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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 27:
It was around 3 pm and Nandini again received a txt from Cabir, "Nandini hum pohch gaye hai and we are in the guest house okay so agar Nyonika aaye toh do tell us hum aajayenge." To which she replied. "Yaa sure thank you."

Just then Nyonika came and Nandini heard her and she went to Manik.
Nandini: Manik get up.
Manik: Ab kya?
Nandini: To your surprise Nyonika Mam is here.
Manik suddenly stood up: What? Are you serious Nandini?
Nandini: Ofcourse!
And then Nyonika came in.
Nyonika: Oh so yeh chal ra hai han idhar? Maine toh suna tha everybody is here. Q Nandini sirf tum dono? This time Manik you failed to fool me.
Nandini: Woh said we are alone?
Manik: Nandini you just leave okay you don't have to come in between.
Nyonika: Yaa ab toh Woh tumko khule aam accept jo kar chukka hai. So finally you succeeded in fooling my son han miss downmarket.
Manik almost shouted: Nyonika, you better..

Just then,
Cabir: Arre Manik the beer khatam ho gai... oh Nyonika Mam aap bhi humare sath party karne aaye ho. Manik ne officially announced kar diya so?
Manik was shocked he looked at Nandini with questioning looks and he got a buzz from cabir, "dude Nandini ne pehle hi bula diya tha and abhi she texted so hum guest room se aaye behave as if hum sath the party k rat se and yaa baki sab I'll tell you later"
Nyonika: Cabir you better don't speak. Agar Manik ni hota to you would never be able to stay in SPACE okay.
Manik: Nyonika..
Mukti cutting Manik in between: Nyonika Mam you are absolutely right actually. Aap nahi hote toh Cabir kya hum koi SPACE main ni hote, right guys?
Alya: Exactly Mukti, aunty aap ni hote to SPACE chalta hi nai and agar SPACE ni chalta to TSC ni hota and Woh ni hota to MaNan ek ni hote.
Dhruv: Agreed Alya, and tum log kaise bhul sakte ho she is the sole reason ke aaj Manik and Nandini ek hai.
Nyonika was damn pissed off and listening to Dhruv she was with a question mark?
Dhruv: Ohh Mam samjh ni aaya naa, guys tumhe bhi nai what yar! Agar Mam ne Manik ko jail ke andar ni dalwaya hota toh yeh log jagadte nai.. jagadte nai toh manate nai.. and agar manate nai toh confess kaise karte haina guys..
Nyonika angrily: just shut up you all. And you Miss. Murthy just get lost from here. Manik was about to blast but Navbhi and Fab 5 pushed them both in centre and all joined their hands together and formed a chain..
Abhi: Manik and Nandini alag ni hai and ho bhi nai sakte.
Navya: aap kisko juda karne ka soch re ho jo alag hai hi nai. Aapko kyu nai dikhta hum nai jaante par ab nai. Not now they wont get separated ab toh bilkul nai jab tak STAR family hai tab tak nai. Ek ko bhi nai tod paoge aap.
Manik and Nandini were so touched seeing their friends fighting for them but they were worried too.
Nyonika: Oh seriously tum sabko lagta hai tum yeh stupid harkatein karoge and main dar jaungi, Manik don't forget you are still my son, remember that.
Cabir was about to speak when Manik said: Ah Cabir lemme handle, Nandini tum sab bahar jao I'll join you. I need to talk to her okay?
Nandini: you will be fine right. Her eyes asked his with so much of love.
Manik: I promise..

Everyone goes out,
Nyonika: So know your friends have that audacity to speak between us. Don't forget Manik I can sue them for this act of theirs.
Manik: Nyonika Nyonika Nyonika, Come to the point kya kam hai?
Nyonika: Han toh even I don't have much time for your stupid friends and you.
Manik: That I know from the day I started understanding things say something new.
Nyonika: M your mother Manik , how can you talk to me like that?
Manik: Woh haq tum 2 saal pehle kho chuki ho. So don't gimme that damn and speak up God dammit.
Nyonika: Tum mujhe meri ek galti ke liye abhi tak maf nai kia and tum us Nandini ko itni aasani se maaf kaise kar sakte ho?
Manik: you know what if you don't come straight to the point you may leave, the doors are open.
Nyonika: fine, so straight to the point Manik. You are leaving that down-market girl right now or else I will rusticate her.
Manik: Miss. Nandini Murthy naam hai uska. And tum shayad thik se sunna nai mere friends ne kya bola abhi you cant break us toh sochna bhi mat. And don't you dare think of rusticating her Miss. Nyonika Malhotra tum shayad bhul rahi ho I love her and when I love some1 I can go beyond limits to be with her.
Nyonika: Manik shayad tum bhul rahe ho ke yeh property abhi bhi mere naam hai I can throw you out from here.
Manik: Hahaha.. so funny Miss. Nyonika Malhotra cause shayad tumhe aapne business meeting me yad ni raha ke I turned 21 and now I just have to go and sign the papers at dad's office and secondly don't forget I still have your secret safe with me if you don't want ke Tia ka part jo tumhare pass rahega till she gets 21, eoh bhi tumse chin jaye toh yeh bewakhufi karna coz now main bhi 50% belong karta hun is property ko. And lastly never ever say to her down-market don't forget she is my girl now and ya usse apne se compare mat karo k maine usse maaf kar diya cause jo Woh mere liye karti hai Woh tum kabhi nai kar paogi and ya usne mujhe jitna happy in 6 months main kiya hai Woh tum 20 yrs main nai kar payi so never ever compare me and come in our way all right?
Nyonika: Fine Manik. That girl she will leave you, she is just with you cause of ur money. Mark my words.
Manik: That's not possible pata hai q cause is world main na sirf ek Nyonika Malhotra hai dusri koi ban ni sakti now can you leave.

Nyonika left and thot,"how can you Manik how can you think I'll forget your birthday. You are my son dammit, I knew this I just wanted to remind you that you have to go and sign the papers but this girl she is taking you more far from me and she is softening your heart that is not good I will not allow her. Nandini I will make you pay for this"

Everyone saw Nyonika leaving angrily giving them kill you looks, Nandini was the first to reach in there,
Nandini: you are alright na?
Manik: never before. He hugged her, you know what main Humesha se usse ladta to tha but your love gave me strength to tell her more now she will never come between us. She forgot my bday too and she compares herself with you she doesn't deserve to be a Mother.
Nandini clutching is shirt more tight: Shhh.. aisa nai bolte. Manik tum Nyonika se mam se baat q ni karte about the incident.
Manik broke the hug pushed her,
Manik: ssly Nandini main yahan humare liye lad raha hun and tum uski side leri ho tumhe lagta hai main usse jan buj kar maaf ni kia?
Nandini: Manik maine yeh kah kahan meri baat toh suno.
Manik: just shtup saying this he left the place and went in garden seeing him this way everyone went to Nandini

Dhruv: Main buddy k pass jata hun.

Just then Cabir came,
Cabir: kya hua isse?
Nandini uttered the conversation,
Cabir: Nandini please isme leave Manik coz hum sabko lagta hai she is wrong and ya is bare main Manik se kabhi kuch mat bolna kabhi nai.
Mukti: Nandini Cabir is right, Manik kissi bhi chiz se itna angry ni hota jitna Nyonika ke naam se hota hai and usse abhi yeh hi lag raha hoga k tum uska side le ri ho
Nandini: You are right usse yehi lag raha hai mukti..
Alya: Please don't mind Nandini, but Manik and me we were together from last 7 years and itne time main Nyonika mam ne aisa kuch nai kia jisse Manik ko khusi mile and Woh incident it was so terrible. Aur tum hi kehti ho na Manik has a fragile heart so yaa his belief on love is fragile so don't break it, Nandini he changed for u he is not the old Manik and we are loving this Manik so take care of him.
Cabir: Alya is right.
Nandini: Yaa guys I'm so stupid I shouldn't have done it. But I know how to get him back I'll go there.
Mukti: I hope everything goes right
Cabir and Alya in unison: Ofcourse they said it with a smirk

In garden,
Dhruv: Buddy what's wrong?
Manik: he said everything to Dhruv, she thinks maine galti ki yahan I'm trying to save our relation and Woh hai ki kya karu main iska.?
Dhruv: buddy relax ho sakta hai na Woh stressed ho and she will understand.
Manik: par Dhruv
Dhruv: Manik, tujhe pata haina Nandini she can never think wrong about a person so Woh unme bhi achai doondh rahi hai. Usse kya pata k usse yahan kuch ni milega. Usse time de Manik
Manik: shayad tu thik keh raha hai. Par Nyonika she wants k hum sath na rahe and this gal she knows this thing but still uski burai k jagah achai doondh ri hai how?
Dhruv: coz Woh Nandini hai right?
And they both had a laughter..
Manik: right
Dhruv; Chale?
Manik: yaa
They were about to leave when someone came with Music...

Precap:
Nandini singing for Manik to please him and asking forgiveness.
Abhimanyu's truth.

Guys sorry less MaNan but this part was required. I will try to write next part by today night cant assure anything but tomorrow for sure till then enjoy this and keep commenting J
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yippi me first 🥳 wonderful update...just loved it...especially manik n nyonika's convo!!! very nicely written...cont soon n thanx for the pm
Edited by SKTKsara - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww... loved the update...amazng how all of them stood together
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Posted: 10 years ago
sooo nyccc kiaraaa i liked manik nd neyonika's face offf intresting preacape hope u will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
In this part the highlight for me was ManRuv bonding.. Since Dhruv has gone all crazy because of his insecurities.. I have been missing that.

And that Star dialogue... It was too extravagant.. Could have been a little simpler and realistic.

P.s. Sorry if I hurt you with the criticism. I don't know but you are the only person on KY2 forum (after Rida) with whom I tell everything. I have a feeling that you will take it in good stride. Sorry if I am being too presumptuous over here .

Love
Nandini
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved d update
Continue soon
Thnks fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

In this part the highlight for me was ManRuv bonding.. Since Dhruv has gone all crazy because of his insecurities.. I have been missing that.

And that Star dialogue... It was too extravagant.. Could have been a little simpler and realistic.

P.s. Sorry if I hurt you with the criticism. I don't know but you are the only person on KY2 forum (after Rida) with whom I tell everything. I have a feeling that you will take it in good stride. Sorry if I am being too presumptuous over here .

Love
Nandini


Chill dea its all cool.. Suggestions are always welcomed.. Its not critism at all atleast i dont feel that..And the STAR dialogue it was just a needed one i thot at that time suiting Navya's character.. But i'll surely keep ur suggestion in mind and think about it.. Never hesitate to suggest girl.. :)
Edited by kiaraMaNanholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 28:

So Manik and Dhruv were leaving from the garden when suddenly they heard someone coming to them. There she was just to correct her mistake. Seeing him in pain is the last thing she want, she can do anything but cant she him suffer and knowing that right now the reason for his suffering is she herself. She will do anything to make it up for him.. and she had tears in her eyes.

(Guys it's raining over here and I was not able to stop myself from writing so here goes your update.)
Dhruv left the lawn and Nandini came close to him. Manik was pretending to be angry with her he was going from there when she held his hand.
Nandini: Manik, I'm sorry please. She uttered this in utmost innocence.
Manik released his arm from her grip. She was losing it, she was losing her control on her tears.
Nandini: Manik please I'm sorry na.
Manik went away from her and now she can't control more she was all crying. She hugged him from back and said: Manik please forgive me na, if you are still mad at me I can do whatever you want to make it up. Manik turned around caressed her arm and moved her hair which were on her face behind the ear and said: Kuch bhi?
Nandini understood he was calm know and he is not needed to be sorted but she said : han par jab tum gussa the abhi nai.
Manik got hold of her: Oh seriously.. and he bought her close to his heart and said, Miss. Murthy don't instigate me. He came close to her lips but suddenly it started to rain.
Manik: Oh shit, Nandini come fast.
Nandini held his arm and started singing...

Nandini,
Zehnaseeb zehnaseeb
tujhe chahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Manik pulled her closure and moved the strand behind her hairs,
Manik,
Mere kareeb mere habib,
tujhe chahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Nandini looking deep in his eyes,
Tere sang beetien har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beetien uspe aitraaz hai
Is kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

Manik pulled her more closure and moved kissed her forehead,
Hua amir dil gareeb,
tujhe chahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Nandini,
Zehnaseeb zehnaseeb,
tujhe chahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Manik then kissed her eyes,

Nandini,
Lena dena nahi duniya se mera bas tujhse kam hai,
Tere ankhiyo ke seher main yaran sab intezam hai
He cups her face...
Khusiyo ka ek tukda mile ya mile ghum k khurcharien,
Yaara tere mere kharche main dono ka hi ek dam hai,

He moved to her lips and she stood on her feet and risen for him.
Manik,
Hona likha tha yuhi jo hua,
Yaa hote hote yuhi anjane main hogaya,
And they kissed,
jo bhi hua hua ajeeb,

Nandini,
tujhe chahun betahasha zehnaseeb

and she was just feeling him and their love.
Both,
Zehnaseeb zehnaseeb
tujhe chahun betahasha zehnaseeb
hua amir dil gareeb,
tujhe chahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Manik: Zehnaseeb zehnaseeb
tujhe chahun betahasha
Nandini: tujhe chahun betahasha
Manik: tujhe chahun betahasha
Both: zehnaseeb

And as soon as they broke the kiss they found fireflies everywhere..
Suddenly everyone came out but they dint saw the kiss and asked them why are they getting wet whether they want to get sick o what but suddenly when they saw fireflies everywhere they were so amazed they were lost.

Cabir: so this is how it looks when there is love. They are amazing.
Dhruv: yaa actually.
Nandini: Guys I told you na they are so tiny but they fight brightness and mom used to say they are best when they shine you know..
Everyone in unison: Yaa Nandini they shine when there is tru love
MaNan blushed.
Mukti: But sslly this is damn pretty hai na Abhi?
Navya: Mukti Abhi toh kab ka chala gya.
Mukti: What do you mean chala gaya?
Manik: Calm down Mukti. And navya tum tell me exactly what happened?

Precap:
Reason of Abhi missing and Nandini fainted..

Sorry for a short update but whether made me write it so



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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update..
Manik-Dhurv were really cute..
Glad Dhurv explained to Manik..
What an amazing song choice..
I could imagine them singing together..
MaNan moments were perfect..
Thanks for the PM..
Continue Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update..😃
Great song selection..Wish to see such a Romantic rain sequence in show as well😉
Thanks for PM:)

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