SANDHIR FF: MY EQUATION OF TRUST (DARK+MATURE)LINK TO THREAD 2!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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MY EQUATION OF TRUST

HEY I KNOW THAT THE BANNER IS LATE BUT KYA KARU PEHLE MUJE UPDATE KARNA NAHI AA RAHA THA BUT THANX TO NAZ...BTW I HAVE 3 BANNERS MADE BY MY READERS ON FB...I WILL POST 3 OF THEM ONE BY ONE..

HERE'S ONE OF THEM MADE BY TANISHA MANGLA

MY EQUATION OF TRUST

HOWZ IT...?????

Hey guyz m going to start my new ff a dark and mature one ...MY EQUATION OF TRUST (DARK +MATURE)... I hope that u guyz still have lil stamina to tolerate me...


So coming to the point this ff is going to have love, lust, hatred, pain, solace, hell, heaven, melancholy, suspense and the main two things a SOCIAL MESSAGE and the EQUATION OF TRUST


In our life we trust many in fact the trust is the only basis of a relationship... without trust no relationship can go longer and our life also depends on the trust only once we gave up the trust from life we became life less... but still we trust many mom dad friends family and a lot but have you ever thought what will happen when your .EQUATION OF TRUST will change...yeah in this ff something like that is going to happen... I hope that you all liked the idea...

ABOUT THIS FF THESE WORDS MAY HELP YOU ALL..

**Time has came for the tears to brust...
It's a story about the EQUATION OF TRUST...
A girl was steered to the world of lust...
Their dazzle world turned into dust...
A boy was steered to the world of worst...
Time changed their EQUATION OF TRUST...**


so guyz how was it...????? Should I continue...???? only if you all are interested in this... I don't wanna bother you all...😛


So plz tell me...wat say...?????😲😲😲
plz leave your view here...😭😭😭

and yeah agar galti se achha lag gya toh for pm's buddy me up...😆😆😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
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So here's the prologue..

hey here's one more banner made by SHEENA SANDHIRIAN on fb...

MY EQUATION OF TRUST

howz this...????

**PROLOGUE**


It was a dark room...a really dark one such that no one can see anyone but a shattered voice was alarming in room notifying the presence of a broken soul over there... someone was sobbing there with a pinch of hiccups with it...someone was cursing the life... the god...for present and past... Just then a other voice came from out alarming the broken soul...and the poor soul wipped off the tears composed itself and then stood up with a faint assuring smile on face just then someone switched on the light and said in a pissed of tone with I knew it attitude'... "are laila phir se... kitni baar kha hai tumse ki kamre ki lights band mat rakha karo...ye lo tumhari dairy tumne mangaayi thi na...chalo ab jaldi se bahar aa jao customers hamara wait kar rahe hai..." and to this the laila replied back in her m alright attitude' ... "are nazia baaji aap ap chinta mat kijiye me abhi bas thodi der me aa hi rahi hu...aap jaaiye aur jaake taiyaar ho jayiye..." And to this nazia nodded in yes with a smile on her face and handled the dairy to laila...caressed laila's hairs like a big sister and left from their giving a assuring smile...
when nazia left laila wipped up the hint of tears coming out from her eyes while maintain a assuring smile on her face and then within second she settled down herself on the floor with dairy in her hands pressing it against her chest... she sat down there with a lil dreamy happiness on her face and then soon she took the pen lying on her dressing table and started scribbling her thoughts in the dairy with a smile and pain on her face...


**DAIRY**


Life ...life is unexpectedly dangerous no one knows what's gonna happen next just like me...
(she sighed a lil after writing this)
Mom dad I really miss you both are you guyz still in the world...????(a lone tear escaped from her eyes..she pressed her lips to control her inner self and then with a questioning gesture she looked up at the ceiling...and then she again started writing...)
And yeah my pichku (she chukled with tears in her eyes at the name she had given to her loved one) your sandy is still waiting for you...i know you are still here in the world... at last I wanted to confess that yes I love you...yeah you are right m finally confessing it...your sandy in confessing it...(she chuckled at her confession while pressing her lips and blinking her eyes to control of outburst...)


Btw hey dear dairy...m writing this not becuz I love to write ... m actually writing this becuz I don't want to forget how to write at least by this I will be able to keep in mind the words and alphabet which I used to write daily some two years ago... (she was about to write more just then a male voice came in the room from outside with a cheapness in it "ae laila aa rahi hai kya aaj raat...5 dunga..." And after listeneing to this she got alarmed...her hands shivered at this... a shrill went through her nerves...she then looked up but he was gone out..and then she fastened up with her last line...)


And yeah m sanyukta...sanyukta agarwal a 19 year old virgin and that too thanx to god...
See you soon...


**DAIRY**


and then she stood up from her place and fastened up with to get ready for her job with a fear on her face...a such fear which used to be on her face 12 hours a day...fear of loosing herself in this world of lust...


**PROLOGUE**


yeah I know the prologue was long but can't help myself ek baar likhna shuru karti hut oh mere haath bhi mere muh ki tarah nonstop hi chalte hain...lol...

so guyz how was it...????? Should I continue...???? only if you all are interested in this... I don't wanna bother you all...
So plz tell me...wat say...?????
plz leave your view here...

Edited by preety..bhumi.s - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ress

Unress

Faints out of happiness
U r strting a new off
Omg I cnt tell u how hppy I m

N second moi came first
See moi stalking u
Really today is the best day

Jaha dkho mi first

The proloug seems intrstng
Poor sanyu so much broken
She's trapped in this devil world

Everyday is a war for her to keep herself safe
She's wtng for his picku
I think picku is rd n sanyu luvs him

I so luved it
Cnt wait for next
Update soon

Luv u yr
Keep smiling
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue asap dear
will wait for chapter 1
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome n lovely...
Do continue ASAP 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg
That was freaking awsm
I am already excited
Jaldi continue plzzz 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh god ye kya tha plz continue its awsm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
plz continue..prologue was damn exciting 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
oh my god...
awsm awsm awsm prologe...
how sanyu came to this world...
is pichku our randhir...
jst fantastic...
plz try to update soon...

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