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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

U updated yipeee

party...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


I luved it
This is really very dark n i m luving it
U portrays everything so flawlessly


Poor sanyu she's suffering so much cnt see her in this condition

She's broken beyond repair
Bt she's happy dat she's still pure
Her precious possession is still wid her

She's doing all work
She's so afraid

She's crying over her fate she's helpless dying every second

On the other hand rd sum thing bothering him
His past haunting
The jingles of bangles soothes him brings smile on his face n next second it kills him
He can't tolerate it


He just calming himself

I m so curious what hppnd in past wid him
Sum thing related to 26 Jan

patience rashi...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Sanyu was so afraid to enter in rd rum
The rum was so weird
Rd sitting there
Bt sanyu voice snatched his peace

He hates women
Female voice in lyk melting glass to his ear
He want to shut her up
Bt she was so afraid she's not listening so to shut her up
He kissed her forcefully
He was giving her pain

She was so helpless n he's smirking at her

moi too feeling bad for both...😭😭😭


Precap slavery

Excited update soon cnt wait

Luv u darloo
Keep smiling


thankiee dearu...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜Š
patience...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
keep smiling yaar...πŸ˜ƒ
take care...πŸ˜‰
love u too...😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanyugracy27

oh poor sanyu
plz update ASAP


thankiee dearu...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜Š
keep smiling yaar...πŸ˜ƒ
take care...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sagl

😭😭😭Ye kya hogaya rannu ko

Sanyu is sufferung so much πŸ˜”
Plz reveal the nystery about rd's behaviour soon

patience...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Awsm update ..amazingly penned 😊
Update soon
Ty fr the pm :))


thankiee dearu...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜Š
patience...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
keep smiling yaar...πŸ˜ƒ
take care...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pari1995

oh yaar,there is smt in rd's lofe that haunts him

poor sanyu,i think 26th january was hell for both of them

lets see have patience ittu sa...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

loved the update to the core
thanx for the pm
update soon
love
pari


thankiee dearu...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜Š
patience...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
keep smiling yaar...πŸ˜ƒ
take care...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

hey guyz this part is dedicated to my paglu SOMYA..SS. uff my shomuuu...i just hate you yaar...but tu meri life me bohot imp hai... agar tu nahi rahegi toh me roz maarungi kise...??????πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


MY EQUATION OF TRUST

MY EQUATION OF TRUST(DARK + MATURE)...


PART :7


A LAME REASON TO SMILE


Precap: rd recalled his past...past haunts...rd attacked sanyu..sanyu got frightened...


She shivered along with her soul and rushed up from there maintaining distance from him...and as soon as she left from there he stopped massaging his hand and closed his eyes feeling the pain...the pain he has just given to her...given to another human..he felt guilty at this...he felt a lump in his throat...his eyes became lil moistened but in the very next moment one very thought came to his mind "she is a bloody girl..." and his mind and the past overpowered him and he smirked to the pain give by him...
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she left from there while suppressing her cries and broken voice by covering her red mouth by her palms tightly and flaking her tears continuously...she reached her room and closed the door tightly...sat down at the floor resting her back at the door...while covering up her mouth tight...and started crying silently with her eyes closed up tight...but soon her inaudible cries became audible...she shifted her red stained palms to her hairs from her mouth and started crying bitterly...indeed bitterly...she was pulling up her hairs in frustration..yeah it was paining her a lot but at the same time don't know why but yes was giving her relief also.. may be the relief of punishing herself...punishing for an unknown reason...she cried and wept for next two hours...


After two hours...
she was just lying lifelessly on the floor...her body was showing no moment...but soon she stood up from her place with a jolt remembering something and started cleaning her room...yeah rd's order ringed up in her mind and then she started cleaning the mess while panicking..she was frightened of the consequences that would have been to her if she wouldn't cleaned the mess...she cleaned the mess of her room...and then peeped out her head from her room to look up at the scenario..to look up at the hell waiting out for her...she smiled faintly by figuring him up nowhere..but she was still scared...something struck her mind...she turned up with a lil weak smile and took the metal glass kept in her room...and then headed towards the door...she peeped out her head again..looked up here and there and then threw the metal glass in the open space of first floor making strong metallic noise...she looked up for the reaction...but na nothing came back...she took a sigh and then came out of the room smiling faintly at her small victory..yeah she was confirming that was he there or not...she climbed down to clean the ground floor of the house..as already she had cleaned the upper floor earlier only now it was only left there and then she started cleaning the ground floor...she was working hard...all she can see over there was dust and mess...it looked like it hadn't been cleaned from ages...she sighed at this and started cleaning the mess...the dust was just irritating her...was making her sneez up..but at the same time the dust was giving her pleasure an unknown happiness...while sneezing due to the dust she was smiling broadly...yeah it looks up strange but it was a pleasure..A LAME REASON TO SMILE becuz she was sneezing after so long...it happens like this only even the small lame reasons can make you smile when you have the uncountable reasons to cry up hard...she finally cleaned the mess in some nearly 4 hours...yeah 4 hard hours...it was really too messy.. she took a deep breath after cleaning the stuff and then looked at the big sized clock hanging on the wall...and after looking at it her eyes got widened...it was seven now...seven in the morning..which meant that probably he may come up at any time...and only by thinking at this her body felt a shiver...she looked up here and there to check once about his presence and fortunately he was not there..she sighed at this...something came up in her mind..she quickly shifted her eyes on her room's door and within the next second she rushed towards it...she climbed up the stairs and was about to open the door but something stopped her...she felt shivers through her spine...she heard the deep voice... "naashta kaha hai...????..." and yeah it was his voice asking her with a command in it...she turned to him slowly and said while eyeing the plane floor in her stammering voice... "vvoo...menne...abbhi...nai" but before she could complete he interrupted in middle while smirking devilishly at her in his harsh voice... "nahi...banaya...??? ..(he started taking steps towards her while she started moving towards the back wall in fear...)..chhh chchhh...poor baby...koi baat nahi tum jaa ke aram kar lo...me bana deta hu...(he finally reached to her And grabbed her tight by her arms...and then said in his increased pitch while gritting his teeths...and clutching her arms hard...)...aram karna hai tumhe..ha .(she shivered at this and winced at pain by looking at her shoulder...) ha bolo na aram karna hai na...???.." he asked while digging his nails in her flesh..she winced at this with tears in her eyes and then answered him in her low voice stammering voice... "aah...nna...muje...nahhi karna aram...me abhi naashhhttaa banna dungi...plz leave me..."...he smirked to this while gritting his teeths a lil and left her with a jolt after giving her a deep imprint of his nails on her flesh...and left from there towards down wards while ordering her in his victorious deep voice... "15 min me muje naashta chahiye..."
And after this she quivered a lil and then moved her palms slowly towards her shoulder she clutched the red imprinted area softly...Massaged it lightly feeling the pain while closing her eyes tight...a salty drop fell from her eyes..she sighed to this and then opened her eyes to witness the hell of her life..and then quickly rushed to the kitchen...in the down floor...she made the sandwiches for him within exact 14 mins and then arranged it on the dinning table for him...and in the very next moment he came up there looking at his wrist watch...he looked up at her and then at the breakfast...smirked devilishly and then sat up there and gobbled up the breakfast within next 5 mins...he sipped the water and then said while looking at her in his stern voice... "gud...chalo kuch toh kaam tum ladkiyo ko ata hai...right miss...???..." he looked up at her with curios eyes and she replied to him while looking at the floor in her fearful half voice... "sannyukkta..." He smirked to this and said while placing his right leg on his left thigh... "na whatever...I don't care...achha btw tumhe pata hai tum ladkiya ek aur kaam me best hoti ho...janna chati ho tum...???..." he bend towards his front making an questioning pout while she unwantedly replied him in fear of the consequences... "hha...mme..." he again interrupted and said in his ordering voice... "ha let me show you...come here..(she tremored to this and started taking slow steps towards him while looking at the plane white floor...nd he commanded...)...jaldi...(her speed got increased and soon she scrolled up to him with fear...he gestured at her to kneel down at front of him...to which she followed being out of her senses...and then he said looking at her frightened face...)...joote saaf karne me...(she looked up at him with questioning eyes and he replied pretending to be obvious...)...yeah sacchi tum ladkiya isme best hoti ho...ab chalo ese kya dekh rahi ho...mere shoes jaldi se saaf karke batao...(she was looking at him with her questioning eyes and making disgusted look just then he roared at her...)...saaf karo nahi toh...(and before he could complete she started cleaning it without shifting her gaze from him...yeah she was looking at him while making an disgusted face while he was just smirking at her...soon she was done and then he said while looking at his shoes sharply)...good miss. Sanyu...nah miss. Slave right...???...now just get your shitty face way from my eyes..." and to this she nodded while making an repulsive and lil frightened look and stood up from there to go in her room...she climbed upstairs and was about to open the door of her room just then his voice stopped him... By alerting her in the deep tone... "don't u dare enter the room my dear slave...u r not made for it..." She turned to him to look up and he was there climbing up the stairs..he walked up to her and said while scratching his nape... "tumhe nahi lagta ki tum uss rom ke layak nahi ho...(he looked at her for answer while she looked down at the floor...and then he answered by himself...)... ha tum nahi ho..btw tumhare liye ek gud news... Tumhe ek naya room millega...bohot bada wala...happy hah...???...and one more gud news tumhara fav bed hoga usme...(she looked up while making a confused and startled face...and then he said smirking..)...tmhe ye white floor bohot pasand hai na...tum har time ese hi toh dekhti rehti ho right...??..so congrates aajse yahi tumhara bed hai...(she was just shocked..felt weak like crying hard..her eyes welled up...)...ha yahi hai ab...ye dekho jo ye first floor pe jo open space hai na abse yahi tumhara bada sa room hai...(he said while pointing his finger in the concerned direction showing her the plot).. aur yaha wo jo right wala kona hai na vo tumhara bed...nice na btw agar tumhe furntiture chahiye toh jaake store room se le lena at least tumhe bed pe as a bed sheet mat toh mill hi jayegi...(she was just startled by this..was looking him in questioning way trying to get the fact...)...btw u truly deserve this now just go and arrange ur new big room..."


Recap: something common...


So how was it...????

btw m hell upset with my silent readers... kya hua guyz achha nahi lag raha kya comment nahi toh kamse kam like hi maar diya karo it means a lot to me...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ress


Unress


Omg omg omg
Cnt believe moi first πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Faints out of happiness 🀒

See u made me stalker
I m stalking u for updated from past 15 mins
Finally my hrd work paid off
Phewww really hell tired
Kafi tiring hota h stalking πŸ˜›


Now coming to the update
Moi kya kaho
I m speechless
U write flawless

The pain was so evident I can envision what sanyu going through

She's smiling in pain
She's giving herself pain

She's so scared n broken

Moi crying seeing her lyk this 😭

She's wrking lyk slaves

Rd feels guilty to harm her
Bt his hatred towards female alwz overpowers any other emtn in him

He's enjoying giving her pain
He enjoys when he saw her afraid face

Poor sanyu tolerating his torture

He's insulting her
Bt she's so scared

Rd smirking seeing her suffer

Sanyu cleaning his shoes
Really feeling horrible for her


Rd not even letting her go in rum

She have to live now in hall
N sleep on floor
Really rite now I m hating him
I can understand he has bad past bt Wht he's doing is really too much

I know u have planned everything
Very soon I will strt liking him


Precap
Moi excited as alwz πŸ˜‰

Update soon

Luv u darloo
Keep smiling 😊
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg☒️☒️
You know you justify the title of ur ff
Its actualky so dark ..that it scares the hell out of me ☒️
And u pen it beautifully πŸ‘
Oh god hating rd right now 😲
And poor sanyu 😭😭
When will the day come when she will sleep on rd's bed 😳😳
Patience πŸ˜†
Dying to know rds past but its ok take ur time πŸ˜†
And keep giving us awsm updates and quick too
Update soon
Thnx fr pm'ing πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Sagl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
rd is confusing at times
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh dear,its getting so damn interesting day by day
thanx a lot for the pm
update soon
love
pari
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh god yar i cant see sanyu like this i just hate rd he is sooo insensitive and evil plzzz ye emotional drama bahut painful hai kuch to happy ho sanyu ke sathsath cant wait for next part...

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