ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146

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Prologue

It was late, past midnight and he wanted to go home and sleep. Running the Dance company was anything but easy'but he was Maan Singh Khurana. Defeat was something he couldn't accept nor was it anything he had ever encountered.

When he had taken up the challenge to run a dance company he had never imagined how tough it would be. But, a challenge was a challenge and he'd only give up when the company was on firm ground and he could return to Khurana Constructions.

He pulled out his keys and switched off all the lights. The complete darkness made his senses even more alert. He walked out of the room, when he heard music.

''That's strange. Did someone leave the system on?'', he thought

He had thought everybody had left and he was the last one. Heck even he wasn't supposed to be here , but the need to finish pending work pulled him there - Not even Farhan stayed that late.

He walked quietly to the studio from the back door of the office and saw a light on. The door was a bit ajar'''.

He walked in as quietly as possible and walked in from the wings.

That was when he saw her. Surprise hit him as he actually saw her. Dressed in black tights and a vest with her wild mane open - she was dancing!

Dancing like there was no one watching. Dancing in a way that he had never seen her dance. It was raw. It had passion and he could feel pain emanate from her body as she moved and turned and twisted and leaped. He recognized the song. It was an old R&B number, ''Bleeding Love''.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3rIs2S2WH7M[/YOUTUBE]

He didn't want to let her know he was watching so he partially hid behind the wings and just stared.

Every move was perfect and every turn had an expression. The movements were saying something but he didn't seem to understand. He was stunned by her'.the quiet girl, the loner, the girl who kept away from the group. The most unresponsive person he knew, was doing something that he had never imagined.

The music stopped and she huddled to the side on the floor and kept her head on her knees, panting. Her shoulders started shaking and it was then that Maan realized that she was crying. Heaving heavy sobs and crying her heart out. He felt a bit guilty about spying on her. Suddenly she just punched the floor and let out an angry noise. She stood up and walked to the main door and picked up her things and went out of the main door. Maan stood stunned, unable to process what he had seen. Geet'.? His mind questioned. Is that the same unresponsive rude girl he saw everyday''..?

Hey guys, this is my 1st ever FF with a very very different storyline from the usual. lemme know what you think of it and I'll keep updating my posts.

cheers

Amruta

Character Sketch Page 1 scroll down.

Season 1

Flashback Chapter 1Punge Le lo - Page 2

Chapter 2 - Who's Maan? - Page 2

Chapter 3 - Nikhil's task - Page 2

Chapter 4 - A task is not fulfilled until ... - Page 3

Chapter 5 - Unlucky in Love - page 4

Chapter6 - Oh, the guilt - page 5

Chapter 7 -The Unlikely Bonding - page 6

Chapter 8 - Reality Bites - page 7

Chapter 9 -Honour n False pride - page 8

Chapter 10 - A Slice of Humility - page 10

Chapter 11 - The Hurts We Hide - page 11

Chapter 12 - All's fair in love and lust - page 13

Chapter 13 -Lollipop, Lollipop, Can I be that lollipop??-page 14

Chapter 14 -Brothers and Sister - page 15

Chapter 15 - Commencing Anew - Page 16

Chapter 16 - Of BFs and BFFs - Page 17

Chapter 17 - Fire Burning, Fire Burning - Page 20

Chapter18 - In My Heart Of Hearts - Page 22

Chapter 19 - Intoxication - Page 22

Chapter 20 - Interlude - page 24

Chapter 21 - The Making Of Maan - page 26

Chapter 22 - The Making of Maan II - Page 28

Chapter 23 - The Unthinkable - Page 30

Chapter 24 - And So Goodnight!! - Page 32

Disclaimer - PAGE 36
Season 2
Character List and Summary - page 37

Chapter 25 - The Bet - Page 37

Chapter 26 - The Eyes Have It - page 41

Chapter 27 - And That's How It's Done! - Page 45

Chapter 28 - Who's Afraid Of Geet Handa - Page 48

Chapter 29 - What Makes Us Tick? - Page 52

Chapter 30 - What Just Happened - Page 54

Chapter 31 -Flash Mob - Page 58

From Geet to Nik

Chapter 32 - The Error of my Ways - Page 64

Chapter 33 -Jiyein Kyun - Page 67

Chapter 34 Here We Go, Then - Page 74

Chapter 35 Unexpected - Page 80

Chapter 36 A Birthday and a Gift - Page 85

Chapter 37 The twist in the ... what?? Page 94

Chapter 38 Colour Me Green - page 100

Chapter 39 Hope... - Page 110

Chapter 40 Anger is only skin deep - page 117

Chapter 41 Situations - Page 118

Chapter 42 Bang! - Page 123

Chapter 43 Stories To Tell - Page 134

Chapter 44 I'll Be... - Page 139

Chapter 45 Observations - Page 146

Chapter 46 Thread Two

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow good start. something different from other ffs.
maan as dancer surely continue.
please PM me and add in ur list also .
though i m a silent reader but will try to give comments .
update soon . bye👏😉😉😊
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amazing start.
do continue plz.
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Geet Handa:

Daughter of the famous Mohinder Handa

Smart, tomboyish, rebellious but intelligent. Knew how to get her work done. College ki Shaan and the heartthrob of the college. A spoilt rich brat. She's had a neglected childhood. Mom, Rano died when she was young and was raised by Nani. Dad frequently busy with work'no time for daughter.Was closest to her mom. Has a lot of friends. They love her for what they see in her'..often surrounded by bad company. They party out every night and have no sense of direction to their lives - just out spending money and boozing. Geet n gang were college ke much loved lafange! Everyone's cautious of Geet'not because she got mad'but becoz she got even.He sense of style is a tank top n cargoes paired with utility boots.

Prized possession: Her sporty utility jeep.

However, when she loves someone, she'll do anything for them and keeps them close.

Friends: Mayank and Siddhant

Nikhil Chopra-

Middle class boy., street smart, fun loving. Very calm patient well put together boy. No parents but loves life.His closest relative is an uncle who's in the Army. Is into extreme sports'.one bad quality of his is ' he's very stubborn. Down to earth and very helpful towards others. He's a dancer and will do whatever it takes to fulfill his dream. However, back up plans are sensible n he's pursuing a BA to keep his uncle from taking him along on his transfers.

He is geet's 1st love...but is it meant to be...??

Maan Singh Khurana-

Rich elder grandson of Savitri Devi. And son of Gaurav Khurana.

An all rounder and a party boy, page 3 boy. A ladies man, but he always seems indifferent to the world around him. A regular at the Capitol and everyone expects him there frequently. He does stay away from girls whenever possible. Once bitten twice shy! A fantastic dancer quite the heartthrob of the Delhi high society crowd. He's the best when it comes to all European and latin American dances. He has the Midas touch. Anything he does of gets involved in has to come out well.He's his father's right hand and Daadi' confidante

Siddhant Arora

Rich spoilt brat. Handsome and hot'the heartthrob of the college. Arrogant but the only persons he'll listen to are Geet and Mayank/Mayank. No real purpose in life and is a bully to some extent! He thinks the world revolves around him, but is a big softy.

Friends: Geet and Mayank.

Mayank Shroff-

The dreamer..the artistic one'..spoilt to but not as rich. Wants to be an artist, but is pursuing the Arts degree just to get his Dad off his back. Once that's done, he'll follow his dream.He's creative and not as snobbish as Sid.

Friends:Geet and Sid.

Raina

The class topper. Psych major. Loves reading. wanted to be a counselor.Dabbles in contemporary dance.She ends up with Sid. Is a stark contrast to his aggressive nature. Knows that he n geet are just friends, but hates his bullying nature and his arrogant attitude! Becomes friends with Nikhil n Ayush. Was Sid, Mayank's and Geet's school mate.

She is the one who lets Nikhil know that Geet was a dancer, till her mum passed away.


Vikram Singh Khurana

The younger brother of Maan. A dancer by choice. It's all he cares about. Quite a flirt. Warm hearted and not quite a practical as Maan. Loves his brother and listens to him the most. Has a big gang of friends, most of who have similar interests.

Anvesha Khurana

The middle sibling. The laadli behen of the Khurana brothers and is close to both of them. Intelligent and tactful. Is very close to Dadi and is her Dad's pet. Pretty and Jovial. Keeps away frm the party circuit to some extent.

Nida:

One of the sweetest most lovable persons in Vicky's dance troupe.She's mute and has to resort to sign language. She majors in contemporary dance, thought she's good at most others. Her waterloo is Hip-Hop and has to train hard for it.

Zakhir:

Nida's boyfriend. He's the one who translates most of what she says. They are inseparable.

Farhan-

The loner. The dedicated dancer. He spoke less and acted more. Nothing and nobody can take his eyes off his goal'and that is of becoming one of the best dancers of India.

Meera Shergill.

Maan's secretary at Khurana constructions. She's calm and quiet and very hardworking. No nonsense air about her. She and Maan get along very well. Maan has recently promoted her.

Ayush:

Raina n Nikhil's friends. Sid becomes jealous over his friendship with Raina.

Chapter
one -Flashback 2 yrs ago on page 2.
Edited by mechantefille - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesum prologue n part 1
do continue soon
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hey new n nice concept !!!!!!
plzz add me to ur pm list!!!!!!!!!!!!
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heyy love the concept
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Nice story. Please send me a PM. :)
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Geet Handa - 2 yrs back...FLASHBACK!!

Chapter 1: Punge le lo.

1st week of college: JNU.

Normal day'everything seemed to be going on as usual, students settling in and getting used to the college timings and classes.

In the pavilion, two boys were sitting on the stairs. One was a rugged tall buff boy and the other was a shorter one , lying on the stair with his head propped on his hand.

''Yaar aaj bore nahi ho raha?'', said the taller one. He wore shades and expensive looking clothes. His attitude exuded pride and arrogance.

''Sid, tujhe kis din bore nahi hota?''

''Haan woh bhi theek hain. Jab tak saddi sherni nahi aa jaati , din dheere hi chalega.''.

''Aa kab rahi hain?''

''Aaj toh der karegi'kal raat ko itni pee rakhi thi'.par yaar usko chadti nahi hain...Kaash hume bhi '.''

''Tujhe pata hain ki tujhe chadti hain to itna peeta kyun hain?, Smirked Mayank

'Abbe, khotte, kyun ki tu nahi peeta'ab tere hisse ko kisi ne toh gutukana chahiye na.''

He flips open his phone and speed dials a no.

''Maataji, aaj aapke darshan honge?''

''Ulle de patthe, tere peeche khadi hoon''.

He jerks hi head up and sees her and grins. ''Toh'sar pakad ke nahi aayi tu aaj?''

''Pooch mat yaar'iss hangover ki toh..'', said Geet.

Geet!! She was about 5''6', slender with crinkly brown hair and big aviator shades on eyes. She was dressed in a black vest, baggy cargoes, big boots and a spiked bracelet. Her hair was let loose and reached till the middle of her back. She had a 'no' nonsense' look on her face.

She came next to Sid and sat on the step he'd plonked himself. She put her head on her lap groaned and shut her eyes. He smiled and ruffled her hair playfully.

Sid: ''Yaar college shuru hue ek hi toh hafta hua hain'lets have some fun, dude'''

Mayank: I'm game..whaddya have in mind?

Sid: what is the new fresher crowd like?

Mayank'I see where your going!!( with a twisted smile)

He pulled out his phone and instructed a few guys to round up the juniors and freshers and come to the pavilion pronto.

15 minutes later:

"Flap your arms like a chicken and repeat Jack and Jill , in a duck's voice", said Siddhant.

There was a group of seniors sitting on the steps of the auditorium and a row of students who looked like the freshers from each batch.They stood in a row and looked apprehensive and a few looked terrified. Each senior had a bored look on their face but they all seemed to be echoing the mood of the 3 people who sat in the middle of the group.

Siddhant Arora,sat with his back leaning against another boy and his hands at his sides. Girls' eyes flickered to him and their bodies were unconsciously turned towards him. His shades prevented them from knowing where his eyes flickered and they kept looking towards him with anticipation. He knew exactly the effect he had on girls and enjoyed it, being quite a flirt.

Next to him sat Geet, whose face was hidden to the rest of the crowd as she seemed to be asleep. Only her crinkly curly shiny brown hair seemed to be spread all over her head and back. There was a foot's distance between her and the rest of the crowd. No one seems to be comfortable enough to sit close to her.

At their feet Mayank was spread out on the step leaning on one arm, seemed to be mildly curious about the proceedings of the ragging. Mayank Shroff, as he was known to the general crowd was pretty smart for the normal human species. Going to college was just a means to an end, for him. He could easily top college and do whatever it is that he wished to'but !!...

The new student who seemed scared enough to faint, flapped his hand around and tried squawking the nursery rhyme out. He was sweating is his fear and his glasses had slipped to the end of his nose. The crowd roared with laughter. Sid gave a lopsided smirk while Mayank gave a pitying look and motioned the next boy to step forward. The junior was a short fat boy with a buttoned up shirt right to the very 1st button. His brown pants and shabby floaters looked out of place and his slick oiled hair was plastered to his face and the seat was making his hair and oil look like it was about to drip a sort of gooey substance. His entire expression was pitiful and by the look on his face he looked like he wasn't about to be spared.

'Name?'

'Debashish Chatopadhayay'

Chato'.what?', sneered Sid.

'Ch..ch..chatopadhyay , Sir', stuttered the boy.

'Look at him '..he's scared enough to wet his pants', shouted one senior.

'Did he do something to his hair or did he fall in a vat of glue?, 'smirked another one

'Oi specimen, tu koi 70s ke museum se uth ke aaya hain kya?'

Nahi, yeh naye style ka hangover hoga''human disaster', screeched one of the senior females.

Suddenly , a tall lean boy grabbed Deboshish's arm and told him, Your're Deboshish Chatopadhay? Professor Sinha wants to meet you. Some problem in your registration number.

Without waiting to see who was sitting in front of him, he pulled the boy out of there and walked out of the area with an arm around Deboshish.There was complete silence for a minute or two.The crowd looked stunned and didn't react for another minute. Finally a boy spoke from the back of the group in a dazed voice'..''Aaj to Sinha sir chutti par hain naa?'

''Arre haan yaar, he's got some flu-shu, man.''

''Toh phir uss bongaali babu ko kaun kheench ke le gaya?''

''Yaar uss lambe ko toh college main pehle dekha nahi tha yaar.''

One of the freshers opened his mouth and said in an eager voice, ' Sir he is also a fresher . He was standing in front of me in the queue for admission'.

'So is that how he knew that Sinha called the tingu?'

''But Sinha's on leave u idiot!''

Geet finally raised her head, pushed her shades on her hair to reveal almond shaped hazel eyes lined heavily with kohl- and said in a loud and clear frustrated voice,' You idiotic GITS! That chap just fooled you and saved a fellow fresher's butt. Teen saal ho gaye college main aa kar aur abhi tak samajh nahi aat kab koi tumhaare naak ke neeche se tumhe bewakoof bana gaya.

Sid, suddenly snapping his shades off and standing in anger spat. ''That bl***y fresher thinks he can just step into my college and do whatever he likes? He's gonna get it good''.

Mayank looked up and smirked and said in a playful voice,' oops looks like smartass just insulted the sher, yaaro. Uski toh aaj lag gayi''.

Sid looked at the boys next to him and ordered them to go find that smart alec.'' Get him to me now!''

Geet pulled out her shades, wore them and looked up at Sid. ''Dude, quit over reacting, man.' having said this, she pulled out her phone and looked busy.

''Bloody hell, Geet! Tujhe kya lagta hian,main use itne aasani se jaane doonga. He has no clue who he messed with! Aaj toh uski laga daloonga!! ''He angrily pulled her shades off her face.

Geet just ignored him and continued playing with her phone. Mayank returned to his pose and looked at the rest of the freshers and told them with a smirk. 'chalo lets see what we have in store for you''.''.

Just then the group of guys returned with the said boy in question. He walked lazily back to them, showing no fear in his eyes. He just looked Sid in the eye with a questioning look.

Sid looked arrogantly at him and asked him, ''Fresher ,huh!!''

The boy just stared.He was tall and lean. His arms were muscled and were laced with veins.His hair was short and messed up, and his clear brown eyes looked straight at Sid fearlessly. He was quite good looking though not as good looking as Sid.He was dressed in a plain T-shirt and loose jeans.

Kya hua? Abhi mooh nahi khul rahah hain kya?

The boy just stared back at him. He didn't seem the least scared of him.

'So is that the best you could do to save that chit of a boy?'

'Kya hua, Darr gaye kya?', taunted one of the seniors.

'Abh bol bhi de ki koi excuse nahi hain toh mooh kholne ki himmat nahi ho rahi hain!'

'Darpok kahin ka. Phattu'

He finally opened his mouth and spoke, 'I don't need to feel afraid of insecure bullies who take pleasure in putting down others so that they feel better about themselves. There's nothing great in that'.and It's not something I respect. All of you are just cowards who pick on others who are smaller than themselves. Is that what all this pride is about? Issme itne udne waali kya baat hain?'

Geet raised her head and stared at him a tad bit arrogantly. Sid walked down to the boy's level and stared at him in his face and said aggressively, ''Naam kya hain bey tera?'

The boy stared back at him in the eye and said, ''Nikhil Chopra''

Sid:''Dude, u have no idea who you just messed with. Yahan sab hume salaam thokte hain. Apne hadh main rehna abhi se seekh le''.

Nikhil,''Sorry to disappoint'par woh kya hain naa'bachpan se mujhe kuch hatke karne ki aadat hain. I don't like to follow the crowd.''

'Ohhh'you don't do you'''..Said Sid mockingly, making the crowd laugh with him.

''So Nikhil, lets see how smart you are to get out of this one? Lets see you carry all you things from the end of this pavilion, to the benches there.'' The crowd looked at Sid confused. '''But wait, there a catch, you can't use your feet'.carry it however you wish , but your feet better not touch the ground. Geddit?''

The crowd hooted and cheered Sid, who stood taking in all the attention.

Geet kept staring at Nikhil. She didn't have Sid's anger on her face, neither did she look indifferent like Mayank. She just stared at him with a certain arrogance and a little bit of curiosity. Nikhil looked like he was about to ignore Sid and walk off when, he glanced at Geet and something seemed to flicker off his face. He looked Sid in the eye again.

Nikhil smirked and pushed his leg through his bags and in a swift movement did a handstand and 'walked' to the benches , plonked his stuff on them and stood up again. It was clear to the onlookers that he did that just to put Sid in his place and not cuz he was yielding to Sid's 'higher' authority. The smile was wiped off Sid's now angry and glaring face. He was fuming because he knew he had been outclassed and got the better of. Nikhil, did a mock bow at the lot and walked off whistling.

''Bloody hell, this is not the end of it! He has no idea who he's meddled with'', shouted Sid, throwing his shades to the ground.

"Relax man, he's new here. Life is about to get tough for him", said Mayank.

Everyone knew the battle had just begun!

But, life takes a turn quite unexpected'.none of them knew what was waiting for them around the corner!

Guys, the story goes on for a while about both Maan n Geet in flashbaack...till the date they meet each other.

PRECAP:

Did u hear Maan's coming for the party..

Maan? who's dat?

Only, The Maan singh KHurana...Gaurav Khurana's son!! Hello




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Chapter 2 - scroll down

Edited by mechantefille - 14 years ago
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amazing character sketch
plzzz update soon

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