MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 35

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Posted: 10 years ago
poor Nandhu, glad she was saved on time... looking forward to next part😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rann143

Wow.. Lovely ff. I really enjoyed it so much.. Please dont end this ff.. You write so well, that every scene comes as if i am watching video... Seriously.. Hats off to ur story and your writing.. i so hope that cv's should show something which u mentioned in ur stiry...

Keep updating such lovely stories... 😊 😉


Thanks alot...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Terrific upodate...loved it very much..
waiting to see how manik calms nandini down..
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Posted: 10 years ago
a lovely update once again! continue soon! and please please please dont end this ff its one of the best MaNan ff i have read! so yeah just drop the idea of ending it and continue writing :)
hope you update soon :)
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Ha hA
loved that

"Chotu Monster "
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kaira these last two r de bestest updates
dis track is more intresting nd luvable dan present ky2 track
rlly👏👏...awwsome...awwsome...awwsome...zillion times
very nice nd than q for considerng my post nd taking it positively nd improving upto dis level

dis shows dat U R NOT ONLY GD WRITER BUT ALSO VRY GD PERSON
Lotzz of HUGS...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey read all d parts in a go! All I can say is ur a damn gud writer I mean u've penned it sooo beautifully dat I had started to cry in mukbhi chapter...all r so gud in ur ff n nyonika toh..she has shown her true face to nandu..wish v cud c it onscreen...love it
N ya..thnx a lottt for da pm😃
Update soon! Cant wait
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Guys i'm extremely sorry but please bear with me i have my final's submission and other stuffs so busy.. I m truing hard to get time but have a busy schedule.. Ill try 100 per to write please
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Originally posted by: kiaraMaNanholic

Guys i'm extremely sorry but please bear with me i have my final's submission and other stuffs so busy.. I m truing hard to get time but have a busy schedule.. Ill try 100 per to write please


its alryt kiara..take ur tym..
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Part 35:

Nandini was heading to green room when Manik came from behind he was in pain his leg pained but he was in pain coz he was not able to protect her to be with her he was guilty and stopped her.
Manik: Nandini.. Are listen wait.. Nandini...
Nandini: Kya Manik?
Manik: Hey kya hua? Mujhse upset ho..
Nandini: Manik kya hua kyu piche aare ho main change karne jari hun
Manik: main bhi.,
Nandini: What?
Manik: Matlab i also have to change na? Ouch..
Nandini soon realized he was standing and he had a fractured leg.
Nandini: What the hell Manik tum khade q ho? Shit main bhi na.. She called Cabir while helping Manik.
"Yaa Cabir get the wheelchair fast now"
Cabir comes with the chair and Manik sit there..
Cabir: Chal i'll get you change..
Nandini: no Cabir tum jao main hun na..
Cabir smirking: yaa tum ho hi na
Manik: Sht up Cabir and Nandini are you sure..
Nandini: Yaa..

In green room,
Nandini: Manik just a minute I'll bring your clothes
Manik thinking," what is disturbing her? She is definitely hiding something but what. Is she disturbed by that pandit's incident? Oh god I'm not gonna leave that jerk.
Nandini thinks," get a grip on yourself Nandini you need to be smiling or else he will definitely find there is something fishy"
Nandini: This one Manik?
Manik: Whatever you like.
Nandini trying to smile: Acha?
He comes to Manik and removes his shirt. His hand hand bruises she was teary thinking she is the reason," agar main Manik ke life main nai hoti toh panditji usse marvate nai. God am I seriously a bad luck to everyone. Pehle mom dad and now Manik"
Manik: You know Nandini you are my lucky charm han seriously isliye toh aap tumhare hope ke wajah se we are together mujhe to umeed hi nai thi. But you never left your hope if I seriously want to learn a thing from you it would be being Positive. You gave a spark to my life.. I love you"
This was enough for Nandini to break the negativity building in her and she thinks," yes Nandini woh sach bol raha hai tum bad luck kaise ho sakti ho. Main aur Manik hum toxic kaise ho sakte hai woh hai toh main hun uske bina mera koi wajood nai hai. Nandini yes love him he needs it give him happiness which he starved for years. He deserves all of it"
Manik: Kaha khoyi hun?
Nandini: Kahi nai.
Manik: Toh reply karo i said I love you.
Nandini: kisses his forehead I love you too...
And then he tells her he will come changing the bottoms and she says he can change here as she can close her eyes.
Manik got dressed up and he was making his hair and Nandini went to change after removing the clothes she saw the scratches..
"He touched me how can he? Manik was right I'm so dumb how could i? Nandini your purity, m i pure?
Manik was hearing everything as she was talking to her and he enters in she was hell shocked to see him but then she saw he had his eyes closed.
Manik: Nandini, you are still as pure as ur heart. No1 can take that from you tum yeh sab kyu soch ri ho.
Nandini sobbing: Manik kya tum mujhe ab bhi pyar kar paoge with these scratches these bruises with the fact that some1 touched me..
Manik placed his finger on her lips: shhh.. It is not your fault and Nandini I had, I am and I will love you always. And this love will only keep increasing I will never ever leave you. Leave you I can't even think about that. Nandini I have loved you your heart agar koi aur aaye and uski galti ho toh hum khud ko q blame kare.. Tumme kuch nai badla Nandini tum aj bhi utni hi pure ho jitna pehle din thi now please stop thinking this. It hurts to see you hurt please.
Nandini wears the first layer of her top..
Manik: Can i now openny eyes?
Nandini: Manik I have not change but you can open..
She hid herself with the upper layer of top she was about to change..
Nandini: tum jao am fine now thank you.
Manik snatches the top
Nandini: Manik?
Manik: What.. He sees the bruises and ask her to turn..
Nandini: what?
Manik: I said turn!!
Nandini turns... Manik kisses the bruises on her neck and shoulder.. And makes her wear the top.. And slowly goes down as her top was getting struck and he pulls the top from her waist and kisses ger waist that sends shiver to her body..
He hold her hand where there as scratches and kisses there he makes her turn and makes her face him.. Her eyes were closed.. He kissed her forehead and say," Nandini you are mine forever. Its our day all the best"
She forgets everything hearing she belongs to him she keeps on saying in her mind," Yes he is right, I m his.. Nandini you are only his..."
She smiled she blushed she kissed his cheeks," thank you and yaa thank you for making me only urs"
And they had an eyelock and he came near her to kiss ker and she rise to match his hide thet were so close until it was disturbed by a knock..

Manik: Perfect!
Nandini smiles: han ek minute.
Mukti: Nandini Manik bhi hain toh dono jaldi karo performance ka announcement hogaya hai.
Manik: Mukti.. Tu thodi der bad nai aa sakti thi humesha itna perfect timing kaise hota hai han? Bol
And he comes on in frustration and was about to sleep when Nandini holds him and he cries in pain.
Nandini: Manik, mukti cancel the performance
Manik and Mukti in unison: What?
Nandini: Yaa look at him he is in pain.
Manik sits on wheelchair.. Holds her hand: Nandini Its our day aaj kuch nai plz chale
Nandini: Par Manik ur leg..
Manik: shhh.. Sab thik hai..
Mukti: Main Manik ko leke jaati hun.. Tu aaja hairs banake and she smirks and Nandini blushes..
Manik was in deep pain that was seen by Mukti.
Mukti: Itna pyar karta hai?
Manik shocked: han kya?
Mukti: Itna pyar kar ta usse ke itna pain hone ke bawajud perform karega?
Manik: Mukti love tune bola tha na bht muskil se milta hai and pain kya I can die for her. Bas I m afraid.
Mukti: Afraid?
Manik: Yaa she thinks its her fault so m injured she thinks she is no pure I made her convince par pata ni kyu lagta gmhai jaise woh convince nai hui hai and so I am scared kahi woh chali na jaye.
Mukti: Manik pata hai Nandini ne kaha tha pyar selfish hota hai han bht hota hai toh agar woh apni galti samaj ke tumhe chod bhi de toh bhi apne liye woh zarur aayegi hum ne Manik tum dono aakho main what kind of emotion you share tu tension mat le hum sab hai usko yeh batane ke liye ke jo insan heart se intna pure ho usko kisi ka touch impure nai kar sakta.
Manik was much relax hearing his friends are with him. This conversation was heard by Nandini and she felt she was wrong if something is wrong that her thinking of leaving Manik which she certainly wont cahhe kich bhi ho.

They went on the stage and performed for Fusion ( guys please as performance u can imagine of yesterdays epi)
After the performance Manik held her and kissed her forehead in front of the audience she was hell nervous and she went running but someone from the crowd was so happy and still clapping.. It was Nyonika she was so happy to see finally someone is there to put a smile on Manik's face. Manik went behind her in his wheel chair..
"Nandini wait" he said
Nandini: I can't imagine we actually performed together she got on her knees as he was on his chair.. She was damn happy and she was a non stop train Blah bLah blah.. Until Manik held her hand and kept on her chest.
Manik: Can you hear that? Is that for you?
She blushed..
Manik: Yaa it is for you. My heart beating for you..
He stands up and makes her stand
Nandini: Manik your leg?
Manik: Shhh and he pulled the strand which was coming on her face and he pulled it back on her ears
He moved his hands on her arms and other on her waist.. Holding her tight she cupped his face.. Brought her down and she kisses his forehead.. This is when you get lines when you are stresssed.. She kisses his eyes... And this if When you cry for many reason when ur eyes share the pain when they look at me intensely she kisses his nose this is for that bada wala gussa jo humesha humesha tumhare naak pe baitha rehta hai..she kisses his cheeks.. This is for relaxing that cheeks bones coz right now they are stretching and causing pain as you are blushing. She goes away looks in his eyes he helds her more tight.. She again holds his face.. Come near his lips and she kiss them the pair of his lips and long peck.. And this is for the smile that appears when you see me smiling u see me doing small things like eating icecream or watching movies or talking pata ni kya, for believing me, for having faith in me, for the love u shower on me...
Manik was taken aback by her gesture but he was sure that she loves him and will never leave me..
He was not able to control himself and he again sealed his lips with her and this time It lasted more.. They was an outrage of emotions they both were kissing but at the same time there were tears rolling down their cheeks it was like their pain is leaving their body.. It was so magical for them.. They both were sharing the same pain.. Pain of not believing him and pain of failing to protect her but now they were inseparable nothing and no one will ever be able to snatch what they have in life now..

They broke the kiss and seeing the tears in each other's eyes tgey simply hugged each other tight more tight showing the gesture is will never leave each other

Suddenly fab 5 and Navya arrived..
Cabir: Ehem ehem..
They broke the hug but Mani held her sideways and whispered," ab kahi nahi jane dunga"
Navya came running and snatches Nandini and they twirled and hugged her Nandini was facing Manik who was like a bursting coconut getting into sense what happened and in a what the f**k gesture to Navya
Mukti: Kys hua? Navya hai itna jealous q hora hai?
Manik: Oh plz main and jealous
Cabir: Right. But guys the performance it was incredible
Mukti: Yaa guys it was magical
So agreed everyone
Dhruv: Buddy group hug..
Fab5 had group hug and navya and Nandini watches them and Manik held Nandini's hand...

Precap:
MaNan romance

Note:
Guys I'm extremely sorry for late update
But guys please don't get mad if i cant update regularly i have my final's submission and then I've got exams my final's so I may not be able to write regularly please manage till my papers.. Love you all..

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