MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 92

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing promo..waiting for manan romance nd cavya wedding..
update soon..
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Hello lovelies, so guys din ba din you all are becoming so lazy... you don't comment except for the few one (starsfireflies, toshna, iqra, my baby Ayesha, nats, chocolava{new one} nimarous) this ppl not only comment regularly but also their comments are so good that they tell me each and every part of my story which they liked... but I don't expect it from all of you coz m tired of telling you all please comment and all... this FF's they are like really very close to my heart so there is no chance that I end it... firstly, for myself and secondly for the one who really love them...

One of my baby said, "Write for urself cause you love it and you fantasy it and she also said she loves my all ff" so baby this one is for you..!!

I hoped I would have reached second thread on my 51th chapter but its alright,,,
You might find me rude for saying all this but I am strong enough to pour my heart out and to face the consequences...

Okay back to the story... For all the bful ppl who love this FF...

Chotusa recap:
Navya agrees for marriage..
Marriage at Mangalore..
Navshad and Cabir Raghav conversation
Manik hell frustrated and Nandini's seductive dance..


Part 51:

Both kissing each other wildly reaches her room..
Nandini made Manik fall on the bed and gets over her... they both were panting badly due to their longing kiss session

This is new that Nandini is boldly getting over Manik... Nah!! Even though Nandini is a shy soul but when it comes to showing love to Manik Nandini doesn't step back... She shows him all the love she has for him in her heart... It like emptying all of the love they got and then filling it back with the memories they create in that moment...

Manik: Nandini yeh tum kya kar rahi ho? Like you only said we should go slow toh ab tum...
Nandini cuts him in the middle: shhh... Manik don't spoil it...
She kisses his forehead and the mark on his hard hardly and that makes Manik crazy and he let out her name...
Nandini kisses his eyes, his face, and comes down to kiss his neck... she goes down slowly and opens up his shirt buttons planting a kiss after unbuttoning each button...
Manik can't control and changes the position and gets over her pinning her on bed beneath him...
Manik swiftly moves his hand over her bare stomach and lift her top above her stomach... goes down and kiss her stomach softly yet passionately than leads to an escape of moan from her mouth...
Hearing his name from her mouth so seductively ignites the sleeping fire of desires in him...
Manik: Nandini you are making me..
Nandini: shhh... She kissed his mole... (for Ayesha) I am making you lose it cause I want you to lose it..
I want to feel you... I don't want you to hold any urge you have got for me... Let them out Mr. Malhotra..
Manik: you are calling your death Miss. Murthy... then don't blame me for the consequences...
Nandini: I won't Mr. Malhotra... after all I am your little monster right?
Manik: acha... Let's see what this little monster got...
Nandini slightly hits his chest: Manik you are too much when it comes to mouth...

Manik gets up from there and sits on the bed resting his head on the head board leaving a panting confused Nandini...

Nandini knew there is something that's bothering him and so he is not giving his all to her.. she was confused whether it was the Raghav stuffs or whether he was afraid of hurting her... But she knew he can't resist her charm for longer and if it was his fear of hurting her stopping him than she clearly knew what to do...

She got up and adjusted herself sitting in front of Manik making him face her back and leaned herself on his chest...
Nandini: Manik ..
Manik: hmmm...
Nandini: what's bothering you?
Manik: Nandini I can hurt you... you know that... my intensity leaves you exhausting and covers your body with red marks due to my bites...

Nandini had a smirk as she succeeded in knowing the reason but that smirk had her reasons... she moved her hairs from one shoulder to another exposing her bare shoulder that had only thin strap of her top... She knew it has its own effect on him...

Nandini: Manik even your shoulder has the crescent marks cause I dig my nails to show my intensity... we both are wild and you don't hurt me... it is the best feeling...
Manik was hardly listening to her he was concentrating on the bare shoulder that was calling him for a kiss... he leaned closer to her shoulder and planed a kiss... a kiss she knew would definitely come...

He removed the strap of her top and again kissed it... he removed the other strap slowly pushing her top more down revealing much of her bare skin...
She moved lower with him and covered them in the duvet...
They had some of the best laughs and cries in that moment under the duvet...
They were naked the very next second...
Their bodies touched each other and the proximity proved they are on the verge to make love...
Manik: you are so beautiful... you are shining glowing like a star in this black covered duvet and this darkness... even this can't stop you from glowing...
Nandini: the glow is because of you my life...

He was planting her with kisses not living any part of her body...
He was giving her those love bites and to sooth them he was licking on it and that was making her moan his name loudly and was sending shivers and melting her insides...

"Mr. Malhotra- if- your- teasing - session - is - over - please - I'm - dying -for -it.." this was all she could utter between her breaths..

Her panting voice was turning him up more... and he whispered, "Wait is over my love"

Within second he was inside her he occupied her filling the void in her body that solely belong to him... making her complete... on his thrust she arched her back moaning his name loudly... "Manik"
They made love in the dim light of her room... this was the first time it was at her house that thought made her feel the act more...
After they made love they slept with Nandini over him resting her head on his heart that was thumping loudly just for her...
She kissed his heart, "I love you baby"
He kissed her head, "I love you more"
She whispered almost sleepy, "I love you most"

On the other hand Cabir was wandering as he was not sleeping and he was unable to digest the revelation of Raghav suddenly again in his life but he was sure of his words... she he felt hands on his shoulder he knew the touch he removed his hand...
Raghav: Cabir I can explain...
Cabir: Raghav I don't need one... tumhe pata hai jab tum chale gaye the na I used to be so sad depression main chala gaya tha but fortunately I have friends like Fab 5 they supported me... but I was not able to forget you... now m glad you came in front of me not because I want you back but because I can finally get a closure.. yes m ending whatever we had and now I can marry Navya without any guilt..
Raghav: ssly Cabir, you can forget me and you want to marry that Madhubala? This is what you called her right...
Cabir: Navya... Navya naam hai uska... Navya naveli jo Navya dhawan banne jari hai I would like ke tum uska naam thik se lo... you were Raghav we don't have any future...
He saw Navya passing by and he called her
Cabir: Raghav meet her... she is going to be my wife... Raghav tumse maine pyar to kar liya par pyar ka sahi matlab maine Navya se sikha. Main Navya pyar to nai karta par main ab tumse bhi nahi karta... Raghav thank you for meeting me here and making me realize how important Navya is in my life...
Raghav: Cabir..
Navya: sir ab aap ja sakte ho... mujhe mere gonna be husband se private bat karni hai...
Raghav leaves angrily thinking, "I won't let this happen"


Navya: Cabir tum..
Cabir kept his finger on her lips: shh... he encircles her in a side hug and they walk the shore..
Cabir: Navya tumhe pata hai jaise har din kuch naya leke aata hai waise hi parso ka din humari life main bht kuch leke aayega and is liye purani yaadein mitana zaruri tha na..
Navya: Cabir you are the best thing ever happened to me...
Cabir was touched hearing it he kissed her forehead... : and you are to me...
They then go back to their rooms...


Morning,

This morning was something so new for everyone... for Cabir it was a end to a past chapter.. for Navya it was a new love... For Mukti it was her evil twin marriage... for DhruLya it was attending Fab 5 member's first marriage... but for MaNan it was witnessing love that was arising from two betrayed soul...

Manik opened his eyes to find himself in her lap... she was dressed in a yellow kurti... her hairs were still wet... she was reading a book titled- WHEN ONLY LOVE REMAINS BY DURJOY DUTTA
Manik peeps at her under the book and kisses her chin..
Manik: good morning sweetheart...
Nandini: good morning baby..
Manik: you are looking so fresh what's the matter?
Nandini: Mr. lazy bum you have forgotten aaj haldi hai... get ready.. in an hour hume jaana hai and I wanted to go with you but make it fast... mujhe Navya ko taiyar bhi karna and dono ki sath main hai just a parda in between...

Manik wakes up with a thud and realize that he should have one talk with Cabir...
He dress up fatafat and gets ready... he was looking breath taking and so was Nandini...

Manik's attire:

Nandini's attire:
Nandini earring:


Nandini was lovestruck seeing him... he comes near her and whisper, "aise dekhti rahogi toh problem ho jayegi I know m hot"
Nandini lowers her gaze..
Manik founds her ear empty and hence takes the yellow earring and slides in her ear..
Manik: now perfect...
Nandini: okay chalo tum Cabir ke pass jao I will go to Navya...

Girls were in Navya room and making her hairstyle her makeup and everything...
Soon Nandini arrived and had a box with her
Navya: kaha thi tum..
Mukti: han angel where were you she was damn nervous...
Nandini: I went to bring this wat I made for her...
She gave box to Navya...
The box contained accessories made of real flower and it was bful.
Navya: when did you make it?
Alya: yaa coz the red mark on your neck proves you were with Manik yesterday...
Nandini blushed and describe how she managed...

***
Nandini woke up at 4 am... her eyes were deprived of sleep even though she slept at 2am cause she had pending work...
She moved from him and getting dressed she made the accessories for Navya and she finally completed by 8am and then she took bath and got ready by 9am and sat on bed taking his head on her lap and started reading and within 15 mins he woke up

***
Mukti: god Nandini I slept 9 hours still I am tired and sleepy..
Alya: yaa and look at you... you are still fresh with no stress mark and dark circle how do you manage to be flawless..
Am's: cause use adat hai..
Everyone looks at am's and greet her morning...
Am': morning bachas... Nandini chale is she ready... get her in half an hour...

In the lawn...
Manik was searching Cabir and then he found him sitting in the balcony with Dhruv...
Dhruv excused them and Manik sat beside him..
Cabir: Hey dude, night kaisi thi?
Manik: shut up..
Cabir: acha acha... Bata kya hua..?
Manik: Cabir tu thik haina?
Cabir: Manik main thik hun... I m glad I did it... I am thankful our angel bought us here at Mangalore...
Manik: what?
Cabir: Manik I needed this closure... now my mind is more set for marrying Navya... now I am clear and I don't have any pending past..
He hugged him and breaking the hug he asked: toh fir Dhruv ke sath yahan..?
Cabir: arre who.. I was nervous toh Dhruv was helping me out...
Manik: waise bro... sahi lag ra hai na..
Cabir: tu kam hot nahi lag raha...
And they both started laughing...
Manik: chale...

Dhruv's attire:

Mukti's: attire

Alya's attire:


Guest accumulated the hall filling all the empty spaces Cabir came down in a white kurta differentiating himself from everyone around who were in shades of yellow...
He sat on one side of parda and glued his eyes on the staircase waiting for her to come...
And then she arrived so beautiful... that yellow colour seemed to be meant only for her.. it was melting in her skin perfectly... everyone was dumb found... and the jewelry made everyone amaze that it was simple flower yet beautiful...
The image soon got vanished when she seated on other side... Nandini stood beside Manik...

Cabir's attire:

Navya's attire: simple yet breath taking

Navya's jewelry: made by nandu

Navya's hair:


The rasam ended and after everyone went the satr family made them sit together and then the haldi fight started everyone was applying haldi on one another Manik sneaked her
Nandini: Manik kya kar re ho?
Koi aajayega
Manik: you think I care..
Manik then applies haldi on her face and say, "actually you don't need this to glow you shine brighter but I felt like doing this"
She took the bowl poured on him and ran to the rest..
Manik reached there and Nandini showed him tongue...
and finally after taking the snaps the boys took Cabir and girls gave Navya milk
bath and retired in the room for rest...

At 6pm,

Cabir was roaming and bumped into Nandini..
Cabir: Nandini so all south Indian wedding han?
Nandini: no Mr. Cabir Dhawan... all Punjabi style...
Am's: aiyyo nandu... pooja ki taiyari ho gayi...
Nandini: aiyyo, Cabir I need to go... aai Am's
Suddenly Manik came..
Manik: yeh ladki..
Mukti: chalo help her...
Cabir: han tum sab jao and Manik tu bi ja.. subah se bhag rahi hai... I can't go as I am not allowed...

They did the taiyaris and Cabir and Navya did puja and they had dinner and left for lawn...

Navya and Nandini were alone first they slept on the lawn and were watching stars.. when Nandini broke the silence..
Nandini: Navya kya soch rahi ho?
Navya: kaisa hota hai na Nandini jab hum life se bht kuch mangte hai wo sab chin leta hai and aaj jab maine apni life accept kar li thi.. tab life ne mujhe Cabir diya..
They were sitting in lawn and suddenly fireflies were everywhere..
Nandini and Navya looked at each other and smiled...

Everyone looked at them and they knew Navini share a bond and Navya needed her as from tomorrow its going to be a new life for her they were laughing and smiling when suddenly everyone came and they arranged a bonfire and circled it...
In order CaVya then MaNan then DhruLya... and Mukti between CaVya n MaNan...

Mukti: chalo let's sing...
Dhruv: let's play.. passing the pillow..
They started playing and whoever gets caught sings a song...
When it stopped in Manik he sang... Kabhi kabhi mere dil main...


They ended when all beautiful girls slept in their respective sweethearts lap...
Mukti slept on Navya's lap...

Precap:

Lot of Dhamaakas..
Lot of dances..
Girls dance on chittiyan kalaiyan re...
Manik and Nandini duet...


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Posted: 10 years ago
res
unres
aww i'll always comment..
Even i was so empty that i was gonna ask tosh to spam in order to get your 51st update on new thread but somehow it cud not happen.
Update was just rocking!!
The attires u showed were fabulous like seriously great!!😊
Then the opening oh my manan scene god so hot😳
their convos were so cute n sweet..
then Cabir n R closure totally justified!
Next alya teasing nandini and cabir teasing manik haha😆
oh i forgot haldi scene was fab yaar.. manik naughty boy
then navni was so good and pure😃
after that sangeet started and what is this manik singing kabhi kabhi OMG!!😉👏
My fav song oh love you
i can't wait for next one oh wow!!
Edited by Starsfireflies - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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frst of all THANKS BIG WALA THANKS for this love u r giving me .

update was superb. .. up to the mark.

loved the love making. The hitch- ki -chahat. ... The concern. and reason you know. .. as for u and me MANAN LIKE FLOWERS. . hain na ????

loved nandu 's attire . mukti's shrug . The flower ornaments. .

but mostly loved MANIK'S yellow Kurta. .. hayeee. ...

jyada bola nehi otherwise censored Ho jayega Yeh comment. AND I BELIEVE U KNOW THE REST OF MY THOUGHT. ...

YOU R AMAZING KIARA JAANU.


ps--- " jisne tujhe kahan to write for yourself bohot sahi kahan " seemed she is an intelligent girl. Hain na ???
be in touch with her. .. and The mole kiss. ...

love you janu.
Edited by musicialtie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb fantastic update

Loved manan moments the romance intensity passion

Cabir was too good continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
tht was awesome manan scene was hot mind blowing awesome update luv it yr n update soon waiting fr the nxt prt
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing👏
U describe eacha nd every emotion so well...be it manan or cavya😉
Luvd bold nandu nd caring manik😳
Cavya relationship is so good...despite being different😊
Navni nd manbir share the most adorable bond ever😊👏
Thanku for puting each and every attire and the jewellery...made it easier to imagine 😉
Good choice in d attire nd amazing choice in navya's jewellery😊
Luvd it a lot😳
Always keep writing😊
Edited by Chocolava14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
see this time i commented on time haan ?😆
I promise ur next update will be on a new thread so congrats for that in advance..😊
See I am first always..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank u
thank u thank u so
much for putting the pic
n i must tell ur writing is amazing
its like while reading i can picture everything happening
in front of my eyes
just loved it
looking forward for the next part
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
itsss sooo hottt

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