SANDHIR FF: MY EQUATION OF TRUST (DARK+MATURE)LINK TO THREAD 2!! - Page 35

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyugracy27

lovely lovely update
update next part ASAP


thankiee dearu...πŸ˜›πŸ˜Š
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take care...πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nitra

Oh god yar i cant see sanyu like this i just hate rd he is sooo insensitive and evil plzzz ye emotional drama bahut painful hai kuch to happy ho sanyu ke sathsath cant wait for next part...


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: isikashekhawat2

Preety...thoda busy hone ki wajh se update nahi pad payi ..
Thoda wait kar lena for my comment..
M pakka comment karugi..pad ke


its ohkiee payal... πŸ˜›πŸ˜Š
i understand yaar...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
jal jaldi se free hoke aaja moi missing u yaar...😭😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mrdodokk

Hey amazing update...
Arey sanyu has to in through so much yaar...
Poor her...
Plz show Rd's backstory soon...

lets see thoda sa patience rakh lo yaar...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Thnx for pm...
Love
Harshita


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

Woooshhh!!! I finally landed in this fiction.
*sigh* I'm really sorry for neither reading nor reviewing this fiction before as I was having my exams. I apologize again... Sowwyy!! *puppy eyes*

its ohkiee dear...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

What?! 7 chapters already?? Woah!
Well, I'm off to read the fiction... Wait! Did I just read Dark?! God!!! I'm dying to read it now..

lol u love dark one this much grt going ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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There's a particular reason why I love this sadistic genre and this fiction has all the necessary elements in it to make it an awesome one. I, surely, am addicted to this one.
Characterization of Randhir as the dark intimidating yet emotional one and portrayal of Sanyukta as a vulnerable yet strong willed girl is at its best.
The plot, so far, seems precisely realistic and a mysterious one.
The pace of the story is wonderful while the description is splendid.

thankiee 😳😳😳

Uh! Why is Randhir torturing Sanyukta so much and why is she welcoming it? I want the fight spirit in Sanyukta not the flight one. I hope to see that soonish.

wait dear sab theek kardungi me...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

I thoroughly enjoyed reading the chapters, they all exhibit some sort of message and the convey the pain that a woman has to endure in extermities.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Do update it soonish!

Regards
Keya


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Posted: 10 years ago

unress dearu...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
sory for late commenting...
as usual fantastic part...
randhir hates women...
hmm he has some dark past...
poor sanyu going through soo much...
plz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

hey guyz this part is dedicated to the one who suggested me to write an dark ff THUNDERCUTE.... may be she is not reading this...but still thankiee dear...btw m not getting her from many days do anyone know where she is...????


MY EQUATION OF TRUST


MY EQUATION OF TRUST(DARK + MATURE)...


PART:8


SOMETHING WAS MUTUAL


Precap: rd made sanyu a slave in his house...


"..btw u truly deserve this.. now just go and arrange ur new big room..." And after this he left from there to his room... sanyu was standing there dumbstruck...she was still figuring up the fact that how could be someone be so harsh..so stony ...she was just continuously looking at the floor...just then a sound disturbed her..the sound of click opening of door disturbed her...she looked up and figured him in commercial dress..he was wearing a black office dress...it seemed like he was going for some work..he was talking to someone on the latest mobile phone of the year 2003... Regarding some technology...she was just gazing at him ... a no. of thoughts were just running up in her mind...just then he stepped towards her while talking on the phone.. and stopped in front of looking at her pale face while smirking broadly... And then he said while smirking in his confident voice.. "ji mr.mehta don't worry me sab dekh lunga..(he hanged up the phone and then said while clicking his fingers in front of her eyes bringing her back in her senses..to which she shrugged a lil..)..hey miss. Slave kya hua apne new room ko dcor nahi karna kya..?..(she looked at him without blinking her eyes and thus irritating him..)..nah just leave it..achha suno ab tumhare liye ek sachhi wali gud news...(she again made a confused startled face thinking up of the consequences..he smirked at her expression..)..me jaa raha hu..office jaa raha hu...(a slight glow came in her eyes...but she was still expressionless...he noticed the glow in her eyes and found something which took him to some other place.. SOMETHING WAS MUTUAL..something came up in his mind..someone's eyes...he forgot to blink...he was just looking at her eyes in which he found something mutual...but soon he came back to his senses...he blinked his eyes to look up clearly and then said while rubbing his right eyes a lil with his left hands fist still smirking devilishly...)..but don't worry I will be back in the evening tab tak tum..(he pointed his right hand's index finger at her in a shaky way trying to figure up the things..)..tumm..ummm...ha tab tak tum pure ghar ki safaai kar dena...phir se...khana bana dena...kapde..bartan...pedo ko paani..in short vo saare kam jo tumhare layak hai vo sab kar dena...ok..."...he looked at her for answer but she didn't even showed a single moment...he felt a lump in his throat...may be his soul scolded him for doing this to a human...for treating her like this...but nah his mind again overpowered him..and he left from there smirking broadly...


As soon as he left from there she blinked her eyes thrice in a lil astonishment...but soon she came out of her thoughts...a saline silver drop fell from her left eye...which she blinked up with a slight faint smile on her face...yeah the smile of being alone and away from the hell for some hours...soon she went to the guest room..yeah her old room to have a bath...and take her stuff from there which were lying there...she took the bath and scrolled the trolley which she had with her...the same trolley which parth had brought from the bar where she was residing till 24th jan..Two days before...she took the trolly to the open space of the first floor uff her so called big room...and arranged it over there...and after arranging the things she went to store room which was in the ground floor..she opened the door of the store room...and switched on the lights to look up... well after looking at the condition of store room a yucky expression took over her face...it was the most dusty and messy place she had ever witnessed...the broad layer of the dust was clearly visible on the objects kept over there...all the things were just kept here and there...she sighed a lil and then started to find up the things which may be defined as useful for her...finally she got the mat and a small shaped cupboard over there..soon she took all the useful stuff from there and arranged it in her new big room..now she had a bed no no so called bed...actually the mat kept on the right corner of the room was her bed...she actually had a cupboard in which she arranged her stuffs...finally she sat up everything and then left for her room to do the work...which she was supposed to do..she cleaned the whole house again...washed all the utensils and clothes and made food for him...and after doing all this she went up in the living room and lied down on the couch...and sighed up a lil and then don't know when but yeah within 5 minutes she was asleep then...she dozed off with her mouth lil opened...


After 2 hours...
she twisted in her sleep and felt a lil pain in her head and whole body..yeah she fell down from the couch...she rubbed her palm on her head while wincing inaudibly in her cracked voice... "oouuch..." And then she slowly opened up her eyes to look up at the scene..everything looked lil blurry to her...she rubbed her eyes and stood up lazily from her position...and then she went to the mini library of the house...the only place where a lil cleaning work was left...she reached there and started cleaning the things just then her eyes glittered up by looking up the treasure she had just founded...and after looking at it finally a broad smile came upon her face...yeah there were the books..the books of engineering..of her dream...which she had seen when she was just 16..when she was in 11th...she quickly rushed towards it ...she found each and every book which she ever needed to complete her dream..she took the one book and smelt its unique papery smell with her eyes closed in pleasure...and then she hugged the books tightly..yeah finally she had got the heaven in the hell..she was happy after a long time she started reading the books of class 12 first and got lost in them...but suddenly she came across something...there was a something between the pages of book there was a pic...she quickly took it out..and the person whom she witnessed in the pic gave her a huge astound..yeah it was him..randhir...who was totally different from the rd which he used to look like to her...he was sitting on the couch with his bat in his hand looking in the front with a surprised expression in the front...he looked liked to be of some 18 in the pic...she was continuously looking at the pic...she was looking at his face in his eyes she found something in it... SOMETHING WAS MUTUAL...he was looking like a innocent soul in it...she was busy in fidgeting up the things just then a sound disturbed her bringing her back from her reverie...she shuddered at the footsteps and quickly stood up while panicking...yeah it was now 8 pm at night...and he was back...she quickly adjusted all the things while panicking a lil and then rushed to the living room to witness the devil of her life...she was sweating a lil... and he was standing there again talking to someone on the phone...she stood up there like a dumb looking at him..was trying to find something..yeah was actually trying to find the same innocence which she had just figured up in the pic...but soon she was brought back from her trance by his stony voice... "hey miss. Salve.. (she blinked her eyes and looked at him while he offered her his commercial bag).. just take this and keep it in my room.." she nodded to this and went up to his room and kept it over there..she was still in her reverie...just then he came up in the room making a click sound of the door breaking her trance and directly jumped up on the bed...like a innocent tired teenager...she had a faint smile at her face by finding the something mutual...but soon her smile got faded by his commanding devilish voice... "ab yaha khade khade dekh kya rahi ho..jaao jaake khana upar leke aao..".. she nodded to this and went down stairs to bring up food for him...she came back to him within the next 5 mins and adjusted the dish on the side table of the bed..he opened his eyes and witnessed her going from the room..just then he felt a pain in his leg...the same pain which he used to felt when he was in 12th..due to the hard work...and then he roared up at her... "stop.." she stopped at the moment...and looked at him..he was lying on the bed with his eyes closed...she looked at him while he was just lying there with his lips lil parted and eyes shut closed..he was just fidgeting up something just then he again felt a pain in his legs..and suddenly a soft sweet voice ranged up in his mind... "oh ho aaj tum phirse ese lete ho.. hmm lagata hai aaj phir paao me dard hai...uff chalo me tumhare paao daba deti hu...laao dikhao..." and then he heard his own voice in his past.. "are paagal ho kya tum toh ek ladki ho mere paao kese daba sakti ho...hato me tumhe apne paao chune bhi nahi dunga..." and her voice again ranged up in his mind.. " nahi me dabake rahungi ab toh..." and then he recalled his voice in reply to her.. "esa ho hi nahi payega kyuki ab me bhaagne wala hu tum mere paao daba hi nahi paaogi...huh.."...he smiled to this which didn't got unnoticed by her..he was busy in his past...and she was busy in looking at him was just trying to get the things just then his phone ranged up breaking their trance..they both shuddered at this and then he opened his eyes and cut up the phone while she was still standing there.. he looked at her and his devil came out of him... he commanded her in his irony voice... "idhar aao...(she stepped towards him and reached upto the bed...he smirked at this and said...)...tumhe pata hai tum ladkiya na ek aur kaam me mahir hoti ho.. (she gave him confused looks she was confused about what actually he was...)...per dabane me...(she felt poor..weak at the moment...)...ab chalo jaldi se mere per dabao..." she nodded to him out of fear and started massaging his legs...she felt really weak at that time...she was just crying from inside and he dug up his face in the bed with his eyes closed and a lonely tear escaped from each one's eyes...


Recap:he came to know about the books...

so how was it...?

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ress


Unress

Looks up
Looks down
Looks right
Looks left

Omggg πŸ˜ƒ
Cnt believe
Moi firse first
Dies out of shock 🀒


Comes back from heaven for cmmnting

Really yr
U won't believe
How eagerly I waits for ur updates
I literally start wtng or u can say start stalking u from 9 pm for updte

Really its lyk winning a marathon leaving behind all the compitors n comes first


Smirks at everyone πŸ˜›

The update was awsme yr as alwz
I m speechless

Ur update alwz left me in a spellbound

Really this is getting freakinf awsme wid each updte

Really yr i m big fan of urs writing
The first fic by u was hit
N this one is also getting intrstng
N will be a blockbuster


Really yr u not only writes awsme bt also cares for ur readers
U give daily updtes

Agr daily updte na hti toh mi eagerness se pagal ho jti


The way sanyu tackles evry situation wid a smile is commandable yr
Really the situation in which shes trapped is horrible
Normal person must be broken bt shes fighting evrything with so much determination


Rd feels guilty sumtyms
He dies doing all this bt his past n his insecurities alwz overpowers any emtn in him

Sanyu wrking lyk slaves bt she has found her lyf
Her dream her enginnering

The book was lyk oxygen to her
She has new hope in her lyf in this gloomy situation


Rd smirks seeing all this
Bt in sum corner of his heart he has little humanity


The little fb scenes was amzng
I wonder who was dat women


Sanyu massaging his legs
Shes feeling so weak n vulnerable
Both crying n dying


Wtng for nxt
Updte soon


Luv u yr
Keep smiling 😊
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii Preety
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely update dear
Lovely, nicely n beautifully written
Love it to the core
feeling bad for Sanyu😭
she clean whole mansion
Pakka something definitely happened in his past!!!
Precap interestingπŸ˜‰
update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Thx 4 pmπŸ€—
Edited by Param_love - 10 years ago

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