chalo lets go to canteen said Cabir
Manik: you guys go ill catch you later..
Cabir: Tu ni sudhrega...
Fab 3 n Tia: Aww loverboy misses her.. Go get her!!

Cabir texts Navya.. " be ready by 8pm going to farmhouse and don't worry Nandini is with us.. We accepted her"..

Mukti: Guys can we cal.. Cabir sun ra hai?
Cabir anir: Han bol..
Mukti: I was thinking.. Can we call Abhi i mean Abhimanyu..
Cabir: Ehem ehem.. Han mujhe pyar hua pyar hua..
Manik: Shut up Cabir.. Ofcourse Mukti.. Chalo catch u later.. Tia be with them I'll catch u.. Guys take care of her..

Nandini in her classical room singing..
Manik was mesmerized seeing her..
Nandini: tum kab aaye..
Manik: when you started..
Nandini: Tia?
Manik: Ssly u asking about Tia.. M here uska kya..
Nandini: so
Manik: getting her close.. Taking her hairs behind the ears.. So...
Nandini: so woh kuch nai.. U go..
Manik: ok chill.. Today at 8pm and tell at home you are staying with me..
Nandini: you have forgotten chacha chachi nt der cant leave Risabh alone..
Manik: Great! Get him with you over there.
Nandini: But Dhruv..
Manik: trust me evithn would be ok..
Nandini: ok u go panditji would come..
Manik: okay at 8..
He kissed her forehead and left..

Precap:
Farmhouse fun with fab 5 Nandini, Navya, Tia, Risabh...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Oh.. This ws soo nice.. 😆😉
Loved it.. Tia malhotra.. Nice ha
Continue soon
Fun at farmhouse😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys I need your feedback please..

In music room,
Panditji: Nandini i think you should concentrate on your music rather than someone else..
Nandini: M sorry sir, from now i will surely.. I can't disappoint my AMS I mean my Amma who taught me music..
Panditji: I would like to know your Amma's name.
Nandini: Kishori Murthy.
Panditji: Kya? Tum Kishori murthy ki granddaughter ho?
Nandini: Yes sir..
Panditji: you knoe..
Just then Nandini's phone rang..
Nandini: Excuse me sir, I need to take this cal..

On call,
Manik: Hey beautiful,
Nandini: shut up manik.. Kya hai? Why did u call?
Manik: just to inform you that Risabh ki packing ho gai hai and m taking him home you pack your bags and i'll come to receive you ok.?
Nandini: Why you love me so much?
Manik: I don't.. Just returning the love i'm getting from you.. My sunshine..
Nandini(blushes): okay ill be ready.. Meet you at 8
Manik: Plan has changed. Now that we are going to farmhouse you need to get ready by 5.
Nandini: But my class..
Manik: Please for me..
Nandini: Okay ill leave now to home as it is 3.. Meet you at 5
Manik: Still 2 hrs cant wait.
Mukti: Yaa even we can't Nandini.. Hahahah
Nandini: ahh Mukti..
Manik: Sorry she took the phone. Neways she gone. For taking Abhi...ma.. Whatever
Nandini: Abhimanyu and Manik she love her. So you better start loving him..
Manik: Hmm.. Okay chalo you leave..
Nandini leaves college and reaches home..

In hospital,
Mukti: arre still you din pack your bags..
Abhi: Mukti i m not in that state. U enjoy o els you will also suffer.
Mukti: ho gaya bakwas.? Ab chale?
Abhi: Hmm okay as you say..
Mukti: And waise bhi everyone has to face your illness and me n u together.
Abhi: No mukti please you cant..
Mukti: (kissing his forehead) shut up.. M with you dont worry..

At Alya's place,
Dhruv ringing bell..
Alya: What's wrong dhruv?
Dhruv: I came to pick you up..
Alya: Why? when it's evithn over? why u came?
Dhruv: We are still frens right?
Alya: Yaa right frenz.. Two mins ill be ready.
Dhruv: Hmm..
DhruLya leaves for Manik's house..

Cabira's house,
Navya: Cabir par main kyu? U guys enjoy i dont wanna come!
Cabir: Senti band kar aur chalo Madhubala.
Navya: but
Cabir: Nandini bhi hai.. Tum MaNan k celebration main ni aana chahti..!?
Navya: Hmmm okay. Lets go!!
Cabir: And aaj we will have to get dhrulya together and tell everyone that you lv with me..
Navya: are u sure?
Cabir: Kabhi toh batana padega. And dont worry i got job now i can manage.
Navya hugs Cabir..
Navya: Thanks you are a savior best fren..
Cabir:(uncomfortably) okay chill
Cavya heads to manik's home..

Manik's home..
Manik: Guys ready?
Fab 4: Yes..
Abhi and Navya: Hum bhi..
Manik: Tia cmon gal.. Chale??
Tia: Ya ya m ready..
Just then a boy comes to manik's house. The same boy who they met in morning.
Manik: What the f**k? You stalker. I will..
Nyonika: Shut up Manik. I called him.. He is my business partners son.. Come Ruhan..
Ruhan: thanks mam..
Tia steps down..
Ruhan keeps on staring her...
Ruhan: Beautiful!!!
Manik, fab4, abhi, navya, tia: huh..
Ruhan: Ah... House i mean..
Manik: you better watch your mouth or els..
Tia: bhai lv it.. Dont spoil your mood.. Let go.. Lets take your queen..

Manik text's Nandini..
"I wanna see you in these dress please"
Nandini opens the gift to find a white dress till ankle.. Thanks manik..

Down at Nandini's home..
Horn**
Nandini: Coming!!
Tia: What the f**k bhai.. She is your queen and you din say this to me?
Manik: firstly no bhai.. And i wanted to surprise you..
Nandini: Hi..i.. Gu..ys... Hi.. Tia..
All: Chill NANDINI...
Tia: (hugging) welcome to family..
Nandini: thanks..
Nandini and Manik eyes comtacts
All: O romeo and juliet Timeout.. We all are here..
MaNan: Sorry sorry..
Cabir: drive manik..
Manik: Yaa lets go..!!!!

They covered half of the distance..
Cabir: Guys cry day nahi hai.. Time to celebrate cmon do something good...
Navya: Lets do something we are best at..
All: Means??
Navya: Lets sing.. But antakshari..
All: laughing like Ssly Navya...(except Nandini)
Nandini: Why not.. Start Navya..
Navya: oky.. Main tenu sanjhawan ki .
Cabir: Janam dekhli mit gayu dooriya..
Mukti: lets sing whateva we like no antakshari
Nandini: right..
Mukti: why dont you start Nandini..
Nandini: me no no..
Manik: mukti leave her she cant sing.. Seeing her thru mirror..
Nandini: paali paali honton pe na jaane dhani dhani muskurahato k fool khilme lage.. Hui main teri joganiya joganiya..
Ab chahe tu rat bhuja, ab chahe tu rat jhala hui main teri joganiya..
Everyone(claps): wow Nandini..
Manik: ehem ehem..
Tia: Why dont you sing bhai..
Manik: rag rag woh samaya mere dil par woh chaya mere mujh main woh aise jaise jaan.. Gire barsat main paani jaise koi kahani jaise mujhse ho mujh tak jo baya... Aashiq tera purana hai yeh deewana samjhe naa.. Kabhi chup chup rahe kabhi gaya yeh kare..bin puche teri tarife sunaye yeh kare.. Hai koi haqueeqat tu ya koi fasana hai.. Kuch jane agar to itna yeh tera deewana hai.. Man mera..
(They sang song looking into each other's eyes)
All: Wah love is in the air over flowing..
Dhruv: ha ho gayi galti mujhse main jaanta hun..
Alya: maine mere jaana q nai jana ishq tera..
Mukti: mileye mileye mujhe par meri sunta nahi..
Abhi: tu har lamha..
Cabir: wah yar so much of love cant digest..
Tia: i will make you digest..
Tu leyade mainu golden jhumke, main kanna vich paava chum chum ke.. Chittiyan kalaiya..
All: wah wah Tia you should definitely join fab5.. And thanks to take those lovers divert their mind..
And they reach...

Precap: farmhouse fun
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
awsome...loved it..pls continue soon...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Lovelies ill get late for update.. Xam time.. Manage plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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M really sorry guys for the late update..

At farmhouse,
Everyone was removing their luggage from the car and soon they realize MaNan wer missing..
Cabir: Yar yeh love birds na..
Mukti: ssly yeh log na..

Nandini: Manik why you got me here.
Manik: evi1 has forgotten its Holi..
Nandini: Manik i hate colors plz..
Manik: okay but come will go there.. No one will apply color to u.. (Mumbling except me)

They reach to others and throw colors on evi1 "Holi Hai"
Everyone was shocked..
Mukti: You remembered my tharki chokra..
Manik: Ofcrse tharki chokri and applying color on her..
Just then they realise Nandini is not there
All: Ab yeh akeli Nandini kaha chali gai..
Manik: Woh actually..
Jus then Risabh said in gesture that Nandini hates holi..
Tia: Manik its an open challenge to you.. Rang de aaj usse..
cabir: yaa apne rang main..
Manik: challenge accepted guys.. And Manik applies red color to himself..
Mukti: Cabir ne usse rang ne bola khud ko nai
Manik: Just wait n watch..
Manik heads to her room
Cabira: I Have a nasty plan lets follow him..
Mukti: yaa lets c
Tia: U guys are shameless that's their personal thing
Navya: I agree with tia
Abhi: Actually i feel its fun lets listen to Mukti and Cabir
They followed Manik

Outside the room..
Manik knocks..
Nandini: Plz Manik you go i wnt come out
Manik: Nandini i don't have colors in my hand i promise
Nandini: Pakka
Manik: Yaa pakka come out and no one is there..

Evi1 was looking with great curiosity
Nandini comes out..
Manik: Thank-you Miss Murthy
Nandini: don't touch me with those hands
Manik takes a step forward n Nandini backwards and doing this she reach the door which Manik locked..
Manik: Ab kaha jaogi..
Nandini: don't touch me hath mat lagana..
Manik: ok as you say..
Evi1 was waiting ab kya hoga types

Manik goes forward and touches his red cheeks to her intensely n applying color.. From right to left.. Nandini was like.. Hitting him in stomach playfully: Manik..
Evi1 was shocked.. N bursted into laughter..
MaNan were shocked n trying to cover up..
Manik: What the hell guys yeh kya hai..
Cabir: Actually i wanted to c ur holi..
And evi1 went befre nandini to apply color..

Precap: evi1 chasing Nandini
Bonfire fun.. Fireflies story
Manik bday bash
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Ohh.. I again missed ur update..
Loved it btw
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Hey when will you update the next part.

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