MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Hey ur goin great...y dont u put up a nice title for this ff...
Just a suggestion if u please...
Cont. soon with the update...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
ya ofcousre continue vo b jaldi...2 missions nd space celebration after 12.00 would b interesting ...😊keep going...👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
manik all d best ahhh.👍🏼...yeh very nice update...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
excited for the next update..
this eas awsome ..cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
awesome part
waiting for the next part
continue soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Part 17

Cabira's place,
Dhruv: Cabir are you alright?
Cabir: Dhruv if u don't mind kya main thode der akela reh sakta hun plz.
Dhruv: Yaa Cabir sure. But jab bhi tu acha feel kare please call fab 5.
Dhruv leaves from there. Cabir tries to call ranbir(Cabira's twin brother hope you guys remembered)
Ranbir: Hy Cabir, what's up man?
Cabir(abit disturbed): Ranbir need your help!
Ranbir: Bro what's wrong? Is everything alright?
Cabir: Ranbir yar that Navya, you know i go so possessive about her like all protective and I don't know why but i made a baby room for her baby..
Ranbir: Bas itni si bat.. Cabir chill you are protective cause you care.. But still if u need a healthy advice you should talk to ur frenz..
Cabir: But unse kya bolu?
Ranbir: Tu us ladki se bat q ni karta jo hamesha tujhe surprise karti hai like u said she had that courage to talk to you about Raghav.. Kya naam hai uska?
Cabir: Nandini?
Ranbir: Yaa Nan.. Wahi.. Talk to her she will definitely help..
Cabir: Thanks bro..
Cabir calls Nandini..
Nandini: Yaa Cabir say,
Cabir: Nandini i need to talk to you. Can you please come home.. Alone? And don't tell to ne1.
Nandini: Okay but hua kya?
Cabir: Tum ghar to aao!
Nandini: Okay I'll be there in 10 mins.. Nandini cuts the cal and ask Mukti to join Alya and Manik in shopping as we are done with gifts and i need to go somewhere for some work.
Mukti: Okay cool. Cal me when you are done.
Nandini: Yea sure..

Nandini reached Cabira's house.
Knock knock!!
Cabir: Come Nandini..
Nandini looks at the house which was in mess: Cabir yeh sab kya hai and Navya kaha hai?
Cabir: Nandini Navya ko maine jane ko keh diya.
Nandini: Kya? Are you outta ur mond? Cabir temme tumhe kya pareshan kar raha hai.
Cabir: Navya..
Nandini: kya?
Cabir(almost teary): Yaa Nandini, main Navya k liye itna protective ho ra hun k i dont know yeh kya hai. Like maine kya kya soch liya tha..
Nandini understands what Cabir felt: Cabir tumhe pata hai tum na tum bht ache ho.. Isliye tum sab ka acha sochte ho. Navya k loye hum sab protective hai and raha woh Baby room ka sawal Cabir its really sweet of you k you did all this. And tumhe guilt feel karne ki koi zarurat nai hai. You are doing this cause u have a very pure heart. And tum jo bhi aoch re ho woh sab bhul jao tine rehte you will understand agar aisa kuch hai. But trust me you are good person so u did all this thing.
Cabir hugs Nandini: Thank you so much Nandini. I know i love Raghav but i was so in guilt coz sab tease kar re the and i lost my mind. Manik is right you can calm a person easily.
Nandini blushes: Acha meri chodo Navya kaha hai? Agar usne ghar pe bola she doesn't have a place to live to?
Cabir: Don't you worry. Dhruv ne usse Alya k ghar bhej diya hai. I'll bring her tomorrow and i have to apologize too. Oh shit. W*F!!
Nandini: Kya hua?
Cabir: Uss din Holi k tym Navya se pareshan hoke maine..
Nandini: Cabir tumne kya?
Cabir: Maine Navya k maa ko bula diya.
Nandini: Kya??
Knock knock!!
Nandini: Navya hogi . Main open karti..
To her amaze Navya's mom was standing their in front of her.
Nandini: Aunty aap? Aao aajao..
Aunty: han hum ko Navya k dost ka phone aaya tha.
Cabir: Han aunty main hi woh dost hun. Navya aati hi hogi aap aaram karo.
Aunty goes to rest..
Nandini: Cabir ab kya kare?
Cabir: M sorry par wk bat bolu. If Navya wants the baby usse batana hoga.
Nandini: Ya okay I'll talk to her. Pehle usse ghar laye.
Nandini calls Navya,
Navya: Han Nandini bolo.
Nandini: Tum ghar Cabir k jaldi.
Navya: Par usne mujhe.
Nandini: tum aao Navya tumhari maa shez over here.
Navya: Kya Maa? Cabir ne sari hadd par kardi. Main abhi aai

Alya: Manik kitna time jaldi try karo.
Mukti: Hey Manik kaha hai?
Manik: M here, Kaisa lag ra hun.. Manik was in Navy blue blazer.. Inside Yellow tee and light blue denim.. He was looking fab..
Alya and Mukti were jaw dropped looking at him: amazing.
Manik: Mukti tu yahan? Nandini kaha hai?
Mukti: usse kuch kam tha isliye woh chali gai.
Manik: okay. Chalo this is done okay.
Alya: Shut up and for the the day.. I mean for step 5 try this.. And they were done with shopping and went home..

Cabira's home,
Nandini opens the door and sees Navya.
Navya: Maa kaha hai?
Cabir: Room main, Navya woh main m sorry.
Navya: tum chup raho Cabir i can't believe tum yeh kar sakte ho.
Nandini: Chup Navya. Cabir ne nahi bulaya maine bulaya tumhari mom ko.
Navya: kya?
Nandini: Navya agar tumhe baby rakhna hai tumhe unse bat karni hogi plz samjho.
Navya: Nahi i cant..
Aunty: Navya mujhe tumse yeh umeed nai thi.. Tumne yeh kia..
Navya: Maa woh main batane wali thi..
Aunty: Kab? Acha hua Cabir ne mujhe bataya. Tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho.
Navya goes to Cabir: Cabir tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho.
Cabir: Maine kya kia..
Navya in anger: Tum maa ko mere pregnancy k bare main kaise bata sakte ho
Aunty: Kya tum pregnant ho?
Navya: Cabir ne apko bata to dia..
Aunty goes to room
Nandini: Navya tum pagal ho.. Cabir ne aunty ko pregnancy k bare main nahi bataya. Usne party ki permission puchi thi. Tum bhi na..
Navya: Shit.. Cabir m sorry.
Cabir: Mujhe aorry bolne se better hai unse bat karo.

Nandini gets a call,
Manik: Hey
Nandini(low): hey!
Manik: Kya hua? Kaha ho?
Nandini: Lets meet up. Fab 5 and me together.. Mission Cabir is over need to tell you guys..
Manik: Okay, at Alya's place.. Nyonika is at home.
Nandini: Okay main aur Cabir abhi aate hai.

All reached Alya's place,
Manik: Mission Cabir completed how?
Nandini narrates whateva Cabir and she talked about..
Mukti: Oh toh tujhe yeh prob ho ri thi..
Cabir: Ya guys i mean main kabhi Itna protective nahi tha. But nandini is right i guess i cared too much.
Alya: Yaa Cabir chill!! Tu bht sochta hai..
Dhruv: So we expect the notorious Cabir back?
Cabir: Ofcourse with a bang!! Bdw Manik all thanks to ur sunshine. She really can calm a person.
Manik was just admiring her: Yaa

Everyone together: Mission Cabir completed
Mukti: Yaa now lets focus on Mission Impressing Chachi
Nandini: But before that Cabir created a mess..
Manik: What?
Cabir: I will say.. Holi k din i called navya's mom and she is here and accidentally she came to know about her pregnancy..
Fab 4: What?
Nandini: Guys its going to be hard for Navya.
Mukti: Par Nandini jo hua was needed she had to say one day.. So be it today..
Alya: Okay Manik its almost 8pm. So will execute step 1-4 tomorrow..

Cabira's home,
Navya: Maa meri bat suno plz
Aunty: Sharam nai aai tumhe? Yeh dekhne se pehle main mar q ni gai.
Navya rests her head on Aunty lap..
Maa please yeh mat bolo
Aunty: Kya tu sach me pregnant hai
Navya: Yaa
Aunty: Baap kon hai iska
Navya: Maa koi fayda nai hai woh accept ni karega
Aunty: Nai karega matlab? Karna hoga usse..
Navya: Maa usne khud mana kia hai woh shadi nai karega..
Bith mom and dayghter crues let their pain out and Navya sleeps in her mom lap..
Aunty thinks" yeh zarur us Cabir ka baby hai mujhe kuch karna hoga"

Sorry guys i modified the Cabir part but just doing justice to Cabir's track in Ky2.. And sorry update went long and it might be boring.. But ill update step 1-4 by night if i finish it till then please manage..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
awesome update
u just penned cabirs emotions
plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Thank you so much guys... i feel relieved.. i was so tensed whether u guys will like it or not... thanks a lot... i will surely try to update by night.. and i need a help from u.. one of the reply i received was to give a name to this FF.. so need suggestions...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
manan ff be with u humesha just a try
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Lovely update..cabir story is moving forward and cavya are always fun pair..pls continue soon 😊

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