MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 5

Beautiful update..

Guys m really really really very sorry for updating very late.. It was my Sista's marriage so.. I m free n i promise i won't disappoint u now onwards..
Today's update will surely make ur heart skip a beat..
Its filled with love, emotions, care, understanding and MaNan...


So it was holi n everyone caught our cutest MaNan.. Moving on..

Everyone came to know that Nandini doesn't love colors but they were in no mood to leave her..
Nandini started running.. Cabir: Manik yar rok usse yeh cheating hai..
Manik: Cabir tu khud kuch kar lega..
Tia: I'll get her..
Nandini stops by the edge of the pool and says guys please i dont color please dont..
Cabir: Toh tum kya yahan pe shadi main aai ho n throws a balloon to her..
Mukti secretly walks behind her and apply color..
Tia holds her and ask Everyone to apply color..
Everyone does..
Tia: Come on Bhai try ur hand..
Nandini: Manik u had enuf of me plz..
Manik: Ssly nandu u think i had enuff.. *grinning*
He goes close to Nandini and take the edge of her duppatta..and wipes the color..
Nandini: Manik..
Manik: Sshhh dont move jalega.. Stay still.. And he clears everything from her face just to c her shinning like a star..
Tia: thats not fair Manik..
Manik: Everything fair.. Look at her she is bful.. She is shining.. I mean nothing...
Nandini blushes..
N everyone pushes them in pool..
Nandini: guys i cant swim..
Manik: Nandini its a kids pool u wud nt get drown chill..
Nandini: Fine..
Everyone gets in that chotu sa pool jus coz Nandu cnt swim n they party...
Abhimanyu and Mukti are in their world kissing each other and feeling their love..
Abhimanyu: Mukti i think we shud stop here..
Mukti: shutup abhimanyu.. Plz apne pe daya khana band karo plz...
Abhi: par ur frenz..
Nandini: Whats wrong guys?
Mukti: nothing woh
Nandini: U cn share mukti..
Mukti: Abhi has cancer and he has hardly a month..
Nandini: what?
Abhi: Nandini dont freak out n be low.. Yahan kisi ko nahi pata is baare main
Nandini: abhi tum yeh Kaise kar sakte ho how can u hode this from us?
Mukti: he had reason but m scared fab 5
Nandini: Mukti tumhe pata hai maine tum logo main sabse achi bat pehli kya dekhi thi ur frenship.. It is so pure.. So tru.. Chahe kuch bhi hojaye it wont break.. U know truth the dont kill u but m afraid secrets can..
Mukti: Nandini u r ssly the one for Manik. Tum sochte bhi ek jaise ho.. M sorry maine tumhe galat samjha but u r the one for him..
Manik: guys wats up han mere bina discussion..
Mukti: Girls tlk..
Manik saw tears in Nandini's eyes..
Wiping her tears..
Manik: kya hua? Hey.. Whats wrong?
Nandini: (hugs him getting afraid of fact agr Kabhi Manik ko kuch hogaya toh) please hold me tight..
Manik: getting shock and abit uncomfortable in fromt of everyone.. Yahan sabke samne
Nandini: please Manik
Manik k liye aur kuch important nai tha his star was crying.. He held her tight in her arms..
Mukti and abhi holding each other
Everyone clapped for their love and tgey broke the hug..
MaNan: sorry guys..
Its ok...
Manik: Tum thik ho?
Nandini: Never better

They had pool party and everyone went for bath..
Just wen nandini went for bath she forgot her towel..
Nandini: navya my towel plz.. Pas kar na..
Jus then Manik was passing by.. He heard her calling navya n went inside the room and locked it..
He took the towel and gave her..
Nandini: Thanks Navya.
And she accidentally came outside in the towel thinking its navya n to her shock it was Manik.
Nandini kept her hands in Manik's eyes..
Nandini: Manik wat are you doing here?
Manik: tume help chahiye thi i helped you.. Now lemme c my gift.
Nandini: sht up manik and leave..
Manik: I promise I won't open my eyes
Nandini: okay n she removed the hand.. She kissed him on his cheeks..
Manik: opened his eyes nt fair..
Nandini: Manik close ur eyes.
Manik: closes his eyes. Please my reward..
Nandini: goes with the flow n tries to kiss him..
Knock knock!!!
Manik: seeing her perfect!
Nandini: kon?
Navya: main navya
Nandini: 2 min i m changing
Nandini hides Manik and opens the door after changing
Navya: itna tym.. I wanted to u washroom
Just then Nandini realise Manik is hidden in washroom
Nandini: navya tum bathroom main nai ja sakti
Navya: kya?
Nandini: paani nai aara go somewhr els
Navya: mujhe dekhne to do
Nandini: nai nai aara maine kaha na
Navya: okay i m leaving

Manik: gai woh now my gift..
Nandini: kisses him on forehead.. Manik remember no extremes please..
Manik: with ur this smile i can do whateva u want..

Both gets ready and goes to bonfire
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Next part ill upload in the morning promise..

Amazing Update...

Like i promised.. Here's your next part..
Bonfire...
Everyone comes to the bonfire and sits..
Manik shows nandini with hand gestures to sit beside him..
Cabir notices that and goes and sit beside Manik..
Manik: Cabir, tu yahan q ? I mean nothing..
Cabir: q Manik i cant sit here. Ya kisi aur ki jagah rakhi hai tune.
Manik: nothing like that.
Mukti who was sitting next to Manik stood up and gestured Nandini to sit there.
Nandu sat beside Manik.
Cabir: Mukti.
Mukti: Sorry Cabir love comes first
Nandini: you are right Mukti love comes first.. Guys Mukti wants to say something to all of us.
Mukti: No nothing like that. Nandini plz
Nandu: please Mukti speak up.
Mukti: Ok.. Guys
Nandu: guys please bfre u judge her think twice.. Manik plz understand her okay?
Everyone: okay mam
Mukti: guys i and abhi we are dating..
Cabir: Bas itni si bat..
Mukti: I hv not finished yet. And abhi is.. Abhi is..
Manik: abhi kya mukti?
Abhimanyu holds her hand tight.
Abhi: And i have cancer and have less than a month.
Manik: What?
Cabir: What?
Everyone was shocked..
Nandu: Guys listen to them plz
Manik: Ssly Nandini u r telling this. Why mukti..
Nandini: holding his cheeks.. Manik love knows no boundaries.. It is so pure it happens.. Usse koi rok ni sakta.. Pyar bas hojata hai.. Jaise Cabir k case main age se koi farak ni pada coz they love each other.
Cabir: Manik yeh sach bol ri hai. Kabhi apne aap ko dekha hai. Nandini is so cute so calm so resolved, u always angry hunk, impulsive yet romantic.. This is wat love is.. Woh yeh sab nai dekhta.. Jaise you both have a very deep connection mukti and Abhi too have that..
Manik: but guys abhi doesn't have tym. Woh chala jayega uske bad mukti ka kya?
Nandini: Manik love gives you so much of strength and let them live together wateva time they have.
Mukti: Ya guys i have never felt this befre wat i feel for Abhi. Manik love has come to me and main usse jane nai de sakti. I never thot i cn be loved to this extent. Guys i hope u accept us.
Everyone: of course mukti..
Mukti and Abhi hugged each other.
Cabir: Manik and Nandini even you can hug.
Manik: Cabir you know na we dont need permission. Hum apni space dhoond lete hai.
Nandini punches him playfully.

Manik: and we will make sure u dnt leave us and if u do u will leave us at ur best.
Abhi: Please guys now let this tlk end here and enjoy. Don't think about me think about us n enjoy. Please everyone.
Alya: Guys i wanna tell you something.
Mukti: 1 more secret.
Yar this secrets just let it be out plz.
Dhruv: Yaa mukti is right.
Alya: main aur dhruv...
Dhruv: Main aur alya.. We..
Cabir: say aage
Dhrulya: we love each other..
Everyone gets shock.. Except CaVya..
Cavya: Guys chill..
Manik: Dhruv tune bataya nai..
Dhruv: Manik woh..
Manik: (hugging him) tune pata hai kya kia. U chose the best gal.. And mujhe kabhi koi prob ni hogi tujhse and Alya i had always hurt Alya. I always felt guilty k i left her coz i knew somewhere that i dont love her but she does. M so happy Alya you got dhruv. He is the best for you.
Dhruv: Manik i cant believe to gussa nai hai.
Manik: Nai q hoga main gussa?
Dhruv: Nandini you have ssly changed him.
Nandini: Guys Manik ko maine change nai kiya. Manik yeh hi tha bas he used to hide wateva he felt but know he doesn't believe in hiding anything.
Manik: Bas Meri sherni..
Alya: thanks guys for understanding.. Manik I always we were meant to be. But what i feel for Dhruv is something I never felt before. I feel hum bht jaldi bade hogaye and we dint really realize that we were growing apart.
But i will cherish whateva I had with u.
Dhruv: Ehem ehem..
Alya: Wat?
Manik: Don't get jealous she loves you. We all can c that.
Tia: so much of love.

Cabir: Guys me and Navya
Manik: kya tu aur navya sath?
Mukti: but u r interested in boys na..
Dhruv: Par Navya shez preg.
Alya: Cabir are you sure
Tia: Let him speak
Cabir: Thanks tia. Guys me and Navya we live together in my flat as she doesn't have a house
Manik: But you should have said me and i would have arrange something for her. Aur tu aajata mere ghar.
Cabir: actually Manik she's not that bad. And woh hoti hai toh mujhe akela feel ni hota. Maa ki yad ni aati. And muft ka ghar ka khana milta hai.
Navya: Cabir nalayak.
Manik: sorry Navya for everything.
Navya: Manik pata hai mujhe tum main kabhi achai nai dikhi par jabse Nandini ki aakho tum me dekha hai tum humesha ache hi the. And aaj tumne prove kar diya yeh kehke k u would have arranged something for me. Thank you for everything.

Fab 5 hugs each other.
Nandini: Navya m glad.. No one can break them.
Navya: Tum sach kehti thi.. Sachhai unhe alag ni karti.
Nandini: (smiling) i can watch them this way entire day night my life.
Fab5 watches nandini watching them and smiling.
Mukti: she just love to see us together.
Cabir: Jane anjane usne bht bar hume sath kia hai Mukti. Ab aaj ka hi dekh le. Woh ni hoti toh secrets bahar ni aari.
Mukti: Cabir u know aaj Nandini ne mujhe kya kaha. Truth don't break us, secret does.
Manik: wat really she said that?
Alya: Manik you have got a gem.
Dhruv: ssly guys she is the one for him.
Mukti: Lets call them even they are the member of fab5 family now.
Manik: Yeh tu bol ri hai. Abhi has changed you.
Mukti: Sht up. Guys sab aajao fab5 wants a together moment.
Nandini goes beside Manik.
Manik gives her hand to come in circle. Abhi goes to mukti. Tia on other side of Manik. Navya beside Cabir. They were about to hug when Tia notices Risabh.
Tia: wait..
Manik: wat.
Tia holds risabh hand and brings him next to him.
Tia: Now the big family is complete.

When they were hugging each other Manan, dhrulya, Mukbhi, and cavya nandini saw fireflies started glowing
They again sat near bonfire.

Mukti: Nandini ur secret..
Nandini: My mom used to say.. Whenever fireflies glows there is love tru love.. And c today love is in the air.. And even the fireflies are glowing..
Cabir: Iska matlab tum sab ek dusre se itna tru wala pyr karte ho.
Everyone: Cabirrr sht up.
Nandini: Tum kabhi serious ni hosakte na.
Manik gets a call from nyonika. And he gets furious. He was about to leave.
Nandini: Manik keep that on speaker and talk. Hum sab yahin hai.
Manik: Nandini leave me.
Nandini: M not going to leave u.
Manik: Fine..

On cal,
Nyonika: hello Manik.
Manik: Bolo ab kya hua?
Nyonika: Manik m ur mom tlk to me nicely.
Manik: Nyonika you have not done anything nice so speak up.
Nyonika: U guys have got invitation from warrior high to go for freshers party. So you have to head day Aftr tomorrow.
Manik: okay bye.
Nyonika: Manik listen.
Manik: What?
Nyonika: Stay away from Nandini. I hope she is not with you guys.
Manik getting angry: she is
Nandini: (whispering) manik no plz.
Manik: She is not with me, but I m with her all my life. Dare to interfere stay outta my Life. And ya I love her. Did u hear it. I love Nandini.
Nyonika: manik
But Manik keeps the phone.
Everyone claps.
Tia: Our Macho Man is back.
Manik: Tia u ask me to be good with her.
Tia: give her time she will accept her.
Nandini: calm down.

Everyone heada to their room.
Nandini texts Cabir,
"Can you plz sleep with Navya today I want to be with Manik"
Cabir replied ok
Manik: Kaha jaa ra hai?
Cabir: Aaya abhi..

Cabir heads to nandu's room.
Knock!
Navya: Kon?
Cabir: main hun
Nandini: Navya plz manage with him i want to go to Manik.
Navya: okay.

Nandini heads to Manik's room.
Knock!
Cabir aajana kya kar ra hai?
Nandini: Its me.
Manik: Ohho tum yahan?
Nandini: Can i be with you this night?
Manik: wat are you serious?
Nandini: please Manik.
Manik: Yaa sure. But Cabir?
Nandini: I asked him to shift with Navya.
Manik comes to the door lift his star.
Manik: Okay Miss Murthy, you sleep here on bed i will sleep on couch.
Nandini: Manik please come here beside me. Please..
Manik: tumhare intentions kuch thik nai lag re mujhe.
Nandini: Manik sht up and come please.
Manik goes to her.
Nandini: hold me in ur arms please.
They hug each other and rest on bed.

Nandini: Manik kya hum humesha sath rahege?
Manik: Tum Nyonika k bat se pareshan hona?
Nandini: Manik par she is so powerful.
Manik: Nandini you said na love has no boundaries. I love you and we are inseparable.
Nandini: Kisses his forehead ty. You took my worries away.
Manik: Forwards to kiss her.
This tym she dint resist.
But Manik kissed her on forehead, eyes, cheeks. I have entire life to kiss there coz I want to be with you entire life.
Nandini: I never want us to get apart.
Manik: We won't but i just want a promise.
Nandini: promise?
Manik: Yaa promise me chahe kuch bhi hojaye koi tumhe kuch bhi bole u wont hide it from me.
Nandini: I promise...

Precap:
Night with all lovelies..
Warrior high

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Part 11:

MaNan were hugging each other..
Nandini: Manik kya hum humesha aise hi rahenge?
Manik: Tum firse shuru hogai.
He takes her to the terrace.
Nandini: Kaha jaa re hai hum!? Yahn q?
Manik: Sleep here beneath the sky.
Nandini: you can watch them ol your life na?
Manik: Ya right. Now listen to me. He makes her slp resting her head on his chest.
Nandini u know wat, you are my shining star. Jaise star sky main aana kabhi nai bhulte waise u never forget to protect me n shine for me. Nandini stars kabhi change ni hote waise hi Humara relation kabhi change ni hoga. Nandini when i get hurt u get pain coz u cant c me getting hurt. Our bond its so strong. No one can break this easily. And on top of that, we are meant to b. Fate wants us to b.. We want us to b.. Nyonika jaise chote mote pattar aayenge but its okay we will cross such hurdles. Together.
Nandini: Manik i love you..
Manik: (realizing her love is crying) sab thik hai n kisses her head thru hairs.
And they sleep their in each others arms beneath the sky and stars.

Navya and Nandini's room,
Cabir: Navya please ab sojao no more discussion.
Navya: Par cabir tum couch pe nai. Listen tum yahan sojao main waha sojaungi.
Cabir: Shtup navya and sleep
Navya: stubborn as always goes to cabira n wakes him n ask him to go to bed.
Cabir accepting his defeat goes to bed. Just then Navya tries to slp but the couch was too down tht when she bended it hurted her n she cried in pain.
Cabir: Navya wait. See i told u par tum suno tab na. He lift her in his arms. Chup chap bed pe sojao i don't understand itna natak q Madhubala.
Navya was jus staring at him n understanding why Cabir is so concern n feels kash harshad aisa hota.
Cabir keeps her slowly on bed n was about to go wen Navya catches his hand. This sends chill in cabir body. Thank you n srry.
Cabir taking away the hand: its ok.
Cabir thinking yeh kya tha. Y m i getting ol this. Y?
But thn he slps seeing Navya slpng

Dhrulya,
AlyA: Dhruv are you happy now?
Dhruv: twirls her.. More than happy alya.. I love you i love you i love you so so much.
Alya: control dhruv.
Dhruv calls her closer and then starts kissing her n they were in no mood to stop and they moved towards bed n they wer in their world after that

On other hand even mukti and abhi has good time.
Mukti: I luv u abhi.
For this i can relay m life on says Abhi.

Mrning..
Sunlight falls on Manik n he gets up n sees Nandini's eyes getting contracted due to sunlight.
He keeps a towel n again slp next to her caressing her fingers..
Everyone wakes up n find MaNan missing from their room n decide to check roof.

Cabir: O love birds get up
Manik with that smirks whispers in cabirs ears yahi tym mila tha tujhe. Ruk tu saale.

Chale warrior high jaana hai.
Manik with sad look: Nandini ill b back tonight.
Nandini: Paka promise?
Manik: yaa

All of them goes to get fresh while Nandini makes breakfast.
Everyone had breakfast n headed to warrior high.. Their they met juniors picks up a race n finishes first Manik was the one.
They search for V n a girl says she is there were u left her last tym.. He meets her alone.

Manik: V,?
V: Manik dont move. Are our stds nw proper?
Manik: yaa V its been 3 yrs n u were rght. It was nt love..
V: Turns to c Manik n gets mad.
Manik: Chill chill
V: How come sudden change n now u believe k u din used to love me so finally alya taught u?
Everyone arrives.
Alya: No nt me. Its Nandini.
Manik: V wat i feel for nandu is wat i never felt for u. She is a magic. She protects me, guides me, n on top f everthing she loves me she shines for me like a star.
V: impressive lets meet this person once. Chalo get ready for performance
Fab 5 perform on we are the warrior high n leave for mumbai.
Manik goes to Nandini place but seeing lights off he feels she mght b slpy but thn someone covered manik's eyes.
Manik: who the hell?
Sweet voice. 'it me Nandini n come fast..

Precap: bdae bash

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