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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: isikashekhawat2



Are koi na...i understand
Study is more important yr...
Jab time mile kar dena..
M konsa kahi bhag ke ja rhi hu
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THANKX FOR UNDERSTANDING DEARU...
LOVE U
TAKE CARE
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

hey guyz m up with my newly started ff

plz hit likes and comment it means a lot for me...

MY EQUATION OF TRUST

MY EQUATION OF TRUST (DARK+MATURE)...

PART: 1

THE TOM AND JERRY FIGHT


24th JAN 2003..

It was a dark room...a really dark one such that no one can see anyone but a shattered voice was alarming in room notifying the presence of a broken soul over there... someone was sobbing there with a pinch of hiccups with it...someone was cursing the life... the god...for present and past... Just then a other voice came from out alarming the broken soul...and the poor soul wipped off the tears composed itself and then stood up with a faint assuring smile on face just then someone switched on the light and said in a pissed of tone with I knew it attitude'... "are laila phir se... kitni baar kha hai tumse ki kamre ki lights band mat rakha karo...ye lo tumhari dairy tumne mangaayi thi na...chalo ab jaldi se bahar aa jao customers hamara wait kar rahe hai..." and to this the laila replied back in her m alright attitude' ... "are nazia baaji aap ap chinta mat kijiye me abhi bas thodi der me aa hi rahi hu...aap jaaiye aur jaake taiyaar ho jayiye..." And to this nazia nodded in yes with a smile on her face and handled the dairy to laila...caressed laila's hairs like a big sister and left from their giving a assuring smile...
when nazia left laila wipped up the hint of tears coming out from her eyes while maintain a assuring smile on her face and then within second she settled down herself on the floor with dairy in her hands pressing it against her chest... she sat down there with a lil dreamy happiness on her face and then soon she took the pen lying on her dressing table and started scribbling her thoughts in the dairy with a smile and pain on her face...


**DAIRY**


Life ...life is unexpectedly dangerous no one knows what's gonna happen next just like me...
(she sighed a lil after writing this)


Mom dad I really miss you both are you guyz still in the world...????(a lone tear escaped from her eyes..she pressed her lips to control her inner self and then with a questioning gesture she looked up at the ceiling...and then she again started writing...)


And yeah my pichku (she chuckled with tears in her eyes at the name she had given to her loved one) your sandy is still waiting for you...i know you are still here in the world... at last I wanted to confess that yes I love you...yeah you are right m finally confessing it...your sandy in confessing it...(she chuckled at her confession while pressing her lips and blinking her eyes to control of outburst...)


Btw hey dear dairy...m writing this not becuz I love to write ... m actually writing this becuz I don't want to forget how to write at least by this I will be able to keep in mind the words and alphabet which I used to write daily some two years ago... (she was about to write more just then a male voice came in the room from outside with a cheapness in it "ae laila aa rahi hai kya aaj raat...5 dunga..." And after listeneing to this she got alarmed...her hands shivered at this... a shrill went through her nerves...she then looked up but he was gone out..and then she fastened up with her last line...)


And yeah m sanyukta...sanyukta agarwal a 19 year old virgin and that too thanx to god...
See you soon...


**DAIRY**


and then she stood up from her place and fastened up with to get ready for her job with a fear on her face...a such fear which used to be on her face 12 hours a day...fear of loosing herself in this world of lust...
She got ready for her job... a job which no girl would love to do...a job in which the destiny dragged her... And then she left from there hurrying up and reached the dance stage where other girls were also reporting...where the men's were sitting in front of the stage to rape the girls with their bloody eyes...she again felt a lump while stepping towards the stage like everyday but she did it after all this was the only way for her to sustain her life...and soon the dance also started and along with others she also started dancing in her cheap clothes...the perverts were hooting for them like maniac...throwing money on them making her feel low... making her feel cheap thing ...were doing the cheap tricks... coming close to them to touch them... were whistling in a cheapest way... were making a disgusted kissing face and were making air and the senses disgusted by the smell of the alcohol which they were consuming...this was what she used to face daily in her life to tolerate these cheap men's in her life who were ready to rape her but still she was brave... was ready to fight against the cruel world because her EQUATION OF TRUST was still now the same she was still trusting her PICHKU to come back to her...after the dance she somehow escaped from there like every day in her life...she reached the common room were there was no one and then within a minute she switched to the TV to try give herself a bit happiness by having lil entertainment...she switched on the TV and then changed to her fav show the tom and jerry show which still gave her feeling of being in her home and the same person what she was 2 years ago...but this time when she switched on something caught her glimpse...which make her to go two years back in her life...yeah today the tom was studying..writing ... something and the jerry was disturbing him...


**FLASHBACK**


He was studying something...was writing something in his and hers notebook just then she came to her in her boyish school dress ...yeah she was an tom boy... she patted her hand on the desk to distract him but he was still busy in his work and this irritated her to the hell... she patted again on the desk this time with more power.. but he was same busy in his own work and she knew it that its of no use to try to take his attention in normal way and then in next minute she screamed like an maniac in her supper cute voice grabbing the attention of whole class...
"pichkuuu...allle le le le...kitna padega re tu..."And after this he stood up from his place with a jerk making a annoyed face and then said to her in his frustrated but slow voice while grabbing her elbow tight..."sandy kitni baar kaha hai tujhse don't call me PICHKU in front of everyone..we are in class 11th now and that too maths student and btw wats problem in calling me by my real name..."and then she cutted him in middle while freeing her elbow with a jerk and naughty smile spread over her face in her mischievous and supper cute tone while pulling his cheeks hard... "alle le le... are pichku... naam me kya rakha hai... tu bas emotions ko dekh... aur vese bhi mene tujhe iss baar pichku nahi... pichkuuu bola tha see last word u lamba tha.. toh hua na thoda different..." and then he freed himself from her grip and said in his naughty tone with a smirk over his face..."ohkay agar tu meri baat nahi manegi... toh me bhi teri baat nahi maanunga (while showing his fingers in tickling movement)..tujhe yaad toh hai na sandy..."and she got him... her expression changed from a smirk to a frightened face... yeah tickling was her only weakness and she started moving back with her gaze fixed on his fingers while murmuring to him "nahi dekho tum esa nahi kar sakte I wont let you do so" but he was his PICHKU so he didn't bothered even a lil and was moving towards her with a smirk plastered over his face...pinning her to the wall...soon her back hitted the wall and he was about to tickle her down..but her gaze fell on a weapon and within a second she took the bottle and splashed the whole water of bottle on him leaving him and the whole class in shock...and by taking the advantage of moment she escaped through the side but now he was back in action he moved his palm on his face taking of the water off and then said in his frustrated voice.... "sandy..." And then within the next moment the whole class witnessed the daily tom and jerry show of class 11th ... they were running, chasing and throwing thing on each other in the class and finally he caught her by her elbow with a ironic heavy bottle in his other hand...they both were huffing hard...then he showed her the bottle in a way to bang it hard on her to frighten her but she was smiling to him...he got annoyed... he took the bottle back in action to bang it on her head but within a nanosecond she hugged him tight and said in his ears in her supper cute bacchi style... "solly pichkuuu sandy solly..." He smiled to this... kept the bottle back and then hugged her too and then asked her in his confused and irritated voice..."tujhe mujhse darr kyu nahi lagta... agar me maar deta toh..."nd to this she replied with her eyes closed ..."EQUATION ki wajah se..."he broke the hug in confusion and asked in a furious manner"EQUATION kaunsi EQUATION.."and to this she replied with a proud on her face..." EQUATION...UMMM MY EQUATION OF TRUST'..."and then he smiled to this and said..."...


**FLASHBACK ENDS**


Her eyes were wet now and her lips were curved in a smile... she was still in process of thinking her past but Before she could think more something disturbed her...she felt something on her ...she felt a creepy touch on her bare belly ...someone was clinging to her by her back...


Recap: molest...someone came back...guess who...


you guyz must read the next part acc to me it's worth reading...
btw how was it did I bored you all...????
Plz share your views here...
And do hit likes and comment if possible it means a lot for me...

for pms buddy me...😃

Edited by preety..bhumi.s - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Ress

Unress

Omg moi first yipee
Moi stalking u

Super hppy going to party now



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.comes back from the party
Poor sanyu she's trapped in this evil dance
She's working in dancing bar

She's fighting everyday to save her dignity
She's so broken

The fb scene was so cute
Sandy n picku fight so cute
They both r so adorable
Picku don't liking her calling by this name

Really it was awsme
N I m super hppy dat u r back
I really missed u


Precap scary
Who's coming back

Cnt wait

Update soon

Luv u yr
Keep smiling 😊
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Ohh.. Mmm Gg.. Awesome it was.. Loved that concept.. I think its Randhir who will save her.. I really like the way u write ur ffs n present them.. So colorful . Nice.. Thanks for pm .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Hey preety 🤗
I am loving this storyline yr 😊
Its so diff and awsm :))
Feeling bad for sanyu 😔
Kyu use aisa krna pad ra hai 😔
And the flashback was so cute 😊
God knows whose gonna come back
Ab i want a quick update
Update soon
Tysm for the pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
PREETY ...IT WAS FAB DEAR
AND ...
THE WAY U DESCRIBED THE TOM JERRY TALE OF SANDHIR WAS
ABORABLE😳😳...ON THE CONTRAST...THOSE CREEPY GUYS AND MISERABLE CONDITION OF SANYU😭😭😭 WAS HERT WRECKING...UPDATE ASAP ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Interesting update!!!! Poor sanyu 😭
Plz post next part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Ress

Unress

Omg moi first yipee
Moi stalking u

Super hppy going to party now



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.comes back from the party

lol so how was the party dear...????? 😆😲

Poor sanyu she's trapped in this evil dance
She's working in dancing bar

She's fighting everyday to save her dignity
She's so broken

The fb scene was so cute
Sandy n picku fight so cute
They both r so adorable
Picku don't liking her calling by this name

bechara pichku and rashi its PICHKU not picku...😆😆😆

Really it was awsme
N I m super hppy dat u r back
I really missed u

me too dearu...

Precap scary
Who's coming back

Cnt wait

lil patience dearu...😆😆😆

Update soon

Luv u yr
Keep smiling 😊



thankiee rashi...😊😛😉
will try to update soonish...😆
keep smiling dearu...😃
love u tooo...😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

Ohh.. Mmm Gg.. Awesome it was.. Loved that concept.. I think its Randhir who will save her.. I really like the way u write ur ffs n present them.. So colorful . Nice.. Thanks for pm .


thankieee didu...😛😊😉
i love colors thats why i do like this...😆😆
keep smiling didu...😃
love u...😳😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Sagl

Hey preety 🤗

I am loving this storyline yr 😊
Its so diff and awsm :))

thankiee sanya...😉😉

Feeling bad for sanyu 😔
Kyu use aisa krna pad ra hai 😔
And the flashback was so cute 😊
God knows whose gonna come back
Ab i want a quick update

will try dear...😆😆

Update soon
Tysm for the pm 😊


thankiee dearu..😊😛😉
will try to update soonish...😆
keep smiling dearu...😃

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