MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 12

I love this happy family concept of fab 5

Part 20:
Manik was getting restless.. He wanted to see her.. Wanted to meet her cause he was aware he wont be able to meet her tomorrow.. Manik called Nandini..
Nandini: Hello Manik.. Tum plz aajao i wanna meet u..
Manik: How you exactly know what i feel?
Nandini: Matlab??
Manik: Nothing M coming.. And yaa teracce pe aana.. I'll call u wen I'm there..
Nandini: Okay..
Chachi: Kon aara hai?
Nandini: Chachi woh..
Chachi: Thik hai par subah jaldi bhej dena Chacha k uthne se pehle.. Main samjhti hun par Chacha thode protective hain.. Aur main janti hun.. Manik ko tumhari zarurat hai kabhi aise situation deal ni ki hogi..
Nandini: Chachi I love you..
Chachi: Ek bat bolu, Fab 5 uski family hai.. Unko bula lena.. Woh relieve feel karega..
Nandini: Yaa Chachi thode der bad bula dungi..
Chachi: Han thode der akele reh lo.. Aur agar sab aajae toh apne room main sab k sath aajana fir toh Chacha wont mind. And beta Manik ko pata na chale maine permission di hai okay?
Nandini: Han Chachi thanks..
Just then Nandini's phone rang and Chachi left..
Nandini: Han aai..
Manik: I'm waiting..

Nandini went upstairs and running she hugged Manik from behind.. Manik was so disturbed he needed this and she knew that.. Manik turned and hugged her more tightly.. She clutched his shirt tightly.. She broke the hug on seeing the guitar..

Nandini: Manik guitar??
Manik: Yaa.. Tumhe to pata hai..
Nandini: Han jab tum low feel karte ho you want music.. Manik lets sing together..
Manik: Really? You will sing with me..
Nandini: why not..
Manik: But thode der bad.. Tumhe dekh lun pehle..
Nandini: Mujhe kya dekhoge..
Manik: Nandini kuch batana tha..
Nandini: Bolo..
Manik: Iske pehle k main tumhare Chacha Chachi se permission lun.. Main tumhe mere aur..
Nandini: Tumhare aur Alya k bich ki bat.. Manik mujhe koi farak ni padta.. You know woh tumhara past tha.. Humara present bht acha hai..
Manik: Aur future aur bhi acha. Par tum kuch janna nai chahti.. We were in relation for 7 long years.. Tum yeh bhi janna chahti ki..
Nandini: Ki..
Manik: Ki.. Humare bich..
Nandini: Manik yeh sab batein mayne nai rakhti.. Tum dono ke bich jo bhi tha it was pure.. Tab she was ur responsibility.. Ho sakta hai u dint love her but u did everything jisse usse uski kami mehsus na ho.. You broke up coz she broke ur trust not bcoz of me.. And agar tumhare bich kuch hua bhi ho toh it was okay.. Manik har insan ka past hota hai.. And har insan apna pyar alag tarike se batata hai.. You both had different ways of showing love.. You know wat was so best about u both.. Inspite of just thinking u loved each other tum dono ne itna kiya ek dusre k liye.. And aaj jo main tumhare aakho me apne liye dekhti hun ya Alya ki aakhon main Dhruv k liye dekhti hun its immense love.. Thankyou Manik.. I'll always love you..
Manik was so touched he had teary eyes: Nandini how do you always manage to surprise me.. I'll love you till the end and I promise tomorrow the cards would be on our side..
Nandini: Kya karu Mr. Monster ki gf hun so surprise karti reh ti hun...
Manik held her from waist.. Bought her close.. Moved ger hairs to the back of her ears: Acha.. Aisa.. Toh monster jaise kam bhi karo..
Nandini felt so shy she hugged him: Manik..
Manik held her head and kisses her on forehead.. "Don't worry I'll never do anything that makes you uncomfortable, I love you and you love me thats more than enough for me"

Just then a shooting star passed by..
Manik: Make a wish..
Nandini used to hate this but looking at Manik, she saw a cute little kid jisse lagta hai yeh star uski wish puri kar sakta hai. So she wished." I don't like you star but my life he likes you so please uski wish kar na"
Manik wished" my star hates you coz you took evithn of her so i request please fill her life's empty space with me and my love.. Let me be with her foreva"
Manik: Kya manga..
Nandini: Jo mangte hai batate nai
Manik: Tumne manga? Woh bhi star se.. You toh hate them
Nandini: Har chiz ko bataya ni jaata Manik..

Suddenly fab 4 and Abhi, Navya arrived..
Cabir: Hello lovebirds, hope we didn't disturb you..
Manik: Cabir, and you guys.. Thanks yar i needed fab 5 today..
Alya: Don't thank us.. Hume nahi pata tum yahan aaye the.. Nandini called us..
Manik kisses her on hand: how you always know wat i need thanks..
Navya: Manik you have changed
Abhi: Yaa i dont see the hulk anymore..
Manik: your fren changed me
Nandini: Abhi, he is no more a hulk and in front of his frens he is Manik...
Mukti: They are blissful..

Cabir: Guys group hug..

Fab 5 were hugging and Nandini Navya and Abhi had a relief on their faces seeing them so calm..

Cabir: Guys tum log bhi chalo..
Nandini: Now you ppl are blissful.. I dont want to ruin a Fab 5 moment. You need them plz guys..
Mukti: Thanks Nandini.. But come on guys.. We are one big happy Family now..
Dhruv: Buddy lets give a name to this family what say..
Alya: You are right..
Manik: Any suggestion..
Nandini: Shining star..
Manik was shocked..
Cabir: Yaa right.. Shining star we all are stars.. So we got our first STAR moment lets capture it.. Wid this they took photos...
Alya: Manik guitar..
Manik: Yaa waa low and wanted to play with her but now m ok..
Mukti: So play with her coz she got u okay..
Nandini: No no..
Manik: Please...
Nandini: Okay..
Everyone seated.. Dhrulya and Mukbhi held each others hand.. Navya held a pillow while cabir slept on Mukti's lap..
Nandini sat on the tank and Manik started playing Guitar

Manik:
Main tenu samjhawa ki.. Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu kee jane pyar mera
Main kara intezar tera
Tu dil tu yon jaan meri..
Main tenu samjhawa ki..

Mere dil ne chun laiya ne tere dil diya raha..
Tu jo mere naal tu rehda turpe meri saha
Jeena mera... Hoye
Hun hai tera.. Ki main karan
Tu kar aitbar mera mera karan intezar mera
Tu dil tu yon jaan meri
Main tenu samjhawa ki..

Nandini:
Tenu chadd k kithe jawan tu mera parchawa..
Tere mukhde vich hi main ta rab nu apni pawan..
Meri duA..hoye
Sajda tera kardi sada..
(With this she kneels in front of him..)
Tu sun iqrar mera..
Main kara intezar tera tu dil tu yon jan meri..

Manik too kneels down and cups her face..
Main tenu samjhawan ki...
Main tebu samjhawan ki..

Everyone had tears in their eyes..
Mukti: Guys u made us cry..
Manik hugged Nandini..
Nandini: Manik m so scared.. U'll never leave me na..
Manik: Never..
Nandini: But Nyonika mam
Manik: Dont think about her..
Suddenly it started to rain..
Everyone was getting in cause they thot of getting wet.. But Nandini she stood in rain..
She was dancing her classical dance..
It was mesmerizing..
She stopped as everyone was staring bit sabse zyada Manik.. And she sneezed.. That was enuf for Mr. Malhotra to take her in..
Nandini: Manik nai..
Manik: Nandini come..
Nandini: Main nai aaungi
Cabir: Guya ready for Manik Malhotra..
Mukti: Always
Manik: To tum ne soch liya u wnt cme..
Nandini: yaa
Manik: sure
Nandini: han
Manik took her in her arms: now dnt blame me.. Chalo guys..
Everyone were smiling..
Nandini: Guys in my room
Mukti: What? Listen will go..
Nandini: Guys plz stay.. I know room bht chota hai par sab sath honge Toh I'll feel better.
Alya: You mean Manik will feel better.. Anything for a STAR moment..
Everyone had a chit chat seasion.. They were discussing fab5 moments and everyone dozed off... Alya on dhruv's lap.. Abhi and mukti cuddling.. Cabir on navya's lap..
MaNan were sitting in each others arm near the window couch from were Nandu used to wave him bye..
Manik: Sab kitne calm lag re hai. Woh Cabir ko dekho kon keh sakta hai itne calm cehre k piche Mom k sath na hone ka dukh chipa hai..
Nandini: Sach main Manik.. Navya ko dekho.. Kon keh sakta hai apni pregnancy ko uthana easy hai..
Manik: Dhrulya kitna sukoon hai uske chehre pe.. Buddy ko itna khush kabhi nai dekha..
Nandini: Mukti aur Abhi ko dekho.. Apne pyar ko bachte dekh Mukti pagal hoye jari hai..
Manik: And look at my star she did all this coz Main chain se so pau..
Nandini: Han yeh shamt look tumhare pe mujhe shanti deta hai.. With this she rested her head on his chest and the slept..

Mrning..
Everyone woke up with a smile that they promise will never fade No matter what..
Nandini bought tea and coffee for everyone.. Sab jag gaye the except Manik..
Nandini: Gud mrning everyone..
Everyone: Gumonin..
Cabir: Isko uthaye..
Nandini: Nai usse sone do..
Mukti: Ek trick hai.. Tumhare baal gile hain na.. Uske muh pe stroke karo..
Nandini does that.. Manik opens his eyes..
Nandini: Gud mrning..
Manik: Guuummmooonnninnn..
Nandini: Utho ur tea..
Chachi: Uth gaye sab..
Everyone: Yaa Chachi..
Chachi: Chalo fresh hojao Nasta ready hai.. Humara washroom bhi use kar sakte ho Chacha office gaye hai and Risabh so ra hai..
Everyone had breakfast and went home..

It was 8pm..
Alya's house
Alya: Manik aur kitna tym?
Dhruv: Yaa buddy kya kar ra hai..
Manik comes out..
Omg.. White blazer... White tee.. Blue denim.. He was looking so royal.. Alya was jaw dropped
Dhruv: Buddy agar main hota toh definitely Abhi Nandini ka hath de deta...
Manik: guys mujhse nai hoga..
Alya: Shayad usse pata tha isliye she gave a gift for u
Manik: Gift... Nandini?
Dhruv started a video in that it was Nandu..
In video Nandini said " I know tum bht zyada nervous ho.. Par trust me Manik.. Main tumse zyada nervous hun.. Hum dono jante hai ispe our life depends.. So plz come.. I'll be wearing those gifts u gave.. I'll be waiting to shine for u.. Get all the courage and come.. Coz ur star is waiting deadly to c u.."
Manik was so happy that he said: Jaldi karo i dont want k main late hojau..

Here at Nandini's home everone was ready.. They reached the venue where Manik was already their..
Other members of STAR family were hiding..
Nandini's family were stunned to see the decorations.. Whole place was decorated in white.. The place had white lily's everywhere.. And whote petals where they were walking..
And Manik saw Nandini.. She was shining in that white attire.. Her dress was till ankle.. Her hairs were loosely curled.. Her eyes were having those liners that made her more gorgeous.. Her earrings were shining.. Those sandals made her match her height..
He was dumstruck..
Chachi: Dekhte rahoge ya baithe hum..
Manik: Sorry Chachi woh.. Manik being a gentle man pulled the chair for Chachi and Nandini.. Who sat just beside Manik...

Precap: Manik's proposal of accepting him as an official BF..

Note: M xtrremly sory.. But update went too big so was not able to inclue the proposal.. Hope u like this.. And plz guys ill update tomorrow.. Sorry..!!

too good

long updates are always in demand dear👏😊 ... don't be sorry for that ...

Woww...wonderful update

They are doing all the hard work just for being official boyfriend ...sigh...

This is just so beautiful now m missing my friendzzz

Awww

Awesome updates..all the hardwork for the proposing to be a bf that's too cute..I thought marriage proposal 😆 but loved it the bonding of friends the night at nandini house ( brought back memories of me with my friends) u penned it beautifully and nandini understands her monster so well she wants to make him happy and be there for him always..and manik is bowled by her evey gesture..love this couple manan..please continue soon..wonder what the marriage proposal will be like 😳 ..am eager to read further so update soon and thanks for the pm

Long updates r awesome so u dnt worry..