MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 31

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Posted: 10 years ago
plz reveal nyo's secrete soon n don't end soo soon..
it's awesome..
plz cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update!! Nyonika being good soundin great.. Ridima reveals soon abt pandit. Continue soon n dun b sorry yua writeups r so pretty good continue Plss..
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Posted: 10 years ago
it's nt lyk that.. we lyk yr FF
plz dnt stp.. if u cn plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
u r writing fab but not regular
means der is lot of gap b/w ;last two parts 31 nd 32
nandu should'nt get shock naa but now nandu fainted by hearng about manik nd amm's was not worried about her
dhrulya was not in town right but dey came along cabir to hospital
i'm liking ur ff if u want more comments nd likes make it with more manan as it was less in 32 part

...continue soon
than q😊😊...for giving such a gd ff

plzz don't stop it make it more wonderful
sorry if i hurt u u r really gd writer
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Posted: 10 years ago
dat nyonika secret was rlly amazing i hope show maih be aisa kuch hojay
amm's thing was rlly good
hope neonika finds dat pandit was de culprit

don't stop it...make it more wonderful by ur skills
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kiaraMaNanholic



Awesome suggestion but there is lot to come.. I mean there was lot i had thot earlier but i dont think i can complete coz f issues..



I am sure it will be awesome none the rest!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Promo:

Ridhima tells Manik tha pandit is a CREEP!!!!
She confess that she was recommended by Am's to take guidance under Pandit as her father was Am's student.

She tells him Am's trust Pandit blindly when she complained all turned out against her

Will Am's listen to Manik when he reveals Pandit or will Am's think Manik is wrong?

Will Manik be able to take Nandini away from Pandit's spell.

Wait for the part...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aadhya_cute

u r writing fab but not regular

means der is lot of gap b/w ;last two parts 31 nd 32
nandu should'nt get shock naa but now nandu fainted by hearng about manik nd amm's was not worried about her
dhrulya was not in town right but dey came along cabir to hospital
i'm liking ur ff if u want more comments nd likes make it with more manan as it was less in 32 part

...continue soon
than q😊😊...for giving such a gd ff

plzz don't stop it make it more wonderful
sorry if i hurt u u r really gd writer


no you didn't hurt me. And about late update i said i was upset and MaNan scenes will definitely come but this scenes are required dea.. and dont worry suggestions are always welcomed. Ty wait for the update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nandini will speak in favour of Manik
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 33:

In hospital room,

Manik: WHT? Are you really here?

Ridhima: Yaa and I am sorry I should have come way back over here.

Manik: sorry y? and Manik tried to get up but he was not able to so Ridhima held him and helped him and she was adjusting pillow and says,

Ridhima: Coz if I would have come earlier you wouldn't have to see this bed.

Nandini walks in as she was jealous she saw Ridhima helping Manik she moved her aside,

Nandini: I can help him.

Manik noticed her jealousy while Ridhima was stunned by her gesture. Manik smirked a little and to clear the air he said,

Manik: Ahh Nandini you come here, he made her sit next to him and encircled her in his arms and whispered," ab thik hai ya still jealous" Manik thot he can tease her but to his surprise Nandini held his hand and tighten the grip and whispered," much better Mr. One Track"

Am's came in and saw Ridhima and suddenly in anger she said,

Am's: Nandu yeh yahan kya kar ri hai? Niklo tum yahan se.

Manik: Am's woh mujhe kam tha aap isse jante ho?

Am's: Jaanti hun? Main iski shakal nahi dekhna chahti

Saying this she left the room and Nandini followed her looking back she said," sorry Manik but please manage I have to see Am's"

As soon as she left Ridhima murmured," I m glad she went" this was heard by Manik.

Manik: What did you said forget that why did you say that?

Ridhima: I will tell you,

Am's is not only Pandit's GuruMaa but she is GuruMaa of my Dad too.

Manik was just so shocked hearing what Ridhima just said and he said it loud What?

Hearing Manik's scream Nandini came to see him but stopped when she heard Ridhima opening her heart out loud,

Ridhima: calm down and now listen to this,

"Yes, my dad was Am's student so after I completed my 12th dad asked me to join Am's classical singing class as I was good at rock he wanted me to be the best but when we went there Am's told my dad that for me Pandit would be the best teacher and Dad agreed.

Pandit ne pehle se hi yeh bol diya tha k woh ek both hi zyada strict teacher hai and his teaching skills are totally different. We started our classes, shuru shuru main toh it was all fine though sometime I used to find Pandit noticing me weirdly but I used to think maybe he just seeing the way I sing but slowly he started touching my hands improperly initially I felt shayad galti se lag gaya hoga and other times I felt veena pakna seekha raha hai. Then one day after six months of training he took me to Mumbai ya over here and he said there is a concert where we have to perform classical singing I was so damn happy I was going to do my first classical concert but to my bad luck, when I went to changing room pandit followed me and I was so shocked to see him but he revealed two tickets and said he will take me abroad I was so happy that I was overjoyed and I hugged him as there was no one to share my happiness and suddenly I felt his hands moving all over my body I tried to free myself but all my efforts were in vain and he was like an animal and I was not able to save myself when I said this incident to Am's and my family Pandit accused me that I used to give him wrong signal and I tried to harassed him when he denied to take me abroad and everyone listened to him. But I thot I would expos him and when I found the evidence against him that he had already made other girls suffered too I wanted to report him but when I was going he sent me my clipping of the concert night and I was numb. I was helpless I can't help myself, I can't help any of the girl and I got disappeared. Everyone thot I'm dead even Am's thot the same and so she reacted like that. That video can prove that he is a CREEP but it can take my future. So I wasn't coming out but then this news it bought me here. Manik tumpe aur kisine nai us Pandit ne hi humla kia hai he can go to any extent"

She was sobbing when Nandini came in and hugged her and calmed her down.

Nandini: Ridhima you don't worry he will definitely pay for his sins. Manik yeh fusion concert hoga and you will perform with me

Manik: How can I with this fractured leg?

Nandini: tumne hi kaha tha na Manik this concert is a big hit for me toh ab?

Manik: fine I will manage but first tell me what's going on in your head?

Nandini calls fab 5 and Navya and tell them everything what happened with Ridhima

Nandini: so there is a plan to expose that Pandit.

Cabir: what plan?

She discusses the plan and says they will execute it tomorrow itself on fusion concert.

Everyone one was surprised

Cabir: but Nandini fusion concert aaj hai.

Nandini: Manik call Nyo mam and shift the concert tomorrow

Manik: are you outta your mind? Tickets sell ho chuke hai what reason should I give?

Nandini: If you don't know then lemme tell you SPACE ke trustee ka beta is in hospital she definitely can

Cabir: she is smart han.

Nandini: so Cabir start your documentary, Mukti and Alya you take no from Ridhima and start calling and convincing those girls as we don't have time. Ridhima I have one question.

Ridhima: yaa sure.

Nandini: Do you have that clip?

Ridhima: yaa

Nandini: give it to me I will disclose it to the world.

Everyone: are you mad?

Manik: stop talking lame think about her future,

Nandini: Agar usse insaf chahiye yeh karna padega but still if you guys are not comfortable we will blur her.

Cabir: han this is cool

Nandini: Dhruv you pretend that you gonna perform and Navya you have to keep an eye on him.

Nandini forwards her hand: So ready?

Everyone keeps their hands on her hand and says Plan is On!!!

Manik: Nandini Am's?

Nandini: Manik Am's ke aakhon pe Panditji ke achai ka parda hai, agar main unhe bataungi toh bhi woh nai samjhege so leave it.

Am's overhears the conversation.

Am's: wah Nandu, Trilok was right Manik kabhi tere liye sahi ho hi nahi sakta issi ke wajah se tum aaj apne Guruji ke baarein main aisa soch rai ho I m ashamed of you.

Nandini tried to clear the things: Am's please listen to me Ridhima is right I felt the same somedays back

Am's: tum Manik ki bhasa bol ri ho and tumhe yahi bolne aana hai to don't follow me.

She left the room and Nandini didn't go behind her as she was aware Am's won't listen to her.

Everyone leaves the room,

Nandini: Manik, I am sorry I should have listen to you what if agar Panditji would have tried.

Manik places a hand on her mouth: Don't you ever say that again coz abhi tak main kisiki jaan nai le sakta tha but if he would have done this I would have killed him for sure.

Nandini: please Manik don't say such thinks I get scared of your anger. But I believe you tum aisa kabhi kar hi nai sakte,

Manik: Nandini this plan is a threat and I'm not there to protect you please is it necessary to execute it.

Nandini: ofcourse it is for those girls who are being tortured by such Pandit's, for Ridhima and for us. Manik jab tak Am's yeh realize nai karenge tab tak yeh possible nai hai try to understand.

Manik brings her close and kisses her forehead: I believe, you will take care of yourself and don't create a mess.

Nandini kisses him on cheeks: even if I create mess you are there na to help me and clear all that mess.

With this she leaves the room.

Manik thinks," Nandini why do I feel you are hiding something from me"

Nandini thinks," I am sorry I have to hide this side of plan coz I know you would have never agreed to this"

Fab 5 arrives and watches Nandini so lost,

Mukti: what's wrong Nandini?

Alya: yaa why are you so lost?

Nandini: Guys I dint said another part of the plan

Cabir: What?

Nandini: Guys Pandit ko red hand pakadna is so important and for that he has to go somewhere to a girl and till I have come across him woh mere alawa kisi ke bulawe pe nai aayega

Ridhima: this is insane Nandini. Do you even realize what you are saying? He is a CREEP he is dangerous guys please make her understand.

Cabir: Nandini have you gone crazy she is right and how come Manik gave you permission let me talk to him

Nandini held his arm: Cabir Cabir Cabir please wait Manik is not aware of this.

Mukti: are you serious tumne Manik ko nai bataya what do you want hamari lash mile.

Dhruv: dekho Nandini its dangerous

Nandini: I know guys it is but I trust you all and I know you will never fail me. Please guys

Cabir: okay guys we should help her

Nandini: thanks so the plan is, Navya you will pretend in front of Pandit on call that I am on line and I'm saying mere dress ka zip band ni hora hai and main konse room main hoon and as soon as you realize pandit has heard and he is coming you will message me. After he comes Cabir you will come and record his mischief from keyhole. I will try to make him confess.

Cabir: how are you sure he will?

Mukti: Cabir girls have sixth sense and secondly agar he wont to wahan jayega hi nai and looking at his past he will definitely go

Nandini: okay guys so after that you come in save me and give video to media

Alya: COOL!!!

Nandini thinks," will I be able to do it without Manik? Come on Nandini be strong Manik agar plan kar raha hota to he would have had a backup plan so should I also have one?"

Nandini calls Nyonika: Hello mam, I need your help.

Nyo was numb but she was glad for the first time she wanted to help someone without asking anything in return

Nyo: Yaa say.

Nandini: Mam and she says the plan.

Nyo: I can't keep your life on stake Nandini

Nandini: I'm ssly from morning telling this to everyone first Manik then Fab 5 and now you mam I trust you people and that's the reason I am taking your help.

Nyo was surprised and she says thanks for believing I will surely but if haven't forget I am Nyonika Malhotra my son must have said that I work on GIVE and TAKE base

Nandini: I know today you actually don't want this but you are just saying this for masking your nice face but I will surely give you one think, that is your secret will be safe with me mam.

She ends the call and Nyonika thinks," Manik has definitely chose best for him"

Precap:

Navya fails in her work of sending Pandit

Pandit's truth is out

But will Nandini be in trouble? Would she be able to save herself?

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