MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update!!
Loved it..
Hope Nandini will be safe..
Thanks for PM:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Guys I m not ending this FF till you guys start feeling bore and ask me to end 😆
So now dnt worry and enjoy my updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
Terrific and mindblowing one..Loved it very much..all were the best..
Wake up manik within the next..
Cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love it... the truth is out, but the plan seems risky... can't wait to see what comes of all this...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update!!
Whoa!! Kudos to yu penned down so.so beautifully super cute..
Truth revealed. Nandu plan lil risky hope yu writeup well beautiful way.
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Surprise surprise

Part 34:

Nandini went to the doctor,

Nandini: Doctor I want you to discharge Manik Malhotra.

Doctor: What? He isn't recovered yet.

Nandini: And why do you think I care about that? I said discharge him toh discharge I am there to take care of him.

Fab 5 and Navya notices this and they all were laughing lightly.

Nandini: Hasna band karo and get his stuffz packed. And you doctor sorry I don't want to be rude so can you discharge him now?

Doctor: It's against rule.

Nandini: Oh God I don't understand why everyone is so fond of Ms. Nyonika Malhotra. Wait I will call her.

Doctor: No please wait I will make the papers ready.

In the hospital room,

Manik: Guys yeh awaaz kya hai bahar?

Mukti: improvised version of Manik Malhotra.

Cabir: To be more prcised don't you think she behaves like Junior Manik Malhotra.

Manik: Junior ssly bacha nai hai meri woh.

Cabir: Ofcourse uske sath to tujhe Bach...bach...bach...

Manik: Cabir..

Cabir: acha.. Junior as in height main junior chal junior chod chotu Monster she is!

Manik: keep your lame jokes with you. And tum log sab packing kyu kar re ho?

Dhruv: buddy woh tumhari tigress or should I say chotu Monster is fighting with doctor for your discharge.

Manik laughing: seriously?

Alya: yaa Manik we were shocked for an instance we thot it's you.

Navya: hume lagta hai yeh Monster sudhre na sudhre Nandini zarur Monster ban jayegi.

Nandini: Tum logo ne chugli kar di ho toh chale Mr. Malhotra?

Fab 5 laughed: han chalo

Suddenly Nandini gets a call,

Nandini: wait guys, han chachi bolo?

Chachi: Nandini Am's is upset she said whatever happened main tumhare and Manik ke sath hun par Am's comfortable nahi hai toh hum unhe ek din ke liye bahar le jaa re hai and fir hum directly concert main aajayenge. Sorry beta

Nandini: Great!

Fab 5 watched her as she said it loud,

Chachi: besharam kya Great?

Nandini: Arre chachi sorry but don't mind actually apko toh pata hi hoga apke SRK ne apna pair tudva rakha hai toh main tensed thi ke uska khayal kaise rakhungi but know I have a solution

Chachi: oh to tum Manik ko yahan laogi par sab sath rehna akele nai and uska khayal rakhna.

Nandini: Yaa chachi and Am's ko nahi batana please.

Chachi: Okay

Nandini: thanks chachi I love you.

She ends the call

Nandini: Guys mere ghar, everyone and Ridhima tum bhi.

Manik: Tum thik hona? Tumhare ghar kyu?

Nandini: oh god itne question, jab bina bataye aate ho toh toh nai karte sawaal ab le jari hun to dikkat hai. I will tell you guys in car.

Cabir and Navya tum saman le aao sab ka and Alya tum sab chalo ghar.

In car,

Nandini says everything and then say: it would be easy to plan everything and Manik ke sath bhi hum sab honge wahan toh Nyonika mam honge toh you know.

Nandini thinks," sorry Mam par aapke alawa ka koi bhi reason valid ni lete" she quickly texts Nyo, Manik is at my place sorry but for the plan thanks for understanding J

Nyo reads the message, this girls amazes me at time anyway have fun and she replies, I hope you will take care.

Its night, everyone was busy in plan

Cabir preparing document on sexual harassment which would be shown at the start as a cause SPACE is fighting for

Mukti and Alya calling girls when suddenly Mukti bursts: This f**king creature he has ruined almost 3 girls life and over 15 girls are ready to stand for Ridhima if we won't support and he has even blackmailed this three girls. I will kill him

Manik: woh toh I will for sure

Nandini: Manik, shut up alright! And Mukti calm down. We will get him

Nandini sneaked through there and prepared dinner Navya helped her they had dinner and went to sleep as tomorrow was big day. They wanted MaNan to be alone so they left them in Nandini's room.

Nandini's room,

Manik was on bed in blanket when Nandini came beside him and went close to him rested her head on shoulder and whispered: I hope you don't mind.

Manik: Tumhare Intention kuch thik nahi lag re

Nandini: Ooo one track mind come out of your imaginary world aisa kuch nai hai woh main..

Manik: Han woh main kya Nandini?

Nandini: Manik, I m scared sab thik hoga na?

Manik: Main hun na

Nandini: humari life kabhi simple q nahi ho sakti?

Manik: Nandini socho agar main tumhe roz ek jaisa khana dun eg. Dal chawaal tumhe acha lagega?

Nandini: Nai.

Manik: exactly socho life agar dal chawal jaise ho jaye toh fayda kya, so kabhi kabhi takda lag jana chahiye it only makes the khana more tastier jaise problems hume close lati hai waise.

Nandini: Tum toh kafi smart hogaye mere sath rehke.

Manik: Acha.. he start to tickle her.

Nandini: Manik stop please na okay I promise I won't teaes you more

While tickling Nandini fell on Manik and they were so close. Manik go more close to her and she closes her eyes but Manik goes near her ear and says: Nandini please get down main ni chahta I cross my limit remembered na we promised chachi.

She gets aside and starts blushing.

Manik: stop getting red each time okay.

Nandini: Shayad tum bhul re ho even you do blush okay.

Manik smiles: sojae kal is a big day.

Nandini: Can you hold me tonight please.

Manik: sure.. with this he kisses her forehead and they sleep

Morning everything was ready they had breakfast which was obviously prepared by our tigress and were ready to execute the plan.

At college,

Manik is on wheelchair as his leg is fractured and no1 can risk his life.

Nandini: Dhruv you go and practice and if Panditji ask about me tell him I am with Manik.

Manik: kya?

Mukti: Manik Nandini has to make him taste his medicine wait and watch.

Dhruv did exactly and Panditji comes to canteen and suddenly holds Nandini's hand: What the hell tumhe practice nai karna and is laparwa ke sath rehna hai

Manik was about to burst but Cabir handles

Nandini frees herself: Panditji mind your tongue, next time when you say something about Manik think twice main uske bare main nai sunugi samjhe aap

Just then Ridhima was coming and Mukti rushes and hides her.

Manik: Pandit tumhe kya lagta hai tumhari jo yeh cheap tricks hai woh kam karegi you think mujhe pata ni chalega?

Pandit gets tensed and thinks," kya isse pata hai goons ke bare main"

Pandit: what tricks?

Manik: Holding her hand and all what do you think han?

Pandit: Oh just leave Nandini you need to practice.

Nandini: I am not leaving him unless you want I don't perform at all

Pandit leaves and fab 5 high5

Evening,

Nyonika announces about the opening of event,

Nyonika: Hello SPACE, welcome to the biggest concert ever and she gives introductory speech and introduces Mr. X

So today we are gonna start concert with a noble cause

They show the documentary made by Cabir and pandit is shocked why everyone stood for support.

Mukti: Guys time for Plan 2

Ridhima: yaa the girls are here and they have recorded their statement

Chachi calls Nandini: beta we are here all the best.

Nandini: thanks Chachi and tell Am's I won't let her down.

Nandini calls Navya, do you see pandit?

Navya: I lost him.

Nandini: kya?

Nandini: Go find him and get him.

Cabir calls Nandini: Kya hua?

Nandini: Navya lost him I guess we have to do this after sometime

Here Pandit watches Ridhima and he comes to know as he joins the dot he goes to Nandini's green room

Nandini hears a knock: Cabir there is someone on door I am sure it's Manik I will call you later

Cabir hangs up the call and think, yeh Manik bhi na pair tuta hai par chain ni hai and suddenly he sees Manik

Cabir: Tu yahan?

Manik: Han q? and Chotu Monster kaha hai

Cabir thinks Navya hogi

Cabir: kahi nahi chale stage ke pass

And they leave.

In green room,

Nandini: Manik tum na, Panditji aap

Nandini thinks," shit I should inform Cabir" but before she reacted pandit takes her fone and switched it off

Nandini: Yeh aap kya kar re ho?

To everyone's surprise this was seen on the concert's screen and everyone got shocked.

Manik and Cabir looked at each other: Shit!

Pandit: Tumhe kya laga ke mujhe kuch pata ni chalega han Nandini

Nandini: what are you saying and give me my phone and leave from her

Pandit grabs her and shows her the ticket: yeh dekh ri ho yeh tumhari and meri ticket hain we will fly to germany

He gets on her like an animal

Nandini: you can't do this to me what you did to others

Pandit: Acha tumhe lagta hai koi tumhare bat manega Ridhima ne tumhe batya hoga na. tumhari Am's tak nai Manegi.

Chachi: Manik save her kaha hai woh?

Manik: Cabir kaha hai woh.

Nyonika walks in: Manik woh

Manik: go off my way or else

Nyonika: she is in green room 3 3rd floor walk fast lift is out of order

Manik: Thanks Cabir take me there and Nyonika agar you are behind this even 10"% I will forget everything

Nyo: just go

Rest of fab 5 and Ridhima starts to find Nandini

Mukti: what problem she is in Navya why don't you inform

Navya: he disappeared

Pandit starts to touch her badly

Nandini starts crying and screams loudly: Manik please save me

Pandit: throws her on ground no one will save you today

He went over her and tried to kiss her here and there she got a vase near her and hits to Pandit

He just got unconscious and she left to open the door she opens it but to her badluck he jumps on her again and snatched her back her arms were scratched

Manik came to green roon he dint care about his leg he stood up and freed Nandini from him. Manik started hitting him badly cruelly

Other member come and covers Nandini and tries to console her but she was so scared Mukti eyed Cabir

Cabir: leave him we will handle him look at her she is so scared

Manik leaves him and hold Nandini tight in her arms.

He brings her down and security brings Pandit.

Ridhima comes down and take the mic and narrated the hole incident and she asked cabir to play the video without blurring it. Everyone was shocked and Am's felt guilty. All they cme to Nandini

Chachi: tum thik ho na Nandini?

Nandini: Yaa Manik hain na.

Am's: Mujhe maaf kar do please

Manik: AM's agar hum aapke jagah hote toh hum bhi wahi karte

They bought Pandit Nandini goes near him and slaps him tight on his face: you deserves this.

Police came and all gave their statement and he was arrested

Am's goes to him and slaps him: Trilok I am ashamed I taught you music.

Nyonika goes to stage and announces," SPACE is very sorry to Mr. X cast but due to varies reason fusion concert cannot take place and Nandini rushes up and takes the Mic: no this concert will not get Cancel we will perform

She then asked her in her ears," how did you managed mam?

Nandini: Don't forget I am Nyonika Malhotra.

Everyone asked about this when they disclosed the second plan which made Manik angry but Alya stopped him,

Dhruv: Buddy plz she went through a lot don't say her anything.

Manik: but this backup plan?

Cabir: even we are shocked

Nandini clears the air: guys I thot of this as Manik always said he had a backup plan and I already asked someone to place camera but to my luck that person switched it on tht was great

Manik: kisko bola tumne

Nandini: Your secret helper. Time aane pe ill reveal. Lets head for performance

Nandini was broken which was seen by Manik.

Sorry guys it went too long

Precap:

Manik makes Nandini calm

Fusion concerts ends..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thnk u soo much for the surprise update
Lovely
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohhhooo another terrific update. Kudos.
Nanddu. .. my ms. Monster. .. u nailed it man. .
loved manik niyo cabir. .
ishhh pundit ki toh main. ... ise thappar nehi punch lagana tha jor wala. ...

Manik don't let yr nandu brk.
mast fab 5. .

Loved
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Posted: 10 years ago
IT IS GUDDD.BUT PLZ SOME ROMANTIC SCENES BETWEEN MANAN NA.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful surprise..
Loved the way yu penned it!! Impressive..

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