MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 41

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update!!
The date waz so beautiful in the pool dinner too good..
Loved the way manik being in his limits well behaved..
N Nandu being cozy hehhe..
The promo waz super exciting..
Manan romance
nyonika concern too cute.. Unimaginable 👏 👏 😳
Edited by divvi22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
manik's suprise was too good...dinner in pool awwsome
promo was intresting and suprising

waiting for next part...take ur time as u have xams ALL DE BEST😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome promo..plss update soon 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the promo..
Can't wait for the update...
Take ur time but make it soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
mastwala promo update fast fast waiting waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful promo!!
Chachi gave permission!! Arey i jst thot so yesterday n wat i get 2day is my thought!!
Loved it cont soon!
Thnxx 4 d pm!
All d best 4 ur exams! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
N nyonika!! Hw will manik react to it...nandu has bcum so bold being wid manik n fab 4!
Waitinggg
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was supposed to be studying today
but all i m doing is reading ur story
read all the 36 chs today
This is an amazing story n u r a fabulous writer
the promo for the upcoming part looks interesting
i'll be waiting for the updt
n ya i love the star family
n i m glad nyo is happy too wid manan
Updt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 37:

Manik was in his washroom looking at those scratches..
Manik thinking," God what are these feelings I mean I love her a lot but.. Then why is this sudden urge of having her completely. Making her mine..
Why the hell i cant? I want to touch her feel her.. Why is she so irresistible? Manik get a grip on urself she might be waiting..

Manik went down.
Nandini: Itna time q laga diya? You know breakfast bhi thanda hogaya tum na humesha aisa hi karte ho
Manik was just looking and staring at her the way she was making those innocent faces..
Manik thinks," God ahy is she so damn cute I feel like I get her right now and kiss those chubby cheeks"
Nandini: Manik, Manik kaha lost hogaye?
Manik: Ahh.. Why are you so cute?
Nandini: ahh kya?
Manik: Who ignore khaye m damn hungry..
Nandini: Main kab ka wait kar ri hun with that she made a cute face and bit her lower lip
Manik: Ahh don't do that
Nandini: Ab maine kya kiya?
Manik: Actually Nandini ignore whatever I m saying today.
Nandini: hua kya hai?
Manik: You are driving me crazy?
Nandini: Han.. And she was hell shocked whatever she heard..
Manik: Khaye, by the way kya bana hai..
Nandini: actually I dint knew what you would like so maine salad, parathe and juice rakha hai but agar tumhe inme se kuch nai pasand to toast bhi hai.. I know tumhe aadat hogi bht sari cheeze khane ki but maine chutti de di and tum uth gaye so I was able to make only these sorry.
Manik: I will whatever you made.. Atleast it is made for me with love..
Nandini: Manik tumhe pata hai this is first time I cooked at ur place
Manik: So?
Nandini: So kuch nai tum nahi samjhoge and she was happy damn happy..
She was having her bite when Manik lean forward to her
Nandini: Manik kya kar re ho?
Manik took the bite from the paratha she was holding sge was surprised and pecked her cheeks and whispered," treat de raha hun first time mere ghar khana banaya na Miss Murthy"
Nandini: Acha aisa han.. Mr. Malhotra aaj mujhe lagta hai main kuch zyada hi aapko pasand nai aarahi hun you know aap mujhse dur ni reh pare
Manik: who kya hai na Miss. Murthy aap ho hi itne irresistible
Nandini blushed and they were done with their breakfast
Manik: Nandini I will go upstairs and have bath okay.
Nandini: yaa I will just clear up this mess
Manik: servants kar lenge
Nandini: Manik maine unhe chutti di hai anyways I'll be there in 10 mins jaldi karna ghar jana hai I have to bath..
Manik: okay
Manik reached his room and talked to himself," arre I have to take her out nahi toh Fab 5 will kill me I promised them ke give this night to me and I will ask her to come out tomorrow par ab"
Nandini reached upstairs in his room and saw him,
Nandini: Manik tum ab tak nahi gaye main jari hun..
Manik: Nahi nahi main jaa ra hun na..
Nandini: toh abhi tak kya kar re the..
Manik held her from waist and bring her close she rest her hand on his chest..
Nandini: Manik chodo mujhe..
Manik: Who kya hai na bedroom aaya to kal ke kich moments aagye you know kal koi bol ra tha ke she want to..
Nandini blushes and stops him: Manik mujhe chodo mujhe kuch yaad nai hai
Manik: Acha not a problem action replay kare shayad yad aajae
Nandini struggles to get free from his grip..
Manik walks with her towards bed and pushes her on bed and runs in washroom
Manik: hahaha see my magic..
Nandini: Manik main tumse bat nahi kr ri you are a cheat.
Manik: everything is fair in love and war baby..
Nandini saw his towel on bed: Yeh ladka kabhi apni chiz q yad nahi rakhta
Manik realized he forgot his towel
Manik: Nandini maine towel bhr chod diya kya please de do
Nandini: acha Manik this is ur punishment coZ you cheated
Manik: Nandini main aisehi aajaunga I don't mind
Nandini hot scared, u nA Manik
He tries one more time,
Manik: Nandini towel please
Nandini went to give him towel and he pulls her in..
Nandini: Manik what is this?
Manik: Lets bath together..
Nandini: Ssly.. In ur dreams..
Manik: you are challenging me?
Nandini: yaa..
Manik: Dint you remember the day you came for saying sorry
Nandini: I don't forget things Manik
Manik on the shower..
Nandini: Manik kya kar re ho? Leave me please
Manik: shhh.. And pulls her close.. You seriously want to go to I can leave you
Nandini: I don't but cant help it chachi wait kar re honge
Manik: main who nai puch ri..
Tumhe bathroom se bahar jana hai
She just blushed..
Manik pulled her close and pulled that strand of her hair behind her ears
Manik: Nandini why I cant stay away from you?
Nandini: then don't stay away who is asking you to
Manik: But it's becoming difficult I feel like I touch..
Nandini: shhh I know Manik I felt the same yesterday but as you said Chachi
Manik: don't say anything please

(Bg music:
Lakh roka par ruka na ishq ye sarzor hai
Apni chahat aur kuch hai ishq k kuch hai
Tere mere bas main kya hai horaha hai jo likha hai
Is lamhe ki khwahisho main zindagani ki raza hai
Yuhi re mil rahe hum
Tujh hi main bandhe rahe hum

Na gavar tha mujhe jo
Dil ko who manzur hai
Tujhse mil ke dil na jane kis nashe main chur hai
Oho saath dil ke dil se tere hogaya hun bavara main
Tere qurbat se bhi kaise reh sakungi main juda
Tere hi bahon main rahun main
Chahat ke humesha rahun main rahun main
Yuhi re.. Plz listen this in bg)
Manik gently caresses her face kissed her forehead..
Moves his arms on her arms kisses her eyes..
He saw water dropping from her lips he cant control he went on her lips and kissed them.. He was in his towel and bare chested.. He kissed her hand that rested on his chest
Nandini hugged him tight.. Due to water making her clothes wet he could feel her body against him.. He was loosing it.. He wanted to feel her more..
His hand moved on her back going down more more.. He could feel her body getting tighten their breath increasing and suddenly he realized Manik promise he parted Nandini and kissed her lips again and whispered Nandini don't loose like this on me I cnt control u knw na our limits I will never disappoint Chachi
Nandini: I believe you
Manik went out of bathroom before he loose it again.. N shouts: u take bath I will get ur clothes and towel and m changing don't try to come out
Nandini: as if m dying Mr. Malhotra
Manik: Fine..

She was bathing when he realized oh god Fab 5 kya karu ab Chachi hi help kar sakte hai
He called Chachi
Chachi: Han Manik beta bolo
Manik: Chachi firse help chahiye
Chachi: Manik Am's milna chahte hai Nandini se main kitna talu
Manik: Apko kaise pata chachi?
Chachi: Chachi hun pata hai.. Par Manik aj toh Am's
Manik: Par Chachi and he narrated whole incident
Chachi: oh yeh bt hai Par Manik Am's ko milvana toh padega
Manik: Chachihe said in very low tone
Chachi: ek chiz ho sakte hai
Manik got happy: kya
Chachi: tum Nandini ko rat ko le jao and ek kam q nai karte tum khud hi kyu nahi le aate Nandini ko ghr and then Am's se milva ke le jaoand waise bhi ab Am's tumse naraz bhi nahi hai
Manik: ohh Chachi you are the best.. Chachi ek aur help
Chachi: aiyyo ab kya
Manik: Hum lunch apke sath kare yeh Nandini ne sare servants ko chutti dedi hai
Chachi: Yeh bhi koi ppuchne wali bat hai and
Waisebhi risabh says he misses you a lot.
Manik: Okay chachi

Nandini breaks Manik trance: manik towel and kapde
Manik: Yaa he give her clothes she comes out Manik hugs her and makes her twirl
Manik: Nandini Nandini Nandini Chachi man gaye
Nandini dint knew about all this: Man gaye for what
Manik: For you and me and fab 5 for the outing..
Nandini: What outing..
Manik: sorry but I promised Fab 5 I will get u for an outing
Nandini made a sad face: Manik you should have asked me na.. I want to spend time with my family and Am's.
Manik: We are going there only for lunch and will go at night
Nandini still sad: Manik I wanted to be with Am's at night too tum mujhe pucha q nai
I know fab5 mean a lot to u mere liye bhi karte hai but
Manik cant c her sad face so he impulsively decided to drop the idea and in front of her held his ears and went up and down: I am sorry Nandini I dint ask you. We wont go don't worry but please don't get mad
Nandini: Manik and she hugged him. U r so cute I mean thik hai I'll come but next time please ask me okay
Manik: Okay madam..
Chale..

They met nyonika at the entrance
Manik: plz not now
Nyo: I saw the ticket transaction even shez coming?
Manik: So please don't start now
Nandini: Manik please..
Manik: Nandini tum...
Nyonika: she is ur responsibility please dhyan rakhna
Manik: what
Nyonika: don't get shocked i know u have habit to create mess so
Nandu winks at her...

They walk out of gate and nyonika prays bless them world's happiness...

Manik in car,
Aaj Yeh draculla bani pari han aisa toh kya jaado kia tumne han..
Nandini: Who Manik mujhe na tumhe..
Suddenly Manik applied break
Manik: Shit mere dhyan kaha hai that dog bechara mar jata..
Han Nandini kya
Nandini: Nothing drive ghar aagaya..


Manik and Nandini went inside the house,
Chacha: aiyyo Manik tum log kaha reh gaye the and tumhare frens kaha hai
Manik: Frens?
Chachi winks at Manik
Manik: Han Chacha who frens ko thoda kam hai so main isse chodne aaya hun
Chacha: Aree wapas lene aaoge petrol waste hoga yahi raho have. Lunch and then take her and go
Nandini: Chachi Am's kaha hai?
Chachi: who upar tumhare kamre main hai
Nandini: Main jati hun
Chacha: Aiyyo Nandini Manik ko leke jao
Manik: Ahh Chacha main toh Risabh ke sath khelunga q rishabh?
Chacha: Okay main bahar kam khatam karte aata
Nandini was watching Manik and Risabh and was just staring Manik.
Manik: Risabh Lagta hai Miss. Murthy ko Am's ko nahi milna
Nandini: Risabh Mr. Malhotra ko bata de aisa kuxh nahi hai
Manik: Acha?
Chachi: Tum dono jAate ho ke nahi..

Nandini: Am's
Am's: Aiyyo Nandini tum kaha thi main tumhara kabse wait kar rahi hun
Nandini: Woh main
Am's: mereko maaf kardo
Nandini: Aree Am's please agar hum aapke jagah hote to hum bhi yahi sochte
Am's: main kabhi nai soch sakti Trilok aisa kar sakta hai
Nandini: maine bhi nai Am's par Manik who nai hota to main pata nai
Am's: Manik aaya hai?
Nandini: Han Am's aap miloge
Am's: han.. Nandini yeh marks kaise
Nandini gets scared and says arre yeh kuch nai bas aisehi..
Manik comes and Am's apologized him but he says that she should she is like a mother and a mother has right to scold their child..
Am's kisses his forehead Nandini is ur responsibility now take care of her
Manik: Am's can I take her for outing
Am's: She is all urs..
Manik and Nandini goes to her and hugs her
Manik: Thank-you for trusting
Chachi was watching this and as soon as they came out
Chachi: finally ab Am's man gai ab main tumhe mere limits se mukt karti hai now mujhe Nandu ka tension nai hai she is all urs tum dhyan rakhna..
Manik: Oh Chachi u r great..

Precap:
Outing
Harshad...
I can be late for update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
plzz upate soon the promo was too good..
sorry for late reply exams😆

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