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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 15


Chachi watches MaNan sleeping in eachothers arms.. she talks to
herself "Hayoo Rabba, yeh donno aise woh bhi sath main? Main toh pehle se hi
janti thi Nandini ka shahrukh to yeh hi hai.. hay kinna sukoon hai ek dusre ke
chehre pe.. Mujhe yad hai kaise Murthyji bhi mujhse milne aaya karte the.. chup
chup ke.. par agar Murthyji ne aise inko dekh liya kabhi to.. hay Nandini ki
chickamma bhale tumhe Manik kitna bhi pasand kyo na ho tumhe tok na hoga inko..
kyu na main Manik ka test loon? Bada maza aayega.. Come on Nandini ki chickamma
time to get angry fake wala..."



Chachi shouts (faking) : Nandini...


Hearing the scream MaNan gets up.. seeing chachi in front of
them they got shocked..


Manik: Chachi woh..


Chachi: Tum chup raho.. and jao yahn se.. Nandini tum mere
sath niche chalo.


Manik was going back to Nandini and Chachi..


Chachi; Rat ko toh yahan se nai aaye hoge na.. Jahan se aaye
the wahan se jao.


Nandini: Chachi woh gir jayega.


Chachi: Nandini tum chahti ho main tumhe firse manglore bhej
dun?


Manik: Chachi plz main jaata hun usko kuch mat karo.


Manik leaves through the pipe and Nandini and Chachi comes
downstairs.


Chachi: Jao dekhlo use safely niche utra k nai.


Nandini: kya?


Chachi: Jaldi dekh lo uske pehle k I change my mind.


Nandini watches Manik and waves him Goodbye.


Nandini: Chachi woh main.. woh main batane hi wali thi.


Chachi: Kb bachhe hone k bad (Chachi was layghing as she was
facinf her back)


Nandini broke down hearing such words of Chachi..


Chachi: Hayyo rabba yeh kudi se toh koi mazak bhi nai kar
sakta.


Nandini: Kya matlab?


Chachi: Nandini mujhe tumhare aur Manik k riste se koi problem
nai hai. Par aaj agar main tab nahi tokti toh shayad Manik kabhi hume puchna
zaruri nai samjhta. And beta don't mind par you know na aaj kal ke youngster ka
koi bharosa nai. They don't set limits so they are not afraid to cross them
isliye aaj maine Manik ko toka. Main tumhe aur Manik ko bht trust karti hun par
aaj rokna zaruri tha and main bhi toh dekhu Nandini ka shahrukh uske family ka
dil jitney ke liye kya karta hai.


Nandini was overwhelmed and she hugged Chachi and said ty lot
many times.


Nandini: Chachi aap Manik ka test lena chahte ho toh le lo. Par
Chachi Manik kabhi apni limits cross nahi karega I trust him.


Chachi: I know par beta kabhi kabhi lamhe aise hote hai jab
hum kamzor hojate hai isliye. And tumhare Chacha ne tumhe kabhi pakad liya to
meri toh chutti samjho.


Nandini: I understand Chachi. Thanks for accepting Manik. Main
abhi use cal karke Batati hun..


Chachi snatches the phone,


Chachi: Arre arre kya kar ri ho.. I said na I wanna test him.


Nandini: Par chachi he would be tensed na.


Chachi; Toh thoda tension lene do..


Just then Nandini's phone rang and it was Manik..


Nandini: Chachi ab main isse kya bolu?


Chachi: Bol dena college aake I will talk about it.


Nandini picked up the call and said Chachi around we will talk
about this in college reach there soon. And don't worry Mukti will come to pick
me up.


Nandini went to freshen up and all the while she was thinking
how Chachi accepted Manik. After getting fresh she went down had breakfast and
went with Mukti. She narrated this wohle incident with Mukti and how Chachi is
tricking Manik. Both had a huge laughter and Mukti said she is finally happy
that chachi accepted Manik.



Manik was continuously looking at the entrance so that he
could figure out what happened with Nandini. Just then Cabir arrived..


Cabir: Whats up dude? Waitiii...nnggg.. for someone?


Manik: yar Cabir abhi nai bht tensed hun..


Cabir: saale dost kid liye hote hai? Bata kya hua?


Manik narrated the wohle incident and cabir was shocked.


Cabir: Saale tujhe kitni bar bola tha sambhala kar itna
romance acha nai hai. Par tu sune tab na. ab bichari ko kitna suna padega kuch
idea hai?


Manik: Cabir main already ht pareshan hun please abhi tak woh
aai bhi nai hai kya hua hoga uske sath.


Cabir: Shant hoja.. Le here she comes.


Mukti: whatsup guys!! What's up Manik? Sunna tune koi jhol kia
kal .


Manik: Please Nandini I m sorry it's all because of me. How can
I be so stupid. I should be more careful. I broke ur trus m extremely sorry
please forgive me.


Nandini was not able to see Manik that way and she uttered
evithing.


Manik was so shocked and said; So Chachi accepted me. That
calls for a party. He stood on the table and announced "Guys jisko jo khana
pina hai continue aaj canteen ka bill main bharunga its my day"


Everyone was shocked,


Mukti: Nandini we have never seen this. Manik ko itna khush
kabhiu nahi dekha believe me.


Cabir: Yaa there is something special about u.


Nandini: Thank you par aisa kuch nai hai.


Mukti; Manik Manik get down. Shayd tune pura sunna nahi..
Chachi wants u to impress her and apna muh mat kholna warna Nandini gai okay.


Manik: Yaa yar yeh toh maine socha hi nai. Par Chachi toh
mujhse already impressed hai na toh fir yeh sab q Nandini.


Cabir: qki she wants to know k jisse Nandini pyar karti hai woh
use chod toh nai dega. Woh use shadi karne k layak toh hai na.


Manik playfully hits Cabir..


Cabir: Okay BaBa Manik. She just want to know tu uski family
ko kaise han bulvayega coz Chacha is not aware so.


Manik: ooo like that. Chachi ko toh main aise hi pata lunga
she's my fan. Unko I'll sy shahrukh se Milna hai and she will melt.


Nandini hits Manik.. so funny..


Navya(hearing the convo entered in ): Guys jokes apart. But Nandini's
Chachi is not wrong. We guys we have to set certain limits. Look at me I crossed
my limit and main kaha hoon? I know tum log mere jitney dumb nai ho but still.


Cabir(pissed off): Shut up Navya. U r not dumb stop saying all
this. Tumhari galti nahi thi u surrendered urself ab who cheap nikla usme teri
kya galti.


Mukti: yaa Cabir is right. Par Cabir tujhe suddenly ho kya
jata hai why u behave like this. Navya to sirf example de ri thi.


Cabir: I don't know guys. With this Cabir leaves from there.


Navya: What's wrong with cabir?


Nandini: Arre Navya he might be stressed . Chod na.


Manik and Nandini exchanged glances that something is wrong
with Cabir.


Mukti: Par guys coming back to topic, Manik you need to stop
going to her place now and then and Nandini you need to stop asking him coming
to ur place. And raha bat impress karne ka toh Manik is so good with that.


Manik: Ya Mukti right. Haina
Nandini?


Nandini was wondering whats disturbing Cabir.


Nandini: yaa right. Main abhi aai.


Mukti: Isse kya hua?


Manik: May bhi Panditji classes.


Dhruv and Alya arrived there..


Manik; Buddy come lets eats something.


Just then Manik's phone beeped and it was a msg from Nandini: "backside
Music wing, 5 minutes"



At Music wing..


Manik saw Nandini seating there he went from behind and hugged
her from behind.


Nandini; Manik tum na..


Manik: Nandini tum din b din bahut naughty hue jar i ho. Suna nai
abhi Mukti ne kya kaha? Maintain distance..


She stood up Manik went next to her.. slide her hair behind
the ears and went forward to kiss her. But Nandini pushed him.


Manik: What?


Nandini: Manik its cabir.


Manik: Cabir kya?


Nandini: Manik something is wrong with Cabir. We need to talk
to him.


Manik: Ya actually even I feel that.



At Canteen,


Alya: Baki sab kaha hai and Manik kaha reh gaya.


Mukti: Aur kaha abhi bola donno ko maintain distance par yeh
sune tab na.


Alya: Distance y so?


Mukti narrated the incident. As soon as she completed MaNan
came back.


Mukti; Aao lovebirds koi fayda nai tumhe samjhane ka hai na.


Manik: Yar Mukti its imp. Its Cabir.


Everyone shocked..


Mukti: Cabir kya hua use?


Nandini: Calm down Mukti use kuch hua nai hai but we have to
find out what's bothering him?


He is behaving weird.


Navya: Ya guys yesterday he surprised me he decorated a room
and guess what it was my baby's room



Everyone shocked...



Precap:


Mission Cabir and impressing Chachi...










Edited by kiaraMaNanholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
awesome just loved it
chachi testing manik awesome idea

just awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
cute and lovely update
cavya coming ahead?
plz update soon
waiting for the scenes of manik and murthy family
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Wow.. So cute
Chachi to I luv her
Superb
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
awesome update..loved it pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
I just love chachi
She is so adorable and cute

Loved the update

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Part 16

Everyone was dumbstruck listening to what Navya said..
Dhruv: Guys, stop seeing her like that and lets get in Cabir's head but before that I think usse kuch time ke liye akela chodna chahiye.
Alya: I think dhruv is right.
Manik(teasingly): Yaa Alya Dhruv is definitely right hain na Nandini.
Nandini(laughingly): Yaa right..
Dhrulya blushed..
Mukti: Manik tune dekha ab yeh blush bhi sath main karte hai.
Navya: Main ghar jati hun meko rest karna hai!
Nandini: Take care Navya!! And Guys lets get serious. Dhruv actually makes sense. Cabir first need to spend time alone and he needs to face it himself whats going on with him.
Mukti: I guess Nandini is right.
Alya: Till then Manik you decide how would you impress chachi?
Manik: Guys its easy for me chill.
Nandini: Manik its not. I know chachi has accepted you but chachi is expecting something and i really want tum unke expectation se bhi zyada karo. Manik u only said na one day ke our future will be most bful so may be this is the first step to it.
Mukti: Manik, Nandini is right. Don't take things easily.
Manik: Toh guys ab?
Dhruv: Buddy tu stressed q ho ra hai? Hum hai na! Let's make a plan.
Nandini: Plan?
Mukti: Yaa i guess Dhruv is right we need a plan. To impress Chachi.. Mission impressing Chachi starts. And in this only one person is best,right Dhruv?
Dhruv: Yaa Mukti!
Manik: Guys kon??
Mukti: Manik tu bhul gaya.. Alya aur kon.!
Manik: oh yaa.. How can i forget her?
Alya: Okay guys, so agar mujhe karna hai toh step wise hoga..
Dhruv: Yaa Alya ka stepwise always work. Bus thoda cross hojata hai. Hain na Alya?
Alya: very funny dhruv. Okay lets start.
Step 1: First Impression is the last one so first we have to see ur clothes. Waise u dont need a makeover but atleast some changes.. U can't go wearing a blaze and shorts u know what i mean.
Manik: Excuse me.. Girls die for this look. U r forgotten let me remind you even u wer with me those 7 years
Alya: Manik i know that but its not me o Nandini its Chachi.. So first step shopping..
Nandini: Alya is right Monster. And bdw m not impressed by ur shorts okay.. It was ur.. Nothing Alya u say step2?
Manik: No no it was my..
Nandini: Manik plz..
Manik: I will surely ask u in my way..
Alya: Okay lovebirds... Step2 is gifts... Yaa guys u know its the best way to impress a girl's family. They love gifts.. So again we have to buy gifts for that Nandini and mukti u need to go..
Mukti: Cool'
Dhruv: Step 3 my angel..
Nandini: Aww Dhruv, angel and all han.. Neways step 3
Alya(blushing): Step 3- complimenting whatever she does.. Whether it her dress, her house, even if food.
Manik: Alya are u mad? Chachi and ghar tak toh thik hai par khana.. No no no.. No khana
Nandini hits Manik: Shut up Manik... I know Chachi experiments jarur karti hai but she cooks good you know na..
Manik: Okay fine don't get pissed of now..
Alya: step 4 talk.. I mean talk to Chachi.. Ask her about her past.. Pura time sirf apni Nandini ko mat dekhte rehna... Bhale tumhe batein kitni bhi boring lage dont show ill mannered behavior..
Manik: Ssly!?? Okay fine.. This is so much.. Aur kitna hai..
Nandini: Rehne do Alya. Usse itni prob hai meri family se toh.. Woh chahta hi nai hai hum sath rahe.. Leave it..
Alya in gestures: what are u doing shez hurt..
Nandini was about to walk away when Manik held her hand.. He knelt down catching his ears.. Acha listen Nandini M sorry i'll never say that again.. Plz forgive me.. With that he kissed her hand..
Dhruv: Nandini u r lucky and u have changed him alot.. But believe me buddy ne kabhi kisi se aise behave nahi kia hai..
Nandini kneels down too.. She cups his face which was down n said m sorry I overreacted.. Get up chalo..
Alya: Get up Manik its last step.. Step 5: asking permission to be with her.. Always..
Manik gets up in a fraction of second listening to be with her star..
Manik: Yeh step pehle q ni bataya.. Alya u are a sweetheart.. With this Manik hugs Alya..
Alya: Manik chill.. It was a joke.. To get u in mood..
Manik gets sad: This is not fair.
Alya: Dont be sad its kinda the same.. Step 5: Building trust and confessing ur love. Manik this step is everythng for u.. Trust bht badi hai and mujhse behtar koi ni janta.. Manik tumhare liye bhi to trust sab kuch hai.. So please take this step carefully.. And love confession is necessary coz agar tum chahte ho k Nandini ko milne k raste clear hojaye and Manik waise bhi Chachi ko pata hai and officially bataoge to unhe acha lagega.. Baki k steps tum ek din main karo toh thik hai par step 5 k liye we need proper setting.. And you have to do step 1-4 jaldi. Coz you know na 5 din bad kya hai?
Manik: what?
Everyone had same expression like what?
Alya: Its THE SPACE CELEBRATION guys. I know tum log bhul gaye honge but don't forget only couples are allowed and Manik the way Chachi said today you have to take legal permission from her as you know the party starts by 12 and ends in the morning.
Manik: Shit i forgot ab?
Alya: so you have 5 days.. And we have two mission.. Mission Chachi and Mission Cabir.. So all set for Mission C2..?
Manik: Mission C2?
Alya: Yaa C for chachi and C for Cabir..
Dhruv: Alya u na? okay leave it..Mission C2 lets do it..
Everyone laughed..
Nandini: Guys but wat is THE SPACE CELEBRATION?
Mukti: Nandini TSC means THE SPACE CELEBRATION is celebrated every year in space for completion of a new year in space. Its 25 years this time.
Nandini: 25 years?
Manik: Oh you thinking of Nyonika . Don't link them. Space belonged to my dad.. When he was 25 he started space and Nyonika married him only for money i doubt she ever loved Dad. And when they married Dad gifted her Space. The only thing she loves in this world is Space and she cares about it alot. Anyway leave all this. This time the celebration would be double and i have to bring u. Phewww.. Mission C2 starts..
Dhruv: Okay guys I will go to Cabir and check on him. When he gets normal i will call you.
Mukti: Cool I and Nandini will go for gifts as she only knows what they like.
Alya: Me and Manik will go for Manik's clothes.
Manik: Mukti also get something to eat for Chachi. Get pasta she likes it alot and get pastries for Rishabh he loves it.
Nandini feels overwhelmed hearing his care. And blushes and waves Manik a goodbye..
Everyone goes to their designated work.

At Cabir's house,
Cabir vent out his anger by throwing every possible thing in his house.. Navya was asking him whats wrong. But Cabir asked her to stay away.
Cabir thinking" kya main sachme Navya k liye kuch... Arghh.. Yeh kaise ho sakta hai.. Cabir tu gay hai.. Main kaise yeh.. Nai nai.. Mom i need you.. Main kaise.. I know main sirf uski care karta hun.. Aur kuch nai yes yahi hai.. I need to stay away from her.. I need to ask her that she leaves the house.."
Dhruv comes there and saw ol this..
Dhruv goes and hugs Cabir..
Dhruv: shhh.. Shant Cabir.. Sab thik hai main hun naa.
Navya: Cabir tumhe kya hua hai?
Cabir: just shut up Navya. Nikal jao mere ghar se. Just go.
Dhruv: Cabir tu usse q bol ra hai?
Cabir: Dhruv please isse bolo woh jaye. Plz.
Navya: Cabir shant hojao please.
Cabir: I said just leave.
Dhruv calls Alya,
Alya: Yaa baby..
Dhruv: Alya not now plz. Listen Navya is shifting at ur place. No question m giving her the key. Rat ko ghr pe will tlk.
Alya: Okay and Cabir
Dhruv: I will call you once he gets normal.
Alya: keep informing.. Bye.

Dhruv makes Cabir normal and Navya leaves..

Precap:
Confrontation with Cabir.. Navya's breakdown.. Manik's preparation to his steps...

Hope you loved it.. Plz give feedback.. Should I continue the story?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
wonderful update
keep writing
thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum update
Manik preparing himself to impress chachi...n alya instructing him step1 step2...haha
It seems very interesting
Liked it...
Thankz for PM
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Nice chapter
Looking forward to mission c2

Sorry for short comment

Got exam at 10 and lots to study

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

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