FF(2): Breakthrough - PART 24 - PAGE 8

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Index

Prologue - Page 1

Chapter One - Stunt Double - Page 4

Chapter Two - Homeless - Page 16

Chapter Three - Mr. Snuggles - Page 25

Chapter Four - Bathroom Bump-In - Page 33

Chapter Five - Colles' Fracture - Page 45

Chapter Six - The One-Handed Dinner - Page 54

Chapter Seven - The Almost Kiss - Page 64

Chapter Eight - Letting It Out - Page 74

Chapter Nine - Two Promises - Page 81

Chapter Ten - Morning After - Page 86

Chapter Eleven - I Know Who You Are - Page 93

Chapter Twelve - First Chance - Page 101

Chapter Thirteen - Cast Be Gone - Page 104

Chapter Fourteen - Accidental Revelation - Page 107

Chapter Fifteen - Return Of The Parents - Page 118

Chapter Sixteen - Sudden Embrace - Page 120

Chapter Seventeen - Caught Red-Handed - Page 122

Chapter Eighteen - Run Away - Page 125

Chapter Nineteen - Night In A Hotel - Page 129

Chapter Twenty - We Come As A Package - Page 132

*-THREAD 2-*

Chapter Twenty-One - Change of Plans - Page 1

Chapter Twenty-Two - Caught - Page 3

Chapter Twenty-Three - Revelations - Page 6

Chapter Twenty-Four - Happy Endings - Page 8


Prologue

I was only eight when our parents had an argument. She stood beside me as we watched our parents arguing over some matter...at the time, I wasn't old enough to understand what was wrong. I grabbed her hand as I noticed she was startled. Her face shot in my direction.

She was my best friend and so all I remember wanting to do was to make her feel better. Then her mother said the words I was dreading. The words I haven't forgotten to this day.

"We're leaving! We never want to see your family ever again. Madhu, COME!"

I quickly turned to look at her as she stared at me with watery eyes.

"Promise you won't forget me RK?"

"I'll never forget you Midhi."

Midhi. I could never pronounce her name when I was younger. We had met at the mere age of three and her nickname had stuck with me.

"Will we see each other again?"

"Yes! When I'm older and famous, I'll cast you to play opposite me."

"Promise?"

"Promise!"

"I'm going to miss you RK."

"I'll miss you too Midhi..."

We did our special handshake in which we tapped each other's chins, then noses, and then pulled in for a hug. The hug didn't last long though...our parents dragged us away from each other as we held out our hands.

"Noo!"

I heard her wailing as she was being dragged away by her mother. I looked up to see my mother dragging me away from my best friend. My only friend. The friend I'd never forget.

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Thank you all for being patient with me...Oh, who am I kidding. This was well beyond 'being patient'. You all waited months for this. I apologize for the super long wait. But it was when I lost interest in the show, around Sultan's track, that I lost interest in my own FF because I just couldn't write around that time. I then forgot what my FF was about. I didn't get the time to read it, but I sort of skimmed it and I hope it still all makes sense with what I have planned now. I'm just writing off of the few points I had written for myself in the document. Anyways, sorry once again and enjoy!



Chapter Twenty-One - Change of Plans

I unpacked my belongings and got comfortable in the new room I had been given on the main floor. I took out a picture from my wallet of my Midhi and I from when we were younger. I stared at it for a moment. I stared at her. I knew if I were to do anything to her father, she would be heartbroken. So I had two options. I could either make it seem as though I were betraying her too, so she hates me and moves on...or I could just get my revenge from her father and hope for the best in terms of her reaction. She had never let me down before, so I didn't believe she would let me down again. I kept my eyes on the picture when suddenly I heard a knock at my door. I looked up to see Madhu standing there.

"What are you up to superstar?"

She smiled as I raised an eyebrow.

"From homeless man to superstar?"

She walked towards me and sat on the bed beside me. She locked her arm with mine and rested her head on my shoulder.

"You're my superstar."

I couldn't help but let a smile cross my face. I turned my head to stare down at her. I was just about to kiss her head when I was reminded of what I had planned to do. The last thing I wanted to do was get closer to the girl whose heart I could possibly be breaking in the near future. I slowly pulled away. She lifted her head to look up at me as I stared down at the picture in my hands. I noticed her head move and her eyes fall onto the picture as well. Her fingers brushed against mine as she slowly grabbed the picture out of my hands.

"I miss this..."

I looked down at her as she spoke in a soft voice.

"I miss when we didn't have a care in the world...life was so perfect. I wish I never lost you...I wish we never got separated...I w..."

"Shhh...Madhu, I'm here now, aren't I?"

She glanced up at me slowly and I placed my hand on the side of her face. I caressed her face while smiling as genuinely as I could. She smiled a beautiful smile in response and began to close in on me. I watched her close her eyes slowly. It took everything I had not to answer her with a kiss...but I couldn't. I couldn't do that to her. I felt her breath brush against my skin and I instantly turned my head. I faked a cough and got up off the bed. I kept my back towards her as silence filled the air.

"S...sorry, I think I'm coming down with a minor cold."

"Cold? Do you need anything?!"

I felt her hand on top of my shoulder, so I turned to face her. I placed my face on the side of her face again and smiled down at her.

"I'm alright. How about you go get some rest now. It's been a long day."

"Are you sure you're okay?"

"I'm sure Madhu. You go ahead and get some sleep. I'll be okay by the morning."

"Promise?"

"Promise."

Before I could even take a step back, she rose onto her tiptoes and planted a kiss on my cheek. I watched as she ran out of my room and slowly closed my door behind herself, after flashing a smile in my direction.

It was in that moment that I re-contemplated everything I had planned. It was in that moment that I decided not to go through with what I had originally wanted to do. It was in that moment that I decided to find some evidence against her father before I went through with anything.

I waited until it was past midnight, lying on my bed, staring at the clock. Then I very slowly headed towards my door. I opened it, making sure not to let it creak, and I began to tiptoe out into the hall to proceed in finding some sort of evidence against him.

Edited by Hiddlestoned - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally you updated
Thought you are gng to leave it in midway only
Lovely updt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part 21...rk trying to revenge but m sure innocent madhu will arouse real love in him...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update pritto..
loved that RK changed his plan..i dnt want him to hurt madhu...right nw atleast he changed...see wht happens next...waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice updatte pritt, happy that you have finally updated, lovely update, happy that rk changed his plan for madhu, continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for new thread pritty
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nice update and i hope rk dont hurt madhu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally pri
. u updtd it...
lovly updt...

congo on new thread

Happy New year..
..
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratz for new thread
Nice update

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